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1、范文賞析 Today, more and more students go to school with mobile phones. Students attitudes towards this vary from person to person. Those who support this say it helps students to keep in touch with their parents and friends. Moreover, using mobile phones can be fun. However, other students hold the opp

2、osite opinion. They think that using mobile phones can cause problems.Firstly, students with mobile phones at school do not concentrate on studying during class, but play games or send text messages instead. Besides, it costs a lot to use a mobile phone. As for me, there is no denying that using mob

3、ile phones has its advantages, but Id still prefer students to use them at home because study should come first.第1頁(yè) 書面表示系列講練 之 贏取高分策略 第2頁(yè)NMET書面表示評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)1、先依據(jù)文章內(nèi)容,語(yǔ)言和整體感覺初步確定檔次。第五檔. 2125分第四檔. 1620分第三檔. 1115分第二檔. 610分 第一檔. 15分 0分第3頁(yè)語(yǔ)言地道，規(guī)范覆蓋全部?jī)?nèi)容關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)2、主要內(nèi)容： 內(nèi)容關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)； 詞匯和語(yǔ)法數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性； 上下文連貫； 語(yǔ)言得體性應(yīng)用了較多語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯有效地使用

4、了語(yǔ)句間連接成份第4頁(yè)3、拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性一個(gè)方面，評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際影響程度給予考慮。第5頁(yè)4、詞數(shù)少于80和多于120，從總分中減去2分。5、如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。第6頁(yè) 技 巧1. 使用較高級(jí)詞匯3. 使用恰當(dāng)連接詞詞匯反應(yīng)你知識(shí)貯存量多少，也是衡量英語(yǔ)水平一個(gè)主要標(biāo)志。利用得當(dāng)句子結(jié)構(gòu)能夠給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章所以而生輝 。使用恰當(dāng)連接詞，對(duì)寫一篇有“英語(yǔ)味”文章很主要，能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊。增強(qiáng)書面表示效果技巧2. 使用較豐富句式第7頁(yè)1. Because the weather was good, our journey was com

5、fortable.2.We all think he is a great man.3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.4.The students there neednt pay for their books. 5. As a result the plan was a failure.The plan turned out to be a failure.Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.一、怎樣使用較高級(jí)詞匯We all think highly of him .A g

6、ood idea occurred to me./ A good idea suddenly struck me.Books are free for the students there.第8頁(yè)二 豐富句式：(慣用到句型結(jié)構(gòu)） 利用不一樣句型來表示同一個(gè)意思， 能增加文章文采。1. 感嘆句 e.g. How happy I was when I received your letter! What a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was !2. 強(qiáng)調(diào)句 e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old g

7、ranny. I do hope you can come if possible.第9頁(yè)3、 倒裝句 e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.4、 省略句 e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary.5、 with短語(yǔ) e.g. I saw a youn

8、g lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.第10頁(yè)6、 定語(yǔ)從句 e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information. Lets come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.7、 各種名詞性從句 e.g. Thats what I should do. We s

9、hould do a favour to whoever needs help at present.第11頁(yè)8、 各種狀語(yǔ)從句 e.g. Time passed quickly before we knew it. The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, well catch up sooner or later. Do call me before hand so that I can meet you at the airpor

10、t. They had to wait because the rain was getting more and more heavily. 第12頁(yè)三 高考綱領(lǐng)中慣用連接詞1.表示遞進(jìn); 另外，還有：what is more; besides; also; moreover; in addition2. 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系 不過， 然而， 相反：but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary.第13頁(yè)3. 表示因果關(guān)系 因?yàn)椋?，所? since; as; because (of ); so; thus; ther

11、efore; as a result; 4. 表示條件關(guān)系 假如，只要: if ;on condition ( that ); as long as 除非: unless 不然: or else第14頁(yè)5. 表示時(shí)間關(guān)系 當(dāng) 時(shí)候 : when ; while 在之后: after 在之前: before 直到: until 一就 : as soon as 以后， 然后: later; afterwards 很快: soon 最近: lately; recently 自從 :since 從那時(shí)起: from then on 常見對(duì)稱關(guān)系過渡詞語(yǔ)1. For one thing, for ano

12、ther thing, 2. On one hand, on the other hand, 第15頁(yè)6. 表示特定次序關(guān)系 首先， 最主要: above all 其次: secondly 然后: then; next 最終: finally; in the end；last but not least7. 換一個(gè)方法表述 換句話說: in other words; that is to say; 第16頁(yè)8. 進(jìn)行舉例說明 比如，比如: for instance; for example; like; such as9. 用于陳說事實(shí) 實(shí)際上: in fact; actually; as a

13、 matter of fact 跟你說實(shí)話 : to tell you the truth第17頁(yè)10. 對(duì)一個(gè)話題進(jìn)行總結(jié) 總而言之，總來說: on the whole; in short; all in all; in general; in a word；in conclusion; ;. To sum up ; in brief 其它慣用到表示1.in terms of 就而言2.as far as be concerned 3. in my opinion/ view 4. As far as I know 5. As for sb,第18頁(yè)假設(shè)你是星光中學(xué)李華，將參加主題為“Let

14、s Ride Bicycles”英語(yǔ)演講比賽。 請(qǐng)撰寫一份演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包含： 1汽車即使便利但帶來空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題； 2騎自行車益處，如節(jié)能環(huán)境保護(hù)、 有利健康等。 參考詞匯：低碳生活 lowcarbon life節(jié)能 energy saving 注意： 1. 詞數(shù)： 120詞左右； 2演講稿開頭和結(jié)尾已給出， 且該部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Good morning, everyone, I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School.The topic of my speech is “Lets Ride Bicycles” _ _ _第19頁(yè)Dear

15、classmates, Im very glad to have this chance to talk to you. The topic of my speech is Lets ride a bicycle. As is known to all, with the improvement of peoples living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some

16、 problems such as air pollution and traffic jams. How can we solve these problems then? As far as Im concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles dont need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they wont give off w

17、aste gas. Whats more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is good for our health. Therefore, lets take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us! Thank you for listening!第20頁(yè)春季高考作文給澳大利亞朋友寫一封信，談?wù)劀p負(fù)給學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)和生活帶來改變。 I will tell you the cha

18、nges of my life. Before, we had many classes every day. I had to do a lot of homework after school. I went to bed at 11:30 in the evening. I had no time to play. I was very tired. Now I can visit museums. I can learn computer and drawing. In the evening, I can read books and newspapers and watch TV.

19、 I go to bed at 10:00 now.17分第21頁(yè)高考滿分作文 Im very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since our homework has reduced. Before that, learning during the day was very simple. Having class and doing homework was the only thing we should do. In the evening, we also had a lot of homework to do. We co

20、uld not go to bed until 11:30. Nevertheless, since reducing the learning load, my life has become much more interesting. I often visit museums and computer rooms and draw pictures in my spare time. In the evening, I also have time to watch TV and read newspapers. I no longer stay up late; on the con

21、trary, I go to bed at about 10 pm. In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now.第22頁(yè)書面表示慣用語(yǔ)句書信 Thanks for your last letter. I am writing just to inform you In reply to your last letter, I am writing to explain the two questions as follows: 開 頭 Looking forward to your reply/hearing from you! Thanks for your consideration. Do remember me to your parents! 結(jié) 尾第23頁(yè)2. 敘事 It is quite obvious/clear that ( 很顯然) There is no doubt that (毫無疑問) Take as an example. (以為例） On one hand, on the o