高考英語作文備考學案

1、2009高考英語作文備考學案. NMET書面表達第五項要求1. 覆蓋所有的語言要點。 內容要點可用不同方式表達。對緊扣主題的適當發(fā)揮不予扣分。2. 應用詞匯和語法結構的數(shù)量和準確性。值得注意的是語法結構或詞匯方面雖有些許錯誤, 但為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞匯所致; 具備較強的語言運用能力。3.有效地使用了語句間的連接成分,使全文結構緊湊。. 常見的不足1 漢語式英語2 無過渡語3 句式單一,平鋪直敘. 如何增強書面表達效果l 使用較高級的詞匯l 使用恰當?shù)倪B接詞l 使用較豐富的句式一、怎樣使用較高級的詞匯1. Because the weather was good, our journe

2、y was comfortable.2. We all think he is a great man.3. Suddenly I thought out a good idea.4. The students there neednt pay for their books.5. As a result the plan was a failure.6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.7. She went to Austria in order to study music. 8. When he spoke,

3、he felt more and more excited.9.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms.10. You can find my house easily. 二、怎樣使用恰當?shù)倪B接詞連接詞使文章語意通順，前后銜接緊密，可采用以下方法：提示1：恰當使用關聯(lián)詞，如when，so，if，because，so that等。提示2：巧妙使用意思有聯(lián)系的詞或短語，如First, Second, Third, Soon, Whats more, As a result等。提示3：適當使用過渡性語句，如The reasons are as f

4、ollows./Every coin has two sides./On the other hand,/On the contrary,Besides, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. ( 2007全國I)First, she can make some pocket money to meet pet daily needs and thus develop a sense of independence. Second, she can learn

5、 how to deal with various problems in the workplace. Third, she can build up new friendships and improve bet social skills. (2007陜西)In my opinion, learning English is a step-by-step process. (2007浙江)連接詞、句型的選擇1、遞進關系 （肯定）Besides / Whats more / Also /In addition/Furthermore（否定）Whats worse / Even worse

6、/ Worse still /To make matters worse2、時間 一就：The moment / On doing / as soon as /immediately / directly不 久：It was not long before / After a while / Soon 然 后：After that / Then / So / Next同 時： At the same time / Meanwhile3、轉 折：however , / but / on the contrary / On the other hand / yet / although4、順 序：

7、First / Second / Third / Last / Next/Then5、條 件：If / As long as / So long as /on condition that / unless6、強 調：It was that / who / So she did . /I do hope / She did help me. /It really worked./ besides/ furthermore/moreover/whats more/ certainly/ actually/ in fact7、其 它：不得不做某事：have to do sth./have no c

8、hoice but to do sth./have nothing to do but do sth.有必要做某事：There is no need (for sb.) to do sth./It is necessary (for sb.)to do 最好 做某 事：Youd better do sth. / Its better to do sth.做某事沒困難：have no difficulty in doing sth. / have no trouble in doing sth.感 謝 某 人：thank sb. / be thankful to sb./ express one

9、s thanks to sb. /be grateful to sb. / Thanks to 求 助 某 人：turn to sb. for help / ask sb. for help / with the help of / with ones help驚 奇：To ones surprise / In surprise / Surprisingly / only +不定式（表意外結果）結 果：As a result / Therefore / Thus / So總 結：In a word / In short / Above all / After all/ generally sp

10、eaking/ to sum up/ in all/altogether / as is known to all表 達 觀 點：In my opinion / I think / I believe / Im sure / I guess原因如下（很多）：he reasons are as follows. /here are many reasons for it.浪費金錢（時間）：Its a waste of money / time Task: 請在下列句子中（間）填上恰當?shù)年P聯(lián)詞或意思有聯(lián)系的短語。1、 Yao Ming was walking in the street he he

11、ard someone cry for help.2、 He advised that I hire a car I could travel around in the west .3、 It was not long the police came.4、 he heard the cry for help, he jumped into the water to save the girl.5、 o you agree with my arrangement ? ,do write to me soon.6、 We can go downtown and do some shopping.

12、 , we can pay a visit to some places of interest.7、I shared the cost of the gas with my friends . , I saved $80.8、Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. , it may make us fat.Task: Writing Practice 請你給中國日報寫一篇稿件，談談農村兒童失學的主要原因及你的看法。原因：1、家庭貧窮，供不起兒童上學，他們不得不在家賺錢養(yǎng)家。2、部分家長認為女孩上學無用，不愿讓她們上學。 3、 部分兒童對功課不感興趣，不愿上學。看

13、法：1、 每個兒童包括女孩都應有受教育的機會。2、全社會都應重視兒童教育，他們對國家的未來將起到重要的作用。要求：1、不要逐字逐句翻譯。 2、語句要連貫通順。 3、字數(shù)100個左右。 Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school. Most families are poor and cant afford their education. They have to stay at home and make money. Some parents think daughters neednt go to sch

14、ool. They dont let them go to school. Some children are not interested in their studies and wouldnt like to go to school. All the children including girls should be educated. The whole society should pay attention to it. Theyll play an important part in the future of our country.診斷：?優(yōu)點 1、詞能達意；2、語句表達

15、基本正確。缺點 語句不夠連貫藥方 1、使用常見句型；2、每兩個句子之間使用關聯(lián)詞或過渡詞。Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school.。，most families are too poor to send their children to school . ,they have no choice but to stay at home and make money. ,some parents think there is no need for their daughters to go to scho

16、ol. ,they dont let them go to school. ,some children are not interested in their studies. ,some wouldnt like to go to school.,all the children including girls should be educated . ,the whole society should pay attention to it theyll play an important part in the future of our country one day.三、怎樣使用較

17、豐富的句式方法一. 使用非謂語動詞使句子簡潔高檔Rewrite the sentences1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere.2. I will be given another chance. I will succeed.3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard. 4 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.Complete the sentences with non-pr

18、edicate (非謂語動詞)5. 聽到這個消息, 他們變的很激動。 _the news, they got excited.6. 盡管被告知許多遍, 他仍然重復這個錯。 _many times, he still repeated the mistake.7. 除非被邀請發(fā)言, 你應該在會議上保持沉默。 Unless _to speak, you should keep silent at the meeting.Translate the following sentences by using non-predicate (非謂語動詞)8. 面對困難時，他從不放棄。9. 引入市場后，該產

19、品大獲成功。10. 做完作業(yè)后，他回家了。方法二. 巧用倒裝結構增強句子的表現(xiàn)力Complete the sentences1. He didnt realize his foolishness until he returned home. Not until .2. We can save the earth by changing the way we live. Only .3. He is clever but he does not work hard. as / though .4. The clock tower stands on the other side of the

20、street. On the other side of the street .Translate the sentences by using Inverted Sentences(倒裝句)5. 他從不說關于他家庭的事。6. 只有我們每個人都意識到水的重要性, 我們才能生活得更好。7. 只有用這種方式, 我們才能有足夠的精力好好學習。8. Describe the character（濟公） by using Inverted Sentence(倒裝句)9. 他是個孩子，卻知道很多。10. 墻上有個通知，上面寫著“請節(jié)約用水”。方法三. 嘗試多樣化表達方式1、感嘆句 e.g. 1) How

21、 happy I was when I received your letter.2） What a kind boy he is! 3）How disappointed he was !2、強調句 e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. 3、倒裝句 e.g. 1) Only in this way can you solve this problem.2) There comes the police car.3) Hardly had they got to the station when they met the y

22、oung man.4、省略句 e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus.5、with短語 e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.6、定語從句 e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information.7、各種名詞性從句 e.g. Thats what I should do.8、各種狀語從句 e.

23、g. Use ifferent ways to describe the picture （連戰(zhàn)的破冰之旅）一就受到歡迎a. As soon as Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport, they were warmly welcomed.b. On arriving at the airport, Lien Chan and his wifec. Lien Chan and his wife were warmly welcomed directly/ the moment they arrived at the airport.d. N

24、o sooner had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport than they were e. Hardly had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport when they were Task: 按要求改寫下列句子,使其更具文采。1. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (強調句型) 2. I hope I can pay a visit to you next

25、 year.（強調）3. Tom was puzzled.（感嘆）4. It is great fun to climb the hill.（感嘆）5. Tom and Mary like singing songs.（肯定倒裝）6. John likes to study and play.（否定倒裝）7. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒裝句)8. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名詞性從句）9. Soon the firefighters came.（表時間

26、句型）10. In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast.All these make peoples lives convenient, pleasant and colorful.a._which_b. With the development of _c. _so _ that_Translate the sentences:我校是一所市重點中學， 位于樂陵西郊。校園很美,綠樹成蔭。West of Leling lies our school, which is a key school of Dezhou city. It

27、 is beautiful, surrounded with many trees/with many trees.Task:書面表達：聯(lián)合國教科文組織某考察團正在我國某鄉(xiāng)村參觀考察。假定你是接待人員，請根據(jù)下列提示以發(fā)言稿的形式簡要介紹這個村的情況： 1)大?。航?00戶人家，約500口人。 2)變化：過去很窮，78年后變化很大。人們生活比以前好多了?，F(xiàn)已舊貌換新顏。 3)教育：原來的學校很小，現(xiàn)已經過改建。新建的教學樓有4層，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有學齡兒童在此免費就讀。 注意：1）要點齊全，前后連貫。 2）詞數(shù)：100-120之間。Ladies and gentlemen, Welco

28、me to our school! This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look.In the past, the school here was very small . Now it has been rebuilt. The newl

29、y built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. Thank you.Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school! This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500

30、 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast. People here live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school. But now it has

31、 been rebuilt and the newly built teaching building which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. Whats more, they enjoy free education. May you enjoy your stay here / May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you. 習作分析Task:書面表達(滿分25分)某中學生英語

32、報社正開展一場題為“Young teachers or elderly teachers，which do you prefer?”請你依據(jù)下面表格所提供的要點寫一篇短文，向該報社投稿。老年教師 青年教師·教學耐心講解細致經驗豐富·精力充沛教學活潑勇于創(chuàng)新 你的觀點?注意：1詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好，不計入總數(shù)；2短文必須包含表格的全部內容。要求觀點明確，結構合理，緊湊連貫學生作品1： Compare with young teachers, I prefer elderly teachers. There are some reasons below. For o

33、ne thing, most of elderly teachers are patient in teaching. They not only spare no effort to teach the students, but also give classes carefully .They will do all they can to make the students understand the teaching content. What good teachers! For another thing, elderly teachers are full of teachi

34、ng experience. This is also the most important, especially for us senior students. This is only my opinion. I think young teachers are also good.點 評：亮 點：1、觀點鮮明，詞匯句型的運用比較靈活2、過渡詞及連詞的使用使文章結構緊湊連貫、條理清楚。不足之處：1、個別地方的表達需要改進。1) Compared2) more3) try to make the classes lively and interesting2、審題不全面，忽略了對青年教師這

35、部分信息的處理。這一點是比較大的失誤。學生作品2: Opinions are divided on this question. Some students who like the elderly teachers more than the young ones think thatthe elderly ones are more patient in teaching, more careful in explaining and also have a lot of experience. However, the others have a different opinion. T

36、hey think the teachers who are young are full of energy. Besides, their teaching is lively and they dare to bring in the new ideas. Well, in my opinion, I like both the elderly teachers and the young ones because from them we both can learn a lot.點 評：亮 點：1、段落清楚，要點齊全，句式表達比較靈活，能適當運用復句。2、過渡詞運用也比較熟練。需要改

37、進的地方：1) prefer the elderly teachers to the young ones2) with explanations3) the 去掉4) The young teachersSome useful suggestions:對于英語基礎不好的學生，可以這樣處理：把所給的材料分為幾個點，每個點用1-2句簡單句表達出來；而對于英語較好的學生，盡可能地運用一些高級詞匯跟適當?shù)剡\用一些復合句，關鍵是要表達準確到位。 1. 重點詞匯的處理跟運用1）Elderly teachers have more patience. /They are more patient.2) E

38、lderly teachers always explain things more carefully.They are more careful with explanations.3) Elderly teachers are rich in teaching experience. They are experienced in teaching. /They have more/rich teaching experience.4) Young teachers are full of energy. /They have more energy. /They are more en

39、ergetic.5) Young teachers teaching is more lively. /They can make their classes lively and interesting.6) Young teachers like to think up/bring in new ideas.They are more ready to accept or create new ideas.2. 句型的靈活運用1) Some students may think old teachers teaching is better. In their opinion, old teachers have more teaching experience and they are ver