高中英語讀后續(xù)寫高分結(jié)構(gòu)

Step1:

讀懂5W1HStep2:

四句定框架，設(shè)疑并解答，

動作情緒和對話，結(jié)尾主題要升華Step3:

成句謀篇，升級句式動作鏈1.動作的邏輯主語一致時：（動作由同一個人發(fā)出）動作三連結(jié)構(gòu)：主語+謂語A,

謂語Band

謂語C非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)：主要動作作謂語，次要動作作非謂語多個動作同時且主動發(fā)生：主+謂,doingsth.或doingsth.,

主＋謂老人坐在夕陽下+看報紙+聽廣播The

old

man

sat

under

the

sunset,

reading

the

newspaper

and

listening

to

the

radio.多個動作有先后關(guān)系：先發(fā)生的動作非謂語用完成態(tài)Havingdonesth,

主+謂

排了很久隊

+

他被告知票賣完了Having

queued

for

3hours,

he

was

told

that

the

ticket

had

been

sold

out.

次要動作與主語為被動關(guān)系：Donesth.,

主+謂

孩子們被感動

+

哭了Deeply

moved

by

the

story,

the

children

began

to

cry.2.獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)（動作由不同主語發(fā)出時）：主語1+非謂語(次要動作），主語2+謂語(主要動作)描寫人物的情緒1.運用介詞短語:介詞(with/without,in,to,outof)+表示心情情緒的名詞

“with/without+賓語”表示“伴隨著/有著……”或者“沒有……”

1.

“Stop！”Heshouted

withanger(=angrily).2.

“Sorry.Ihavenocash.”

Isaid

withembarrassment(=embarrassedly).

“To

one’s

+

名詞”表示“讓某人……的是”

1.

To

our

great

relief(讓我們?nèi)玑屩刎摰氖?2.

To

her

astonishment(讓她吃驚的是)In+名詞，表示“……地”

1.

In

astonishment/surprise(=astonishedly/surprisedly),they

kept

their

eyes

open

to

read

the

results.

3.

In

delight(=delightedly)高興地,

they

entered

the

room,singing

and

dancing.2.表示情緒的adj作狀語:

adj.and

adj.（并列情緒形容詞）,

主+謂Speechlessand

happy,

she

held

the

twins

tightly

into

her

arms,

with

tears

welling

up

in

her

eyes.

【adj.and

adj.（并列情緒形容詞）,

主+謂，with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)】Excitedandpleased,

theboys

rushedtothelake,laughinganddancing.【adj.and

adj.（并列情緒形容詞）,

主+謂，非謂語AandB】3.無靈主語：表示情感狀態(tài)的抽象名詞作主語+有生命力的動詞作謂語【常見的情緒名詞】happiness,joy,delight

開心快樂；excitement興奮；surprise,astonishment

驚奇驚訝；shame

羞恥羞愧；anger

憤怒；despair

絕望；regret

遺憾后悔；sorrow

悲傷；horror

驚恐；anxiety

焦慮；disappointment

失望沮喪；satisfaction

滿意滿足；puzzlement

困惑不解；eagerness渴望等【常見的謂語動詞】seize

侵襲；choke

噎住堵??；flood

充滿；creep

不知不覺產(chǎn)生；grip

緊抓；givewayto

；washover

洗滌侵襲；deserted

丟棄遺棄；wellup涌出等。萬能句型：asenseof/afeelingof/awaveof+

情名+

welledupinone’sheart一種……的感覺涌上某人的心頭asenseof/afeelingof/awaveof+

情感名詞

+

washedoversb./floodedoversb.sb.

was/wereseizedby

agreatsenseof+

情緒名詞被一種……的感覺所控制sb.

felt

agreatsenseof+

情緒名詞+

wellingupin

one'sheartand

surgingthrough

sb.某人感到一股強烈的......感覺在內(nèi)心升騰、奔涌

A

ripple/flush/wave/surge

of

sadness

welled

up

inside

him.他內(nèi)心涌起一股悲傷。

A

wave

of

happiness

and

excitement

seized/took

hold

of/swept

over

her.她內(nèi)心涌起一陣興奮?！緍ipple（感情的）逐漸擴散；flush一陣強烈情感；surge（情感的）涌起，翻涌】人物對話：（一）掌握不同的效果的表示“說”的動詞：

（二）掌握不同的修飾“說”的狀態(tài)：1.加人物描述（語言，標簽詞，描述：定語從句/同位語/非謂語/...）a.“I

don’t

think

the

soldiers

like

us,”

said

Samuel,

who

looked

as

if

he

was

about

to

cry.b.“Heturnedmeoutoftheroomthismorning,"

saidJohn,stampinghisfootwithexcitement.“今天早上他把我趕出了房間,”約翰激動得跺著腳說。2.加語氣:

ina/an+形容詞+tone即“用一種...的語氣”“Iwould

love

to,”said

Emily，in

a

pleasant

tone.“我很樂意這樣做，”艾米麗用一種愉快的語氣說。3.加嗓音:

ina/an+形容詞+voice即用一種...的聲音”“Ididn’t

mean

to,”she

murmured

in

a

low

voice.

“我不是故意的，”她低聲說。4.加情感（介詞短語：with/in+情感名詞；表情感的adj.;；非謂語動作鏈）a.“I...I..don’t

think

I’m

right

for

the

part,”I

replied

with

embarrassment.“我...我..認為我不適合這個角色，”我尷尬地回答。b.“Ididn'tgetanidealscoreinthemathexam,”saidTom,

disappointed.“我在數(shù)學考試中沒有得到理想的分數(shù),”湯姆失望地說。

5.加副詞“Iwill

never

do

that

again,”I

answered

firmly.“我再也不會那樣做了，”我堅定地回答。潤色句子1.寫好簡單句（主謂賓、主系表）2.運用名詞性從句（主語從句、賓語從句、表語從句、同位語從句）和it(形主、形賓)主語從句What+情緒類動詞+sb

+

was+名詞/doing/that從句【W(wǎng)hat

主語從句描述情緒，that表語從句描述情緒產(chǎn)生的原因】a.

讓我高興的是放學之后和好友們一起打籃球。What

delighted

mewas

playingbasketballwithmyfriendsafterschool.b.

讓我驚訝的是Tom

居然獲得了英語演講比賽的第一名。What

surprised

me

was

that

TomwonthefirstprizeintheEnglishSpeechContest.c.

讓Jane難過的是是時候和他們告別了。What

saddened

Jane

was

that

itwastimetosaygoodbyetothem.What+made+sb

+情緒類形容詞+

was+名詞/doing/that從句d.

Whatmademe

delighted

was

playingbasketballwithmyfriendsafterschool.e.

What

mademe

surprised

was

that

TomwonthefirstprizeintheEnglishSpeechContest.f.

What

mademe

heartbroken

was

that

itwastimetosaygoodbyetothem.定語從句：

Sb

，

whowasaadj

身份，didsth3.加修飾定語（adj./介短/描述性n./定從/非謂語）狀語（adv./介短/狀從）連接性副詞：however、nevertheless、therefore、thus、moreover、furthermore和besides等狀語從句：時間、地點、原因、條件、目的、結(jié)果、讓步、方式和比較等從句補語（動賓賓補：感官動詞/使役動詞+賓語+賓補（adj./介短/描述性n./非謂語）同位語（名詞或從句）高級句式獨立主格主語1+謂語（主要動作），主語2（名詞/代詞）+adj/adv/介短/非謂語With/Without復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)：With/Without+賓語+賓補（adj/adv/介短/非謂語）

無靈主語1.情感狀態(tài)類名詞+謂語：(aburst/wave/surge/rush/sense/feelingof+）表情感狀態(tài)的名詞十動詞＋

sb

，表“某人感到…”或“一陣／一種…向某人襲來”。2.

身體部位／音容笑類名詞+謂語【常見的部位外貌類名詞】face；laughter；smile；tear；words

說的話等【常見的謂語動詞】lightup，brighten

照亮；linger

繼續(xù)存留；wellup

涌出；flash

閃爍；crumple

弄皺；fill...with“用……裝滿”等a.

Her

eyes

cloudover

withtears.b.

Myfingers

shook

withanger.c.

A

(bright

,sweet

)voiceinterruptedus,

“...”一個(清亮甜美)的聲音打斷了我們,

“......”d.

My

heart

was

thumping/pounding

with

excitement.

我激動得心砰砰跳。3.

時間/地點/場景類名詞+謂語【常見的時間、地點類名詞】silence，hush安靜沉默；dusk

黃昏；dawn

黎明破曉；morning；afternoon；night等?！境Ｒ姷闹^語動詞】see

看見；witness見證；find

發(fā)現(xiàn)；fall

降臨進入等。

時間/地點witnessed/saw/found

sb’s+名詞/doingsth：a.

Beijing

has

witnessed

great

changes

in

recent

years.

b.

Dusk

found

the

little

girl

crying

in

the

street.c.

Asuddensilence

fell.突然一片鴉雀無聲。d.

Mybirthday

falls

onaMondaythisyear.4.

自然現(xiàn)象類名詞+謂語【常見的自然現(xiàn)象類名詞】sun；sunshine；moon；moonlight；fog霧，mist薄霧；rain；earthquake

地震等?！境Ｒ姷闹^語動詞】blanket

覆蓋；come；bring；prevent

妨礙阻止；strike

打擊侵襲；threaten

威脅/即將來臨等。a.

In

the

severe

winter,another

snowstorm

attacked

thewholeworld.b.

A

heavy

rain

visited

thecity.

這個城市剛下過一場大雨。c.

An

earthquake

comes

like

a

thief

in

the

night,without

warning.

d.

The

rain

prevented

me

from

coming.

因為下雨，我不能來。5.

行為動作的名詞作主語+謂語【常見的行為動作類名詞】thought想法,glance一瞥,look看到,idea想法,feeling感受,walk走路；sight看到等?！境Ｒ姷闹^語動詞】overwhelm

壓倒；strike

打擊侵襲；arouse

喚起；remind

想起；fill...with

充滿...；change

改變；bring

帶來等。Words

failed

her.(=She

couldn’t

say

a

word.)A

flash

of

movement

caught

my

attention.(=I

noticed

a

flash

of

movement.)Itoccurredtosbthatsbshoulddosth.某人突然想到某人應(yīng)該做某事。Abrilliantideaflashedthroughone’smindthatsbshoulddosth.一個絕妙的主意閃過腦海，讓某人做某事。3種“某人想到”:句式1：idea,thought...+hit/struck/occurredto/dawnedon

sb.也可用it作形式主語：Itsuddenlyhit/struck/occurredto/dawnedonsb.that從句，其中that從句是真正的主語。句式2:sth.

crossed/flashedthrough/cameto/poppedinto/jumpedoutof

sb.'smind也可用it作形式主語：Itcrossed/flashedthrough/sprangto/poppedinto/jumpedoutofsb.'smindthat....句式3:one'smindbegantorace/one'smindraced某人開始轉(zhuǎn)動腦筋／某人拼命地轉(zhuǎn)動腦筋強調(diào)句式1：sb.do/did/does+動詞原形，意為“的確、千萬......”句式2：Itis/was

被強調(diào)的部分

that/who

句子的其他部分句式3：Itwasnotuntil