高中英語作文訓(xùn)練20題（含例文）

高中英語作文專題訓(xùn)練20題(含范文)

一、讀寫任務(wù)

1.Sallywalkedontotheplatform,pickedupapieceofchalkandwroteonthe

blackboard:"'Rule1:Wearefamily!”Allstudentsstoppedtolookather.Andshecontinued

withRule2,Rule3…Inthefollowingweeks,Sallyworkedout10classrulesandposted

themonthewallsoftheclassroom.Shepatientlyexplainedalltherulestothestudentsand

requireeveryonetofollowthem.

Surprisingly,Sallywasnotdrivenoutliketheformerteachers;instead,shewonrespect

fromthestudents.Overtheyear,shewitnessedgradualchangeintheclass.Atthegraduation

ceremony,justassheexpected,shewasveryproudtostandwithaclassofcare,mannersand

confidence.

［寫作內(nèi)容］

1.用約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。2.用約120個詞就班規(guī)談?wù)勀愕南敕?，?nèi)容包

括：

(1)你們班最突出的問題是什么？

(2)針對該問題你會設(shè)計一條什么班規(guī)？

(3)你認(rèn)為班規(guī)會帶來什么影響？

【寫作要求】

1.作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接

引用原文的句子。2.作文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

Sallywasateacher,whotaughtsomestudentsfullofproblems.Thestudentsdidn't

followtheschoolrules.Therefore,shemadetherulesforthem.Latertheymadegreat

progress.

Inourclass,somestudentsdon'tworkhardandoftenfightwitheachother.Iwilltell

themsomestoriesabouthard-workingpeople.!willmakeastudyplantoencouragethemto

studywork.Iputupsomesayingsonthewallstoremindthemtodoso.Iwillexplaintothem

thatstudyinghardisveryimportant.Theyaren'tallowedtofightatschool.Inthisway,

studentshaveagoodhabit.Mostofthestudentsfollowtheschoolrulesandstudywork.They

willrespectteachersandotherclassmates.Theywillhavegoodmannersandconfidence.

Latertheywillgetbettergrades.

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于讀寫任務(wù)。要求考生用30詞總結(jié)文章內(nèi)容，并用120詞就班規(guī)談?wù)?/p>

看法。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

充滿：fullof—>befilledwith

因此：therefdre—hence

養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣：haveagoodhabit—>formagoodhabit

獲得：getrobtain

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Inourclass,somestudentsdon'tworkhardandoftenfightwitheachother.

拓展句：Inourclass,somestudentswhodon'tworkhardoftenfightwitheachother.

【點睛】

【高分句型11Sallywasateacher,whotaughtsomestudentsfullofproblems.（運用了

who引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

【高分句型2]Iwillexplaintothemthatstudyinghardisveryimportant.（運用了that弓|

導(dǎo)賓語從句，動名詞作主語）

二、圖畫作文

2.假定你是某中學(xué)生英語報的小記者，以下漫畫內(nèi)容是你的所見所聞，請根據(jù)要求寫

一篇英語短文投稿。內(nèi)容要求：

1.描述漫畫內(nèi)容；2.發(fā)表個人感想。

注意:

1.短文標(biāo)題與開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.考生可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章內(nèi)容充實、

連貫；

3.詞數(shù)120左右；4.文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息。

參考詞匯：告示牌sign

MindYourBehaviorinPublicPlaces

LastSunday,IwentsightseeingwithmyfriendsintheFairyLakePark.

【答案］Onepossibleversion:

MindYourBehaviorinPublicPlaces

LastSunday,IwentsightseeingwithmyfriendsintheFairyLakePark.Theparkwas

fulloffreshnessandbeautyofspring,withthesunshiningandbirdssinging.WhenIwas

enjoyingthefantasticsceneryaround,somethingunpleasantcaughtmyeye.Ayoungcouple

inaboatwereeating,talkingandlaughingloudlyasiftheyweretheonlypeopleinthe

world.What*sworse,theyspatandeventhrewrubbishintothelake,totallyignoringthe

noticeablesign"NoLittering^^nearby.Whatashame!

Suchbehaviorleftmedeepinthought.IfallvisitorstotheFairyLakeParkdoasthe

coupledid,thelakewillbeseverelypollutedandsoonturnedintoahugedustbin.Ithinkall

ofusshouldmindourbehaviorinpublicplaces.Onlyinthiswaycanweliveinmore

comfortableandbeautifulsurroundings.

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】

這是一篇圖畫作文。文章要求考生以漫畫內(nèi)容為話題，寫一篇英語短文投稿。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

更糟糕的是：whafsworse—tomakethingsworse

嚴(yán)重地：severely—seriously

環(huán)境：surroundings—environment

似乎：asiJasthough

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：What'sworse,theyspatandeventhrewrubbishintothelake,totallyignoringthe

noticeablesign“NoLittering^^nearby.

拓展句：What'sworse,thecouple,whototallyignoredthenoticeablesign“NoLittering^^

nearby,spatandeventhrewrubbishintothelake.

【點睛】

【高分句型1JAyoungcoupleinaboatwereeating,talkingandlaughingloudlyasifthey

weretheonlypeopleintheworld.（使用了asif引導(dǎo)的方式狀語從句）

【高分句型2]IfallvisitorstotheFairyLakeParkdoasthecoupledid,thelakewillbe

severelypollutedandsoonturnedintoahugedustbin.（使用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）

三、概要寫作

3.Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint（s）

ofthepassageinnomorethan60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.

SuperSizeMe

Fastfood,otherwiseknownasjunkfood,isahugepassionforalargenumberofpeople

acrosstheWesternworld.Butwhatwouldhappenifyouatelotsofjunkfood,everyday?

Woulditseriouslydamageyourhealth?ThesewerethequestionswhichledMorgan

Spurlock,anindependentfilm-maker,todoanexperiment,whichhemadeintoa

documentaryfilmentitledSuperSizeMe.

ThemainbasisofhisexperimentwasthatSpurlockpromisedtocatthreeMcDonald's

mealsaday,everyday,foramonth.HecouldonlyeatfoodfromMcDonald'sandeverytime

anemployeeaskedifhewouldliketo“supersize“themeal,hehadtoagree."Supersizing”

refersintofactthatwiththistypeofmealyougetaconsiderablelargerportionofeverything.

SpurlockknewthatbyeatingthreeMcDonald'smealsaday,hewouldconsumealotof

fatandgreatdealofsaltandsugarineachmeal-muchmorethanheneeded.Although

Spurlockknewhewouldputonabitofweight,andthatthisdietwasunhealthy,hewasn't

quitepreparedforjusthowunhealthyitturnedouttobe.Thechangesinthisbodywere

horrifyinginthefirstweek,heputon4.5kilosandbytheendofthethirtydayshehadgained

nearly14kilos,bringinghistotalweighttoamassive98kg.

Spurlocksays"I'dlovepeopletowalkoutofthemovieandsay,"NexttimeI'mnot

goingto“supersize”.MaybeI'mnotgoinghaveanyjunkfoodatall.I'mgoingtositdown

andeatdinnerwithmykids,withtheTVoff,sothatwecaneathealthyfood,talkaboutwhat

we'reeatingandhavearelationshipwitheachother."Foodforthoughindeed.

【答案】Spurlockmadeanexperimenttotestthedamageofeatinglotsofjunkfoodand

madeadocumentaryfilmlater.Intheone-monthexperiment,Spurlockatethreesupersize

McDonald'smealseverydayifrequired,thuscausingterribleincreaseinhis

weight.Spurlockhopesthefilmcanhelppeopleestablishahealthyeatinghabit.

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】

本文是一篇說明文。文章介紹說，斯普爾洛克做了一個實驗來測試食用大量垃圾食品

的危害，之后他還拍了一部紀(jì)錄片。在為期一個月的實驗中，如果有需要，斯普爾洛

克每天吃三頓超大號的麥當(dāng)勞餐，因此導(dǎo)致他的體重急劇增加。斯普爾洛克希望這部

電影能幫助人們建立健康的飲食習(xí)慣。

【詳解】

1要點摘錄①Woulditseriouslydamageyourhealth?Thesewerethequestionswhichled

MorganSpurlock,anindependentfilm-maker,todoanexperiment,whichhemadeintoa

documentaryfilmentitledSuperSizeMe.

②ThemainbasisofhisexperimentwasthatSpurlockpromisedtocatthreeMcDonald's

mealsaday,everyday,foramonth.HecouldonlyeatfoodfromMcDonald'sandeverytime

anemployeeaskedifhewouldliketo“supersize“themeal,hehadtoagree.

③Thechangesinthisbodywerehorrifyinginthefirstweek,heputon4.5kilosandbythe

endofthethirtydayshehadgainednearly14kilos,bringinghistotalweighttoamassive

98kg.

?Spurlocksays'Tdlovepeopletowalkoutofthemovieandsay,"NexttimeI'mnotgoing

to"supersize”.

⑤I'mgoingtositdownandeatdinnerwithmykids,withtheTVoff^sothatwecaneat

healthyfood,talkaboutwhatwe'reeatingandhavearelationshipwitheachother.^^Foodfor

thoughindeed.

2.縝密構(gòu)思

將第2、3和4、5幾個要點進(jìn)行重組，將第1個要點進(jìn)行整合。

3.遣詞造句

Spurlockmadeanexperimenttotestthedamageofeatinglotsofjunkfoodandmadea

documentaryfilmlater.

Intheone-monthexperiment,SpurlockatethreesupersizeMcDonald5smealseverydayif

required,thuscausingterribleincreaseinhisweight.

Spurlockhopesthefilmcanhelppeopleestablishahealthyeatinghabit.

【點睛】

[高分句型1]Intheone-monthexperiment,SpurlockatethreesupersizeMcDonald'smeals

everydayifrequired,thuscausingterribleincreaseinhisweight.（運用了省略結(jié)構(gòu)和現(xiàn)在分

詞作狀語）

[高分句型2]Spurlockhopesthefilmcanhelppeopleestablishahealthyeatinghabit.（運用

了省略連接代詞that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）

四、開放性作文

4.為鼓勵學(xué)生積極參加學(xué)校開展的課外活動，你校英語報舉辦題為“EnjoyAfter-school

Activities”的征文活動。請你寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：

1.開展情況；

2.你的參與和收獲；

3.呼吁大家。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

EnjoyAfter-schoolActivities

【答案】Version1:

EnjoyAfter-schoolActivities

Asweknow,after-schoolactivitiesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularamongus

students.Andourschoolhasofferedvarietiesofactivitiestoussuchasplayingballgames,

singinganddancing,playingchessandsoforth.

Takemyselfforexample,Ihavefoundgreatpleasureinplayingtabletennis.Every

TuesdayandFriday,Iwillplaythegamewithmyschoolmatesafterschool.Notonlydoesit

buildupmybodyandrelievestressfromstudy,butalsopromotesfriendshipwithothers.

Inaword,takingpartinsuchactivitiescanmakeourschoollifemoreenjoyableand

meaningful,soIhopeallofuscangetactivelyinvolvedinit.

Version2:

EnjoyAfter-schoolActivities

Asweknow,after-schoolactivitiesarebecomingincreasinglypopularinhighschools.

Andourschoolisnoexception.Afterschoolmanystudentswillhaveamarveloustime

participatingindiverseactivities,rangingfromsportslikeballgamestoliteratureandartlike

readingandoperaperformances.

Takemyselfforexample,Ihavefoundgreatpleasureinplayingbasketballwithmy

classmates,asitnotonlycanbuildupmystrengthbutalsofiresmeup,whichinturnhas

enabledmetostudymoreefficiently.Additionally,Itakedelightinvariousactivitiesinthe

readingclubeveryFriday,whereIgetimmersedintheseaofliterature,greatlyimprovingmy

literarycompetence.

Allinall,gettinginvolvedinvariousactivitiesaddscolorstoourcampuslife,soIhope

allofuscanactivelygetinvolvedinit.

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】

這是一篇說明文。學(xué)校英語報舉辦題為"EnjoyAfter-schoolActivities”的征文活動，要求

考生寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括介紹學(xué)校課外活動的開展情況和自己的收獲。

【詳解】

L詞匯積累（以第二篇范文為參考）

越來越受歡迎：moreandmorepopular—^-increasinglypopular

精彩的：wonderfUl一marvelous

參與：takepartin—participatein

各種各樣的：varied-various

2.句型拓展

同義句

原句：Asweknow,after-schoolactivitiesarebecomingincreasinglypopularinhigh

schools.

拓展句：Whatweallknowisthatafter-schoolactivitiesarebecomingincreasinglypopular

inhighschools.

【點睛】

［高分句型l］Asweknow,after-schoolactivitiesarebecomingincreasinglypopularinhigh

schools.（運用了as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

［高分句型2］Takemyselfforexample,Ihavefoundgreatpleasureinplayingbasketballwith

myclassmates,asitnotonlycanbuildupmystrengthbutalsofiresmeup,whichinturnhas

enabledmetostudymoreefficiently.（運用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

［高分句型3］Allinall,gettinginvolvedinvariousactivitiesaddscolorstoourcampuslife,

soIhopeallofuscanactivelygetinvolvedinit.（運用了動名詞作主語）

5.假設(shè)你是高中生李華，目前所在的高中正在倡導(dǎo)全校學(xué)生每天讀報半小時。請你結(jié)

合以下要點用英語寫一篇文章，談一談讀報的好處，并發(fā)表在你校英文報上。

1.了解時事，豐富知識；

2.培養(yǎng)思維，有利于以后的工作和發(fā)展；

3.讀報可以是一種愛好，可以給讀者帶來快樂。

要求：1.詞數(shù)：100左右。

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【答案］Therearemanyreasonswhyhighschoolstudentsshouldbeencouragedtoread

newspapersforhalfanhoureveryday.

Tostartwith,itisagoodwayforustoknowwhatishappeningathomeandabroadand

wecanlearnalotfromthenewspapers.Inaddition,readingnewspaperscandevelopthe

students9thinkingandhelpusmakewisedecisionsaboutparticularevents,whichwillbenefit

ourfuturecareersanddevelopment.Atlast,justlikemanyotherhobbies,readingnewspapers

isgreatfunandagoodwaytomakegooduseofoursparetime.

So,whydon'twebegintoreadnewspapershalfanhoureveryday?

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一篇關(guān)于讀報好處的文章。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

首先：Tostartwith—Tobeginwith

了解：know一learn

利用：makegooduseofftakeadvantageof

提高，培養(yǎng)：developspromote

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Atlast,justlikemanyotherhobbies,readingnewspapersisgreatfunandagood

waytomakegooduseofoursparetime.

拓展句：Atlast,readingnewspapersisjustlikemanyotherhobbies,whichisgreatfunand

agoodwaytomakegooduseofoursparetime.

【點睛】

【高分句型1JTherearemanyreasonswhyhighschoolstudentsshouldbeencouragedto

readnewspapersforhalfanhoureveryday.（運用了why弓|導(dǎo)的定語從句）

【高分句型2]Tostartwith,itisagoodwayforustoknowwhatishappeningathomeand

abroadandwecanlearnalotfromthenewspapers.（運用了what弓I導(dǎo)的賓語從句）

6.假設(shè)你是李華，在國慶節(jié)前你校舉辦了主題為“美麗中國”的現(xiàn)場國畫（traditional

Chinesepainting）比賽。請為校報英文專欄寫一篇活動報道。內(nèi)容包括：

1.活動時間地點，2.活動概況，3.活動意義

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

BeautifulChinaInTraditionalChinesePainting

【答案】BeautifulChinainTraditionalChinesePainting

LastFridaywitnessedatraditionalChinesepaintingcompetitionctBeautifulChina"on

campus,whichhassparkedagrowinglovefortraditionalart.Overonehundredstudents

participatedinthecompetition.Asthecompetitionbegan,participantslaidoutthepaper,

pickedupthepaintbrushandgavefullplaytotheirtalent,displayingthebeautyofour

motherland.Twohourslater,thecompetitioncametoanend.Theresultswillbeannounced

intwodaysandthewinningentrieswillbeonshowintheexhibitionhall.Mostofthe

studentsthinkhighlyofthislivepaintingcompetition,whichprovidesaplatformforthemto

explorethebeautyofChinaandexperiencethecharmofChineseart.

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于新聞報道，要求考生報道在國慶節(jié)前你校舉辦的主題為“美麗中國”

的現(xiàn)場國畫（traditionalChinesepainting）比賽。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

比賽：competition-contest

天賦：talent一gift

展示：display一show

參力口：participatein一takepartin

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Asthecompetitionbegan,participantslaidoutthepaper,pickedupthepaintbrushand

gavefullplaytotheirtalent,displayingthebeautyofourmotherland.

拓展句：Asthecompetitionbegan,participantslaidoutthepaper,pickedupthepaintbrush

andgavefullplaytotheirtalent,whichdisplayedthebeautyofourmotherland.

【點睛】

[高分句型l]LastFridaywitnessedatraditionalChinesepaintingcompetitionacBeautiful

China"oncampus,whichhassparkedagrowinglovefortraditionalart.（運用了which弓|導(dǎo)

的非限制性定語從句）

[高分句型2]Mostofthestudentsthinkhighlyofthislivepaintingcompetition,which

providesaplatformforthemtoexplorethebeautyofChinaandexperiencethecharmof

Chineseart.（運用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

7.假定你是李華，上周五你的英國朋友John來中國旅游，你陪他游覽了長城。請寫

一篇游記，內(nèi)容包括：

1.游覽的過程；2.你的感受。

注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。

【答案】Lastweek,myfriendJohncametoChinaforavisit.Ishowedhimaround

someplacesofinterestinBeijing,includingtheGreatWall.

Inthemorning,westartedearlyinordertowatchthesunriseontheGreatWall.Itwas

suchabeautifulviewthatwecouldn'tdescribeitbywords.Intheafternoon,Johnwasvery

happyandexcitedwhenwefinallyclimbedtothetopoftheGreatWall.Weenjoyedthe

beautyoftheGreatWallandtookalotofphotostogether.

Asthesayinggoes,onewhohasneverbeentotheGreatWallisnotatrueman.Asa

Chinese,Iamproudofourgreatcountry.

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生就“上周五陪英國朋友John游覽了長城”一事，寫

一篇游記。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

啟程：start—>setout

開心的：happy—delighted

欣賞：enjoy—>appreciate

為...感到驕傲：beproudof—>takepridein

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：IshowedhimaroundsomeplacesofinterestinBeijing,includingtheGreatWall.

拓展句：IshowedhimaroundsomeplacesofinterestinBeijing,includingtheGreatWall,

whichisaworld-famoustouristattraction.

【點睛】

【高分句型1]Itwassuchabeautifulviewthatwecouldn'tdescribeitbywords.（運用了

such...that...引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句）

【高分句型2]Asthesayinggoes,onewhohasneverbeentotheGreatWallisnotatrue

man.（運用了who引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句）

8.我們未來的生活將會是什么樣子的？每個人都有自己的設(shè)想。請你用英語寫一篇短

文，介紹一下你想象中的未來生活。要點如下：

1.家中有人形機器人，能處理一切家務(wù)；

2.無人駕駛的環(huán)保型汽車成為人們出行的主要交通工具；

3.月球?qū)⒊蔀槲覀兌燃俚暮萌ヌ帯?/p>

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2,可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【答案]WhatWillLifeBelikeintheFuture?

Asmaybeimagined,therewillbeanandroidineveryfamily.Ofcourse,suchan

androidshouldhaveartificialintelligenceanditcandealwithallhousework.Asforthe

meansoftransportation,wewillseeakindofenvironmentallyfriendlycarrunning

everywhere.Thiskindofcarwillbepoweredbysolarenergyanditcanrunonitsown

withoutanydriver.What'smore,inthefuture,themoonwillbecomeoneofourbest

destinations.

ThefuturelifethatIdescribewillcometruesoonerorlater.

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提示作文。要求考生寫一篇短文，介紹一下想象中的未來生活。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

處理：dealwith—copewith

關(guān)于：asfbr一inregardto

止匕夕卜：whafsmore一besides

成為現(xiàn)實：cometrue一realize

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Ofcourse,suchanandroidshouldhaveartificialintelligenceanditcandealwithall

housework.

拓展句：Ofcourse,suchanandroidwhichshouldhaveartificialintelligencecandealwith

allhousework.

【點睛】

【高分句型1]Asmaybeimagined,therewillbeanandroidineveryfamily.（運用了as

引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）

【高分句型2】ThefuturelifethatIdescribewillcometruesoonerorlater.（運用了that

引導(dǎo)定語從句）

9.假設(shè)你校英語社團(tuán)舉辦以“講求文明，從我做起”為主題的征文活動，請你以“Onthe

WaytoSchool”為題，寫一篇英語短文。

內(nèi)容主要包括：

1.遵守交通法規(guī)；

2.注意舉止文明。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【答案】OntheWaytoSchool

Thesedays,breakingtrafficrulesandlitteringarenotuncommon,causingseriousharmto

lifeandtheenvironment.Changingthissituationrequiresconsiderableeffortonthepartof

everyone.Asforme,itshouldstartonmywaytoschool.

Iwillkeeptrafficrulesinmindalltheway.IfIrideabike,I'llalwayskeeptotheright

andnevercrossaroaduntilthetrafficlightturnsgreen.IfIwalk,r11neverforgettousethe

pedestriancrossing.Meanwhile,!willregarditasmydutytohelpkeepourenvironmentclean

andhealthy.NotonlywillIkeepfromlitteringandspittinganywhere,!willalsohelpcleanup

theroadsidelitterwheneverpossible.!hopemybehaviorwillmakeadifference.

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】

本文是開放性作文。要求考生以“OntheWaytoSchool”為題，寫一篇英語短文，參加校

英語社團(tuán)舉辦的以“講求文明，從我做起”為主題的征文活動。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

不遵守：break—disobey

導(dǎo)致：cause一leadto

狀況：situation—condition

許多：considerable—lotof

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Thesedays,breakingtrafficrulesandlitteringarenotuncommon,causingseriousharm

tolifeandtheenvironment.

拓展句：Thesedays,breakingtrafficrulesandlitteringarenotuncommon,whichcauses

seriousharmtolifeandtheenvironment.

【點睛】

【高分句型1]IfIrideabike,I'llalwayskeeptotherightandnevercrossaroaduntilthe

trafficlightturnsgreen.（由if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）

【高分句型2]IfIwalk,r11neverforgettousethepedestriancrossing.（由if引導(dǎo)的條件

狀語從句）

【高分句型3]NotonlywillIkeepfromlitteringandspittinganywhere,!willalsohelp

cleanuptheroadsidelitterwheneverpossible.（由Notonly引導(dǎo)的部分倒裝和whenever

引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句的省略）

【高分句型4】Ihopemybehaviorwillmakeadifference.（由省略連詞that引導(dǎo)的賓語

從句）

10.面對中學(xué)生“出國熱”，社會對此有不同的看法。請你以“StudyingAbroad”為題，根

據(jù)下表所提供的信息，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?/p>

AdvantagesDisadvantages

1.年紀(jì)小，缺乏生活經(jīng)驗，自立能力

1.傳播各民族間的不同文化；

差；

2.拓寬視野，學(xué)習(xí)國外先進(jìn)的科學(xué)技術(shù)；

2.情感孤獨，思鄉(xiāng)；

3.良好的語言環(huán)境，更利于語言的學(xué)習(xí)。

3.學(xué)習(xí)生活費用高。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：媒介，中間人mediator

【答案】StudyingAbroad

Inrecentyears,studyingabroadhasbeenpopular.TensofthousandsofChinesestudents

havegonetoforeigncountriestostudy.Manypeoplearetryingtheirbesttoapplytogo

abroad.Therearemanyadvantagesinattendingschoolsabroad.First,studentswhohave

studiedabroadcanactasmediatorsbetweenpeopleofdifferentcultures.Second,wecan

learnmanymoreadvancedknowledgeofscienceandtechnologyfromforeigncountries.

Third,wecanlearnmanyforeignlanguagesmorequickly.

However,therearesomedisadvantages.Mostofthestudentsaretooyoungtolivealone

withoutanylivingexperience.Besides,beingfarawayfromtheirhomecountry,theymay

feellonelyandhomesick.Also,ofcourse,thecostsaremuchhighertherethanthatathome.

Inspiteofthis,advantagesaremorethandisadvantages.Inmyopinion,itisadvisableto

attendschoolsabroad.

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】

本篇書面表達(dá)是一篇議論文，要求考生以“StudyingAbroad”為題，談?wù)劤鰢魧W(xué)的優(yōu)

缺點。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

盡最大努力：tryone'sbest=doone'sutmost

充當(dāng)：actas=serveas

此外：besides—>inaddition

在我看來：inmyopinion=asfarasI'mconcerned

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Besides,beingfarawayfromtheirhomecountry,theymayfeellonelyandhomesick.

拓展句：Besides,theymayfeellonelyandhomesickbecausetheyarefarawayfromtheir

homecountry.

【點睛】

[高分句型1]First,studentswhohavestudiedabroadcanactasmediatorsbetweenpeopleof

differentcultures,（who引導(dǎo)定語從句）

[高分句型2]Inmyopinion,itisadvisabletoattendschoolsabroad,（it為形式主語，動詞

不定式為真正的主語）

11.假設(shè)你是李華，舉行了一次班會，班會的主題是：太空探險的意義。請結(jié)合下表

內(nèi)容，用英語給校報寫一篇文章，客觀地介紹班會上同學(xué)們討論的情況并表達(dá)你自己

的觀點。

贊同的理由反對的理由你自己的觀點

1.獲得新知識；

1.耗資巨大；

2.從太空取得新資源；...

2.宇航員的安全問題。

3.擴大人類未來的生存空間。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

【答案】OuterSpaceExplorations,YESorNO?

Wehadanargumentoverwhetheritisnecessarytocarryoutouterspaceexplorationsat

aclassmeetingtheotherday.Differentstudentshavedifferentattitudestowardsit.

Someofusthinkitimportanttoresearchtheouterspacebecause,firstofall,peoplecan

getabetterunderstandingoftheouterspacethroughtheirexploration.Second,newresources

canbefoundthereforhumanbeing.Third,thisexplorationcanpossiblybringaboutnew

livingspaceforhumanlifeinthenearfuture.

However,othersarestronglyagainstit.Theybelievethatittakessomuchmoneytodo

thiskindofexploration,whichisnotworththevalue.Besides,itisverydangerousfor

astronautstodosuchworkintheouterspace.

Inmyopinion,peopleshouldbepioneeringandthereforesuchexplorationsintothe

outerspaceareworthtryingout.

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】

本文是開放性作文。要求考生對“太空探險的意義”的主題班會上同學(xué)們討論的情況進(jìn)

行客觀地介紹并表達(dá)自己的觀點。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

討論：argument一discussion

實施：carryout-perform

不同的：di他rent-distinct

態(tài)度：attitude一opinion

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Inmyopinion,peopleshouldbepioneeringandthereforesuchexplorationsintothe

outerspaceareworthtryingout.

拓展句：Inmyopinion,peopleshouldbepioneeringsothatsuchexplorationsintotheouter

spaceareworthtryingout.

【點睛】

【高分句型1]Wehadanargumentoverwhetheritisnecessarytocarryoutouterspace

explorationsataclassmeetingtheotherday.（由whether引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）

【高分句型2】Someofusthinkitimportanttoresearchtheouterspacebecause,firstofall,

peoplecangetabetterunderstandingoftheouterspacethroughtheirexploration.（由

because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句）

【高分句型3]Theybelievethatittakessomuchmoneytodothiskindofexploration,

whichisnotworththevalue.（由that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從

句）

五、讀后續(xù)寫

12.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短

文。

Howexciting!TodayismybasketballGrand-final!Myteamofsixenthusiasticboysled

byourcoach,Jack,hasworkedextremelyhardjusttomakethefinals.Myheartwas

poundingahundredkilometresanhourasIwalkedintoourhomeground.AsIhurriedtoour

teambench,ouropponentscaughtmyattention.Theyseemedalottallerand"meaner”

looking.

Whistleblew.Fiveofusstartedonthecourt.Ouropponentgotholdoftheballfirst.

Theywereunbelievablyfast.Theykeptbreakingourdefencesandkeptscoringgoals.

Excitedparentswerecheeringsomuchthattheirfaceswereasredasbeetroots.Evenour

best,Bryce,couldnotstopouropponentsfromscoring,whichannoyedhimalot.Byhalf

time,bothteamswereextremelyexhaustedandouropponentsweretengoalsahead,which

presenteduswithanenormousbutachievablechallenge.

Jackwasawfullyanxiousaswewerenotplayinganywherenearourbest.Hetoldusthat

wecouldstillwinifwemadeourtransitionsmuchquickersothatpenaltyshotscameour

way.Healsodirectedustorebound（搶斷籃板）andpositionourselvesbettertoreceiveand

scoregoals.Mostimportant,heremindedustoplayasateam.

Ourteamwasallfiredup.Thesecondhalfstartedinourfavour.Wewereasquickas

lightningonthecourt.Weweredribbling（運球），passing,shootingandreboundingwithout

anymistakes.Wecaughtouropponentsbysurprise.Thescoreswerealmostlevel.Wewere

trailingonlybyonepoint.Thecrowdwasgrowingwildwithexcitement,fuellingour

confidence.Atthesametime,ouropponentsswitchedbacktoattentionandstartedplaying

likewhattheydidinthefirsthalf,makingitharderforustoscore.

Oneminuteleft!OuropponentthrewintheballbutImanagedtostealit!Ourteamwas

burstingwithhappiness!MoreopponentswereheadingmywayandIhadtopasstheballto

Bryce.Insteadofpassingontheball,hedidthemostunexpectedthing.Hetriedtoscorefrom

halfcourt!Hemissedbymiles!

注意：

L續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

ThenInoticedJacksignaledtotherefereeforapause.

Whistleblewagainandwecamebacktothecourt.

【答案】Possibleversion:

ThenInoticedJacksignaledtotherefereeforapause.SoweheadedtowardsJackand

gatheredaroundhim.SomehowoneofteammatesbegancomplainingaboutBryce.Feeling

frustratedandaggrieved,Brycearguedthathejusttriedtogetscores.Jacklookedintoour

eyes,saying,4<Itiseasytoblamesomeoneformistake,butrememberthatbasketballgameisa

teameffort.Wewintogetherorlosetogether!?,SoashamedwasBrycethathepromisedto

keepcalmandcooperate.

Whistleblewagainandwecamebacktothecourt.Thoughouropponentshad

possessionoftheball,IstoleitonceagainandpassedittoBryce.Findinghegotdouble

teamed,Brycemanagedtopasstheballtooneofus.Heshot.Yes!Wemadeit!Thefinal

buzzerrang!Wescreamedwithexcitementandhuggedtogether.Sincethismemorable

basketballmatch,wehavebeenreadyforeverybattle.Thereis