看《悲慘世界》搞定作文續(xù)寫(二)課件-高三英語寫作專項突破

1、應(yīng)試寶典-看悲慘世界，搞定作文續(xù)寫（二）The novels brief introduction In our last class, we have talked about Jean Valjeans various setbacks after he got out of the prison.上結(jié)課，主要講男主角Jean Valjean（冉阿讓）出獄后遇到的種種挫折。In this class, the heroine Fantine (芳汀) showed up.這節(jié)課，女主角芳汀出場了。How to describe the peoples appearanceShe did n

2、ot smile, and lines of sadness ran down the side of her pale cheeks.這句是表情悲傷非常新穎的表達(dá)方式，建議直接借鑒聽到了自己的考試成績，Lily 笑不出來，悲傷從她虛弱的臉龐滑下：After knowing the test result, Lily did not smile, and lines of sadness ran down the side of her pale cheeks.The couple dressed Cosette in rags and gave her very little food, w

3、hichthey made her eat from a wooden bowl under the tablein rags 穿得破破爛爛的街角有個穿得破破爛爛的男人，正在乞討：A man in rags was begging in the corner of the street.How to describe the peoples actionMme Thenardier looked at Fantine thoughtfully, but said nothing.thoughtful有兩個意思：1. = considerate2. = think deeply媽媽若有所思地看著

4、Lily，什么都沒說：Mum stared at Lily thoughtfully, but said nothing.At the end of the year, however, Thenardierwas not happy with just seven francs a month; he demanded twelve andFantine paid without protest, happy that her daughter was being wellcared test v. 抗議pay without protest 毫無疑義地支付盡管覺得很貴，但是媽

5、媽還是毫無疑義地給我買了這件好衣服：Even though it was expensive, mum bought the fancy clothes for me without protest.How to describe the peoples actionThey gavethe dress to their daughter, Eponine, and Cosette went on shivering.shiver vi.因為寒冷而顫抖 也可以用tremble在野外的寒風(fēng)中，Lily不停地顫抖：WIth the cold wind in the wild, Lily could

6、nt help shivering.As she was wandering aroundthe town, desperately trying to decide what to do, she noticed a crowd ofpeople in the market square. wander vi 漫步（無目的地行走）也可以表示走神Lily在校園里漫無目的地走著，迫切地想決定接下來做什么：As Lily was wandering aroundthe town, desperately trying to decide what to do.How to describe the

7、 peoples actionShe approached themwithout thinking, anddiscovered that they had gathered around a travelling dentist.approach = get close to （物理空間的接近）+ with purpose這個詞表示接近，是非常地道的用法，請同學(xué)們一定要學(xué)會，不要只會get close to，這樣說層次太單薄了也不準(zhǔn)確。她想也不想就接近他們，發(fā)現(xiàn)他們正圍著Lily：She approached themwithout thinking, anddiscovered that

8、 they had gathered around Lily.While the policeman was trying to drag her to her feet, however, avoice from the shadows said, One moment please.drag：拖我發(fā)現(xiàn)實在很難強(qiáng)迫自己定期出來鍛煉：I find it really hard to drag myself out and exercise regularly.How to describe the peoples actionJavert argued with M. Madeleine fo

9、r some time, but finally gave in.argue 最準(zhǔn)確的意思應(yīng)該是“強(qiáng)有力地表達(dá)某種觀點”，所以也可以表示爭吵arguement就是你強(qiáng)有力地表達(dá)出來的那個觀點Lily和媽媽吵起來了，但是最終還是讓步了：Lily argued with mum, but finally gave in/compromised. Fantine gazed at M. Madeleine with tears in her eyegaze at sb. with tears in her eyes雙目含淚凝視某人這句話在考試作文中很高頻，建議直接借用。How to describe

10、 the peoples actionVery soon, he would reply, and her pale face would light up with joy.light up with joy喜形于色聽到這個好消息，她虛弱的臉上喜形于色：After hearing the good news, her pale face ewould light up with joy.M. Madeleine, looking hard at Javert without expression, saidquietly, Im afraid I dont understand.lookin

11、g hard at Javert without expression面無表情地狠狠盯著某人看Lily面無表情地盯著這個調(diào)皮的男孩：Lily gazed at the naughty boy without expression.How to describe the peoples actionThat afternoon, M. Madeleine visited Fantine. She had a high fever,and was coughing badly, but she still had only one thing on her mind.Cosette? she as

12、ked him.Very soon, he assured her.assure vt 確保insure vt 保證assume vt 假設(shè)”我們什么時候可以去露營？“Lily問媽媽。”很快，”媽媽向Lily保證。When can we go to the camp? Lily asked mum.Very soon, mum assured her.He would lose everythingthat he had worked so hard to achieve.即使你失去了你努力取得的一切成就，你依然是你父母做重要的人：Even though you would lose ever

13、ything that you had worked so hard to achieve, you still mattered most to your parents.How to describe the peoples actionThe next morning, M. Madeleine set off on the long journey toArras.set off 1. = leave for2. = 引爆第二天一早，Lily啟程前往另一個城市的漫長旅程：The next morning, Lily set off on the long journey to anot

14、her city.Finally, having heard all the evidence, the judge called forsilence. Hewas preparing to announce his decision when M. Madeleine,pale and trembling, stood up and said:That man is not Jean Valjean.prepare to announce his decision準(zhǔn)備去宣布他的決定一夜無眠之后，Lily現(xiàn)在準(zhǔn)備宣布她的決定：After a sleepless night, Lily was

15、 preparing to announce her decision.How to describe the peoples actionAn excited whisper went around the courtroom as everybodyrecognized M. Madeleine.An excited whisper went around somewhere一陣興奮的低語環(huán)繞某地一陣興奮的低語環(huán)繞教室當(dāng)同學(xué)們看到Lily的服裝扮相以后：An excited whisper went around the classroom as everybody saw Lilys c

16、ostume. At first, no one believedhim, but he managed to persuade the court by skilfully questioning eachof the witnesses, revealing personal information that only the real JeanValjean could have knownmanaged to persuade設(shè)法勸說Lily充滿技巧地設(shè)法勸說媽媽同意她學(xué)滑板：Lily skillfully managed to persuade mum to allow her to

17、 learn the skateboarding.How to describe the peoples feelingThe woman looked round and saw a young woman with a child sleepingpeacefully in her arms. sleepingpeacefully 平靜地熟睡浙江高考戶外主題高頻句：經(jīng)歷了一段波動人心的野外旅程，Lily終于回到了家，在自己舒適的床上平靜地睡下了：After a stirring wild journey, Lily eventually came back home and slept p

18、eacefully in her own comfortable bed.The Thenardiers did not feel guilty about treating Cosette badlybecause Fantine had stopped sending them regular payments.shameful/ashamed以及guilty都可以表示愧疚的，但是guilty愧疚的程度更深，比如說祥林嫂在失去兒子后非常自責(zé)，不停叨念“我錯了，我真的錯了.”就是已經(jīng)是guilty的程度給媽媽過生日的蛋糕沒做好，Lily非常愧疚：Failing making the birt

19、hday cake for mum, Lily was overwhelmingly shameful.How to describe the peoples feeling/attitudeJavert listened to her coldly, then ordered a policeman to take herawaycoldly 冷酷地Lily冷酷地看著眼前發(fā)生的一切：Lily looked at everything coldly.He had always been suspicious of M. Madeleine, and was sure that hehad se

20、en him somewhere before, many years earlierbe suspicious/skeptical/doubtful of懷疑的盡管媽媽懷疑Lily所說的話，但是還是保持沉默：Even though mom was suspicious of what Lily had said, she kept silent.How to describe the peoples feeling/attitudeBut he kept hissuspicions to himself, not daring to say what he really believed:

21、that M.Madeleine was, in fact, a dangerous criminal with a terrible past.keep the suspicions to oneself保留懷疑不說出去擔(dān)心傷害Lily的感受，媽媽保留了她的懷疑，不敢說出去她所認(rèn)為的事實：Concerned about hurting Lilys feeling, mum kept hersuspicions to himself, not daring to say what he really believed.The mayor turned to Inspector Javert a

22、nd said, in a soft, firmvoice, This woman must be released.soft and firm voice溫柔且堅定的聲音（很多又A又颯的大女主都是用這種音調(diào)講話的哦）媽媽轉(zhuǎn)向Lily，用一個溫柔且堅定的聲音說，“你必須跟Lucy道歉。”Mum turned to Lily and said in a soft, firm voice, You must apologize to Lucy.How to describe the peoples feeling/attitudeThats impossible, Javert replied.

23、She attackeda man in the street, a respectable citizen. And now Ive just seen her spit at you, the mayor of our town. A woman like this deserves to be punished.deserve vt.值得后面既可以接好事，也可以接壞事我早就告訴過你不要這么做，現(xiàn)在你活該：I had told you not to do so, you deserved it.你值得去一個更好的大學(xué)： You deserved a better university.Of

24、 course, he denies everything, butthats not surprising. Ideny 否定別否定了，你肯定做過：Dont deny any more, you must have done it.How to describe the peoples feeling/attitudeThis matter is of no interest to me, Javert, he said casually. I am sure you have other work to ddo.casually 隨意地cautiously 謹(jǐn)慎地“我對這事兒一點興趣也沒有，”媽媽隨意地說，“你趕緊去做你的作業(yè)?！盩his matter is of no interest to me, Mum said casually.Youd better work on your homework right now.With those words he bowed and left the office, leavin