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1、短文改錯2018 年 Correction 12018 全國卷 I, 10 分During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducs, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, the
2、y had a big separate house to raise doens of chicen. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two y
3、ears, but he agreed.Correction 22018 全國卷 II, 10 分When I was little, Friday s night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the id, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I ased to watching them, my parents would not to le
4、t me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the game for them sometimes. I didn t realie how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.Correc
5、tion 32018 全國卷 III, 10 分It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager tae part in the class activity; others were nervous and anious. I had done myself ho
6、mewor, but I was shy. I was afraid that to spea in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from tetboos, and mistae as well. Immediate, I raised my hand.2017 年 Correction 1 2017 全國卷 I ,
7、10 分In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I too driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructors orders, soonce I started the car, my mind goes blan. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instruct
8、or ept repeating the word, Speed up! Slow down! Turning left! I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor ased me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.Correction 2 2017 全國卷 n , 10
9、 分Mr. and Mrs. hang all wor in our school. They live far from the school, and it taes them about a hour and a half to go to wor every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the
10、vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pic the fresh vegetables!Correction 3 2017 全國卷m , 10 分When I loo at this picture of myself, I realie of how fast t
11、ime flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was too, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that tim
12、e car magaines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference inds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings bac to me many happy memories of your high school days.2012 2016年 Correction 1 2016 乙卷(全國 I )My uncle is the owner of a re
13、staurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the ey to his success is honest. Every day he maes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality
14、 oil are using for cooing. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.Correction 2 2016 甲卷(全國 n )The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are taling about how to do during the holiday. We can chose betwe
15、en staying at home and tae a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain nowledges we cannot get from boos. Some classmates suggest we can go to place
16、s of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.Correction 3 2016 丙卷(全國出)The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I new everything and co
17、uld mae decisions by yourself. However, my parents didnt seem to thin such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldnt understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving hom
18、e to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help. Correction 4 2016 四川It is Mothers Day today. Though its a western festival, its popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the housewors. She is a great mother.
19、Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mothers Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came bac, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I ased Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooed in itchen. The dishes what I cooed were Moms favoritest
20、. At dinner, we said to her, Happy Mothers Day! Mom was grateful and moving. Correction 5 2016 浙江When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, wed greet her at the door. He would as who we was and pret
21、end not to nowing us. Then he and my mother would have had a drin while she prepared dinner and they would tal about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both ecited and frightening to be up there! My sister and I thought
22、 he was so cool for putting us there.Correction6 2015新課標(biāo)全國卷I When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city.I thin I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately, on the development of industrialiat
23、ion, the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so, well live t
24、o regret it.Correction7 2015新課標(biāo)全國卷n One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He lied it so very much that he quicly waled into the shop. After loos at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were
25、missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. Tony promised her that this would never happen again.Correction8 2015 陜西My soccer coac
26、h retired in last wee. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum maes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to as her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baing. I insisted on doing most of the baing myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only
27、 mistae was that I dropped some on the floor after I was pacing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, ased surprisingly who made them and joed, I might have to retire again net year just get some more of these biscuits.My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy
28、 the biscuits with happy laughter! Correction9 2015 四川Hi, Janice,Its been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been eperiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. W
29、eve been spending a lot of time sing in araoe bars. Its been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact, I dont lie to go anymore, so Im afraid Ill lose their friendship. How do you thin I should do? If you are me, would you tal to
30、him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace Correction10 2015 浙江My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looing at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In
31、the mornings, it was full of students eercising. The view from the bac of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful par with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I
32、was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt lie I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.Corrections 2014新課標(biāo)全國卷I Nearly five years before, and with the help by our fat
33、her, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes (圣女果 ) in our bac garden. Since then for all these year we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in sie, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share
34、 them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attac problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!Correction12 2014 新課標(biāo)全國卷 n My dream school starts at 830 a.m. and ends at 330 p.m. They are
35、three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didnt need to do so many homewor. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For eample, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school loo lie a big garden. There are all inds
36、 of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lae listening music. The teachers here are ind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.Correction13 2014 浙江I was taing a train to Londons Victoria Station. I had not
37、iced that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long, a train inspector comes to chec our ticets. A passenger realied he couldnt find his ticet but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticet, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from hi
38、s owner. The person who found a ticet smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoen to or even noticed the ticet-owner before. Yet they had so quicly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to liv
39、e in.Correction14 2014 陜西My father too me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals,insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.One evening at sunset,we sat by the fire,have our barbecue.Just then a bird was flying over us.My u
40、ncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target.Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sy they were looed lie rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.That day I didnt learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I lea
41、rnt a impressive lesson about gravity!Correction15 2014 四川Hello, boys and girls! Today , I am going to tal with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Dont pani
42、c or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If its a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us bac to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.Correction 16
43、2014 遼寧Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although weve been delighted to have you as neighbors, were hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog Cleo.Weve called several time about Cleos early morning baring. It is difficult to understanding why she bars every minute shes outside. The ear
44、ly morning baring have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bar a average of si hours a day. This morning she starts baring even before 5 ocloc. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, b
45、ut we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely, Jac and RoseCorrections 2013新課標(biāo)全國卷I I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her nees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfa
46、ther very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from blac toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do home
47、wor with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never nown. Correction18 2013 新課標(biāo)全國卷 n The boo Im reading of tals about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800s. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served un
48、til 8 ocloc at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain ( 瓷器 ) industry. Tea in China was traditionally dran from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit Bri
49、tish habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry. Correction19 2013 陜西My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lae. We too ours fishing poles and headed for the lae. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about h
50、alf an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the net few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish.Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lae and barbec
51、ued the fish. It was delicious. Correction20 2013 四川Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asing me to let her to copy my answers. After thin for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were
52、called to the teachers office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didnt cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me? Correction 212013 遼寧Mr.Johnson is a hardworing
53、teacher. Every day , he spends too much time with his wor.With little sleep and hardly any brea, so he wors from morning till night. Hard wor have made him very ill. He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him. That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnso
54、n.I was eager to see him,but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down.Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looing at some of the picture we had taen together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him. Correction 222013 浙江Dear Diary,Here I am in the m
55、iddle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to now why we move last wee?Dad lost his job, and as Mom eplained,He was lucy to find other one. His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world.To mae matters bad, now I
56、 have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfully tiring, but I now Ill never fall sleep.Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.Yours, Rosemary Correction 232012 新課標(biāo)全國I learned early in life t
57、hat I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about si, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys wored, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broe it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which wa
58、s happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, Thats it. No more toys to you. My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must mae my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on. Correction 242012 陜西My father and I stayed at the South Lae Hotel for a wee when we visit Beijing last month.It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath.What I lied best were the free high-speed
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