【讀后續(xù)寫】高二讀后續(xù)寫課件-尹娟

嵊州市高級中學(xué)2017學(xué)年第二學(xué)期期中考試高二讀后續(xù)寫嵊州市高級中學(xué)尹娟rug(地毯);____flowerpot(花盆);

happy;________family;________mom__________Useyourimaginationtocreateashortstorywiththegivenwordsastray(流浪的)dog;_________

house;_______night;________door;________asmallpuppy;imagination人物時(shí)間地點(diǎn)因果交流意圖AnalysisAnalysethepassageI,Spotty,Dad,Mom,everyoneinthefamilywhenIwassevenyearsoldNasikastraydog---afamilymember作者旨在通過對Spotty的回憶，重現(xiàn)這段美好的時(shí)光，以寄托對Spotty這個(gè)家庭成員的思念。Thoughitisoneofthefadedmemoriesofmylifetoday,therearetimeswhenIrememberhisfaceclearly,especiallyhiseyes.Ashehadyellowspotsonhiseyes,wecalledhimSpotty.Whichsentencesimpressyoumostinthepassagewhilereading?Iwentoutandfeltthoserefreshingraindropswithacoolbreezeonmyface.Itwasacolddark

night.Whichsentencesimpressyoumostinthepassagewhilereading?①一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)：itis...,therearetimeswhenIremember...②一般過去時(shí)：had,called,came;③過去將來時(shí)所表達(dá)的虛擬語氣：wouldhavebeen...FocusonTensePara1:①一般過去時(shí)：was,moved,wentout,heard,felt,came...②過去完成時(shí)：hadputoutsidethedoor;③過去進(jìn)行時(shí)：wasraining,wastrembling④直接引語里的一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)：shallwekeep...FocusonTenseOtherParas:Passivevoice(被動語態(tài))：wasarranged,wassurrounded,wasamusedFocusonVoiceActicevoice(主動語態(tài))：Iremember...,hehadyellow...,wecalledhim...,Wemovedinto...StyleWhat'sthestyleofthepassageReminiscence(懷舊)Briskness(輕快)Thoughitisoneofthefadedmemoriesofmylifetoday,therearetimeswhenIrememberhisfaceclearly,especiallyhiseyes....feltthoserefreshingraindropwithcoolbreezeonmyface;Iwasreallyamusedwith;Spottyseemedveryhappy...描寫Spotty的詞匯描寫作者的詞匯描寫周圍環(huán)境的詞匯WordsclassificationWordshadyellowspotsonhiseye,astray(流浪的)dog,asmallpuppylyingonanoldrug,wetandtrembling,hadablackbody,darkereventhanablackrainycloud,happy,wenttosleepimmediatelywentoutandfeltthoserefreshingraindropswithacoolbreezeonmyface,hadourmeal,wenttosleep,heardasound,gotupmycourageandpeepedoutofthewindow,wasreallyamusedwith,saw,recognizehisappearance,feltpityfor,wentoutwithanoldtowel,wentneartheinnocentone,heldhiminmyhandandwipedthepuppy,tookhiminsideandmadeabedforhim,questionedmymomwassurroundedbylotsofbushesandvines(蔓藤),Itwasrainingveryheavilyontheday,thoserefreshingraindropswithacoolbreezeonmyface,Itwasacolddarknight,theflowerpot(花盆)keptonthewindowfallingdownParagraph1:Motherthoughtamomentandfinallyagreed._________________

Paragraph2:Afterleavingthehospital,motherpattedthedog’sheadsoftly.____

PredictionTimePlaceCharacterTenseResult/LogicaldevelopmentThinking12345CharactercoherenceTimecoherencePlacecoherenceTensecoherenceLogical/Themecoherence(協(xié)調(diào)性,一致性)Appreciate

Paragraph1:Motherthoughtamomentandfinallyagreed.ThemomentIheardwhatmomanswered,Ijumpeduphappily.However,thenextday,thesmallpuppywasseriouslyillandwaslyingontheoldrug,dying.Mothersawhimanddecidedtothrowhimawayatonce,butIinsistedontakinghimtotheanimals’hospital.Intheend,motheragreedtogothere.Afterthedoctorhadobservedhimcarefully,hesaidthathecaughtabadcold,sohegavehimsomemedicineandtoldushowtotreathim.

Paragraph2:Afterleavingthehospital,motherpattedthedog’sheadsoftly.Whenwegotinthehouse,thefamilycameupandtookcareofhi