2024年高考英語應(yīng)用文寫作押題范文-投稿征文

專題01投稿正文

Passage1

假定你是李華，你校外教David正在策劃一場(chǎng)英語辯論賽，現(xiàn)向同學(xué)們征集辯題。請(qǐng)你給他

寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.提供辯論題目；

2.說明選題理由。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。

DearDavid,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearDavid,

Hopingthisemailfindsyouwell.Itwouldbedelightfulifmysuggestionsforthedebate

competitioncouldhelp.

Ipropose"SocialMedia-ProsorCons"asthetopic.Giventhesignificanceofsocialmedia,

thistopicwillsparkinsightfuldiscussionsonitsimpactandconsequences,encouragingexploration

ofvariousperspectives.Apartfromregularargumentspresentinganddebatingrounds,Isuggest

introducingan"AudienceQuestions"sessiontocreateaninteractiveatmosphere.

Thetopicandnovelsessionwillhopefullymaketheeventeducationalandengaging.Best

wishesfororganizingit!

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生對(duì)于你校外教David正在策劃一場(chǎng)英語辯論賽,

現(xiàn)向同學(xué)們征集辯題這一情況，給他寫一封郵件。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

令人愉快的：delightful—*enjoyable

建議：suggestion—>advice

各種各樣的：various-allkindsof

除了，止匕夕卜：Apartfrom—*Inadditionto

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Giventhesignificanceofsocialmedia,thistopicwillsparkinsightfuldiscussionsonits

impactandconsequences,encouragingexplorationofvariousperspectives.

拓展句：Giventhesignificanceofsocialmedia,thistopicwillsparkinsightfuldiscussionsonits

impactandconsequences,whichcanencourageexplorationofvariousperspectives.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Itwouldbedelightfulifmysuggestionsforthedebatecompetitioncould

help.（運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句。）

【高分句型2jGiventhesignificanceofsocialmedia,thistopicwillsparkinsightfuldiscussionson

itsimpactandconsequences,encouragingexplorationofvariousperspectives.（非謂語動(dòng)詞中的現(xiàn)

在分詞作狀語。）

Passage2

同普通話一樣，地方方言也是我們中華文化的重要組成部分。請(qǐng)你以“ProtectAndPassOnOur

Dialects”為題寫一篇短文向你校英語報(bào)文化專欄投稿，內(nèi)容包括：

1.地方方言的發(fā)展現(xiàn)狀；

2.地方方言的重要作用；

3.呼吁大家保護(hù)地方方言。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

參考詞匯：普通話mandarin

ProtectAndPassOnOurDialects

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【答案】

ProtectAndPassOnOurDialects

Recentyearshavewitnessedthatfewerandfeweryoungpeoplearecapableofspeakingtheir

dialects.Dialectsarefacingchallengesandlosinggroundgradually.

WhilemandariniscrucialformostChinesepeople,thesignificanceoflocaldialectsis

undeniable.Actually,notonlyaredialectscommunicationtools,buttheyalsoplayaveryimportant

roleinculturalheritage,representingourrootsandhistory.Furthermore,itisdialectsthatcontribute

tothediversityofculturesindifferentregions.

Therefore,itishightimethatdialectsshouldbepreservedsothattheycanbeheardbythenext

generations.Lefsembraceandcelebratethediversityofourdialects,ensuringtheirsurvivalfor

generationstocome.

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以“ProtectAndPassOnOurDialects”為題寫一篇

短文向你校英語報(bào)文化專欄投稿。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

重要的：crucial—vital

無可爭(zhēng)辯的：undeniable—>incontestable

慶祝：celebrate—>observe

確保：ensure一makesure

2.句式拓展

合并簡(jiǎn)單句

原句：Recentyearshavewitnessedthatfewerandfeweryoungpeoplearecapableofspeakingtheir

dialects.Dialectsarefacingchallengesandlosinggroundgradually.

拓展句：Dialectsarefacingchallengesandlosinggroundgraduallybecauserecentyearshave

witnessedthatfewerandfeweryoungpeoplearecapableofspeakingtheirdialects.

【點(diǎn)睛】「高分句型1]WhilemandariniscrucialformostChinesepeople,thesignificanceoflocal

dialectsisundeniable.（運(yùn)用了while引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句）

[高分句型2]Let'sembraceandcelebratethediversityofourdialects,ensuringtheirsurvivalfor

generationstocome.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）

Passage3

你校英文報(bào)社正在組織以“感恩(Gratitude)、獨(dú)立(Independence)、青春(Youth)”為關(guān)鍵詞的征稿

活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自己經(jīng)歷，選擇至少一個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞投稿表達(dá)自己對(duì)高中生活的感悟。

注意：

1.將題目補(bǔ)充完整：

2.詞數(shù)100詞左右。

:thekeyword(s)ofmyhighschoollife

【答案】Sample1:

Gratitudeandyouth:thekeyword(s)ofmyhighschoollife

Myhighschoollifeissofascinatingthatitisbeyondthedescription.Nothingcanrepresentit

betterthan"gratitude"and"youth”.

Thefirstdayofmyhighschoolisstillfreshinmymind.Withyouthandignorance,Iwas

completelyatalossandhadnothingtoexpect.Icannotimaginehowlongthisphenomenawould

last,whichupsetmeseriously.Itwastheteachers9andclassmates9concernthatledmeoutofthe

initialconfusion.Gradually,Ideeplyrealizethatmyhighschoollifeisfullofbrilliantsunshine.

Thejourneyfromconfusiontogettingthedirectiontopersistinhastaughtmealot.Thatis,youth

livesfordiligenceandweshouldalwaysbegrateful!

Thereisnoyouthwithoutdiligence,andgratitudemakesmyschoollifefullofsunshine.

Sample2:

Whenitcomestomyhighschoollife,nothingcanbebetterthan"youth"and"gratitude”to

describeit.

Thefirstdayofmyhighschoolisstillfreshinmymind.Withpassionanddream,Ienteredthe

promisingcampus,seeingfacesfullofyouthandenergy.Hopefully,myheartwasfullofstrengthof

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strivingformydreams.However,youthcanalsohaveconfusion.IrememberonceIfailedtheexam

andfeltsodisappointedthatIevencouldn'tcheerupforlong.Itwastheteachers9andclassmates9

helpandconcernthatpulledmeoutofthedilemma.Withencouragementandgratitude,Fvebeen

workinghardtomakeprogress.

Cherishingyouthandlearninggratitude,IbelieveIwillachievemydream.

Sample3:

Independence:thekeyword(s)ofmyhighschoollife

Beforehighschool,Ilivedashelteredlife,withmyparentstakingcareofmostthings.

However,asIenteredhighschool,aboardingone,Ihadtoadapttoanewenvironmentandwayof

life,whichforcedmetobecomeself-reliant.

Withlesssupervision,Ihadtolearntomanagemytimeeffectively.Creatingastudyschedule

andstickingtoithelpedmekeeporganized.Besides,learningtomakedecisionswasanother

challenge:Whichsubjecttochoose?Whethertojoinaclub?Ihadtoconsidermypreferencesand

interests.MakingthesechoicesallowedmetodiscoverwhoIwasandwhatIwaspassionateabout,

whichfurtheredmypersonalgrowth.

Asaconclusion,highschoolisatransformativeperiodwhenIdevelopedasenseof

independence.ItteachesmeinvaluableskillsthatIwillcarrythroughtomyfuturelife.

【導(dǎo)語】本文是一篇報(bào)社征稿。要求考生表達(dá)對(duì)自己高中生活的感悟?？忌枰垲}，把“感

恩(Gratitude)、獨(dú)立(Independence)、青春(Youth)”三個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞囊括在文中，還需要添加適合細(xì)

節(jié)使文章真實(shí)自然。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累：

受保護(hù)的：sheltered-protected/guarded

監(jiān)督：supervision—oversight/monitoring

困境：dilemma—predicament/puzzle

感激：appreciation一gratitude/acknowledgment

2.句式拓展：

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Withpassionanddream,Ienteredthepromisingcampus,seeingfacesfullofyouthand

energy.

拓展句：WhenIenteredthepromisingcampuswithpassionanddream,Isawfacesfullofyouth

andenergy.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1]Itwastheteachers9andclassmates9concernthatledmeoutoftheinitial

confusion,（itwas...that引導(dǎo)的強(qiáng)調(diào)句型）

[高分句型2]Cherishingyouthandlearninggratitude,IbelieveIwillachievemydream.（現(xiàn)在

分詞作伴隨狀語）

【高分句型3]MakingthesechoicesallowedmetodiscoverwhoIwasandwhatIwaspassionate

about,whichfurtheredmypersonalgrowth,（who和what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，which引導(dǎo)的定語

從句）

你校正在組織以旅游為主題的英語作文比賽。請(qǐng)你以“一次旅游經(jīng)歷”為題，寫一篇短文參賽,

內(nèi)容包括：

1.敘述旅游經(jīng)歷；

2.表達(dá)感受。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.短文題目已為你寫好。

Amemorabletrip

【答案】

Amemorabletrip

IhadalwayswantedtovisittheGreatWall,andIwasfinallyabletomakemydreamcometrue

lastsummer.

ItookabusfrommyhometowntoBadaling,whichisthemostpopulartouristdestination.The

GreatWallissohugeandsowell-preserved.Iwasreallyimpressed.Ialsoenjoyedthehikingon

theGreatWall.Theviewsfromthewallwasbreathtaking.Icouldseeformilesineverydirection.

IhadagreattimeonmytriptotheGreatWall.ItwasanunforgettableexperiencethatIwill

cherishforever.

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【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以“一次旅游經(jīng)歷”為題，寫一篇短文參加學(xué)校

組織的以旅游為主題的英語作文比賽。內(nèi)容包括：

L敘述旅游經(jīng)歷；

2.表達(dá)感受。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

實(shí)現(xiàn)，成真：cometrue—?comeintoreality

珍惜：cherish一treasure

參觀：visit一payavisitto

景點(diǎn)：touristdestination—>touristattraction/placeofinterest

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Icouldseeformilesineverydirection.

拓展句：ItisamazingthatIcouldseeformilesineverydirection.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1]ItookabusfrommyhometowntoBadaling,whichisthemostpopular

touristdestination.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

【高分句型2]ItwasanunforgettableexperiencethatIwillcherishforever.（運(yùn)用了that弓I導(dǎo)的

定語從句）

你校英文報(bào)將以“志愿同行，點(diǎn)亮青春”為主題，舉辦英語征文比賽，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文投稿，介

紹自己曾參加過的一項(xiàng)志愿活動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包括：

1.志愿活動(dòng)簡(jiǎn)介；

2.意義和啟示。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Mymainresponsibilitywastointroducethehistoryofeachexhibit,usingclearandengaging

languagetovividlyconveytheintendedallusions.Whentellingthestoriesforeachexhibit,Ipaid

specialattentiontoculturaldifferencestofosterabetterunderstandingforvisitorsfromvarious

countries.

Thistourguiderolenotonlyenrichedmyknowledgeofnationalhistory,butalsohelpedshape

mypassionsandvalues.Inadditiontopersonalgrowth,volunteeringshowsthatevensmallefforts

canhaveasignificantimpactonmanypeople.Theworldcanbetransformedthroughourchoices,

actsofkindnessandengagementinvolunteeractivities.

【導(dǎo)語】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于記敘文。要求考生以“志愿同行，點(diǎn)亮青春”為主題，寫一篇短文投稿，介紹

自己曾參加過的一項(xiàng)志愿活動(dòng)，參加英語征文比賽。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

假期：vacation一holiday

不同的：various—?different

幫助：help—assist

影響：impact一influence

2.句式拓展

同義句替換

原句：Whentellingthestoriesforeachexhibit,Ipaidspecialattentiontoculturaldifferencesto

fosterabetterunderstandingforvisitorsfromvariouscountries.

拓展句：WhenItoldthestoriesforeachexhibit,Ipaidspecialattentiontoculturaldifferencesto

fosterabetterunderstandingforvisitorsfromvariouscountries.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型11Whentellingthestoriesforeachexhibit,Ipaidspecialattentiontocultural

differencestofosterabetterunderstandingforvisitorsfromvariouscountries.（運(yùn)用了狀語從句中

的省略）

[高分句型2]Thistourguiderolenotonlyenrichedmyknowledgeofnationalhistory,butalso

helpedshapemypassionsandvalues.（運(yùn)用了notonly...butalso連接謂語）

Passage6

Teens正在就我國(guó)社會(huì)老齡化越來越嚴(yán)重的問題舉辦征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包

括：1.關(guān)愛老人的原因；2.關(guān)愛老人的方式；3?倡議大家共同關(guān)愛老人。

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注意：字?jǐn)?shù)100左右。

【答案】Astheagingpopulationinoursocietygrows,ifscrucialtoshowloveandrespecttoour

elders.Theyhavecontributedsignificantlytooursocietyanddeserveourcare.

Therearevariouswaystoshowloveandcarefortheelderly.Firstly,wecanvisitthem

regularly,listentotheirstories,andspendtimewiththem.Secondly,wecanprovidepracticalhelp,

suchasassistingwithdailytasks,providingtransportation,orofferingmedicalsupport.

Additionally,wecanalsosupportpoliciesandprogramsthatbenefittheelderly,suchaspensions

andhealthcare.

Iurgeeveryonetojoinhandsinshowingloveandcareforourelderly.Bydoingso,wecan

createawarmerandmoreharmonioussociety.

【導(dǎo)語】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一篇短文投稿，陳述關(guān)愛老人的原因、關(guān)愛老人的方

式，并倡議大家共同關(guān)愛老人。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

增力口：grow—>increase

重要的：crucial-^important/essential/vital

各種各樣的：various—avarietyof^allkindsof

提供：provide—>ofler

止匕夕卜：additionally—inaddition

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句改為倒裝句

原句：Bydoingso,wecancreateawarmerandmoreharmonioussociety.

拓展句：Onlybydoingsocanwecreateawarmerandmoreharmonioussociety.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1]Astheagingpopulationinoursocietygrows,it'scrucialtoshowloveand

respecttoourelders.（使用了As引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句、itis+M/.+todo…句型）

［高分句型21Additionally,wecanalsosupportpoliciesandprogramsthatbenefittheelderly,such

aspensionsandhealthcare.（使用了that弓|導(dǎo)定語從句）

Passage7

你校正舉辦主題為“ACoolTry!”的英語征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你以自身經(jīng)歷寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包

括：

1.簡(jiǎn)述嘗試的過程；

2.收獲或感想。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

ACoolTry!

【答案】

ACoolTry!

Lastsummervacation,togaindifferentlifeexperience,Iwasaccompaniedbymyparentsto

giveBungeeJumpingafirsttry.

Beforethejump,professionalinstructorsprovidedadetailedsafetybriefing,explainingthe

equipment,thejumpprocedures,andwhattoexpectduringthefallandrebound.ThenIwasfitted

withaharness,whichwasattachedtotherubbercord.Asthemomentoftrutharrived,Istoodon

theedgeofthejumpingplatform,heartpoundingandlegstrembling.Eyesclosed,Itooktheleap,

withamixedsensationofexcitement,terrorandweightlessness.

Thewholeexperiencewasoverinamatterofseconds,butthememoryofthethrillandthe

senseofachievementlastalifetime,givingmeconfidencetofacenewchallengesandembrace

adventure.

【導(dǎo)語】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。題目要求學(xué)生以自身經(jīng)歷參與主題為“ACoolTry!”的英語征文活

動(dòng)，需涵蓋嘗試的過程和收獲或感想。

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【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

獲得：gain—acquire

提供：provide—>ofler

裝備：fit一equip

來臨：arrive一come

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Thewholeexperiencewasoverinamatterofseconds,butthememoryofthethrillandthe

senseofachievementlastalifetime,givingmeconfidencetofacenewchallengesandembrace

adventure.

拓展句：Thewholeexperiencewasoverinamatterofseconds,butthememoryofthethrillandthe

senseofachievementlastalifetime,whichgavemeconfidencetofacenewchallengesandembrace

adventure.

【點(diǎn)睛】

[高分句型1]Beforethejump,professionalinstructorsprovidedadetailedsafetybriefing,

explainingtheequipment,thejumpprocedures,andwhattoexpectduringthefallandrebound.（運(yùn)

用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語、“特殊疑問詞+不定式”作賓語）

[高分句型2]Eyesclosed,Itooktheleap,withamixedsensationofexcitement,terrorand

weightlessness.（運(yùn)用了獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)）

Passage8

你校英文報(bào)正舉辦以“ThePowerofSmile”為題的征文比賽，請(qǐng)結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷寫一篇短文投稿，

內(nèi)容包括：

1.自身經(jīng)歷；

2.你的感悟。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.題目已為你寫好。

ThePowerofSmile

【答案】ThePowerofSmile

Asmilehasthepowertotransformnotonlyourownmood,butalsotheatmospherearoundus.

IrememberatimewhenIwasfeelingdown,butasimplesmilefromafriendbrightenedupmyday.

Itmademerealizethateveninthetoughestmoments,asmilecanbringaglimmerofhope.

Smilingislikeauniversallanguagethatconnectsuswithothers.Itshowskindness,empathy,

andpositiveenergy.Ithastheabilitytoupliftspirits,fosterconnections,andcreateamorepleasant

andharmoniousworld.

So,lefsembracethepowerofsmile.Letitbeaconstantremindertoseethegoodinlifeand

shareitwiththosearoundus.Asmileisasmallactthatcanhaveabigimpact.

【導(dǎo)語】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文寫作中的稿件。要求考生結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷寫一篇短文，參加校英文報(bào)

正舉辦的以“ThePowerofSmile”為題的征文比賽。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

艱難：tough—>hard/difflcult

培養(yǎng)：foster—>develop

擁抱：embrace—>hug

影響：impact一eflect/influence

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Letitbeaconstantremindertoseethegoodinlifeandshareitwiththosearoundus.

拓展句：Letitbeaconstantremindertoseethegoodinlifeandshareitwiththosewhoarearound

us.

【點(diǎn)睛】

【高分句型11IrememberatimewhenIwasfeelingdown,butasimplesmilefromafriend

brightenedupmyday.（運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的定語從句）

[高分句型2].Itmademerealizethateveninthetoughestmoments,asmilecanbringaglimmer

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ofhope.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）

Passage9

你校英語報(bào)近期將推出一個(gè)主題為“高中生如何養(yǎng)成良好的心理狀態(tài)”的專欄。你與美國(guó)教育

專家Dr.Smith進(jìn)行了交流后寫一篇英語文章投稿，主要內(nèi)容如下：1.交流的主要內(nèi)容：2.交

流后的收獲。

注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為100左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。

【答案］Recently,IhadtheopportunitytointerviewDr.Smith,arenownedAmericaneducation

expert,onthetopicoffosteringapositivemindsetamonghighschoolstudents.

Dr.Smithemphasizedtheimportanceofmaintainingabalancebetweenacademicpressure

andpersonalwell-being.Hehighlightedthesignificanceofself-carepracticessuchasregular

exercise,adequatesleep,andmindfulnesstechniques.AccordingtoDr.Smith,cultivatinghobbies

andspendingqualitytimewithfriendsandfamilycanalsogreatlycontributetoahealthymental

state.

Icametorealizethatachievingacademicsuccessinhighschoolshouldn'tcomeatthe

expenseofmentalhealth.Dr.Smith'sinsightsserveasareminderforstudentstoprioritizetheir

well-beingwhilestrivingforexcellence.

【導(dǎo)語】本書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。要求就“高中生如何養(yǎng)成良好的心理狀態(tài)”的問題與教

育專家進(jìn)行交流后，寫篇交流心得投稿。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

著名的：renowned—>prestigious

培養(yǎng)：fbster—cultivate

強(qiáng)調(diào)：emphasize—■underline

壓力：pressure—stress

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Recently,IhadtheopportunitytointerviewDr.Smith,arenownedAmericaneducation

expert,onthetopicoffosteringapositivemindsetamonghighschoolstudents.

拓展句：Recently,IhadtheopportunitytointerviewDr.Smith,whoisarenownedAmerican

educationexpert,onthetopicoffosteringapositivemindsetamonghighschoolstudents.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型11AccordingtoDr.Smith,cultivatinghobbiesandspendingqualitytimewith

friendsandfamilycanalsogreatlycontributetoahealthymentalstate.（運(yùn)用了動(dòng)名詞作主語）

【高分句型2]Icametorealizethatachievingacademicsuccessinhighschoolshouldn'tcomeat

theexpenseofmentalhealth.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）

Passage10

假定你是李華，你校英文雜志社要舉辦以“與科學(xué)家跨時(shí)空對(duì)話（TalktoaScientistacrossTime

andSpace）”為主題的書信征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你寫…封信給你最崇敬的一位科學(xué)家。內(nèi)容包括：

1.表達(dá)對(duì)他（她）的崇敬之情；

2.解釋你崇敬他（她）的原因。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearSir/Madam,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearGrandpaYuanLongping,

Iamwritingtoexpressmyadmirationforyou.Youdevoteyourselftotheresearchtohybrid

ricewithwillingnesstoservethecountry.

Youliveaverysimplelife,butyoucontributionsareinvaluabletothefieldofscienceand

agriculture.Withoutyouandyourteam,therewouldstillbemillionsofpeoplehavingtofacethe

threatofhunger.

Itwasyourhard-workingspiritandperseverancethatworthusstudying.Youaremyrole

modelandhasbeeninspiringmetostudyhardandinsistonmydreamofmakingcontributionsto

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mycountry.

Iamreallyproudthatwehavesuchagreatscientistlikeyou.

Yourssincerely

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求考生代替李華以“與科學(xué)家跨時(shí)空對(duì)話（TalktoaScientist

acrossTimeandSpace）”為主題寫信給你最崇敬的一位科學(xué)家，參加書信征文活動(dòng)。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

致力于：devoteoneselfto—commitoneselfto

簡(jiǎn)單的：simple—+plain

不，懈努力：perseverance—determination

堅(jiān)持：insiston—persistin

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)換

原句：Youliveaverysimplelife,butyoucontributionsareinvaluabletothefieldofscienceand

agriculture.

拓展句：Thoughyouliveaverysimplelife,youcontributionsareinvaluabletothefieldofscience

andagriculture.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1]

Withoutyouandyourteam,therewouldstillbemillionsofpeoplehavingtofacethethreatof

hunger.（運(yùn)用了虛擬語氣）

【高分句型2]Itwasyourhard-workingspiritandperseverancethatworthusstudying.（運(yùn)用了

強(qiáng)調(diào)句型）

Passage11

上周你參加了學(xué)校組織的主題為“以勞動(dòng)感恩父母”的活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你給校英文報(bào)寫一篇稿件，分

享你的經(jīng)歷，內(nèi)容包括：

（1）勞動(dòng)過程；

（2）你的感受。

注意：

（1）寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

ShowGratitudetoParentsthroughLabor

【答案】ShowGratitudetoParentsthroughLabor

Inordertoarouseourawarenessofbeinggratefultoourparents,ourschoolheldanactivity

lastweekend.

Toshowmythanks,Idecidedtodosomethingformyparents.Gettingupearlierthanusuallast

Saturday,IspentmuchtimepreparingtheirbreakfastandthenIbegantohelpdocleaninginour

house,whichmademetiredandexhausted.WhenIsawmyparents9satisfiedsmiles,Ifeltthatmy

laborwasworthwhile.

Throughthisactivity,Fvelearntthatitisnoteasyformyparentstoworkandtakecareofusat

thesametime.ItistheirselflessandunconditionallovethatIshouldappreciate.

【導(dǎo)語】本文是應(yīng)用文。要求考生給校英文報(bào)寫一篇稿件，分享你的通過勞動(dòng)感恩父母的經(jīng)

歷。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

舉辦：hold—>host

感恩：thanks一appreciation/gratitude

照顧：takecareof^lookafter

感激：appreciate一begratefulfor

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Inordertoarouseourawarenessofbeinggratefultoourparents,ourschoolheldanactivity

lastweekend.

拓展句：Ourschoolheldanactivitylastweekend,whichwasaimedatarousingourawarenessof

beinggratefultoourparents.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1JGettingupearlierthanusuallastSaturday,Ispentmuchtimepreparingtheir

breakfastandthenIbegantohelpdocleaninginourhouse,whichmademetiredandexhausted.（運(yùn)

用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

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[高分句型2]WhenIsawmyparents9satisfiedsmiles,Ifeltthatmylaborwasworthwhile.（運(yùn)用

了when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）

[高分句型3]ItistheirselflessandunconditionallovethatIshouldappreciate.（運(yùn)用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句）

Passage12

你校英語報(bào)正在舉行主題為“SuccessComesfromHardWork”的征文比賽。請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文投

稿，內(nèi)容包括：

1.闡述勤奮的意義；

2.舉一個(gè)勤奮促使你成功的事例；

3.描述成功后的感受。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.題目已為你寫好。

【答案】SuccessComesfromHardWork

Hardworkisthekeytosuccess.Itisthecommitmenttoworkinghardthatallowsustoachieve

greatnessintherelentlesspursuitofourgoals.

OneexampleofhowhardworkledtomysuccesswaswhenIpreparedfortheseniorhigh

schoolentranceexamination.Besidesattendingclasses,Ispentcountlesshoursstudying,reviewing

andpracticing.Isoughthelpwhenfacedwithchallenges.Asaresult,Ipassedtheexaminationwith

flyingcolors.

Thefeelingofsuccessthatfollowsdiligenceisindescribable.I'vegainedasenseofconfidence

andaccomplishment.Iknowthatnogoalisoutofreachaslongaswearewillingtoputinthe

necessaryeffort.

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以“SuccessComesfromHardWork”為主題給校

英文報(bào)投稿。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

實(shí)現(xiàn)：achieve一accomplish

無數(shù)：countless一numerous

幫助：help一assist

獲得：gained—^obtained

2.句式拓展

同義句替換

原句：Besidesattendingclasses,Ispentcountlesshoursstudying,reviewingandpracticing.

同義句：Inadditiontoattendingclasses,Idedicatednumeroushourstostudying,reviewing,and

honingmyskills.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1]Iknowthatnogoalisoutofreachaslongaswearewillingtoputinthe

necessaryeffort.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句和aslongas引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）

[高分句型2]OneexampleofhowhardworkledtomysuccesswaswhenIpreparedforthe

seniorhighschoolentranceexamination.（運(yùn)用了how引導(dǎo)的賓語從句和when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語

從句）

Passage13

你校正舉辦英語征文比賽。請(qǐng)以AnUnforgettableActivity為題寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：

1.活動(dòng)簡(jiǎn)介；

2.你的感受。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

AnUnforgettableActivity

【答案】AnUnforgettableActivity

AmongalltheactivitiesthatIparticipatedin,workingasavolunteeratanursinghomeisthe

mostunforgettable.

Itwasasunnyday.Onarrivalatthenursinghome,myclassmatesandIvisitedtheelderlyin

groupsandgavepresentstothemtoshowourrespectandloveforthem.Afterthat,weorganized

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variousactivities,someplayingchesswiththeoldandsomeperformingtraditionalChinesemusic

anddance.Atlast,wemadedumplingsfortheelderly.Theywerepleasedwithwhatwedidand

sharedmanywonderfulstorieswithus.

Overall,theactivitywasofgreatsignificance.Itnotonlytaughtmehowtocareforpeoplein

need,butletmeexperiencethepleasureofhelpingothers.

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。學(xué)校正舉辦英語征文比賽。請(qǐng)考生以AnUnforgettable

Activity為題寫一篇短文投稿。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

參與：participatein—>takepartin

給：give—>offer

各種各樣的：various^diverse

最后：atlast-finally

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Overall,theactivitywasofgreatsignificance.

拓展句：Overall,theactivitywasofgreatsignificance,whichwasalsogreatlymeaningful.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1]AmongalltheactivitiesthatIparticipatedin,workingasavolunteerata

nursinghomeisthemostunforgettable.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句）

[高分句型2]Theywerepleasedwithwhatwedidandsharedmanywonderfulstorieswithus.（is

用了what引導(dǎo)賓語從句）

Passage14

你校將以“我們的勞動(dòng)實(shí)踐課（Ourlaborpracticecourse）”為主題，舉辦英語征文比賽。請(qǐng)你寫

一篇英語短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：

1.學(xué)校開展勞動(dòng)實(shí)踐課程的目的；

2.你遇到的挑戰(zhàn)和從中受到的啟發(fā)。

要求：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【答案】OurLaborPracticeCourse

Withtheaimofeducatingstudentstofeelfreertoengageinbroaderexploration,experimenting

andquestioning,ourschoolhascarriedoutaseriesofagriculturalpractices.

Whileworkinginthefield,I,asaweeder,pulledoutarowofyoungplantsbymistake,which

causedmygroupmemberstoscream.Tomakeupformymistake,Iboughtseedsandreplanted

theminthefield,usingupmyen