新教材譯林版英語學(xué)案Unit4SectionⅣWriting書籍的

SectionⅣWriting——書籍的推薦1．寫作任務(wù)假定你是李華，你和你的朋友打算在學(xué)校創(chuàng)辦一個英語讀書俱樂部，請寫信給你的美國朋友Peter，介紹一個俱樂部的創(chuàng)辦目的和運(yùn)作情況，希望對方提出建議。注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearPeter，Howiseverythinggoing？__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua2．寫作思路(一審、二定、三明確、四分段)(1)一審：確定寫作體裁和主題體裁：應(yīng)用文——建議信主題：介紹讀書俱樂部創(chuàng)作目的和運(yùn)作情況，并尋求建議(2)二定：確定時態(tài)和人稱時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時為主人稱：第一人稱(I)和第二人稱(you)(3)三明確：明確寫作要點(diǎn)創(chuàng)作目的→運(yùn)作情況→尋求建議(4)四分段：結(jié)合寫作要點(diǎn)，分為三個段落3．素材整理(1)關(guān)鍵詞語①創(chuàng)作目的：widenourhorizons，determinetodo②運(yùn)作情況：buyappealingbooks，chancestodo，exchangeopinions,arangeof,inanattempttodo③尋求建議(2)完成句子①我寫信尋求你對我們英語讀書俱樂部的一些建議。________________________onourEnglishreadingclub.②為了拓寬眼界并提高英語水平，我和朋友決定在學(xué)校創(chuàng)辦英語讀書俱樂部。________________________，myfriendandI________________________setupanEnglishreadingclubinourschool.③我們會買一些著名作家的有吸引力的書。Wewillbuy________________________worksoffamousauthors.④我們也將為俱樂部成員提供交流觀點(diǎn)的機(jī)會。Wewillprovide________________________.⑤我們將為俱樂部成員推薦好書。________________________tomembersoftheclub.⑥我們也將舉辦一系列活動努力使更多學(xué)生對文學(xué)產(chǎn)生興趣。________________________________inanattemptto______________________________.4．滿分作文(連句成篇)請將以上句子連成一篇語言流暢、用詞準(zhǔn)確、邏輯嚴(yán)密的短文。參考范文：DearPeter，Howiseverythinggoing?I'mwritingtoaskyousomeadviceonourEnglishreadingclub.TowidenourhorizonsandimproveourEnglish,myfriendandIdeterminetosetupanEnglishreadingclubinourschool.WewillbuysomeappealingworksoffamousauthorsandorderChinadailyandthe21stEnglishnewspaperstolearnaboutdifferentcultures.Wewillprovidechancesformembersoftheclubtoexchangeopinionsoncertainbookssothattheycanlearnfromeachother.Besides,wewillremendgoodbookstomembersoftheclub.Atlast,wewillalsoholdarangeofactivitiesinanattempttomakemorestudentsinterestedinliterature.Suchareourplans.Wouldyouliketogiveussomeadvice?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，LiHua綜合點(diǎn)評：范文要點(diǎn)齊全，語言地道，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在其中使用了地道的短語和句式來達(dá)到寫作目的，例如：第一段，開篇點(diǎn)題，點(diǎn)出寫作意圖：尋求建議；第二段，todo不定式作目的狀語；sothat目的狀語從句的運(yùn)用，語言地道，表意清楚。also，besides，atlast等詞(組)使文章邏輯條理。第三段，簡潔清楚結(jié)束書信，再次回歸尋求建議的寫作意圖。整篇文章邏輯清楚，語篇連貫，完成了寫作要求。5．佳作背誦(1)佳作一學(xué)校圖書館需要購置一批新書，現(xiàn)向?qū)W生征求意見。假定你是李華，你認(rèn)為學(xué)校圖書館最需要購置科普類圖書(popularsciencebooks)和文學(xué)類圖書(literarybooks)。請你用英語給圖書館王老師寫一封信進(jìn)行推薦。要點(diǎn)如下：1．推薦這兩類書；2．分別說明推薦理由。注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2)佳作二假定你是李華，請你給喜歡中國詩歌的朋友Peter寫信推薦一檔節(jié)目。1．節(jié)目名稱：《經(jīng)典詠流傳》(EverlastingClassics)；2．推薦理由：詩歌和歌曲相結(jié)合，專家講解等。注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________SectionⅣWriting——書籍的推薦3．①I'mwritingtoaskyousomeadvice②TowidenourhorizonsandimproveourEnglishdetermineto③someappealing④chancesformembersoftheclubtoexchangeopinions⑤Wewillremendgoodbooks⑥Wewillalsoholdarangeofactivitiesmakemorestudentsinterestedinliterature5．佳作一參考范文：DearMr.Wang，Knowingthatourlibraryisgoingtobuybooks,I'dliketogivesomesuggestions.Whatweneedmostarepopularsciencebooks.Usuallypopularsciencebooksexplainbasicprinciplesofnatureinasimpleandinterestingway.Theyhelpusunderstandsciencesubjectsbetterandarouseourcuriosityaboutscientificdiscoveries.Inadditiontoreadingforknowledge,wereadforfunandinspiration.ThatiswhyIremendanothercategoryofbooks:literarybooks.Classicworks,writtenbymasters,presentgreatthoughtsthroughfascinatingstoriesandlanguage.Theynotonlyofferusjoyandexcitement,butalsoencourageustothinkcritically.I'llbegladifyoucanconsidermyremendation.Yourssincerely，LiHua佳作二參考范文：Dea