13 社會(huì)正能量與志愿者招募 中考英語(yǔ)滿分作文賞析

13社會(huì)正能量與志愿者招募NO.1（2022·重慶·中考真題）科學(xué)研究發(fā)現(xiàn)，快樂(lè)可讓我們身體更健康、思維更敏捷、心態(tài)更陽(yáng)光。獨(dú)樂(lè)樂(lè)不如眾樂(lè)樂(lè)。某英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)站以“傳遞快樂(lè)”為主題發(fā)起故事分享活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)講述生活中你通過(guò)傳遞快樂(lè)（直接或間接的），感染他人的小故事。要求：1.80-120詞；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。參考信息：1.起因，經(jīng)過(guò)；2.結(jié)果，感悟；3.……_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分作文賞析】

Astudyshowsthathappinesscanmakepeoplehealthierinmindandmental.Ourpositivemoodhasaninfluenceonothers.Iwanttosharemyexperiencewithyou.

IhaveagoodfriendandhernameisLucy.Shewassoshortthatotherclassmatesalwayslaughedather.Shewasveryupset.AtthattimeIalwaystoldhersomefunnystoriestocheerherup.Andtobecometallandstrong,Ialsotaughthertokeepahealthydietanddosomeexercise.Littlebylittle,shebecameconfident.Fromthisexperience,Ilearnthathappinessisimportantanditcanbringusalotlikeamoresunnymindset.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。以“傳遞快樂(lè)”為題寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用第三人稱和第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主。分為三段式：第一段引出主題；第二段講述自己傳遞快樂(lè)的經(jīng)歷；最后表達(dá)自己從這次經(jīng)歷的感悟。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無(wú)語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。NO.2（2022·天津·中考真題）假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你給美國(guó)筆友David寫一封信，講述你班同學(xué)王紅回家路上做的一件好事，并談?wù)劯惺?。?）上周五，一棵樹被大風(fēng)吹倒，擋住了道路。（2）王紅看到后，撿起地上的樹枝，又去移動(dòng)樹干。（3）樹干太沉，她搬不動(dòng)。（4）人們過(guò)來(lái)幫忙。（5）你認(rèn)為……參考詞匯：被吹倒beblowndown

擋住block

樹枝branch

樹干trunk要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80~100個(gè)。（2）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。DearDavid,Howareyou?I’dliketoshareastorywithyou.LastFriday,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Doyouhaveastorytotell?Hopetohearfromyou.Yours,LiHua【滿分作文賞析】DearDavid,Howareyou?I’dliketoshareastorywithyou.LastFriday,onWangHong’swayhome,shesawabigtreewasblowndownbywindanditblockedtheway.AfterWangHongsawit,shepickedupthebranchesonthegroundandthenmovedthetrunkagain.Butthetrunkwassoheavythatshecouldn’tmoveitbyherself.Whenotherpeoplesawwhatshewasdoing,theyweremovedbyherandcametohelpher.Finally,theysucceededinmovingthetrunkaway.Ithinksheisaverykindperson.Andfromthisstory,Ilearnthatweshouldoffertohelpwhensomeoneneedshelp.Itnotonlyhelpsothers,butalsomakesourselveshappy.Doyouhaveastorytotell?Hopetohearfromyou.Yours,LiHua【解析】1.題干解讀：本文要求根據(jù)題干中的提示內(nèi)容講述你班同學(xué)王紅回家路上做的一件好事，并談?wù)劯惺?，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主，人稱以第三人稱為主。第一段和最后一段已給出，第二段具體描述她做好事的過(guò)程；第三段描述自己的感受。寫作時(shí)運(yùn)用不同的句式和短語(yǔ)使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無(wú)單詞拼寫和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。NO.3（2022·陜西·中考真題）學(xué)校是個(gè)大家庭，這里充滿了歡聲笑語(yǔ)、愛(ài)與溫暖。你們學(xué)校即將舉辦以“SchoolIsaBigFamily”為題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要求，從結(jié)構(gòu)圖的三個(gè)方面寫一篇英文演講稿。參考詞匯：bepatient(with),careabout,encourage,share,help,understand,love,havefun,...要求：1.可選擇使用參考詞匯，亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；4.詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。)Goodafternoon,everyone!Iamgladtobeheretogiveaspeech.Mytopicis“SchoolIsaBigFamily”._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforyourtime!【滿分作文賞析】Goodafternoon,everyone!Iamgladtobeheretogiveaspeech.Mytopicis“SchoolIsaBigFamily”.First,mymathteacherispatientwithme.Shehelpsmetostudymathbetter.Second,myclassmateshelpmealot.I’mnotgoodatsports.MyfriendLiYunhelpedmewithrunningandIranfaster.Also,Icareaboutmyteachersandclassmates.OnedaymyEnglishteacherhadacoldandItoldhertodrinkmorehotwater.Shefeltwarmandthankedme.Ibelieveifweunderstandandhelpeachother,ourschoolwillbeabetterplace.Thankyouforyourtime!【解析】1.題干解讀：本文以“SchoolIsaBigFamily”為題，并結(jié)合提示內(nèi)容寫一篇演講稿，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主，人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主。第一段已給出；第二段重點(diǎn)描述同學(xué)和老師對(duì)我的幫助，以及我對(duì)他人的幫助；第三段進(jìn)行總結(jié)。寫作時(shí)運(yùn)用不同的句式和短語(yǔ)使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無(wú)單詞拼寫和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。NO.4（2022·福建·中考真題）假定你是李華，近日你校開展了以“熱愛(ài)勞動(dòng)，珍愛(ài)糧食”為主題的實(shí)踐活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合以下圖示，用英語(yǔ)給筆友John寫一封信，分享活動(dòng)過(guò)程和感受。詞數(shù)80左右。注意事項(xiàng)：1.必須包含所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)的姓名和校名。DearJohn,Howiseverythinggoing?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【滿分作文賞析】DearJohn,Howiseverythinggoing?I’mgladtotellyoumyone-dayexperienceinricefields.OnJune18,myclassmatesandIwenttothecommunityfarm.Whenwearrived,wevisitedthefarmandwatchedvideosonfarming.Thenweworkedtogetherwithfarmers.Somelearnttoharvestrice.Somehelpedtocarryricewhileotherspickedearsofricefromthefields.Throughtheactivity,I’vegotthepleasureofhardworkandlearnttovalueeachgrain.Haveyouhadanyexperienceofthiskind?Yours,LiHua【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書信作文。根據(jù)圖示內(nèi)容，以“熱愛(ài)勞動(dòng)，珍愛(ài)糧食”為主題寫一篇作文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主。人稱以第一人稱為主。寫作時(shí)需涵蓋要點(diǎn)，包括日期、地點(diǎn)、活動(dòng)和感受，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使行文連貫，確保語(yǔ)句通順，無(wú)單詞語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。NO.5（2022·山東泰安·中考真題）讓青少年利用課余時(shí)間參加志愿者服務(wù)活動(dòng)，對(duì)其成長(zhǎng)具有重要意義，可以幫助他們學(xué)習(xí)新技能，增強(qiáng)溝通能力和社會(huì)責(zé)任感。暑假將至，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的內(nèi)容提示，以“MyVolunteerWorkPlan”為題寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹你選擇的活動(dòng)項(xiàng)目及活動(dòng)計(jì)劃，并談?wù)剠⒓又驹刚叻?wù)活動(dòng)的意義。VolunteerWork◎Helpinthecitylibrary

◎Cleanupthecityparks◎Holdacharitybazaar（義賣）

◎Dovolunteerworkinahospital◎Visittheoldpeople’shome

◎…要求:1.可選擇表格中的1-2個(gè)活動(dòng)項(xiàng)目，也可自擬活動(dòng)項(xiàng)目；2.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，詞數(shù)80-100；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名、地名等與考生本人相關(guān)的信息。MyVolunteerWorkPlan______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分作文賞析】MyVolunteerWorkPlanThesummerholidayiscoming.Iamgoingtodosomevolunteerwork.Iwillhelptocleanupthecitypark.Ofcourse,Iwillaskmorepeopletojoinme.Iwillcallupmyfriendsandaskthemtocome.Wewillpickupthelitter,theplasticbagsandotherwastethings.Ihopeourcitywillbemorebeautiful.Besides,Iamgoingtovisitsickkidsinhospital.Ilovechildrenandenjoygettingalongwiththem.Iwillsingforthekidsatthecityhospitaltocheerthemup.Ihopetheycanbebettersoon.NotonlydoIfeelgoodabouthelpingotherpeople,butalsoIgettospendtimedoingwhatIlovetodo.Allinall,Iwillenjoymyselfinthesummerholiday.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。介紹自己的暑假期間的志愿者計(jì)劃。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用一般將來(lái)時(shí)，人稱采用第一人稱為主。分為兩段式：第一段介紹自己的志愿者計(jì)劃以及打算做些什么事情；第二段表達(dá)自己做志愿者的感悟。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無(wú)語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。NO.6（2022·四川眉山·中考真題）本周日上午，一些外國(guó)學(xué)生將到三蘇祠參觀，現(xiàn)三蘇祠急需招募十名志愿者。假定你是李華，請(qǐng)寫一封電子郵件推薦自己。要點(diǎn)包括：1.自薦目的：成為志愿者；2.個(gè)人信息：身份，年齡，性格（外向、善于與人相處），本周日上午有空；3.個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)：擅長(zhǎng)英語(yǔ)，……；4.表達(dá)期望：獲得機(jī)會(huì)并能做好，請(qǐng)本周五前回復(fù)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校等信息。參考詞匯：三蘇祠SansuTempleDearSir/Madam,IamgladtoseeyournoticeVolunteersWanted.Someforeignstudents…____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________