第3課時　體裁類比突破(3)-感謝信Vs道歉信

第3課時體裁類比突破(3)——感謝信

道歉信一、“感謝信”寫作增分指導(dǎo)[寫作題目](2019·浙江6月高考改編)假定你是李華，經(jīng)常幫助你學(xué)習(xí)英語的朋友Alex即將返回自己的國家。請給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．表示感謝；2.回顧Alex對你的幫助；3．臨別祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[悟滿分作文·厚寫作功底]DearAlex，I'msorrytohearthatyouwillreturntoyourcountryverysoonandI'mwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyourwarm-heartedhelpwithmyEnglishlearning.IstillrememberwhatyouhavedevotedtoimprovingmyoralEnglishandEnglishwriting.Besides,youselflesslysharedyourlearningexperiencewithme.Actually,withoutyourhelp,IwouldnothavemaderapidprogressinEnglishandwouldnothavewontherecentEnglishSpeechContest.Allinall,wordsfailtoexpressmythankfulnesstoyou.Idohopethatyouwillhaveabrightfutureandthatourfriendshipwilllastforever!Yours，LiHua學(xué)亮點寫法1．學(xué)亮麗開頭

開頭先用I'msorrytohearthat...點明寫信的背景及對朋友的不舍之情。接著用extendmysinceregratitudeforyourwarm-heartedhelp點明寫信的目的，感情真摯、誠懇，

語言自然流暢。2．學(xué)高級表達(1)使用高級詞塊，如：extendone'ssinceregratitudefor,devote...to...,makerapidprogress,allinall,wordsfailtoexpress等。(2)準(zhǔn)確運用高級句式，如：what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句whatyouhavedevotedto...；含蓄虛擬語氣withoutyourhelp,Iwouldnothavemade...andwouldnothavewon...；助動詞do表示強調(diào)Idohopethatyouwillhave...等。這些都為文章增色添彩，提升了檔次。3．學(xué)精彩結(jié)尾

結(jié)尾用助動詞do放在謂語動詞hope前特意加強語氣，充分表達了對朋友Alex的美好祝愿。4．學(xué)行文邏輯

首段中的and，主體段中的still，Besides,Actually,Allinall,尾段中的and串聯(lián)起了句與句之間、段與段之間的銜接過渡，使得全文內(nèi)容表達清楚，邏輯合理。[積寫作素材·造吸睛亮點]Ⅰ.開頭部分：表達感謝之情并說明原因1．Iamwritingthislettertothankyoufor...2．Iamwritingtoexpressmysincerethanksfor...3．Iwouldliketoconveymyheartfeltthankstoyouforyourselflesshelpinthisletter.4．Onbehalfof...,I'dliketoextendmysinceregratitudeforyourselflesshelp.5．I'mextremelygrateful/thankfultoyouforyourunselfishassistanceduring...Ⅱ.主體部分：對對方給予的幫助以及達到的作用和效果進行有層次的描述和贊揚1．Itwasnice/kind/thoughtfulofyouto...2．Thankyouverymuchforyourkindhospitality(好客，熱情招待)andthehonouryoushowedmeduringmyvisitto...3．Itwasyourkind/unreserved/selflesshelpthatenabledmetodo...4．Manythanksforallthethingsyouhavedoneinhelpingusto...5．YourwarmthhasmadeourbriefstayinLondonpleasantandmemorable.6．Whatimpressedusmostwas...Ⅲ.結(jié)尾部分：再次闡述謝意并表達回報的愿望1．Thanksagainforyourgeneroushelp.2．IappreciateitmorethanIcansay.3．Mytruegratitudeisbeyondanywords/description.4．Ifeeldeeplyindebted(感激的)toyouandIreallydonotknowhowtothankyouenoughforyourhelp.5．Pleaseacceptmysincerethanksforyourhelp,whichIwillneverforget.6．Nothingcouldeverreturnthefavouryougaveme.IwillbemorethanpleasedifIhavetheopportunitytorepayyourkindnessby...7．Weappreciateyourtakingthetimetowritetous.[建寫作模型·展規(guī)范形體]Dear

，Iamwritingtoconveymygratitudefor_______________(感謝的原因)．Guidedbyyou,Ihadachanceto

__________________(對方給予的幫助一).Thankstoyourgeneroushelp,Idobelievethat

(幫助的效果).What'smore,duringtheweek,

(對方給予的幫助二及效果)．Thanksagainforyourgeneroushelp.I'mexpecting(發(fā)出回報式邀請)．Yours，LiHua二、“道歉信”寫作增分指導(dǎo)[寫作題目](2021·北京高考改編)假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你和英國好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴約。請你用英文給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．表達歉意并說明原因；

2．提出建議并給出理由。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearJim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua

[悟滿分作文·厚寫作功底]DearJim,Iamwritingtoapologizefornothangingaroundwithyouthisweekendasplanned.Actually,howI'mexpectingthat!Tomypity,IaminformedtovisitthenursinghousesincethisweekendistheDoubleNinthDay,atraditionaldaycelebratedfortheseniorinChina.Aimedtoshowourcareandrespectfortheold,thisactivitylaunchedbyourschoolisofgreatsignificance.SoI'mreallysorry.Howaboutgoingouttogethernextweekend,whenI'dtreatyoutoabigmeal?Ifinconvenient,it'suptoyoutofixadate.Pleaseacceptmysincereapologyforthat.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours，LiHua學(xué)亮點寫法1．學(xué)高級表達(1)使用高級詞塊，如：apologizefor,hangaround,asplanned,beinformedtovisit...,ofgreatsignificance,treatyoutoabigmeal,upto等。(2)準(zhǔn)確運用高級句式，如：同位語atraditionalday；分詞短語作定語celebratedfor...,launchedby...；分詞短語作狀語Aimedtoshowourcareandrespectfortheold；定語從句whenI'dtreatyouto...；狀語從句的省略Ifinconvenient;it作形式主語it'suptoyoutofixadate等。2．學(xué)行文邏輯Actually一詞使郵件首段與主體段自然銜接；Tomypity,SoI'mreallysorry使主體段邏輯清晰，銜接自然、順暢。3．學(xué)情感表達

感嘆句...howI'mexpectingthat！表明作者非?？释麅冬F(xiàn)諾言；Tomypity...SoI'mreallysorry.Pleaseacceptmysincereapologyforthat.體現(xiàn)了作者為自己的食言表示深深的歉意；Howaboutgoingouttogethernextweekend...Ifinconvenient,it'suptoyoutofixadate.表明作者誠懇地提出彌補措施。[積寫作素材·造吸睛亮點]Ⅰ.開頭部分：簡明表達道歉的原因1．Iamwritingthislettertoexpressmyregret...2．Iamwritingtoapologizefor...3．Iwouldliketogiveyoumyapologyfor...4．Iamverysorrytosaythat...5．IfeelterriblysorrythatIforgot/failedto...Ⅱ.主體部分：表達歉意，闡明處境，提出解決辦法1．Thereasonformydelay/absencewasthat...2．Ihadnowayoutbecause...3．Tomypity,Iwasinformedto...4．Somethingunexpectedhappenedand...5．Ifnot,letmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.6．SoI'mreallysorry.Howabout...7．Iwonderifitispossibleforusto...8．Iwonderifyouwillbeavailableon...Ⅲ.結(jié)尾部分：再次表達歉意并表達希望1．Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.2．Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain.3．Hopeyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandmysituation.4．Isincerelyhopethatyouwillbeabletothinkinmypositionandacceptmyapologies.5．Isincerelyhopethatyouwillacceptmyapology.6．Ihopethechangewillnotcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.[建寫作模型·展規(guī)范形體]Dear

，I'mterriblysorrytoinformyouthat

(寫信事由).Thus,Iamwritingtoapologizefornotkeepingmyword.Somethingunexpectedhappenedand

(失約理由).Shallwefixanothertime?I'llbeavailableanytimeafter(補救辦法).Will

(另約時間)suitsyo