2023年中考英語(yǔ)專題復(fù)習(xí)-寫作訓(xùn)練課件

書面表達(dá)框架結(jié)構(gòu)的搭建寫作訓(xùn)練（一）1.體裁：征文2.人稱：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)3.時(shí)態(tài):一人稱4.要點(diǎn):1）強(qiáng)健體魄

2）全面發(fā)展

3）自理能力4）誠(chéng)信友善/勤學(xué)善讀體美勞德？智？框架:Para1：引入話題（略）

Para2：希望和期待(略)Para3:如何成長(zhǎng)（詳）How?+Why?+What?（setexamples）Para1：引入話題

Asteenagers,wearethefutureofourhomeland.

關(guān)鍵詞：theyongarestrong,thecountryisstrongtrytomakeourselvesstrong升華：倒裝+高級(jí)短語(yǔ)Thestrongertheyoungare,thestrongerthecountrywillbe.makeoureffortstobecomestrongerPara2：如何成長(zhǎng)中心句:Howtomakeourselvesstrong?

支撐句（關(guān)鍵詞）：1.takeexercisemore---takeourPEclassseriously,dooutdooractivities(playbasketball,run,...)tomakeourbodystrong.2.developourallkindsofabilities--takeupsinging,dancing,playingthepianotoimproveusinanall-roundway.3.developourlifeskills--doallkindsofchores4.behonestandkindtoothers

--Peopleprefermakingfriendswiththosewhoarehonestandkindtothem.Para2：如何成長(zhǎng)中心句:Howtomakeourselvesstrong?

支撐句（關(guān)鍵詞）：1.takeexercisemore---takeourPEclassseriously,dooutdooractivities(playbasketball,run,...)tomakeourbodystrong.2.developourallkindsofabilities--takeupsinging,dancing,playingthepianotoimproveusinanall-roundway.3.developourlifeskills--doallkindsofchores4.leantocooperatewithothers

--putourselvesintoothers’shoes,beactive,positive,tolerant,competewithsmilePara3：希望和期待

關(guān)鍵詞：takeactiontotrytomakeourselvesstrongbeabletobuildourcountrywellAsteenagers,wearethefutureofourhomeland.Thestrongertheyoungare,thestrongerthecountrywillbe.Soweteenagersaresupposedtomakeoureffortstobecomestronger.Herearesomeofmysuggestions.Firstofall,wemusttakeexercisemoretomakeourbodystrong,suchastakingourPEclassseriously,doingoutdooractivities,foreverythingisnothingwithoutgoodhealthcondition.Secondly,toimproveusinanall-roundway,wecandevelopdifferentkindsofabilities.Takingupsingingordancingissuchagoodchoice.Inourdailylife,weshoulddosomechores.Notonlycanithelpusimproveourlifeskills,butmaketherelationshipbetweenparentsandusbetter.Moreimportantly,akindcharactershouldbeputinthefirstplace.We'dbetterbealwaysreadytohelpothers,trytobekindandhonest,becausepeopleprefermakingfriendswiththosewhoarehonestandkindtothem.Allinall,Ibelievethatourcountrywillbebuiltbetterandbetteraslongaswegooutofourwaystoimproveourselves.Let'stakeactionrightnow!句式補(bǔ)充：1.Weshouldpaymoreattentiontostudy.2.Trytogetmoreknowledgefromreadingandthinking.3.寫作訓(xùn)練（二）---圖表作文圖表作文：學(xué)生通過圖表信息進(jìn)行寫作。圖表包括：餅狀圖柱形圖條形圖

現(xiàn)今越來越多的人喜歡網(wǎng)上點(diǎn)餐外賣服務(wù)，你所在的學(xué)生會(huì)就“你對(duì)網(wǎng)上點(diǎn)餐的看法”進(jìn)行了問卷調(diào)查。請(qǐng)根據(jù)調(diào)查結(jié)果給我校的英文校刊寫一篇短文，并談?wù)勀愕目捶?。方便快捷，隨時(shí)隨地點(diǎn)餐品種豐富，選擇多樣其他缺點(diǎn)塑料包裝，造成污染一審:1.體裁：2.人稱：3.時(shí)態(tài):4.要點(diǎn):調(diào)查報(bào)告第三人稱第一人稱一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)Part1:Part2:Part3:引出話題（關(guān)于網(wǎng)上點(diǎn)餐的調(diào)查）描述餅狀圖內(nèi)容，介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果自己對(duì)網(wǎng)上點(diǎn)餐的看法二搭:略略詳詳Part1:引出話題（關(guān)于網(wǎng)上點(diǎn)餐的調(diào)查）Onlinefooddeliveryisbooming(繁榮的)inChina.TheStudentUnioninourschoolhas

madeasurveyaboutit.onlinefooddelivery/orderfoodonlinethestudentunionmakeasurveyHerearetheresults.描述餅狀圖內(nèi)容，介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果convenient;orderfoodanytimeandanywheredifferentkindsoffoods;morechoicesuseplasticpackaging;causemuchpollutionunhealthy;makepeoplelazier連詞成句注意邏輯likedislikelikedislikePart2:關(guān)鍵詞35%ofthemthinkit's連詞成句Part2:like:convenient;orderfoodanytimeandanywheredifferentkindsoffoods;morechoiceslikeMoststudentsliketoorderfoodonline.convenient.Theycanorderfoodanytimeandanywhere.becausetheycanorderfoodanytimeandanywhere.Meanwhile,主題句支撐句主題句支撐句＋ 30%ofthemenjoydifferentkindsoffoodsonlinesothattheycanhavemorechoices.邏輯useplasticpackaging;causemuchpollutionunhealthy;makepeoplelazierdislikePart2:dislike:主題句支撐句＋However,...邏輯自己對(duì)網(wǎng)上點(diǎn)餐的看法Inmyopinion,Iprefercookingbymyselftoorderingfoodonline.OneofthereasonsisthatIlikecooking.It'sawaytoenjoylife.Besides,Iagreethatdeliveryfoodisnotashealthyashomecookingfood.Part3:Ithink/believethat…Inmyopinion,…/Asforme,.../Itseemstomethat...Iamoftheopinionthat…/Itaketheviewthat..Mypersonalviewisthat…/Personally,Ithink…Frommypointofview,…/AsfarasIamconcerned,…主題句支撐句＋Therefore,Idon'tlikeonlinefooddelivery.結(jié)束句＋ Onlinefooddeliveryisbooming(繁榮的)inChina.TheStudentUnioninourschoolhas

madeasurveyaboutit.Herearetheresults.

Moststudentsliketoorderfoodonline.5%ofthemthinkit'sconvenientbecausetheycanorderfoodanytimeandanywhere.

Meanwhile,30%ofthemenjoydifferentkindsoffoodsonlinesothatthemcanhavemorechoices. However,therearealsomanystudentsdon'tthinklikeit.25%ofthemthinkitneedsalotofplasticpackagingwhichmaycausemuchpollution.Andtheother10%thinkit'sunhealthyandmakepeoplelazier,forpeopledon'tneedtogoouttoeatorcookmealsbythemselves.

Inmyopinion,Iprefercookingbymyselftoorderingfoodonline.OneofthereasonsisthatIlikecooking.It'sawaytoenjoylife.Besides,Iagreethatdeliveryfoodisnotashealthyashomecookingfood.Therefore,Idon'tlikeonlinefood