專(zhuān)題12 讀后續(xù)寫(xiě) 高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)練案(教師版)

題12讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)--講練練案時(shí)間：分滿(mǎn)分：1.【東省煙臺(tái)市2021年考斷性測(cè)試讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ItaSaturdayJune,1988.Outofa-year-earlysummerboredom,setupatentinruralandintendedtosleepinit,stayedthefinishwatchingtheLakers'offwasalmostmidnightDadhadasleepupstairsforhourswhenknockedatthefrontoccurredtomenottoanswermysurprise,itwasagirlaboutagewithabloodyonforehead.“Hi.Maria.What'swrongyou?”Iaskedherwithconcern.embarrassed,shereplied:“I'mJane.”shehesitatedandthenaskedmecarefully,“Maystayfornight?I'llofftomorrowmorning.Seeingheruneasiness,Icomfortedher,“Takeeasy,Staymetonight.Iinvitedherintothehouse.Lookingaround,Janeappearedtohavecalmeddown.“LettreatyourinjuryIsaidandsheagreed.Icleansedbandaged(包)herinjuredforeheadandthenhersomebreadandbaconto“Wanttosleepinmytent?”Iaskedhershenodded.leftherthebathroom,Iwentlookforanothersleepingbag.Ireturned,Janewasseatedontheherfacecloudedbysadness.Walkingacrossthedarkyard,accompaniedintothetent.Welaydownsidebyside.Seizedbycuriosityconcern,constantlyturnedover,whathadtoherandhowshecamehere.Janetohavesensedthatandstartedtospeak.Jane'sfatherdiedcanceryearsbefore.didoddcleaningtoraiseher.tighthermothertriedtodowhatshecouldtosatisfyJane.Severalweeksbefore,accidentallyfancywhiteinstorewindow,whichshefellinlovewithatfirstsight.excitedlytoldheraboutthat,whopromisedtobuyasherbirthdaygift.Fromthenon,Janewaslookingforwardto注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為左；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)置作答。Jane's16thbirthdaycamebuthermotherdidn'thometheevening.________________________________________________________________________________________________112

________________________________________________________________________________________HavingtoldherJanesaidregrettedbeinginconsideratetoher________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Jane16thbirthdaycamebutherdidngethomeuntiltheevening.Thirstyforthedress,gotextremelydisappointedwhenseeinghermotherback-Shestormedbeforehermothercouldstopher.Janeangrilyaimlesslyonlyfindherselfinanunknownplacehourslater.Worsestill,shefelldownthedark,hurtingforehead.Painfulandhungry,shecametorealizesheshouldnsowillful,buttherenobodyaroundcouldturntoforhelp.Soshehadtomoveonuntiltheourhouse.HavingtoldherJanesaidregrettedbeinginconsideratetoher.Ikeptcomfortingheruntilweasleep.WhenDadawokeuswastoldthewholestorythemorning,hetoJaneseriously,’sdangeroustorunawayfromhome.Yourmommustanxiousaboutyoursafety.I’lldriveyouhomeimmediately.”Afterhour’sride,wereachedJanehome,infrontofwhichstoodaworriedwoman.Janerushedoverandhuggedhertightly,sayingtearfully,Mom.Witnessingthis,DadandIbreathedasighofrelief.【解析】本文以人物為線(xiàn)索展開(kāi)，講述了作者晚上在戶(hù)外帳篷里睡覺(jué)時(shí)，遇到了與母親賭氣離家出走的，收留了她，第二天和爸爸送回家，母女和好的故事。1.段落續(xù)寫(xiě)：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)16歲生日來(lái)了，但她的母親直到那天晚上才回家可，第一段可描寫(xiě)簡(jiǎn)因?yàn)槟赣H沒(méi)有給自己買(mǎi)喜愛(ài)的裙子而生氣離家出走，最后來(lái)到作者的家里的經(jīng)過(guò)。①由第二段首句內(nèi)容了的事后，簡(jiǎn)說(shuō)她后悔不體諒她的媽”可知，第二段可描寫(xiě)作者安簡(jiǎn)，告知爸爸簡(jiǎn)的故事，送簡(jiǎn)回家，母女和好的經(jīng)過(guò)。2.續(xù)寫(xiě)線(xiàn)索：簡(jiǎn)與母親生氣—家出——到作者家里—安慰告父—送回家母女和好——感欣慰3.詞匯激活行為類(lèi)①生氣離開(kāi)stormedout/goangrily①.求幫助：turntofor/askforhelp/seekforhelp情緒類(lèi)①.望：disappointed/discouraged/frustrated/depressed212

①.慰：【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型Thirstyforthedress,Janegotextremelydisappointedwhenseeingherback-handed.使用了形容詞短語(yǔ)作伴隨狀語(yǔ)和狀語(yǔ)從句的省略結(jié)構(gòu)[高分句型2].Painfulhungry,shecametorealizesheshouldnsowillful,buttherenobodyaroundshecouldturntofor使用了賓語(yǔ)從句和定語(yǔ)從句[高分句型3].Afterhour’sride,wereachedJane’shome,infrontofwhichstoodaworriedwoman.使了介詞關(guān)系代詞引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句2.【寧省遼陽(yáng)市2021屆三?！孔x后續(xù)寫(xiě)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ashopmustwalkedpastamilliontimesbefore,buthaveonlynoticeduntilnow,neverthoughttoenter.It'sabrownbrickbuildingwithsmallwindowdisplayofferingvariousforgettablethatofinteresttohaveextratimetodayanddecidetotakeaquicklook.Theinterior里)oftheisandittakesamomentformyeyesto-just.Astrongrosesmellhangsthicklyinair,isnearlytoturnmeaway.Inspiteofthis,continuefurthertheeyesscanningshelvesforanythinginteresting.Indeed,therearedifferentitems,andappealstome.“CanIyou?”Ilooktoseeelderlywomanbehindthecounter.Shelooksasurprised,Iwondershesawacustomerentershop.“Justlookingcasually,”Ireply.IafullcircleoftheplaceandthereisindeednothinghereIwishtopurchase.Ithemanagestostayinbusiness.Iheadtowardsdoor,butwhenInoticeabookonstand.Therevisibletitleon-leathercover,anditislockedcombinationlock密碼鎖).Besidethebook,thereisapaperwithnumbersonit.Thenumbersread:--32.Itrylockthecombination,butitdoesopen.Iamnowevencurioustodiscoverliesbetweenthebook'spages.thisbookabout?”Iaskthehasbeenstaringatmequietlythewholetime.“Dothecombination?“Ido,thewomanreplies,butnothingmore.Iambyherresponse,andI'vehadofthisplace.IturnleaveamalmostthewhenIhearsay,“Tryyourbirthday.312

Iwanderbackovertobook.She'scrazy,Ithink.Withindexfinger,hitthenumbersintosothattheynowmybirthmonth,year.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為左；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)置作答。myastonishment,thelockopens._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Suddenly,Ihearavoice,tellingmeI'mtheshopassistantfindthenextcustomer._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】myastonishment,thelockopens.Ipullbacktheheavycoverandglancethroughthepages.can’tberight,”Iwhisperinshockasrealizebookisabiographyaboutme!Ilookupquestionthewoman,butsheisgonetheshopsuddenlydifferentandbrighter.Theshelvesarenowfilledwithallfavoritethings.Iwanderaroundtheagain.HowdidImissthisshopbefore?Iwouldoftheseitemsinitgladly!Suddenly,Ihearavoice,tellingmeI'mtheshopassistantfindthenextcustomer.sitbehindthecounter,waitingforacustomertocomein.However,theypastthewindowasthoughthewereinvisible.fewthatenterseemuninterestedhavetoorcomplainthatthesmellintheairistoostrong.Untilday,youngtakesaninterestinthebook.“Itwon'topen,shenotes.“Trybirthday,”Isay.【解析】本文講述了主人公光顧了一家平平無(wú)奇的商店，就在準(zhǔn)備離開(kāi)的時(shí)候，他發(fā)現(xiàn)木架上有一本用碼鎖鎖著的舊書(shū)，旁邊的紙片上面還寫(xiě)著一串密碼。在嘗試用密碼打開(kāi)書(shū)失敗后，他對(duì)這本書(shū)產(chǎn)生了更大的趣。這時(shí)店主告訴他，真正的密碼是他的生日。強(qiáng)烈的好奇心驅(qū)使他在密碼鎖上輸入了自己的生日。果然，打開(kāi)了！但與此同時(shí)，原來(lái)的店主消失了，他成為了新的守店人，直到下一位對(duì)書(shū)感興趣的客人出現(xiàn)。1.段落續(xù)寫(xiě)：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容令吃的是，鎖開(kāi)了”知，第一段可描寫(xiě)鎖開(kāi)后我所看到的書(shū)中的內(nèi)容和這一行為引起的變化。①由第二段首句內(nèi)容突，聽(tīng)到一個(gè)聲音，告訴我我是店員，直到我找到下一個(gè)顧客可知，第二段可寫(xiě)我接替前任成為守店員后的工作和等待來(lái)下一個(gè)守店員的過(guò)程。412

2.續(xù)寫(xiě)線(xiàn)索：打開(kāi)——店主消失周?chē)淖儭蔀槭氐耆恕却乱粋€(gè)顧客3.詞匯激活行為類(lèi)①.意到：noticed/see①.一看：aquicklook/havelook情緒類(lèi)①.驚：surprised/astonished①.奇：【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]can’tberight,Iwhisperinshockasrealizethebookabiographyabout（引時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）[高分句型2]Suddenly,hearavoice,tellingmetheshopassistantuntilIfindthenext（在分詞短語(yǔ)作伴隨狀語(yǔ)、引時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）[高分句型theywalkpastthewindowasthoughtheplacewereinvisible.(as引導(dǎo)方式狀語(yǔ)從句3.【蘇等八省市新高考屆三模擬試題】讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。Jennyabrighteyed，fiveyearoldgirl.sheherwerecheckingoutthegrocery，sawaplasticnecklacepricedat$2.50.shethatandwhensheaskedherifwouldbuyitformothersaidisaprettyitcostsanawfullotofmoney.After，’llyouthenecklace，whengethomewecanmakeupalistofchoresthatyoudotoforthenecklace.Andforgetthatforyour，Grandmamightgivedollar，Okay？Jennyagreed，andhermotherboughtthepearlnecklaceforJennyworkedonherchoreshardevery，andsureenoughhergrandmagaveherbrandnewdollarbillforherbirthday.Soonhadpaidoffthepearls.HowJennylovedthose！Sheeverywheretokindergarten，andwhenshewentoutwithhertoerrands差)．shedidnwearwasintheshower.Hermotherhadtoldthattheywouldturnherneckgreen!JennyaverylovingDaddy.Jennywent，hewouldgetuphisfavoritechaireverynight512

readJennyherfavoritestory.Onenightwhenhefinishedthe，，，love？“Oh，，love”thegirlsaid.，，givemepearls.“OhpearlsJennyrefused.“ButyoufavoriteRememberhertomeyearforbirthday.herteapartytoo.Okay”“Oh，，okay.fatherbrushedhercheekkiss.“Good”注意：1．所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．至少使用5個(gè)文中標(biāo)有下線(xiàn)的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3．續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；4．續(xù)寫(xiě)完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線(xiàn)標(biāo)你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph：Aweeklater，fatheronceagainaskedJennyafterherstory________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph：Severaldays，Jennysfathercameintoreadaas，wassurprisedtofind________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

Possibleversion:Aweek，fatheronceagainaskedJennyafterstory.“Doyoulove，？“Ohyes，，youloveyou.meyourpearls.”mustyouaskfor？Jennyrefusedagain，“Notonlyfinishthose，alsoIspentthedollarbillgivenformybirthdayjusttopayforit.”Theybothfellintosilence.Thenherfatherherwarmhug.’sGoodnight，612

myone.”Severaldays，’sfathercameintoreadheraas，surprisedtofindsomethingunderthestorybookwhichturnedouttobethenecklace.canhaveit.”Jennyraised“Youknowloveyou.”fatherwasmovedbeyondwords.pulledsomethingoutofhispocket.Itwasaprettynecklacewithrealpearlsshining.“Themoreyouarewilling，morearelikelytoreceive.That’sthemeaningofsharinggiving.fatherhelpedJennyputonpearls.“You，love，【解析】本文以人物為線(xiàn)索展開(kāi)，講述了珍妮在和媽媽逛街時(shí)看上了一條仿制的珍珠項(xiàng)鏈，她很喜歡，過(guò)自己作雜務(wù)付清了珍珠項(xiàng)鏈的錢(qián)妮天戴著天晚上爸爸給珍妮講完故事后珍妮愛(ài)不愛(ài)自己果愛(ài)的話(huà)，就把仿制的珍珠項(xiàng)鏈給他，珍妮拒絕了。1.段落續(xù)寫(xiě)：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容一后她的父親講完故事后再次問(wèn)珍妮可知，第一段可描寫(xiě)珍妮爸爸再次問(wèn)珍妮不愛(ài)自己，如果愛(ài)的話(huà)，就把仿制的珍珠項(xiàng)鏈給他，珍妮再次拒絕了。①由第二段首句內(nèi)容幾后當(dāng)珍妮的父親像往常一樣進(jìn)來(lái)給她讀故事時(shí)，他驚訝地發(fā)可知，第二段可寫(xiě)珍妮把仿制的珍珠項(xiàng)鏈給了爸爸，爸爸很感動(dòng)，給了珍妮一條真的珍珠項(xiàng)鏈。2.續(xù)寫(xiě)線(xiàn)索：詢(xún)問(wèn)—拒絕安給感—感悟3.詞匯激活行為類(lèi)①要求：for/want①拒絕：refusedturneddown①安慰：comforting/consoling情緒類(lèi)感動(dòng)：moved/touched【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1].NotdidfinishthosebutalsoIspentthedollarbillgivenforbirthdayjusttofor（于句首，使用部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)）[高分句型2].Thenfather，comfortingwithawarm（了現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)）[高分句型3].Severallater，whenJenny’sfathercameinreadastory，surprisedtofindsomethingthestory，turnedouttobethe（了由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）4.【建省莆田市2021屆中業(yè)班下學(xué)期3月）第二次教學(xué)質(zhì)量檢測(cè)】讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)712

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Onceuponathecolorsoftheworldstartedtoquarrel.Allclaimedthattheywerethebest.Theymostimportant.ThemostThefavorite.Greensaid,“ClearlyIthemostimportant.Ithesignoflifeofhope.waschosenfortreesandleaves.Withoutme,allanimalsdie.”Blueinterrupted:“YouonlythinkaboutearthbutconsidertheskyandtheItisthewaterthatthebasisoflife.Theskygivesspacepeace.Withoutmypeace,wouldallbenothing.”Yellowchuckled,“Youaresoserious.Ibringlaughterwarmthintotheworld.Thesunisyellow,themoonisyellow,theareyellow.Everyyoulookatasunflower,theworldstartssmile.Withoutmetherewouldbenofun.Orangestartednext.“Iamcolorofhealthstrength.IpreciousforIserveneedsofhumanlife.Icarrythemostimportantvitamins.WhenIfilltheskyatsunriseorsunset,mybeautyissostrikingthatnogivesanotherthoughttoanyofyou.”ThenRedshoutedout,rulerofofyou.bringfireintotheblood.colorofpassionoflove.Withoutme,theearthwouldbeasemptythemoon.Purpleroseuptohisfullheight,“Iamthecolorofroyaltyandpower.Kings,chiefs,andbishopsalwayschosenmeforIamsignofauthorityandwisdom.Peopledoquestionme!Theylistenandobey.Finally,Indigospoke,ofme.colorofsilence.Youhardlynoticeme,butwithoutmeallbecomesuperficial.representthoughtreflection,twilightdeepwater.Andsocolorson，convincedofhisorherownsuperiority.Theirquarrelingbecamelouderandlouder.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為左；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)作答。Suddenlytherewasflashofbrightlightening,thunderrollingbooming.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Doingtheyweretold,thecolorsunitedandjoinedhands.812

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Para1:Suddenlytherewasaflashofbrightlightening,thunderrollingbooming.startedpourdownrelentlessly.Thequarrelcametoanabruptstop,panicenvelopingthesecolors.Theycrouchedindrawingcloseanotherforcomfort.Rightthen,avoicepiercedthroughthemidsttheclamor,Youfoolishcolors,fightingyourselves,eachtryingtodominatetherest.thatyouwereeachmadeforaspecialpurpose,uniqueanddifferent?Joinhandswithanother.”P(pán)ara2:Doingtheywerethecolorsunitedandjoinedhands.Togethertheyarainbowacrossthesky,drivingoffthethunderandtherain.Therunslowlyroseraysgoldenlightscatteringontheearth.Allthecolorssmiledateachother,brighteningthewholeworld,withhopefulgreen,peacefulcheerfulyellow,energeticorange,passionatered,powerfulpurplethoughtfulindigo.Fromon,agoodraintheworld,arainbowwillappearinthesky,remindingpeopletheworkmiracle.【解析】本文以人物為線(xiàn)索展開(kāi)，講述了從前，世界上的各種顏色進(jìn)行過(guò)一次爭(zhēng)吵。所有人都聲稱(chēng)自己最好的。他們最重要的、最有用的和最受人喜歡的，且各自陳述了理由，最后突然打起了雷，一個(gè)聲音說(shuō)他都是獨(dú)一無(wú)二的該此攜手后色們按照聲音說(shuō)的那樣團(tuán)結(jié)在一起牽它們一起形成了一道橫跨空的彩虹，驅(qū)散了雷聲和雨水。金色的光芒慢慢地灑向大地。1.段落續(xù)寫(xiě)：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容突，道閃電閃過(guò)，雷聲隆隆，轟隆轟隆”知，第一段可描寫(xiě)是什么終止了顏色們的爭(zhēng)吵。①由第二段首句內(nèi)容顏們照聲音說(shuō)的那樣團(tuán)結(jié)在一起，手牽手可知，第二段可描寫(xiě)顏色聽(tīng)了個(gè)聲音的話(huà)后，團(tuán)結(jié)在一起形成了美麗的彩虹。2.續(xù)寫(xiě)線(xiàn)索：顏色爭(zhēng)吵開(kāi)打雷—一個(gè)聲音告訴顏色它們都很特別—顏團(tuán)結(jié)在一起形成一道彩虹3.詞匯激活行為類(lèi)912

突然停止：comeanabruptstop/breakoff靠近：close/getclose驅(qū)散：off/dispel情緒類(lèi)無(wú)情：relentlessly/heartless愚蠢：/stupid【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Donthatyouwereeachmadeforaspecialpurpose,uniqueanddifferent?用that引賓語(yǔ)從句[高分句型2]Togethertheyarainbowacrossthesky,drivingoffthunderandthe用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ))5.【北省2021屆三二輪復(fù)習(xí)聯(lián)考（一）新高考II卷讀續(xù)寫(xiě)閱讀下面材料其容和所段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段構(gòu)一篇完整的短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)左右。FarupthemountainsofCanada,thereanoldabandonedhouse.itwasoccupiedbyyoungcouplewhotodistancethemselvesthetroublesomeaffairsofthismodernworld.theyweremilesawayfromnearesttown.Bob,thehusband,theoccasionaltripintotownbuysupplieswhereasJan,hiswife,spentherfreetimebyfire,sewing.Theirlifewassimplypeaceful.Then,onemidwinterday,wokeupbedwithastrangeherbones.Puttingdownoverwork,Bobaskedhertobedandmadesuresherested.ThoughJanwasimpatienttogettoherchores雜,Bobcomfortedher,“Relax,Sugar.You’reoverdoingthings.thesechoreswillbeherewhenyourecover.”However,Janseemedtogettingworseinsteadofrecovering.Byevening,shewasrunningafeverandingreaterpain.Inspitehisefforts,Bobcouldnoteasehersuffering.thensuddenly,shestartedtogetintounconsciousness.wasobviousthatshewasseriouslyWhatcoulddo?hadexperiencetreatingthesickJanwasgettingworsetheminute.thatthereanolddoctorintownlivedthreedownhill.fat,therewasnowaythedoctorcouldmakeuptheirhouse.Somethinghadtodonequickly!Bobrackedhisbrainsbuthadideaatall.Theonlythingtodotogotothedoctor.In’scondition,couldneverwalkthatinthedeepsnow.Bobwouldhavetocarryher!Bobsearchedhismindforwaytopoor,sickThen,heremembered.madeasledge橇sothattheycouldridetogetherthemountain.nevergotaroundtoitthough,becausethewholemountainthicklycoveredwithrocksand