2018英語寫作素材

2019年高考寫作輔導(dǎo)（1）--續(xù)寫（一）背誦文本精選No.1 Ann’sDiary（環(huán)境描寫）Iwonderifit,sbecauseIhaven,tbeenabletobeoutdoorsforsolongthatI,vegrownsocrazyabouteverythingtodowithnature.Icanwellrememberthattherewasatimewhenadeepbluesky,thesongofbirds,moonlightandflowerscouldneverhavekeptmespellbound.That,schangedsinceIcamehere.Oneeveningwhenitwassowarm,Istayedawakeonpurposeuntilhalfpasteleveninordertohaveagoodlookatthemoonbymyself.Butasthemoongavefartoomuchlight,Ididn,tdareopenawindow.AnothertimefivemonthsagoIhappenedtobeupstairsatduskwhenthewindowwasopen.Ididn'tgodownstairsuntilthewindowhadtobeshut.Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintheirpower.ItwasthefirsttimeinayearandahalfthatI,dseenthenightfacetoface.Sadly,I,monlyabletolookatnaturethroughdirtycurtainshangingbeforeverydustywindows.It,snopleasurelookingthroughtheseanylongerbecausenatureisonethingthatreallymustbeexperienced.No.2 CharlieChaplin（人物傳記）CharlieChaplin,afamouscomedian,brightenedthelivesofAmericansandBritishthroughtwoworldwarswhentheyfeltdepressed,sotheycouldfeelmorecontentwiththeirlives.Uptonownobodyhasbeenabletodothisbetterthanhim.Borninapoorfamily,CharlieChaplinwastaughttosinganddanceassoonashecouldtalkandwalksothathecouldearnhisownlivingwithhisparents,whowerebothmusichallperformers.Unfortunately,whenhewasfiveyearsold,hisfatherdied,leavinghisfamilyevenworseoff.Byhisteens,Chaplincouldmimeandactthefoolinasubtleway.Withtimegoingby,hebecamemoreandmorepopular.Onceheplayedatrampwhoworeamoustache,wornoutshoesandwidetrousers,walkingaroundstiffly.Thischaracterwasasocialfailurebutwaslovedforhisoptimismanddeterminationtoovercomedifficulties.No.3 JohnSnow（敘事步驟）JohnSnowwasafamousdoctorinLondonandhebecameinspiredwhenhethoughtabouthelpingordinarypeopleexposedtocholera,whichwasadeadlydiseaseofitsday.Manythousandsofterrifiedpeoplediedeverytimetherewasanoutbreakbecauseneitheritscausenoritscurewasunderstood.Heknewitwouldneverbecontrolleduntilitscausewasfound.Hebelievedonetheorywhichsuggestedthatpeopleabsorbedthediseaseintotheirbodieswiththeirmeals.Hetriedtoprovethis.SowhenanotheroutbreakhitLondon,hebegantogatherinformationandmadeamap,markingwhereallthedeadpeoplehadlived.Itwasvaluable.Andfinallyheconcludedthatthewaterwastoblame.Then1JohnSnowlookedintothesourceofwater.Hefoundallthedeathswerelinkedtopollutedwater.Sohewasabletoannouncewithcertaintythatpollutedwatercarriedthevirus.Topreventthisfromhappeningagain,JohnSnowsuggestedthatthesourceofallthewatersuppliesbeexaminedandnewmethodsofdealingwithpollutedwaterbefound.Finally“KingCholera”wasdefeated.No.4 TheUnitedKingdom（地理介紹）PeoplemaywonderwhytheUKconsistsoffourcountries,England,Wales,ScotlandandNorthernIreland.YoucanclarifythisquestionifyoustudyBritishhistory.GreatBritaingotitsnamewhenEnglandandWaleswerejoinedtoScotland.TheNorthernIrelandwasconnectedtotheminthe20thcenturyinapeacefulway.Totheircredit,thefourcountriesdoworktogetherinsomeareas.However,theyhavedevelopeddifferenteducationalandlegalsystemsaswellasdifferentfootballteams.Englandisthelargestofthefourcountriesandforconvenience,itisroughlydividedintothreezones.Whilesomeindustrialcitiesdon,thavehistoricaltreasures,Londonisaplacewhereculturalrelicscanbeseeneverywhere,asithasbeeninfluencedbydifferentinvaders.SoifyouaregoingtomakeatriptotheUKenjoyableandworthwhile,youmustkeepyoureyesopen.No.5 QuitSmoking（勸說說服）Itiseasyforyoutostartsmoking,butonceyoubecomeaddictedtoit,youmayfindithardforyoutoquitit.Firstly,youmaybecomephysicallyaddictedtonicotine.Secondly,youmaydevelopthehabitofsmokingandfinallybecomementallyaddictedtoit.Smokingmayhaveallkindsofharmfuleffectsonthehealthofthesmokersaswellasnon-smokersaroundthem.Itnotonlyaffectsyourphysicalfitness,butalsodoesharmtoyourheartandlungsandcausesavarietyofdiseases.Soitisimportantforonetoquitsmokingandliveahealthierlife.Togiveupsmoking,youshouldbewell-prepared.Dosomethingelseinsteadofsmokingacigarette.Remember,ifyoukeeptrying,youwillsucceedeventually.No.6 GlobalWarming（科技說明）Thereisnodoubtthattheearthisbecomingwarmerandthatitishumanactivitythathascausedthisglobalwarmingratherthanarandombutnaturalphenomenon.Allscientistssubscribetotheviewthattheincreaseintheearth,stemperatureisduetotheburningoffossilfuels.However,theattitudesofscientiststowardsthisrisearecompletelydifferent.Ontheonehand,somescientiststhinkthatthetrendwhichincreasesthetemperaturewouldbeacatastrophe.Ontheotherhand,Othersareopposedtothisviewandpredictthatanywarmingwillbemildwithfewbadenvironmentalconsequences,formorecarbondioxidewillmakeplantsgrowingquickerandencouragemoregreaterrangeofanimals.Greenhousegasescontinuetobuildupintheatmosphereandtheclimateisgoingtokeeponwarmingfordecadesorcenturies.Nooneknowstheexacteffectsofglobalwarming.Onlytimewilltell!（二）寫作常用語用結(jié)構(gòu):(1).利用語法結(jié)構(gòu)的變化來增強表達：.虛擬語氣IfonlyIwereaflyingbird!Butforyourhelp,wewouldn,thavefinishedtheworkaheadoftime.IfIhadnotdivedforPescawhenhelayunderwater,Ishouldneverhaveheardeventhenameofthewoman,whonowismywife.如果我沒有跳入水中去救Pesca,我就不會遇到我的妻子,甚至都不會聽說她的名字。.強調(diào)句型Itisfailurethatteachesusmuchmorethansuccess.It,swhenyousolvealargeproblemthatyoucanhaveapowerfuleffectontheworld.Sometimesitistheoneswhokeeptheircoolandworkthehardestwhogettheresults..倒裝Onlyafterhermothercametohelpherforthefirstfewmonthswassheallowedtobeginherproject.Hardly(Nosooner)hadsheseenthewhitewall,thewhitecurtainandthewhitequiltwhen(than)hertearsbegantowellup.NeverbeforehasheseenanybodywhocanplaytennisaswellasRobert.NotoncediditoccurtoMichaelthathecouldonedaybecomeatopstudentinhisclass.Herearesomesuggestionstohelpyoukeepfit.Thereontheothersideofthevalleywasalittlehouseanditswindowsweregolden.在山谷的另一頭有一個小房子，它的窗戶閃著金色的光。.問句與反問句：Haveyoueverwanttobeafamoussinger?Haveyoueverdreamedofplayinginfrontofalargeaudience?Tobehonest,Johnwasthepersonthatwas.Whyrideabike?Notonlyisbikinggoodexercise,butswitchingfromacartoabikealsoreducestheamountofpollutionintheair.Whobearstheburdenofresponsibilityforofferingassistance everyone.誰該承擔(dān)提供幫助的責(zé)任？我們每個人。Howwasitpossibletowalkforanhourthroughthewoodsandseenothingworthofnote?.。。。。when???..結(jié)構(gòu)ThewolfwasabouttocatchMacwhenhejumpedintothecarwithallhisstrength.Wewerevoyagingacrosstheoceanwhenacloudofsmokegoingupcaughtourattention.Hewaswalkingalongthestreetwhenalittleboycaughthisattention..雙重否定Wecan,tlivewithoutwater.Yetwithouttheairwecouldnotsurvivemorethanafewminutes.Nothingcouldbemoreimportant.Icouldn,tbehappier..with結(jié)構(gòu)Myfacebecameredwithembarrassment/anger..3Shewasshakingwithcold.Hisfingerswerenumbwithcold.Skillcomeswithpractice.熟能生巧Shecouldseeawonderfulhousewithshininggoldenwindowshighonanotherhill.Withencouragementandsupportofmyfriends,Ihaveovercomemanydifficultiesinmylife..比較結(jié)構(gòu)Themoreknowledgeyoupossess,theeasieritcanbetodealwithdifferentsituations.(2)利用修辭技巧來增加語言的渲染力：1遞進：Themoreknowledgeyoupossess,theeasieritcanbetodealwithdifferentsituations.Ididn,tknowmuchabouttheharmfuleffectofsmoking,Ididn,tknowitcoulddodamagetoyoulungs.Icertainlydidn,tknowtheirbabiesmaybeabnormal.NeitherdidIknowmycigaretteaffectednon-smokers.However,whatIdidknowwasthatmygirlfriendthoughtIsmeltterrible..排比Todoctors,heisamedicalcuriosity;Toscientist,heisapioneerinthestudyoftheuniverse.Somehaveevendescribedhimtheworld,sgreatestlivingphysicist.Loveisdear,loveisrare.Bylookingatus,listeningtous,respectingourinput,affirmingourvalue,givingusasenseofdignity,Papawasunquestionablyourmostinfluentialteacher.Wecanincreaseourknowledge,broadenthemind,enrichourlifeandmakeourselvesrelaxedbyreadingbooks..比喻Brickscoveredthegroundlikeredautumnleaves.Hardhillsofrockbecameriverofdirt.Thelightfromtheseanimalsmakethewaterlooklikeaskywithmovingstarsinit.Thewater,whichwascoldasiceandflowedfasterthanariver,wasaboveherknees.Astheoldsayinggoes,“Youcan,tjudgeabookbyitscover.”人不可貌相Lifeissometimeslikearacewithtracksstretchinglong.Agoodstateofmindcanactuallybringoutourbest.生活就像是一場賽跑，跑道很長。好心態(tài)才能讓我們把最好的發(fā)揮出來。ThereisanEnglishsaying:“Laughteristhebestmedicine.”Humoristhebestmedicinethatcreatesmiracle.Thebeautifulsceneryisafeastfortheeyes!Joinusandyouwon'tbedisappointed..對比Itwasthebestoftimes,itwastheworstoftimes,itwastheageofwisdom,itwastheageoffoolishness,itwastheepochofbelief,itwastheepochofincredulity,itwastheseasonofLight,itwastheseasonofDarkness,itwasthespringofhope,itwasthewinterofdespair..夸張Wehavewaited340yearsforourrights!…This'wait,hasalmostalwaysmeans‘never7Thereshesawawallofwaterthatwasquicklyadvancingtowardsher..重復(fù)Thevillagewellsroseandfell,roseandfell..擬人Thecitybegantobreatheagain.The19thcenturysawthewidespreaduseofelectricityandthebirth..情景烘托Shestoodbythewindowandlookedoutatagreycatwalkingalongagreyfenceinagreybackyard.Theroomisturningslowlyawayfromthemoon.Theparkwasfulloffreshnessandbeautyofspring,withthesunshiningandbirdssinging.Bathedinthesunshineanddelightedbyfantasticscenery,weheadedforthedestination.沐浴著陽光，在美景中心情愉快，我們朝著目的地出發(fā)。（三）好詞好句：.心理描寫：Ifonlyshecouldhaveadiamondring.（愿望）Shehadfalleninlovewithitatfirstsight.（愛情）Asdayspassed,Simongrewmoreandmorebitter.苦澀）Notadaypassedwithoutfeelingstressful.（壓力大）Johnwasoverjoyed/Johnwasthrilled.（喜悅）Jessiesmiledtoherself.（欣慰）Andywasshellshocked.（驚訝）Shewasovercomebyastrongfeelingofshame.^恥）Shecouldnotevencatchonelastglimpseofherhusband.遺憾）Shewasvisiblynervous.（緊張）Mypersonalcuriositywasaroused.（驚訝）Shesankontheground,knowingshewillneveragainhear“Mom”fromherson,slips.（悲痛）Seeingsuchextraordinarybeauty,Ithinkeverycellinmybodywokeup.（興奮）Myheartwasbeatingwildly-feltveryexposedinsuchdeepclearwater.（緊張）.外貌描寫：Hewastallandhandsomewithsmoothhairandadeepvoicealthoughhisfacialexpressionneverchanged.他雖然面部表情毫無變化，但是個子高大，相貌英俊，頭發(fā)平整，聲音低沉渾厚。Hehadalarge,squareface,withstronglypronouncedeyebrowsandcheekbones.他有一張寬大的方臉，眉毛很重，顴骨突出。Aswepulledoutofmydriveway,Iagaingazedathisbeautifulface.HislipswerefUllbutfirm,hisnosestraightandperfect,hishairsun-streakedblond當我們駛出車道時，我又一次凝視著他美麗的臉龐。他的嘴唇豐滿而結(jié)實，鼻子筆直完美，頭發(fā)金黃。Hereyesflashedathimbehindthescreenthatseparatedtheminthevisitingroom.Bothdimplesshowedonherpalefacewhenshesmiled.AyellowdresshidthethinnessofherbodyandmadeherlookeveryinchoflivingLilythatshewas.她的眼睛在那隔離了他們的屏幕后閃爍著，她一笑，蒼白的臉上就露出酒窩。黃色的裙子掩蓋了她身體的瘦弱，讓她看起來就是我那個充滿靈氣的女兒。Iflushedinembarrassment,asIbegantosaysomething,butJoshinterruptedme.我尷尬地臉紅了，我開始說些什么，但Josh打斷了我.Hiseyessparkledandhisfacewaslitup.Butwhattouchedmyheartmostwaswhenhewalkedbackovertothedugout.HelookedoveratmewiththebiggestsmileI,veeverseenandsaid,“Iloveyoutoo,Ter”他的眼睛閃閃發(fā)光，他的臉亮了起來。但是最觸動我的是當他走回到球員休息處時，用最燦爛的微笑看著我說：“我也愛你，Ter”“Yes,youwillallbesearchingforyourfutureprofessions”,shesaidwithaglowonherface-asthoughthiswasthebestthingshedidinherclassroomeveryyear.（她說著，滿面紅光。）glow：vi，發(fā)光，灼熱；臉紅；洋溢，喜形于色Hisfaceglowedwithdelight.他高興得滿面通紅。Iwillfeelaglowjustthinkingofyou...我一想到你就會感到一陣暖意。"It'seasy,justgolikethis,”Mikeassuredhimashegrinnedfromeartoear,displayingthebrightsmilethatbecamehistrademark.很簡單，就這樣走吧，”邁克向他保證，他咧開嘴，露出了他那標志性的燦爛的笑容。（smilefromeartoear咧著嘴笑）ThetearsstartedtodryandasmilecametomyfaceasIpicturedPaulstillconceiving,stillbelievingandstillachieving,armedwithhisnewlydevelopedcuriosityandself-esteem.當我想象著Paul帶著那份新興的好奇心和自尊，心中仍然有理想，仍然有信念，仍然有作為的時候，我的淚水開始干了，我的臉上露出了笑容。Karenlookedoutintothefacesoftheyoungaudience.TearsrolleddowntheircheeksastheyrememberedKyle.Karen向年輕觀眾的臉望去。當他們想起Kyle時，眼淚順著臉頰滾落下來。Hiseyesshiftedtowardsme.Theylookedtired,andfullofpain—painthatIhadneverseen,ormaybethatIhadignored.Ifeltalumpforminginmythroatashecontinuedtocry.Slowly,thatlumpturnedtotears,andtheystartedpouringfrommyeyes.他的目光轉(zhuǎn)向了我，那眼神看起來很疲憊，充滿了我從未見過的或者我忽略了的疼痛。當他繼續(xù)哭的時候，我感到喉嚨有腫塊，慢慢地，那腫塊變成了眼淚，開始從我的眼中涌出。Scoot,"hesaidtomewithawink,“Andcomeandseemewhenyougetback”"快去吧，"他對我眨眨眼說道，“回來后去找我。”Theylookedkindoflikedeerinheadlights,standingoutsidethedoor,handsjammedinpockets,mouthhalf-open.他們看上去有點像車燈前忐忑的小鹿，站在門外，雙手插在口袋里，半張著嘴。.環(huán)境描寫：Thelakesshonelikeglassinthesettingsunandlookwonderful.Inthevalleyscolourfulbutterfliesflewaroundusandwesawmanyyaksandsheepeatinggreengrass.Warmsunshinepouredoverthelittlebush.Thegardenlooksbeautifulwhenalltheplantsareinflower.GreyishBlackcloudscoveredthesky.Atmidnighttheskybecameclearerandthestarsgrewbrighter.Itwassoquiet.Therewasalmostnowind一onlytheflamesofourfireforcompany.6Themoonwatchedfromtheskybehindthecloudasthestarsblinkedtheireyesinfatigue.Everythingisinsleep,notasinglesoundnorasinglemovementcanbeseenorheard.Likeadimlamp,themoonshoneformabove.Thestarstwinkletheireyeswithcuriosity.There'snotasinglesound,eventhecricketsareasleep.Onlythefirefliesarestillawake,carefullyweavingapictureinthenightskywiththeirgentlestrokes.Springiscoming.Avarietyofflowerscomeouttoshowtheirbeautyandbringusfragrance.Itisafeastforoureyesandsouls.Theyellowgrasssuddenlyturnsgreen.Theyoungleavesgrowonthebranches.Theswallowsflybackhomewiththegreetingofspring.ThefirstthingIbecameawareofwasallthevividcolourssurroundingme-purples,reds,oranges,yellows,bluesandgreens.Thecoralswerefantastic-theywereshapedlikefans,plates,brains,lace,mushrooms,thebranchesoftreesandthehornsofdeer..動作與動態(tài)場景描寫：Shesteppedback,appearingsurprisedandputupherhandsasifindefence.（戒備）Exhausted,Islidintobedandfellfastasleep.（疲勞）Theirpanicwasrisingandtheycouldfeeltheirheatbeatingmoreandmorewildly./Stillshiveringalloverwithfear,hewasscaredstiffwhenhethoughtofthedeath.害怕）Whenthemotherkissedthebabyonthecheek,hisfacebeamedandhisbrightsmilelituptheroom（.開心）Heswallowedhissaliva,staringathisgrandmaandmumbling,“Didyoureallyhavelunch?”“Ofcourse."Hisgrandmakepthereyeslowerandchewedapieceofradishslowly.Veryquickly,thelittleboywolfeddownthemeal.（饑餓）Idrovealongthesameway,passingthesamebuildings,thesameneighbourhoodandeventhesamefurnitureshop,allofwhichcondemnedmetothedeepregret.（悔恨）Jackwipedthecoldsweatfromhisbrow.Hatredovercamehimoutofthedepthofhisheart.（仇恨）Jacksatup,feelingwarmatthememoryofthelilyhisdaughterhadbroughthim.Shehadhuggedtheclaypotbeforesheletgoofit.Thenshesaid,“"Daddy,thisisme.EverytimeyouseethislilythinkofmeforIamyourLily.”.（親情）Shelookedatherselfinthemirrorandsighed,wonderingwhyherboyfrienddidn,treplytothelettershehadpostedtheweekbefore.Shesmoothedherhairdownwithawetcomb,wipedhershoeswithawetclothandthoughtaboutthebeautifuldayswithhim.Withallthesedone,shefinallymadeadecision.Twohourslater,shewasonthetraintohiscity,feelingbothnervousandexcited.（用動詞表達忐忑不安的心情）Havingheardwolveshowlingintheforest,Lalaacceleratedherwalkupthepathtothecavesfearingthattheremightbewildbeastslyinginwaitforher.（害怕）Shehadnomanwithhisspeartoprotecthershehadalmostreachedherdestinationwhenadelicioussmellarrestedherprogressandshestopped.…Hersensebecamedizzywithhunger.（饑餓）Abruptlyshesatdown,onlytobescoopedupbyherlaughing,shoutingsisterLuna.（利用動詞描寫人物性格）Thecaptainsawawhitetowerofwater,sohighthathecouldn,tbelievehiseyes,advancingtowardsthem,itracedtomeettheship.Theshipjumped.Withatearingcrash,tonsofwater7felluponthedeck,asthoughtheshippassedunderawaterfall.Thentherewasnowind,notabreath.Theunexpectedsilencemadehimfeeluncomfortable.Hewaslisteningforthefirstsoundsofreturningwindwhentheroarofthewindsdrewnearfast.Thehurricane,withitspowertosinktheshipandtodestroystrongwalls,hadfoundthislittleshipinitspath.（利用動詞描寫快速變化的場景、）Y人生感悟：Inneremptinesscomesfromalackofonethingonly:alackofawarenessoflove.Weliveinauniverseoflove,whichisalwaysavailabletouseach,andyouwon,tfeelemptyinsideifyouknowhowtoopenyourselftothatlove.Whateverdifficultieswearefacing,weshouldnotbeaf