2015年英語六級作文寫作三段式標(biāo)準(zhǔn)規(guī)定模板

2014年英語六級作文經(jīng)典通用三段式模板，考生可參考借鑒。第一段Iassumethatyouarefamiliarwiththewordsofsb,whooncesaid,“諺語.”Definitely,對諺語的解釋.（記得最好用notonly??butalso…）Itisobviousthat中心句第二段Simpleassb’sremarkmaysound,itcontainsabundantlifephilosophyandinformsusofthesignificanceofsth.whydoessthplayanindispensableroleinourlife?sthenablesustoachieveourobjectivesmoresmoothlyandrealizeourdreamsmorerapidly.themore…themore…（自己擴(kuò)展一句）Quiteafewexamplescanbegiventoprovetheimportanceofsth,however,Icanthinkofnobetterillustrationthanthefollowingone:howcould例子人物do…ifhefailedtodosth?（反問句，如果誰不做sth他就不可能成功之類的）第三段Frommyperspective,atnotimeshouldweignoretheimportanceofsth.Accordingly,weshouldandalwaysbearinmindthatsthcan??…（我們應(yīng)該怎么樣并且記住sth可以怎么樣）”Afamousphilosopheralsooncesaid.大學(xué)英語六級作文實(shí)例講析(1)Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitleMyViewonPlasticSurgery.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.越來越多的人接受整容手術(shù)我的看法及理由結(jié)論題目分析：觀點(diǎn)論證型作文要求對某一問題發(fā)表自己的看法。通常要在首段提出話題，以及關(guān)于此話題不同的反應(yīng)，并表明自己的觀點(diǎn)，接下來要在主題段落里論述理由，最后在結(jié)尾重申一下自己的觀點(diǎn)。參考范文：MyViewonPlasticSurgeryInrecentyears,moreandmorepeople,especiallysomeyounggirlschoosetotakeplasticsurgeries.Somepeoplearguethatthiskindofsurgerycanimproveone’sappearance,thussecureagoodjob.Othersholdadifferentopinion,theyconsiderplasticsurgeryasawasteofmoney.Personally,Iagreewiththelatter.Firstly,beautyisonlyskin-deep,asthesayinggoes,virtueismoreimportantthanappearance.Plasticsurgerycannotimproveone’scharacter.Whodoyouthinkismorepopular,anordinarygirlwithcharmingpersonality,orabeautifulgirlwitharrogantmanner?Secondly,successreliesonone’sabilitiesbutnotappearance.Somepeople,especiallyyounggirlsdreamtofindagoodjobaftertakingplasticsurgery.Forexample,ittakesoneatleast30,000Yuantohavedoubleeyelid.Fourthly,peoplehavetobeartherisksofanunsuccessfulsurgerywhichwillbealifelongpain.Allinall,itisnotadvisableforpeopletotakeplasticsurgeries.Wecangetwhatwewantbyimprovingourinnerqualities,suchasourpersonalityandability,andthereisnoneedtoendurethepainsandeconomiclossofaplasticsurgery.好詞佳句總結(jié)：Beautyisonlyskin-deep,asthesayinggoes就像俗語所說的那樣，外在美不過是表面現(xiàn)象beartherisks承擔(dān)風(fēng)險(xiǎn)competentandwell-trainedpeople有真才實(shí)學(xué)的人arrogant傲慢的，自大的must作名詞使用e.g.Hisnewnovelisamustforallloversofcrimefiction大學(xué)英語六級作文實(shí)例講析(2)Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitlePopulationBurden.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.人口老齡化問題正困擾著中國。人口老齡化帶來的問題。應(yīng)采取怎樣的措施，談?wù)勛约旱挠^點(diǎn)。題目分析：在世界人口走向老齡化和發(fā)達(dá)國家人口老齡化發(fā)展的同時(shí)，中國人口老齡化也在加劇。人口老齡化的產(chǎn)生，正是社會(huì)進(jìn)步、經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展的結(jié)果。參考范文：范文的高級詞匯較多，童鞋們根據(jù)自身實(shí)際情況來選擇掌握哈~PopulationBurdenManycountrieswillexperienceagingpopulationsinthenextcenturybecauseofdecliningbirthandmortalityrates.Chinawillsoonjointheirranks.Asfortheissueofaging,itssituationhasbeengrowingincreasinglysevereinspiteofthefactmostpeoplearestillignorantoftheproblemsitbringsabout.Firstly,withfamiliesbecomingsmallerandlivingpaceescalating,itisevengraverforfamiliestocareforagedmembersadequately.Secondly,agingcausesarelativedeclineinworkingforceinthatfewerpeoplehavetosupporttheincreasingagedpeople.Consequently,theproductivityofthewholesocietyisaffectedtosomeextent.Thirdlyandmostimportantly,theagingofpopulationinChinaresulted

fromthesuccessfulimplementationoffamilyplanninghasnotbeensynchronizedwithnationaleconomicprogress.Therapidityofthepopulation'saginghasmadeitmoreurgentfortheadoptionofcountermeasures.Nodoubttheykeyistobuildasolideconomicfoundation.Meanwhile,importanceshallbeattachedtooverallsocialprogressbychangingthebackwardsituationinsocialsecurity,welfareandservice.What'smore,familycareandcommunityservicesshallalsobeencouraged.好詞佳句總結(jié)：agingpopulation老年人口birthrate出生率mortalityrate死亡率ignorantof不知道不懂graver更嚴(yán)重的e.g.Thisheavyraincouldhavegraveconsequences.這場大雨會(huì)造成嚴(yán)重后果。adequately充分地productivity生產(chǎn)力implementation執(zhí)行familyplanning計(jì)劃生育rapidity速度在這用rapidity比speed好~穩(wěn)固的經(jīng)濟(jì)基礎(chǔ)countermeasure對策穩(wěn)固的經(jīng)濟(jì)基礎(chǔ)solideconomicfoundationPopulationoldage人口老齡化Populationburden人口負(fù)擔(dān)Oldagesocialsecurity老年社會(huì)保障Sustainabledevelopment可持續(xù)發(fā)展大學(xué)英語六級作文實(shí)例講析(3)Howtoimprovestudent'smentalhealth、大學(xué)生的心理健康十分重要、因此，學(xué)校可以、我們自己應(yīng)當(dāng)題目分析：學(xué)生的心理健康是近年來被熱議的話題之一，屬于經(jīng)典的問題解決型，故不外乎采用舉例子，作比較，分類別，列數(shù)字，打比方等方式討論。參考范文：Students'mentalhealthhasbeenplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinourday-to-daylife.Indeed,itiswidelyacceptedthatithasgainedgrowingpopularityamongpersonsinallwalksoflife.Thereisageneraldiscussiontodayabouttheissueofdisorderinbrains.Obviously,itisnecessarythateffectiveactionsshouldbetakentopreventproblems.Authoritiesinuniversitiesplayacriticalroleinthesituation.Tobegin

strong,butmayhaveawith,schools,suchascollegesoruniversities,canprovidechancesfortheyoungmentoeasetheirattention.What'smore,somearephysicallypsychologicalproblemsareabletobringpotentialthreats.Teacheschancetofindtheminadvance.Besides,specialistsinthisfieldaretoberequiredtomakefullpreparationforcasesintime.Facingthecrisis,expertscandealwithitinaprofessionalway,whichmeanstheyhavemoreorbetteropportunitiestosaveusthanothers.（學(xué)校strong,butmayhaveaFromthefactorsmentionedabove,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthatwecanfreeourselvesfrommentalillnessbytakingcertainprecautions.Forexample,ifyouhavepainsorpuzzlesinmind,findingafriendtoexpresstheseisagoodwaytoreleasepressure.Certainly,thereislittledoubtthatfurtherattentionwillbepaidtotheissue.（我們）ChanceO總結(jié)：potentialthreats潛在威脅ease減輕，舒緩psychologicalproblems心理問題precaution預(yù)防措施releasepressure釋放壓力playanimportant/criticalroleinsthitiswidelyacceptedthatTobeginwith,What'smore,Besides,Fromthefactorsmentionedabovedrawtheconclusionthat等等均為經(jīng)典模板句式大學(xué)英語六級寫作常見錯(cuò)誤分析大家在英語六級寫作時(shí)難免會(huì)犯一些錯(cuò)誤，下面看小編為大家整理的大學(xué)英語六級寫作常見錯(cuò)誤分析，供各位參考。語法錯(cuò)誤(一)句子結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤主從句疊置Therearemoreandmorestudentswholiketousethecomputer./Moreandmorestudentsliketousethecomputer.Therearestillmanyproblemsthatshouldbenotedandresolved./Manyproblemsstillshouldbenotedandresolved.簡單句疊置Ilikechattingonlineverymuch,soIgotothenetbaralmosteveryweekend./Ilikechattingonlineverymuch.Igotothenetbaralmosteveryweekend.從句疊置Itisknowntoallthatcomputersplayanimportantroleinmanyfieldsofourlife./Asisknowntoall,computersplayanimportantroleinmanyfieldsofourlife.句子成分缺失Ifweworkhard,wewillsurelybesuccessful./Workinghard,wewillsurelybesuccessful.語序錯(cuò)誤1)Whydocollegestudentsspendmoreandmoretimeonthecomputer?1)Ioftenwonderwheretheyhavegottheirmoney.(二)動(dòng)詞形式錯(cuò)誤時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤ManypeoplethinkthattheInternetwillbemoreusefulinthefuture.語態(tài)形式錯(cuò)誤Ihavebeenexcitedseveraldaysatthenewsthatyouwillcomehere.Mostofthestudentsaresatisfiedwiththeserviceinthedininghall.單復(fù)數(shù)形式錯(cuò)誤Wisemenseekopportunitiesratherthanwaitforthem./Awisemanseeksopportunitiesratherthanwaitforthem.Somepeopleareafraidthatcomputersmaycontrolmeninthefuture.非謂語動(dòng)詞形式錯(cuò)誤Letmesay“hello”toyouonbehalfofeveryone.Doingexerciseinthemorningisgoodforone’shealth.Havingstudiedinourschoolfor3years,Ifindthatthecanteenservicehas

changedalot.(三)代詞錯(cuò)誤Wecanusecomputersindoingeverythingwelike.Acollegestudentshouldbeabletodohiswashingonhisown.(四)冠詞錯(cuò)誤A/Thehorseisausefulanimal.TheexamwillbeheldinDecember,2004.(五)詞性錯(cuò)誤Iwishyoucanconsidermysuggestions.Ifapersonwantstosucceed,hemustlearntoenduresufferingssetbacks.用詞錯(cuò)誤Studentsmustknowhowtooperateacomputer./Studentsmustknowhowtoworkonacomputer.PeoplecanbeexposedtomanynewthingsontheInternet./PeoplecanlearnmanynewthingsontheInternet.Thepurposeofthisletteristoexpresssomeopinionsontheserviceintheandthedininghall./Thepurposeofthisletteristomakesomecomplaintsaboutserviceinthedininghall.andthe表達(dá)習(xí)慣錯(cuò)誤Whatgeneratedsolargeachange?/Whyistheresolargeachange?Now6000yuanisenoughforyoutobuyaP4computer./NowyoucanbuyaP4computerfor6000yuan.Inaroomoftenlive6-8students.Ithinktherearethreereasonsforthisgreatchange.Thepricesofthefoodaretoohigh./Thefoodistooexpensive.Thereasonforthisisthatsomepeoplewanttoearnplentyofmoneywithoutworkinghard./Thisisbecausesomepeoplewanttoearnplentyofmoneywithoutworkinghard.標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫錯(cuò)誤However,everycoinhastwosides.Ithinkthesurroundingsinourcanteenarethebestamongalluniversities.Themanwasracingdownthestreetbecausehewaslatefortheclass.AtlastIwanttoletyouknowthatIloveouruniversityverymuch.Myfavoritesportsareswimming,jogging,mountaineeringandplayingtabletennis.ThebestEnglishfilminmyeyesisForrestGump.withDon'twithDon't英語六級作文如何寫好主題句？主題句(topicsentence)是表達(dá)段落主題的句子。它用以概括段落大意，要求全段其他文字都圍繞它展開。請看下例：Mymotherhaspassedalongtomecertainrulesforgettingalongwithothers.Don'targuewithparents;theywillthinkyoudon'tlovethem.Don'targuechildren;theywillthinkthemselvesvictimized.Don'targuewithspouses;theywillthinkyouareatiresomemate.Don'targuewithstrangers;theywillthinkyouarenotfriendly.Mymother'srules,infact,canbesummedupintwowords:argue.主題句中提出的"certainrules"指的是什么?展開句中通過四個(gè)"Don'targue--"逐一加以交代。從結(jié)構(gòu)來看，這是一個(gè)比較典型的段落，它包括了主題句，推展句和結(jié)論句（即加以交代。從結(jié)構(gòu)來看，這是一個(gè)比較典型的段落，它包括了主題句，推展句和結(jié)論句本段中的末句）。主題句的位置主題句通常放在段落的開端，其特點(diǎn)是開門見山地?cái)[出問題，然后加以詳細(xì)說明。其作用是使文章的結(jié)構(gòu)更清晰，更具說服力，便于讀者迅速地把握主題和想象全段的內(nèi)容。主題句可以放在段中起到承上啟下的作用，或放在段尾起概括全段的作用。但初學(xué)者比較難于掌握，因而在六級考試中，考生應(yīng)盡量采用將主題句放在段落開頭的寫作手法。例1:Ourlifetodaydependsverymuchonenergy.Intownsandinvillages,onfarmsandinfactories,machineshavemadelifeeasierthanitusedtobe.Themachinesuseenergy,andenergyisneededforheating,lighting,communications,TOC\o"1-5"\h\zcarryinggoods--everything.Factoriesandindustrialplantsuseagreatdealofenergytomakethethingsthatweuseandbuyandsell.，這段文字所講的主要是能源問題。第一句就概括性地提出“我們目前的生活很大程度上依賴于能源”。而隨后出現(xiàn)的三句都是具體事例，對第一句進(jìn)行說明和論述。我們可以斷定第一句為該段的主題句（斜體部分）。例2:（主題句）Noonecanavoidbeinginfluencedbyadvertisements.（推展句1）Muchaswemayprideourselvesonourgoodtaste,wearenolongerfreeto推展句choosethethingswewant,foradvertisingexertsasubtleinfluenceonus.（2）Intheireffortstopersuadeustobuythisorthatproduct,advertisershavemadeaclosestudyofhumannatureandhaveclassifiedallourlittleweakness.推展句以上這段由三句話組成。第一句是主題句，直截了當(dāng)指出無人不受廣告影響這個(gè)主題,接著列舉兩個(gè)推展句對其補(bǔ)充和支持，指出我們已無法自由選擇所需的商品，理由是廣告商已仔細(xì)研究了我們的心理，并完全掌握了我們的弱點(diǎn)。句子銜接自然，步步緊扣主題。如何寫好主題句中的關(guān)鍵詞段落的主題句對主題的限定主要是通過句中的關(guān)鍵詞來表現(xiàn)的。關(guān)鍵詞要盡量寫得具體些。對“具體”的要求包括兩個(gè)方面：一是要具體到能控制和限制段落的發(fā)展;二是要具體到能說明段落發(fā)展的方法。準(zhǔn)確地把握關(guān)鍵詞是清楚地表達(dá)段落主題、寫好段落主題句的重要前提之一。在上面的例1，例2中，主題句的關(guān)鍵詞分別為：dependsverymuchonenergy;noonecanavoidbeinginfluenced.我們再看下列例句：原句1:Hecanfixabicyclehimself.斜體部分應(yīng)為主題句中的關(guān)鍵詞。但它只是限制了段落發(fā)展的部分內(nèi)容，并沒有告訴讀者該用哪種方法展開，是用因果關(guān)系法還是用分類法?修正：Hecanfixabicyclehimselfinseveralsimplesteps.的修正：Thereare