周測講評課-正反觀點類作文

1、作文寫作技巧及訓練議論文正反觀點對比Teaching aims:At the end of this class, the students will:1. Master the skills of write a argumentativewriting.2. Learn how to make a perfect writing by using some beautiful sentences 假如你事實李華，你班同學最近開展了一場討論，主題是：高三學生要不要參加體育鍛煉，請根據(jù)下面所提供的信息，寫一篇短文，介紹討論的情況，并發(fā)表自己的觀點比例你的觀點觀點支持反對主要理由應該每天進行體育

2、鍛煉做早操，打乒乓球，打籃球，但時間不要過鍛煉能增強質(zhì)減少疾病鍛煉能使大腦休息，使學習效果更好鍛煉浪費時間鍛煉使人疲勞鍛煉以后很興奮，較長時間不能學習鍛煉中可能受傷1.審 題 文 體：時 態(tài)：內(nèi)容要點： 議論文 一般現(xiàn)在時1.應該每天進行體育鍛煉2.做運動，但時間不要過3.鍛煉能增強質(zhì)減少疾病4.鍛煉能使大腦休息5.鍛煉浪費時間;使人疲勞6.鍛煉以后很興奮，較長時間不能學習 7.鍛煉中可能受傷8個人觀點 文章結(jié)構(gòu)正反觀點對比類的文章提出問題不同觀點對比說明自己觀點文章結(jié)構(gòu)高三學生要不要參加體育鍛煉. 對這個問題有兩種態(tài)度. (2) 觀點一: 支持(3)觀點二: 反對(4)我的觀點: 提出問題不

3、同觀點對比說明自己觀點實 戰(zhàn) 演 練 例：作為一個中學生, 你肯定經(jīng)歷過多次考試, 體驗過成功, 也遭遇過失敗. 請你根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,簡要概述中學生普遍存在的對考試失敗的兩種態(tài)度, 并結(jié)合自身實際, 說明你的觀點.態(tài)度一: 當考試結(jié)果不盡人意時, 情緒低落, 喪失信心, 不再繼續(xù)努力.態(tài)度二: 當考試失敗時, 分析找出失敗的原因, 鼓勵自己, 增強自信, 避免再犯同樣的錯。你的觀點: 失敗乃成功之母, 審題體裁:時態(tài):人稱:要點: 議論文現(xiàn)在時 第一人稱(1) 我們中學生經(jīng)歷過多次考試, 體驗過成功, 也遭遇過失敗. (2) 態(tài)度一: 當考試結(jié)果不盡人意時, 情緒低落, 喪失信心, 不再繼續(xù)努力

4、.(3)態(tài)度二: 當考試失敗時, 分析找出失敗的原因, 鼓勵自己, 增強自信, 避免再犯同樣的錯。(4)我的觀點: 失敗乃成功之母, 文章結(jié)構(gòu)正反觀點對比類的文章提出問題不同觀點對比說明自己觀點文章結(jié)構(gòu)我們中學生經(jīng)歷過多次考試, 體驗過成功, 也遭遇過失敗. 對考試失敗大致有兩種態(tài)度. (2) 態(tài)度一: 當考試結(jié)果不盡人意時, 情緒低落, 喪失信心, 不再繼續(xù)努力.(3)態(tài)度二: 當考試失敗時, 分析找出失敗的原因, 鼓勵自己, 增強自信, 避免再犯同樣的錯。(4)我的觀點: 失敗乃成功之母, 提出問題不同觀點對比說明自己觀點如 何 寫？ 揣測閱卷老師的心理 漂漂亮亮（21-25）規(guī)規(guī)矩矩（1

5、6-20）一般一般（11-15）馬馬虎虎（6-10）一塌糊涂（0-5）5檔1.卷面（書寫、字數(shù)）（2）3段（1）4段2.段落結(jié)構(gòu)介紹主題正方觀點反方觀點自己觀點反方觀點介紹主題與正方觀點自己觀點3.內(nèi)容（1）首段、尾段；段首、段尾（3）語言運用是否連貫得體，連接詞使用是否恰當（2）要點是否齊全（4）有無加分句型（所謂的亮點句子）回顧自己作品、總結(jié)得與失得：1、結(jié)構(gòu)把握比較到位2、要點基本齊全3、連接詞使用有體現(xiàn)優(yōu) 勢 繼 續(xù) 保 持失：1、書寫2、首段、尾段3、連接詞使用過于固化4、基本功不扎實，語言運用不夠地道共 同 尋 找 對 策5、缺乏亮點句型回 歸 考 題1.審 題 文 體：時 態(tài)：內(nèi)

6、容要點： 議論文 一般現(xiàn)在時1.應該每天進行體育鍛煉2.做運動，但時間不要過3.鍛煉能增強質(zhì)減少疾病4.鍛煉能使大腦休息5.鍛煉浪費時間;使人疲勞6.鍛煉以后很興奮，較長時間不能學習 7.鍛煉中可能受傷8個人觀點 文章結(jié)構(gòu)正反觀點對比類的文章提出問題不同觀點對比說明自己觀點文章結(jié)構(gòu)高三學生要不要參加體育鍛煉. 對這個問題有兩種態(tài)度. (2) 態(tài)度一: 支持(3)態(tài)度二: 反對(4)我的觀點: 提出問題不同觀點對比說明自己觀點2.作文結(jié)構(gòu)1.have had a discussion about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical

7、exercises. As we know, every coin has two coins./Different students have different ideas .2.55%of the students think.such as(舉例).（原因）.3.On the other hand,45% of the students believe.(原因）.4.In my opinion, I prefer to 3.內(nèi)容中要用的關(guān)鍵詞語體育鍛煉做早操增強體質(zhì)減少疾病休息學習有效果浪費時間投入學習受傷take exercisesdo morning exercisesbuild

8、up the bodyreduce the diseasehave a reststudy more effectivelya waste of time pay attention to studybe hurt Recently , we have had a discussion about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercises. As we know, every coin has two sides. 55%of the students think they should take all kinds

9、 of exercises every day ,such as doing morning exercises, playing table tennis and playing basketball, but not spend too much time on them . As a proverb says ,“all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. ” Firstly, exercise builds up their body and reduce lots of diseases. Secondly, sports let them

10、 have a good rest so that their study will be more effective. On the contrary, 45% of the students believe taking exercise is a waste of time and tiring. Besides, after taking exercise, they are too excited for a long time to pay attention to their lessons. In addition, its possible to be hurt in sp

11、orts.In my opinion, I prefer to take proper exercises in my spare time. As a student, although the study is very important, nothing is more important than having a healthy body. Therefore, it is necessary for us to take proper exercises in my spare time 知 識 積 累介紹討論的主題(開頭句)：我們舉行了一場討論，討論內(nèi)容是學生是否可以 We h

12、ad a discussion about whether students should be allowed to 我們已經(jīng)作了一個調(diào)查，調(diào)查內(nèi)容是學生是否可以 Weve had a survey on whether students should be allowed to 我寫信是要告訴你我們的一場討論，討論內(nèi)容是否可以 Im writing to tell you about a discussion we have had about whether students should be allowed to過渡句Opinions are divided on this issu

13、e. Opinions are mainly divided into two groups.Different people, however, have different opinions on this matter. Different people, however, think quite differently on this matter. 在這個問題上大家意見有分歧。主要有兩種不同意見。然而，在這件事上不同的人有不同的看法。介紹正方觀點：Sixty percent of the students are for the idea. Sixty percent of the

14、students think it necessary toSome people think that according to them, all of us should.Some believe thatSome people are in favor of the opinion that 進一步介紹正方觀點Whats more, we can as well as Besides, its , which 介紹反方觀點However, of the students thinkOn the contrary, of the students thinkHowever, others

15、 have different opinions.However，others have just the opposite opinion. They think thatOthers argue that In their opinion,進一步介紹反方觀點Whats worseWhats moreIn addition, First, Second, Third, 本人觀點：As far as I am concerned, . (In my opinion, .; Its my opinion that) For one reason,. For another reason In a

16、 word,.Only throughcan we have a bright future.常見模板1 _ had a discussion about whether_. Opinions are divided on this issue. _of the students think _ should _. _. Whats more, _. On the contrary, _ of the students think _ shouldnt _. Whats worse, _. As far as I am concerned,.開頭：Should . ? Opinions are

17、 divided on the question. 觀點陳述1：Some of us think that The reason is that.Besides, . (Some are against the view that.)觀點陳述2：(However/On the other hand) others have just the opposite opinion. They think thatWhats more,(Some are in favor of the view that.)常見模板2Now, its your time!Lets have an exercise!

18、例：作為一個中學生, 你肯定經(jīng)歷過多次考試, 體驗過成功, 也遭遇過失敗. 請你根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,簡要概述中學生普遍存在的對考試失敗的兩種態(tài)度, 并結(jié)合自身實際, 說明你的觀點.態(tài)度一: 當考試結(jié)果不盡人意時, 情緒低落, 喪失信心, 不再繼續(xù)努力.態(tài)度二: 當考試失敗時, 分析找出失敗的原因, 鼓勵自己, 增強自信, 避免再犯同樣的錯。你的觀點: 失敗乃成功之母, 審題體裁:時態(tài):人稱:要點: 議論文現(xiàn)在時 第一人稱(1) 我們中學生經(jīng)歷過多次考試, 體驗過成功, 也遭遇過失敗. (2) 態(tài)度一: 當考試結(jié)果不盡人意時, 情緒低落, 喪失信心, 不再繼續(xù)努力.(3)態(tài)度二: 當考試失敗時, 分析

19、找出失敗的原因, 鼓勵自己, 增強自信, 避免再犯同樣的錯。(4)我的觀點: 失敗乃成功之母, 文章結(jié)構(gòu)正反觀點對比類的文章提出問題觀點對比不同說明自己觀點文章結(jié)構(gòu)我們中學生經(jīng)歷過多次考試, 體驗過成功, 也遭遇過失敗. 對考試失敗大致有兩種態(tài)度. (2) 態(tài)度一: 當考試結(jié)果不盡人意時, 情緒低落, 喪失信心, 不再繼續(xù)努力.(3)態(tài)度二: 當考試失敗時, 分析找出失敗的原因, 鼓勵自己, 增強自信, 避免再犯同樣的錯。(4)我的觀點: 失敗乃成功之母, 提出問題不同觀點對比說明自己觀點句型短語(1) 我們中學生經(jīng)歷過多次考試, 體驗過成功, 也遭遇過失敗. 對考試失敗大致有兩種態(tài)度.hav

20、e/take many tests or exams do well in the exams achieve success suffer from failure, fail (in) the examstake different attitudes towardsthere be different attitudes towards句型短語(2) 態(tài)度一: 當考試結(jié)果不盡人意時, 情緒低落, 喪失信心, 不再繼續(xù)努力.be in low spirits have passive attitudesno longer study hard ; no longer try ones be

21、st lose heart/confidence(3)態(tài)度二: 當考試失敗時, 分析找出失敗的原因, 鼓勵自己, 增強自信, 避免再犯同樣的錯。find out/ analyze the causes, encourage oneselfhave/take active attitudesbuild up self-confidence, avoid making the same mistake(4)你的觀點: 失敗乃成功之母, 句型短語in my view / opinion, As for me, As far as I am concerned,I agree withFailure

22、is the mother of success. 表示不同觀點的套語總起: Different people hold different opinions. People have taken different attitudes towards People have different opinions on this problem. 不同觀點之間的銜接: On the contrary, others hold a different view. However, each coin has two sides. But people object that .However, on the other hand,on the contrary,be different from , 比較、對比 We middle school students have had manytests or exams and have both achieved successand suffered from failure, but different studentstake different attitude