浙江英語新題型讀后續(xù)寫與概要寫作練習(xí)及答案

1、寫作是四項語文技能中不可分割的一個重要局部，更是語言生成能力的重要表現(xiàn)形式。該局部要求考生考生根據(jù)題示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)?？忌鷳?yīng)能：(1)準(zhǔn)確使用語法和詞匯語言的準(zhǔn)確性是寫作中不可無視的一個重要方面，因為它直接或 間接地影響到信息的準(zhǔn)確傳輸。應(yīng)用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的準(zhǔn)確程度是寫 作局部評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中的一項重要內(nèi)容。(2)使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地表達(dá)自己的意思 任何一篇文章都需要有一個主題,作者應(yīng)該圍繞該主題，借助一些 句型、詞組等的支持，清楚、連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想。 浙江卷寫作第二節(jié)，讀后續(xù)寫或概要寫作，兩種形式在不同考次不定期交替使用。讀后續(xù)寫。提供一段350詞以內(nèi)的語言材料，要求考生依據(jù)該材料

2、內(nèi)容、所給段落開頭語和所標(biāo)示關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行續(xù)寫150詞左右，將其開展成一篇與給定材料有邏輯銜接、情節(jié)和結(jié)構(gòu)完整的短文。閱卷時將主要考慮以下內(nèi)容：1.與所給短文及段落開頭語的銜接程度；2.內(nèi)容的豐富性和對所給關(guān)鍵詞語的覆蓋情況；3.應(yīng)用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性；4.上下文的連貫性。概要寫作。提供一篇350詞以內(nèi)的短文，要求考生基于該短文寫出一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。閱卷時主要考慮以下內(nèi)容：1.對原文要點的理解和呈現(xiàn)情況；2.應(yīng)用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的準(zhǔn)確性；3.上下文的連貫性；4.對各要點表達(dá)的獨立性情況。樣題第二節(jié):讀后續(xù)寫總分值25分閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。A

3、 funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank, he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car. He tried again and again but couldnt get the car moving. Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young ma

4、n who looked worried. Arthur stopped and asked,“It looks likeyouve got a problem, Arthur said.“Im afraid so. Im in a big hurry and I cant start my car. “Is there something I can do to help? Arthur asked. The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and then said， Thanks. If youre sure

5、it wouldnt be too much trouble，you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.“No trouble at all. Id be glad to help.The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat. After placing it on the ground, he turned to get the other one. Just asArthur picked up the first suitcase a

6、nd started walking, he heard the loug noise of an alarm.It was from the bank. There had been a robbery (搶劫)!Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before. Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions. Cars stopped and the passengers joined the

7、crowd in front of the bank. People asked each other, “What happened？But everyone had a different answer.Arthur，still carrying the suitcase, turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him.She looked at the suitcase and then at him. Arthur was surprised. “Why is she l

8、ooking at me like that? He thought.“The suitcase！She thinks Im the bank thief!Arthur looked around at the crowd of people. He became frightened, and without another thought, he started to run.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3.續(xù)寫局部分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1 ：As

9、he was runnings Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop, stop!Paragraph 2 ：The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur.參考答案：讀后續(xù)寫：One possible version：One possible version：As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop! Arthur immediately realized tha

10、t the young man was the bank robber. So Arthur didnt stop, but continued to run until he saw and caught a taxi in front pf him. He quickly put the suitcase in the car and said to the driver,“Please hurry to the Police Station. I have a case to report to the police； ； ；the man shouting behind is the

11、bank thief! The taxi raced away to the Police Station like an arrom.文檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人學(xué)習(xí)The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur said to the police who had been waiting and who had already received the robbery report, This suitcas?e is that of the bank robber. It may be filled with the

12、money stolen from the bank, I hand it to you. Please get ready to arrest the man 評分原那么1.此題總分為25分，按5個檔次給分。2.評分時，先根據(jù)所續(xù)寫短文的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量、確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。3.詞數(shù)少于130的，從總分中減去2分。4.評分時，應(yīng)主要從以下四個方面考慮：(1)與所給短文及段落開頭語的銜接程度；(2)內(nèi)容的豐富性和對所標(biāo)出關(guān)詞語的應(yīng)用情況；(3)應(yīng)用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性；(4)上下文的連貫性。5.拼寫與標(biāo)點符號是語言準(zhǔn)確性的一個重要方面，評分

13、時，應(yīng)視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。6.如書寫較差以致影響交際，可將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個檔次。第二節(jié):概要寫作總分值25分閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out dis

14、ease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thusbegan a long time when the

15、rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in afriendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, th,e nobleman should not go out.Though the belief in the merit (好處of dirt was long-lived，

16、dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since Wor

17、ld War II. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea： clothes need to be whiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far?文檔來自于網(wǎng)絡(luò)搜索Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touc

18、hing dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush， American immunologist (免疫學(xué)家，encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter (后者position isgaining some ground.參選答案：One possible version：People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin.(要點 1 ) For a long time in history, people of some Eu