體驗(yàn)盲人生活作文指導(dǎo)教案

1、體驗(yàn)盲人生活作文指導(dǎo)石家莊市橋西區(qū)北杜小學(xué) 王磊平教案背景：10月 15 日是“國(guó)際盲人節(jié)”，為了讓學(xué)生們對(duì)盲人有更多了解，體驗(yàn)他們生活中的不便， 讓同學(xué)們的內(nèi)心中產(chǎn)生一種保護(hù)眼睛的意識(shí)， 引起同學(xué)們對(duì)盲人的關(guān)注和關(guān)愛，特組織了本次體驗(yàn)活動(dòng)教學(xué)初衷：教學(xué)理念 語(yǔ)文課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)指出 :“寫作教學(xué)應(yīng)貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際 ,讓學(xué)生易于動(dòng)筆,樂于表達(dá),應(yīng)引導(dǎo)學(xué)生關(guān)注現(xiàn)實(shí) ,熱愛生活 ,表達(dá)真情實(shí)感。 ” 孩子們喜歡游戲 ,在游戲中往往能夠凸顯他們的個(gè)性,讓他們 品嘗到成功的滋味, 讓他們的思維自由地飛翔,進(jìn) 而產(chǎn)生濃厚的表達(dá)欲望。課前活動(dòng)準(zhǔn)備：1 、體驗(yàn)盲人上下臺(tái)階2 、 “盲人”上廁所教學(xué)方法： 情景體驗(yàn)法、討

2、論法教學(xué)目標(biāo)：1 、通過活動(dòng)體驗(yàn)，感受殘疾人生活的艱辛，體會(huì)眼睛的重要。2 、能將活動(dòng)體驗(yàn)的過程及心理感受用文字表達(dá)出來(lái)， 懂得運(yùn)用“動(dòng)作、神態(tài)、語(yǔ)言、心理活動(dòng)、環(huán)境”等描寫來(lái)寫好一個(gè)片段或細(xì)節(jié)。3、通過本次體驗(yàn)及作文，讓學(xué)生懂得關(guān)愛殘疾人，懂得珍愛生活。教學(xué)重點(diǎn)： 抓住“動(dòng)作、神態(tài)、語(yǔ)言、內(nèi)心活動(dòng)”等細(xì)節(jié)寫具體。習(xí)作指導(dǎo)過程：、直接導(dǎo)入:師：同學(xué)們，10月15日是國(guó)際盲人節(jié)，全世界有大約有 4000萬(wàn)人生活在沒有陽(yáng)光沒有色彩的漆黑世界里。昨天我們一起體驗(yàn)了盲人生活的一些小小的片 段，現(xiàn)在我們一起回顧一下昨天的體驗(yàn)過程。二、回顧“盲人”歷程師：還記得昨天我們都做了些什么嗎？體驗(yàn)了什么場(chǎng)景？生：

3、回憶（模仿盲人找?guī)蜕舷聵翘荩煟何蚁氩稍L一下：在沒蒙上眼睛，沒進(jìn)行體驗(yàn)之前，當(dāng)時(shí)你心里是怎么想的？有什么感覺？（其他同學(xué)認(rèn)真傾聽，想一想當(dāng)時(shí)你們和他的感受有相似之處嗎？）生：我想這很簡(jiǎn)單，這么熟悉的學(xué)校。我很興奮，恨不得馬上開始師：你呢？當(dāng)時(shí)怎么想得？什么感受？ （ 3人）生：近：的確，我也能感受到：大家當(dāng)時(shí)覺得這太容易了，可真是這么容易嗎？（不是）那么，當(dāng)你的雙眼真的被蒙上，眼前漆黑一片的時(shí)候，你的內(nèi)心是什么感受呢？誰(shuí)來(lái)跟大家說說。生：（在學(xué)生說的過程中，與學(xué)生進(jìn)行對(duì)話，例如學(xué)生說到害怕教師可以追問害怕什么，能用什么詞來(lái)形容當(dāng)時(shí)的感受等）（此處請(qǐng)4、5個(gè)表述不是太好的學(xué)生說說感受）師：我

4、能感受到大家當(dāng)時(shí)的心情，既害怕又緊張，可是聽了剛才幾位同學(xué)的描述，我覺得我們內(nèi)心深處的細(xì)膩感受還沒有完全真實(shí)的表達(dá)出來(lái)，下面我們?cè)賮?lái)回顧一下昨天體驗(yàn)盲人生活的過程， 希望同學(xué)們?cè)诨仡櫟倪^程中能將內(nèi)心的真實(shí)體驗(yàn)進(jìn)行細(xì)膩的回憶并且整理。放幾個(gè)有代表性的視頻片段播放。對(duì)視頻中的體驗(yàn)主角進(jìn)行采訪師：仔細(xì)來(lái)觀察這段視頻，我想問問：當(dāng)時(shí)你在干什么呢？（其他人認(rèn)真傾聽她的內(nèi)心感受）生：我在模仿盲人找?guī)?，師：你是怎樣找?guī)哪?？說說你的過程生：當(dāng)時(shí)我蒙了，蹲下摸摸磚。師：那你當(dāng)時(shí)你在想什么？生：我懵了師：左顧右看的又在干什么？當(dāng)時(shí)最希望得到的幫助是什么？生：師： 咱們來(lái)觀察一下她左顧右看時(shí)她的心情怎么樣？

5、（看她的表情） 你們也體驗(yàn)了，你當(dāng)時(shí)是怎么找?guī)哪?？?dāng)時(shí)的心情怎么樣？（ 3人）我們還體驗(yàn)了這個(gè)活動(dòng)：（視頻）師：王某你當(dāng)時(shí)在干什么？生：模仿盲人上樓梯，師：怎么做的呢？怎么還磕絆了一下？生：師：嗯，很害怕，很無(wú)助接著看，李某你當(dāng)時(shí)是怎么模仿盲人上樓梯的呢？生：師：當(dāng)時(shí)心情怎么樣？當(dāng)時(shí)最希望得到的幫助是什么？ 生：很緊張，很害怕，提醒一下師： 看視頻， 李某為什么走的這么慢？看看當(dāng)時(shí)她的表情， 你來(lái)說說當(dāng)時(shí)她什么感受？生： 你也體驗(yàn)了這次活動(dòng)， 能說說你是如何上下樓梯以及當(dāng)時(shí)的感受嗎？ （ 2人）師： 作為體驗(yàn)著， 你們有身臨其境之感， 將這種感受寫進(jìn)文章中一定會(huì)很精彩的。感謝你們說出來(lái)，

6、和大家分享。 相對(duì)而言， 那些攙扶者呢？我想攙扶者也觀察到參與者的一舉一動(dòng)，誰(shuí)來(lái)說說同學(xué)被蒙上眼睛后的動(dòng)作、神態(tài)是怎樣的？說說當(dāng)時(shí)你心里的所想？（ 3人）生：我覺得她當(dāng)時(shí)走路特別慢，腿腳不靈活師：同學(xué)們我們體驗(yàn)了盲人的生活，你們覺得盲人怎么樣？生：盲人的雙眼看不到東西，真是很不方便呀生：我覺得盲人真的很不容易，我們應(yīng)該盡量多幫助他們，應(yīng)該關(guān)愛他們師： 你們的體驗(yàn)只是盲人生活的一部分，在生活中，盲人還會(huì)遇到很多的艱辛。老師真的非常高興，你們體會(huì)到了盲人的不易。三、寫作師：參與者，你們有身臨其境之感，攙扶者你們是用眼觀察了盲人的生活。如果在作文中，我們都能將二者結(jié)合起來(lái)寫，文章就會(huì)很生動(dòng)。師： 有

7、些同學(xué)也體驗(yàn)了， 只是沒有表達(dá)出來(lái)， 我想這些同學(xué)們?cè)隗w驗(yàn)過程中思考的肯定要比交流的多得多，提起筆，寫一個(gè)體驗(yàn)盲人過程的精彩片段。現(xiàn)在開始習(xí)作。注意：著重寫出自己的體驗(yàn)過程和心理感受。語(yǔ)言要生動(dòng)，注意動(dòng)作、心理、語(yǔ)言、神態(tài)描寫的運(yùn)用（師生共同評(píng)論作文優(yōu)點(diǎn) ）五、欣賞教師的習(xí)作片段，對(duì)比優(yōu)點(diǎn) 說說這段話哪些地方寫得好？為什么？生：寫得真實(shí)，用詞比較準(zhǔn)確，通過動(dòng)作描寫、心理活動(dòng)描寫以及場(chǎng)面描寫等，把活動(dòng)寫得具體、生動(dòng)。六、作業(yè)師：今天回家，根據(jù)評(píng)議及對(duì)比修改一下作文，想像開頭和結(jié)尾，再擬一個(gè)與眾不同的題目，一篇文章就大功告成了。出示：完善習(xí)作要求擬定作文題目。想想開頭和結(jié)尾。根據(jù)評(píng)議修改習(xí)作。反思

8、：“課標(biāo)”提出：“習(xí)作指導(dǎo)要有利于學(xué)生開闊思路，自由表達(dá)。”這要求習(xí)作指導(dǎo)能鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生自由表達(dá)，有利于激發(fā)學(xué)生的習(xí)作欲望，掌握技巧，促進(jìn) 學(xué)生盡情地傾吐。只有不受條條框框的限制，學(xué)生才能寫出自己的真情實(shí)感， 文章才會(huì)最生動(dòng)、最真實(shí)、最感人?！绑w驗(yàn)活動(dòng)作文教學(xué)”正與“課標(biāo)”的要求相符合，它讓學(xué)生能充分開闊思 路，把自己看到的、聽到的、想到的寫下來(lái)，從文字中抒發(fā)出自己的真情實(shí)感。 本次習(xí)作應(yīng)做到：一、關(guān)注學(xué)生在活動(dòng)中的感受，引導(dǎo)學(xué)生表達(dá)。通過播放學(xué)生們的體驗(yàn)盲人活動(dòng)的片段，采訪當(dāng)事人當(dāng)時(shí)的感受，這時(shí)孩 子們的語(yǔ)言是很流暢，詞匯也很豐富。因?yàn)樗鼈兩碛畜w會(huì)。整節(jié)課我是一個(gè)課 堂的組織者，引導(dǎo)者，讓孩子們

9、盡情地表達(dá)。二、精心設(shè)計(jì)讓學(xué)生說好寫好片段。在學(xué)生們盡情的表達(dá)后，我讓學(xué)生回顧游戲的過程“想想在體驗(yàn)的過程中 留下印象最深的是什么地方？是體驗(yàn)馬上開始了是體驗(yàn)過程中還是結(jié) 束后”接著讓學(xué)生以學(xué)習(xí)小組為單位說說自己印象最深的片段，然后全班 交流，最后讓學(xué)生動(dòng)筆寫片段。由于學(xué)生在活動(dòng)過程中親身體驗(yàn)了，學(xué)生才有各自的真切感受，產(chǎn)生了自己的思想，也就有了自己的作文內(nèi)容，所以寫出的 作文片段是有血有肉，富有靈性的。Unit 1Lead-in1 human beings 2 powered 3 greenhouse 4 far away 5 make a difference6 breathe in 7

10、decreasing performance 8 four inches high 9 campaign10 encourageEx 31 B 2 B 3 C 4 A 5 DEx 4issues, pollution, deforestation, related, consumption, resources, threat, responsibility Ex 51 addicted smoking 2 environment concern 3 expert wisdom4 possession greed 5 resources inexhaustibleEx.61 strategie

11、s 2 specific 3 consumers 4 released 5 trapped 6 consequence7 was isolated 8 priority 9 convenience 10 elementsEx71 transform 2 all the way 3 sit back 4 resulting from 5 share with1 How did the war, which brought terrible disasters to mankind, impact on such a poet?2 Mothers are sometimes blind to th

12、e faults of their beloved children, which will cause the children to make the same mistake again.3 As a new immigrant in this completely strange country, she always felt isolated.4 Acting before thinking often results in failure, so we should think before we leap.5 The time for talking is past; we m

13、ust take positive action to protect our environment.1 Take two pills each time and three times a day and you will be well in a few days.2 He is not impatient; he is just too tired.3 Once water shortage reaches the point of no return, there will be nothing left to be done but abandon the city.4 We

14、9; d like to shareur experience in city planning with every representative here and show them what is special of our innovations.5 We can ' t just sit back and do nothing about increasingly serious traffic problems. Ex 121 D 2 A 3 C 4 A 5 BEx. 131 subtle 2 were overtaken 3 species 4 decades 5 bo

15、undaries6 audio 7 directly 8 focus 9 tone 10 cupped Ex. 141 at that rate 2 For the sake of 3 come to 4 by hand 5 vice versa Ex. 152 Young people sometimes complain of not being able to communicate with their parents.3 Mary has been longing to take up residence in a Chinese village in Yunnan for a fe

16、w years. Now her dream has come true.4 Domestic animals are used to depending on humans, so it is difficult for them to survive in the wild.5 He was suddenly overtaken by a fear that he would be laid off the company because of depression.6 I figure he ' ll be back soon since he promised to have

17、dinner with me. Ex 161 go from bad to worse 2 loss of hope 3 fuels like petroleum and coal4 very dry 5 a mass movement away from a place Ex 171我們大多數(shù)人只是袖手旁觀，還會(huì)說:讓專家去處理吧。2就人類而言，母親生病，孩子就會(huì)受苦；既然我們?cè)斐闪说厍蛏系纳鷳B(tài)失衡、 而我們又是受害者。3機(jī)器的發(fā)明使世界進(jìn)入了一個(gè)新紀(jì)元工業(yè)時(shí)代，金錢主宰一切。4每個(gè)人的?；疃加刑鹩锌?。5麥肯立博士竭盡全皿起公眾對(duì)嚴(yán)峻的環(huán)保問題的關(guān)注。6那條消息讓我驚出了手骨悚然。7她在演講

18、中用了許多術(shù)語(yǔ)，使聽眾聽得莫名其妙。8這此問題盤根錯(cuò)節(jié)，三言兩語(yǔ)說不清楚。Unit 2Lead-in1 invitations 2 around the world 3 reach 4 institution 5 specially appointed experts 6 vote 7 diploma 8 medal 9 is followed by 10 including Ex31 C 2 D 3 A 4 C 5 BEpass, inspiration, curious, persistent, stimulated, inspired, genius, complexEx51

19、 condense condensed 2 curious curiosity 3 devise device4 persistent persistence 5 convinced-convincing Ex61 fundamental, 2 ultimate, 3 sparked, 4 apparently, 5 patience,6 curiosity, 7 convince, 8 detail, 9 responses, 10 (has) stirredEx71 o, 2 came upon, 3 join in, 4 come up with, 5 up toEx

20、81. Reporters pressed the spokesman for an explanation of the military attack.2. His election campaign failed to convince the voters that he was the right person for the Senator.3. While I admit that there are problems, I don t agree that they cannot be solved.4. His first speech on TV made a deep i

21、mpression on his audience.5. All things are interrelated and interact with each other.Ex91. She might have thoughtthat history was just boring names and datesb,ut Professor Yi s lectures completely changed her view.2. After the plane crash,all the survivors could do was wait for rescue on this deser

22、t island.3. The little boy happened to read some stories about Bermuda Triangltehat did stir his curiosity in the mysteries of nature.4. The DNA test result was evidence tothe police that the murderer was someone else.5. Darwin was convinced thatthe theory of evolution is based on natural selection.

23、Ex121 A 2 D 3 B 4 B 5 CEx131 classical, 2 breakthrough, 3 elegance, 4 faculty, 5 handful,6 probe, 7 swift, 8 transition, 9 reactions, 10 retirementE141 has brought in, 2 under his belt, 3 specializes in,4 a wealth of, 5 be applied toEx151. The lecturer at the conference turned out to be the daughter

24、 of an old friend of mine.2. It has been 5 years since his retirement, but he has remained active in the academic circles.3. If you do have financial difficulties, you can apply for a student loan.4. This scientist had worked hard at this new material for as long as ten years before he made his own

25、way in the end.5. The chief airplane manufacturers in the world are pushing the envelope to make faster and longer range airplanes to compete for bigger share of the market.Ex171他有耐心和毅力，使他做事時(shí)堅(jiān)持的時(shí)間比其他大多數(shù)孩童都長(zhǎng)。（根據(jù)上下文，增加原文中省略的詞語(yǔ)）2就其基本內(nèi)容而言,這一學(xué)說提出的論點(diǎn)包括：光速是宇宙中最快的速度； （增加修飾語(yǔ)，以示強(qiáng)調(diào)）3扎威爾將收到世界各地的來(lái)信。短短幾天時(shí)間里2000封電

26、子郵件接踵而至。（增加量詞以及原文上下文中所省略的部分）4但是，這位53歲的科學(xué)家將首先與家人共享這條喜訊。（增加原文上下文中所省略的部分）Unit3Lead-in4 3 6 2 1 5Ex31 A 2 B 3 C 4 A 5 BEx4advertising, brand, promoted, proved, popular, expression, global, immigrantsEx51法國(guó)已經(jīng)保證明年提供數(shù)十億美元的援助。2你不應(yīng)對(duì)不可能做到的事做出保證。3老板向他保證并沒有解雇他的打算。4檢查一下他的眼睛，以保證沒有問題，是明智之舉。5已經(jīng)采取了措施來(lái)保證學(xué)生不會(huì)因經(jīng)濟(jì)原因而輟學(xué)。

27、6 生產(chǎn)商必須按規(guī)定保證其產(chǎn)品質(zhì)量。Ex61 attained 2 modest 3. attractive 4 precise 5 campaign 6 market7 manufactures 8 sponsor 9 imported 10 brandsEx71 frown (very much) on 2 for instance 3 as a result 4 when it comes to5 under umbrellaEx81 Thoughts are expressed by means of language.2 I have bought so many new books

28、 this year that it s really difficult for me to keepcount of them.3 The old lady feels assured that her son will come back home today to celebrate her birthday.4 His mother insisted that his pocket money should not exceed 100 yuan per month.5 We bought a car last month, which was registered under my

29、 name.Ex91 For most American teenagers, when it comes to comfortable and fashionableclothing, nothing beats T-shirts and jeans.2 Starting in 2004, Adidas widely promoted that“ impossible is nothing, ” and thnotion took hold.3 When the news was first released online, the number of its viewers beat the imagination.4 The girl s big