牛津滬教版英語六年級下六年級下寫作技巧講解

1、牛津滬教版英語六年級下六年級下寫作技巧講解 六年級下寫作技巧講解 I 好文章的特征 1. 中心積極 2. 內(nèi)容豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)有邏輯，層次分明， 3. 用詞恰切，句子結(jié)構(gòu)合理，要表達的意思非常清晰 4. 行文簡潔，流暢，讀起來，甚至有美感 II 根本方法 1. 積累，詞匯與語法 2. 多聽或多看原汁原味的英語廣播， 電影電視；多閱讀原汁原味的英語書籍，報紙，雜志等。 3. 多以英語加工、表達信息，形成豐富的，流暢的英語思維 4. 適當運用寫作技巧，比如謀篇，修辭等。 5. 多練筆 III 步驟 一審。即審題?？辞孱}目含義和要求；確認文體；準備寫作的人稱和時態(tài)：如果是日記和故事，宜采用過去時態(tài)；如是簡

2、介，宜采用現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。 二綱。即列提綱。根據(jù)表達中心的需要， 把要寫的文章分為3段：1. 導入。用簡單的幾句話，導出話題，或文章的中心思想。2.正文。根據(jù)短文的內(nèi)容要求，確定先寫什么，后寫什么，按照表述內(nèi)容的情節(jié)發(fā)展和實際需要，一般分成三段。3. 結(jié)尾。緊扣主題，兩句話內(nèi)結(jié)束，對文章進行總結(jié)和升華。 三寫。但要注意句式的靈活運用，長、短句，簡單句，復合句要搭配運用。選用單詞、詞組、句型時，要能根據(jù)自己的英語水平，盡量揚長避短，避難就易。遇到想不起的詞、句時，就用同（近）義詞或同義句代替，不要使用沒有把握的詞句，并且要綜合考慮所涉及到的情景、場合，語言要地道。 使用銜接詞， 或過渡句，過渡段，使結(jié)

3、構(gòu)層次分明。 四修。即修改與潤色?？慈氖欠穹项}目要求，行文是否流暢，有沒有遺漏要點；語法是不是正確，包括詞的拼寫、大小寫、標點符號、時態(tài)、語態(tài)、單復數(shù)、主謂一致、冠詞等IV常用A開頭1. Just as every coin has two sides.2. Compared to ., . is more.3. Opinions are divided on the advantages and disadvantages of .D. As we all know,.4. Why do you .?With the development of.6. As a student(.)7.

4、 s an old saying goesB.連詞1表層:first, firstly, second, secondly, third,thirdly,to begin with,to start with,what is more, last,also,andthen,next,besidesthen/next/after thatAt first; at last; in the endwhen/while/as soon as/not until in addtionfinallyOnonehand .on the other haneach/onecoin has two side2

5、表轉(zhuǎn)折but,however,though,although, after all, in spite ofortunatelunfortunatelat the sametim3表遞近in addition, besides, moreover, whats mor4表因果because, so, because of, thanks to, due to,for, since, owing to, as a result(of), hence, thu5表例證for example, for instance, such a6表利弊be good/bad for sb.; be harmf

6、ul to sb.; do harm to sb.;have great/much influence on sb.; sth.benefit sb.; sb benefit from sth.; affect; have an effect on sb.;1 / 8 牛津滬教版英語六年級下六年級下寫作技巧講解 7)表喜愛：love/like/enjoy; be fond of; be interested in; show great interest in; lose oneself in; put ones heart into; 8)總結(jié)，As we all know, in gene

7、ral, generally speaking, I think., in fact , in a As I see, As for me word, in brief, in conclusion, in short, in summary, to sum up C. 萬能句式 1. I hope the dream will come true one day. 2. Its important/necessary/useful/useless/common(for sb.) to v 3. Its nice/kind of sb. to v. 4. Its time for sb. to

8、 do sth. 5. Its a waste of time to 6. Its years/days since sb. +ved 7. Its great fun to do=sb. have great fun doing 8. Its a pity that 9. Its an honor to Part3 范文賞析 A Whats the matter? 【寫作要求】Jack最近身體不太舒服，經(jīng)常頭疼發(fā)燒，并感覺身體虛弱疲勞。看過醫(yī)生后， 他收到了下面一張診斷表，請根據(jù)其要點并結(jié)合以上內(nèi)容以“Jacks problem”為題寫一篇80詞左右的文章。 Name :Jack Illne

9、ss: A bad cold Advice: Take medicine twice a day; have a good rest; drink lots of water; eat more fruit and vegetables; exercise more; enough sleep 【寫作指導】根據(jù)要點提示，文章的內(nèi)容大致分為兩部分：先描述Jack的病癥，然后根據(jù)表格要點敘述醫(yī)生的診斷結(jié)果和所給的建議。 【范文】 Jacks problem Jack ist feeling well these days. He often has a headache and has a fev

10、er. And he is feeling weak and tired. So he wentto see the doctor. Here is what the doctor said:Jack has a bad cold. He should take medicine twice a day and have a dood rest. Of course, he should have a healthylifestyle. For example, he should drink lots of water and eat more fruit and vegetables. A

11、nd he should exercise more andhave enough sleepI hope he can be better soon.B.【寫作要求下面是你最好朋友張力的資料，請根據(jù)下表內(nèi)所給的提示，寫一篇不少5字的英文短文介紹他姓:張年: 12外貌特:中等身材，戴眼鏡，短頭發(fā)，小眼性有點兒害羞，非常友業(yè)余愛看書，打籃夢想當一名作【寫作指導介紹人物，重點是介紹這人物的外貌和性格，在仔細審題之后，要按照一定的邏輯順序，把表格內(nèi)給的中文提示用英文表達出來。不要遺漏任何要點【范文Zhang Li is my best friend.He is 12 years old. He is

12、 of medium build, and wears a pair of glasses. He has short hair and small eyes. He is a veryfriendlyboy,butheisalittlebitshy.Heisgoodatallhissubjectsatschool,andhishobbiesarereadingandplayingbasketball. He wants to be a writer when he grows up, because his father is a writer. His fatherhas writt4en

13、 twenty booksso far. Being directed ed by his father, he writes a composition very week. I think his dream may come true one day.Some times, we go cycling at weekends, and sometimes we play computer games at my home,for I have a very smart 2 / 8 牛津滬教版英語六年級下六年級下寫作技巧講解 computer. It is really a pleasur

14、e to have such a good friend. part4. 排序 給下列的文段重新排序 A. 1. Getting enough sleep is also important for us to stay healthy. So we should go to bed early and get up early. 2. At last, we need to do some exercise often because it can keep us active. Wed better do exercise every day. 3. First of all, we sh

15、ould have a good eating habit. 4. To stay healthy, we must have a healthy lifestyle. 5. Try to eat a lot of fruit and vegetables, but try not to eat too much junk food. Drink milk every day. 答案：_ (Key: 43512) B. 1. From the chart, we find most of them spend their pocket money on fast food and comput

16、er games. 2. About half of them use their pocket money to buy fast food. 12 of them spend their pocket money playing computer games. A few of them spend their pocket money in buying presents, clothes or seeing films. 3. So as students, wed better spend our pocket money in the right way, such as buyi

17、ng books and something useful 4. But as we know, eating too much fast food is bad for our health and playing computer games is a waste 浪) of time.5. The chart shows how the 50 students in Class1, Grade8 use their pocket money.6. Only 7 of themspend their pocket money on books.答案_(Key: 526143)C.1. In

18、 the afternoon, we played games with them.2. Last Saturday, I volunteered to go to a poor mountain village school with several of my friends.3. We were glad to see the kids were really hard-working and lovely.4. In the morning, we taught some kids to learn English and then told some stories to cheer

19、them up.5. After that, we gave away some books and toys to them.6. My name is Sally. I think volunteering means a lot.7. I hope to go to help them next time if possible.答案_Key:6341537Part5改改正下列作文的錯誤ALi Ming,who has been working as postman for 1_.two years,always wears a suit of green uniforms. 2_. 3

20、 / 8 牛津滬教版英語六年級下六年級下寫作技巧講解 He worked with care as well as with effort.He 3_. serves for the people heart and soul.Every day he 4_. gets up early to deliver newspapers or magazines. 5_. He is so careful and he has never been wrong. 6_. One day he had to send a dead letter and it happened 7_. to be ra

21、ining hardly outside.But he set out immediately. 8_. He had asked nearly everybody in the district after 9_. he managed to hand letter to the right person. 10_. 答案解析 1.在 postman 前加 a。postman 是可數(shù)名詞的單數(shù)形式，需要在前面加不定冠詞。 2. uniforms 改為 uniform。uniform “制服”之意。此處不能用復數(shù)。 3. worked 改為 works 。短文的基本時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時。 4. 去

22、掉 for。serve 為及物動詞。 5. or 改為 and 。這里不是選擇關(guān)系。 6. and 改為 that 。后面是一個結(jié)果狀語從句。 7.正確。 8. hardly 改為 hard。hardly 是“幾乎不”的意思，意義矛盾。 9. after 改為 before 。 10.在 letter 前加 the。 B. It is on Sunday today.Early in the morning my 1_. classmate and I went to Xi Shan by bus to plant 2_. Trees. As soon as we got there,we b

23、egan work. 3_. Some were digging,some planted,and there were 4_. still some watering.Both of us were trying hard to 5_. plant as much as we could.All of us were afraid of 6_.falling behind.After work,we were wet all over.Looking 7_.at lines of young trees,we forgot our tiredness.We 8_.came back at 1

24、2.we all think it is necessary of us to take 9_.part in this kind of physically labor. 10_.答案解1.去on2. classmate改為復classmates。從下文some,still some看，有一群學生3. work之前tbegin to do sth.的用法4. planted改planting。與上文digging并列，省略wer5. Both改Alboth用于二者的情況，現(xiàn)在是一群學生，應(yīng)al6. much改man其后省去tree7.正確8. lines之前the。特指種下的那一行行樹9.

25、of改fo10. physically改physical。要用形容詞作定語修飾名詞CDear editor,My name is Xiao Hai,boy student in senior Three. I dont think it is necessary to write the “S” in a capital letter what doyou think, Editor? 1_.Recently Ive read in Shanghai Students Post that 2_. 4 / 8 牛津滬教版英語六年級下六年級下寫作技巧講解 you need some student

26、s reporters.I am anxious to 3_. be one of them.I very like English.I have been 4_. learned it since eight years ago.Now I can talk 5_. with foreigners with English.I can read China Daily. 6_. I took the first place in writing an English composition 7_. contest.Besides,I do well in a computer competi

27、tion. 8_. Would you be so kind as to receive me? 9_. I am looking forward to hear from you soon. 10_. Yours, Jimmy 答案解析 1. boy 前加 a。 2.正確。注意 in Shanghai Students Post 不是動詞 read的賓語，故不能去掉 in 。其賓語是 that 引起的名詞性從句。 3. students 改為 student 。除 woman,man修飾復數(shù)名詞時用復數(shù)外，其它名詞作定語時均用單數(shù)。 4.去掉 very 。中國人常說“很喜歡”，英語中則該說“

28、 like.very much”。very much 通常不放在 like 之前，故不要在 very 之后加 much 。 5. learned 改為 learning。have been doing， 主動的現(xiàn)在完成進行時。 6.第二個 with 改為 in 。用某一語言介詞用 in 。 7.去掉 writing 。不是“在寫作文中”，而是“在作文競賽中”。 8. do 改為 did 。電腦競賽顯然是以前的事。 9. receive 改為 accept 。不是“收到我”，而是“接受我”。 10. hear 改為 hearing 。其前的 to 為介詞，故用動名詞。 Part 6 寫作 A 上

29、周的體育課上，有個同學忽然肚子痛，引發(fā)了學校對“體育課安全”的關(guān)注。請以“How to keep safe in PE為題在班會課上作主題發(fā)言。內(nèi)容包括1描述意見發(fā)生在你身上的或你看到的發(fā)生在體育課上的意外事件（經(jīng)過和結(jié)果2提出解決這種意外的建議（至條）3呼吁每個學生要注意體育課安全要求：語句連貫，字8個左右。作文開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入字數(shù)How to keep safe in PEGood afternoon !Do you know that our PE class could be dangerous if we are not careful enough?For example

30、,_Thas all. Thank you.思路：第一步：三確確定體_確定時態(tài)確定人稱第二步：擬提 5 / 8 牛津滬教版英語六年級下六年級下寫作技巧講解 第一自然段 第二自然段 第三自然段 第三步：四檢查 寫作點 字數(shù)點 格式點 語法點 改錯：_ _ _ _ B 目前，提倡“節(jié)儉型社會”（economized society），和“光盤行動：（Clean Plate Campaign）。請根據(jù)下表格中的信息，為英語報社寫一篇短文，談?wù)勛鳛橐幻袑W生，在日常生活中如何勤儉節(jié)約，反對浪費，并作簡要評論。 What to do What not to do Turn off the light Not use o