押南京卷第76題 書面表達(dá)（解析版）

押南京卷第76題書面表達(dá)命題原則及特點(diǎn)1.著重考查學(xué)生運(yùn)用所學(xué)語言知識(shí)與技能來表達(dá)思想、進(jìn)行交際的能力。以書面的形式進(jìn)行信息溝通、再現(xiàn)生活經(jīng)歷、描述周圍事物、發(fā)表意見和觀點(diǎn)。2.最近幾年來書面表達(dá)在體裁和題材方面突出的特點(diǎn)是穩(wěn)中有變。話題更貼近學(xué)生生活，讓人人有話可說，有感可發(fā)，且發(fā)揮空間大。試題突出交際性和實(shí)用性。3.中考書面表達(dá)還是控制性加半開放性寫作。通過提供要點(diǎn)，降低了考生的寫作焦慮，同時(shí)也給考生足夠的寫作空間。4.中考寫作體裁是外在的、附屬的東西，是提供的。如何連貫、清楚、得體地表達(dá)內(nèi)涵才是學(xué)生真正需要關(guān)注的。從某種意義上說，初中寫作只是停留在翻譯的層面，它是語言的組織和觀點(diǎn)的表達(dá)，不是創(chuàng)作。1．（2021·江蘇南京·中考真題）某英文網(wǎng)站正在舉辦征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)網(wǎng)站征文要求，用英語寫一篇短文投稿。Thisnewglobalsiteisaplaceforstudentstosharetheirideas.Wearelookingforyourbeautifulschooldaytoinspire（鼓舞）ourreaders.Didyouhelpanyoneatschool?Didyouenjoyabeautifulsonginyourartlesson?Didyouhaveanamazingexperienceintheschoollab?Yourschoollifeisfullofbeauty.Chooseabeautifulschoolday.Writeapassagetotelluswhatyoudidthatdayandwhyyouthinkitwasbeautiful.Sendyourwritingtousrightnow!注意:1.內(nèi)容涵蓋要點(diǎn),全文連貫通順。2.詞數(shù)80左右（已給出的文章開頭,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。3.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。MyBeautifulSchoolDayMyschoollifeisfullofbeauty.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyBeautifulSchoolDayMyschoollifeisfullofbeauty.Iwillneverforgetthedaywhichmakesmefeelmeaningful.MybestfriendLucyandIalwaysridebikestogetherafterschool.Oneday,Iwaitedalongtimebutdidn’tseeher.ThenIsearchedforherinthecornerofourschool.Shewascryingatthattime.ShetoldmethatshewasnervousbecauseshewouldhaveanEnglishtest.IdecidedtohelpherwithEnglish.Thatevening,Ihelpedherreviewthekeypointsandnotes.Twodayslater,shetoldmethatshepassedit.Ifeltthathelpingotherswhoareinneedwasverymeaningful.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞“我美麗的學(xué)校生活”寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用一般過去時(shí)。分為兩段式，第一段引出主題；第二段描述自己的經(jīng)歷，并發(fā)表自己的感悟。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強(qiáng)，無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。2．（2020·江蘇南京·中考真題）假如你是李華，在學(xué)校英文?？疜IDSMAG上看到招募夏令營(yíng)營(yíng)員的信息。請(qǐng)根據(jù)招募內(nèi)容，用英語給?？瘜懸环庑?。FUNLAND

Hi!Thissummerholidaywewillhavedifferentcampsforkids.Herearethreepopularones.Joinus!Makeachoiceandexplainwhyyouchooseit.ReadingCamp●Chineseliterature●Westernliterature●…CultureCamp●Westernmusic●Chineseart●…SportsCamp●Ballgames●Watersports●…Comeandhavefun!注意：1.內(nèi)容涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)（理由不得少于兩點(diǎn)），可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.詞數(shù)80左右（已給出的文章開頭，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。3.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等.DearSirorMadam,Thanksforofferingussuchwonderfulcamps.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：DearSirorMadam,Thanksforofferingussuchwonderfulcamps.Idoexpecttojoinoneofthem.Ilikesportsverymuch,especiallybasketball,soSportsCampismyfirstchoice.IfI’maccepted,Ithinkit’sagoodchancetoimprovemybasketballskills.I’llhaveplentyoftimetopracticeplayingbasketballandtheremustbemanyexcellentcoachesandplayersinthiscamp.Besides,IbelieveI’llmakesomenewfriendswhohavecommoninterests.Thatreallysoundsfantastictome.Ijustcan’twait.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!YoursLiHi【詳解】1.題干解讀：文章是一篇書信作文。主要是看到?？险心枷牧顮I(yíng)營(yíng)員的消息進(jìn)行回信，可以選擇其中比較感興趣的一個(gè)夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)進(jìn)行具體的描述，要寫明參加這個(gè)夏令營(yíng)的原因以及自己通過這次活動(dòng)要取得的成績(jī)，要注意時(shí)態(tài)的應(yīng)用。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章分三段描寫。第一段感謝提供這么多精彩的夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)；第二段寫自己要參加的夏令營(yíng)以及原因；第三段寫期待盡早收到回復(fù)。整個(gè)文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，思路清晰，語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思明確易懂。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：plentyof；practicedoingsth.；makefriends；lookforwardto。句型：if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句；Ibelieve+賓語從句；who引導(dǎo)的定語從句。一、英語寫作四步法：第一步：看清題目，確定時(shí)態(tài)和人稱；第二步：明確要點(diǎn)，抓住重點(diǎn)，擬定提綱；第三步：連句成篇，多用簡(jiǎn)單句，少用無把握的復(fù)合句，若遇到不會(huì)寫的詞，有表達(dá)障礙，可以換種表達(dá)；第四步：檢查句子是否通順，是否有邏輯錯(cuò)誤，是否漏掉題中要點(diǎn)二、用英語思維寫英語作文的技巧①直接了當(dāng)，開門見山②英語寫作高分就在于開頭（首句直接給出觀點(diǎn)）結(jié)尾和每段的首尾句③冷眼旁觀，話別說太絕，英語是一門邏輯性的語言=4\*GB3④學(xué)會(huì)舉例，越具體越好，一篇英文需要有內(nèi)涵，而內(nèi)涵的支撐靠舉例子=5\*GB3⑤英語例子一定要越細(xì)越好=6\*GB3⑥得連接詞著得天下，連接詞用的自然，貼切，自然能夠給文章添彩=7\*GB3⑦寫英語作文的過程就是在自問自答三、英語作文的思路點(diǎn)撥和范例思路點(diǎn)撥：第一段:兩到三句話,重要性+必要性第二段:注意連詞的使用+具體的建議第三段:兩到三句話,總結(jié)+美好的愿景3．（2024·江蘇南京·一模）

請(qǐng)仔細(xì)觀察下面圖片并發(fā)揮想象，用英語寫出一篇涵蓋每張圖片內(nèi)容且結(jié)局完整的故事。故事的開頭已經(jīng)給出。注意：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名學(xué)校名稱；2.語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3.詞數(shù)80左右。Millieisamiddleschoolstudentwholovesplayingwithlittleanimals.Oneday,whenshewasonherwaytoschool,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Millieisamiddleschoolstudentwholovesplayingwithlittleanimals.Oneday,whenshewasonherwaytoschool,shesawahomelessorangecat.Thecatwasveryweak.Itkeptmiaowinginasmallbox.Milliewantedtohelpthecat,soshedecidedtotakethecattoschool.Sheputthecatinherschoolbag.Soonthecatfellasleep.Whenthefirstlessonbegan,Millieopenedherbagtotakeoutherbook.Tohersurprise,thecatjumpedoutoftheschoolbagandstartedrunningaroundtheclassroom.ItevenjumpedontoMrs.Lin’sdesk.Mrs.Lincaughtthecatquicklyandtookthecattotheteachers’office.Shegavethecatsomewaterandfood.Afewmomentslater,thecatfellasleep.Sincethen,Millie’sclasshavestartedaclubtohelphomelesscats.Theytaketurnstotakecareoflittlecats.Nowtheyhopemorestudentscanjointhem.【詳解】［總體分析］①題材：本文是圖片作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：以一般過去時(shí)為主；③提示：注意要能根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容編一個(gè)合理的故事。［寫作步驟］第一步，介紹第一幅圖，發(fā)現(xiàn)一只貓；第二步，介紹如何處理這只貓；第三步，教室里發(fā)生的事；第四步，從此開設(shè)了俱樂部幫助無家可歸的貓。［亮點(diǎn)詞匯］①fellasleep入睡②Sincethen自那時(shí)起［高分句型］①M(fèi)illiewantedtohelpthecat,soshedecidedtotakethecattoschool.

(結(jié)果狀語從句)②Nowtheyhopemorestudentscanjointhem.

(賓語從句)4．（2024·江蘇南京·一模）勞逸結(jié)合，方能游刃有余。課間十分鐘是一幅多彩的畫卷。請(qǐng)根據(jù)學(xué)校的征稿要求，寫一篇英語短文。Now,moreandmorestudentsarebusystudyingalldaylong.Thisweekwewantyoutohaveyoursayabouttheten-minutebreak.Whyisitnecessarytohavethebreak?Whatdoyouandyourclassmatesdoduringthebreak?Whatisyourgoodadviceonplanningthebreak?注意：1.內(nèi)容涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，全文連貫通順。2.詞數(shù)80左右（已給出的文章開頭，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。3.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Wehaveaten-minutebreakbetweenclasses._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

Wehaveaten-minutebreakbetweenclasses.Inmyopinion,takingtheten-minutebreakisnecessary,becauseitmakesusrelaxedbothphysicallyandmentally.Theten-minutebreakismeantforustorelaxandprepareforthenextclass.Onlydoingsocanwehavemoreenergytostudyeffectivelyinclass.Myten-minutebreakisalwayspleasing.SometimesIdosomesimpleexercise.Sometimesmyclassmateshaveafreechatwithmehappilyorjusttakeawalkoutside.Therefore,Ialwaysfeelenergeticandlistencarefullytoteachers.Youshouldn’truntoofarfromyourclassroom.Besides,don’ttakesomeenergeticexercise.Ihopethateveryonewillhaveawonderfulten-minutebreak.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：主要時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏提示內(nèi)容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一闡述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步：表明寫作意圖。借用“課間我們有十分鐘的休息時(shí)間。”來引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容。第二步：具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。依照提示信息的要點(diǎn)——課間休息重要的原因、你和同學(xué)所做的事、你的建議等均要一一闡述。第三步：書寫結(jié)語。表達(dá)“我希望每個(gè)人都將有一個(gè)美好的課間10分鐘”的期望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①preparefor為……做準(zhǔn)備②takeawalk散步③feelenergetic感到精力充沛[高分句型]①Inmyopinion,takingtheten-minutebreakisnecessary,becauseitmakesusrelaxedbothphysicallyandmentally.(狀語從句）②Ihopethateveryonewillhaveawonderfulten-minutebreak.(賓語從句)5．（23-24九年級(jí)下·江蘇南京·階段練習(xí)）在我們的學(xué)習(xí)和生活中，能夠全身心地投入到一件事情中去，享受做事情的過程，是一種幸福！但求耕耘，不問收獲！某英文網(wǎng)站正在以“全身心投入(Devotion)”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是慧潔，請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇短文投稿，包含下列問題：1.Whatdidyoudevoteyourselfto?2.Howdidyoudoit?3.Whathaveyoulearntfromtheexperience?注意：1.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息；2.詞數(shù)90詞左右，文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DevotionI’mgladtosharemyideasaboutmydevotioninmylife.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：

DevotionI’mgladtosharemyideasaboutmydevotioninmylife.Fiveyearsago,Istartedtodevotemyselftopainting,whichturnedouttobeoneofthemostimportantexperiencesinmylife.Oneday,Isawsomeofmyschoolmatespaintingintheartroom.Thecolorfulpicturescaughtmyattentionimmediately.IwassodrawntothebeautyinfrontofmethatIjoinedthePaintingClub.Afterthat,nomatterwhateverhappened,Istillwasontimetoeachartlessonandfinishedeachpaintingcarefully.Bydoingthis,IdevelopedmyabilityanddecidedthatIwantedtocompletelydevotemyselftopainting.NotonlydidIwincountlessawardsbutalsomypaintingjourneyhelpedmegrowintoabetterperson.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般過去時(shí)”為主；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，考生要注意不要遺漏信息提示，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。表明自己全心投入到畫畫中去；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。講述自己是如何愛上繪畫的以及自己的做法是怎樣的；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。簡(jiǎn)單地闡述自己在這次經(jīng)歷中的收獲。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①devoteoneselfto全身致力于②infrontof在……之前③ontime按時(shí)④notonly…butalso…不僅……而且……[高分句型]①Fiveyearsago,Istartedtodevotemyselftopainting,whichturnedouttobeoneofthemostimportantexperiencesinmylife.（which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）②NotonlydidIwincountlessawardsbutalsomypaintingjourneyhelpedmegrowintoabetterperson.（倒裝句）6．（23-24九年級(jí)下·江蘇南京·階段練習(xí)）我國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)文化源遠(yuǎn)流長(zhǎng)，博大精深。我們隨時(shí)都能感受到傳統(tǒng)文化的氣息，它跳動(dòng)在民族樂器回音裊裊的琴弦上，閃爍在國(guó)粹京劇色彩斑斕的臉譜上，綻放在異彩紛呈的民俗節(jié)日中，傳揚(yáng)在膾炙人口的中華詩(shī)詞里，描繪在歷史悠久的名勝古跡中……請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：(1)你最喜歡的傳統(tǒng)文化；(2)講述你體驗(yàn)傳統(tǒng)文化的一次經(jīng)歷；(3)談?wù)勀愕母惺?。注意?.內(nèi)容涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，全文連貫通順；2.詞數(shù)不少于80詞。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

Nowadays,withthepopularityofChinesestyle,morepeopleshowgreatinterestintraditionalChineseculture.MyfavoritetraditionalChinesecultureiscalligraphy,whichhasalonghistoryandhasinfluencedmanypeople.

Istartedlearningcalligraphyateight.Atfirst,itwaschallengingformetousethebrushtowriteChinesecharacters.Mywristwouldacheafterholdingthebrushforalongtime.Fortunately,withthehelpofmyteacher,Igraduallyimproved.Now,Icanwritespringcoupletsformyfamilyeveryyear.Itmakesmeproud.

Learningcalligraphyhasagreatinfluenceonme.Ibecomemorepatientandcarefulthankstoyearsofpractice.IalsofeelhonoredtobeabletopassdownthistraditionalChineseculture.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過去時(shí)”為主；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，開篇點(diǎn)題，明確自己最喜歡的傳統(tǒng)文化，引出下文；第二步，根據(jù)提示材料，講述學(xué)習(xí)傳統(tǒng)文化的經(jīng)歷，以及學(xué)習(xí)過程中取得的進(jìn)步；第三步，表達(dá)自己學(xué)習(xí)傳統(tǒng)文化的感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①showgreatinterestin…對(duì)……表現(xiàn)出極大的興趣②calligraphy書法③withthehelpof…在……幫助下④springcouplets對(duì)聯(lián)⑤haveagreatinfluenceonsb.對(duì)某人有很大的影響⑥passdown傳承下去[高分句型]MyfavoritetraditionalChinesecultureiscalligraphy,whichhasalonghistoryandhasinfluencedmanypeople.(which引導(dǎo)的定語從句)7．（23-24九年級(jí)上·江蘇南京·期末）義務(wù)教育階段“雙減政策”實(shí)施后，周末培訓(xùn)機(jī)構(gòu)不再提供服務(wù)，校內(nèi)課后服務(wù)全面覆蓋。為更好地幫學(xué)生自主安排課余時(shí)間，校網(wǎng)站張貼了一份問卷。假如你是張寧，請(qǐng)根據(jù)問卷內(nèi)容，用英語給校長(zhǎng)回一封電子郵件。要求：1.詞數(shù)80左右(已給出的文章開頭，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。2.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Dearheadmaster,Thanksforofferingussuchmeaningfulchances.Iamgladtotellyousomethingaboutmyafter-schoolactivities.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yoursfaithfully,ZhangNing【答案】例文Dearheadmaster,

Thanksforofferingussuchmeaningfulchances.Iamgladtotellyousomethingaboutmyafter-schoolactivities.

Becauseoftakingpartindifferentafter-schoolactivities,myschoollifeismuchmorecolourfulandmeaningfulthanbefore.Inmysparetime,Ilikelisteningtodifferenttypesofmusiclikepopmusic,jazzorclassicalmusic.Whilelistening,Ifeelrelaxedandcalm,especiallyafteraday’sofhardwork.IalsolikepaintingifIhavealotoftime.EverytimeIpaint,Ilosemyselfintheworldofcolours.

However,itwillbemorepleasantifourschoolcanorganizemoreactivities,suchasgoinghiking,holdingartfestivals,andreadingandspeechcontest.Withmoredifferentchoices,westudentswillbemoreactiveandimproveourselvesbetter.

Ihopeyouthinkmyadviceisworthtaking.Yoursfaithfully,ZhangNing【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般將來時(shí)”為主；③提示：根據(jù)問卷內(nèi)容及要求完成寫作，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖；第二步，校內(nèi)課后服務(wù)帶自己帶來的變化，自己最喜歡的課后活動(dòng)及原因；第三步，給出建議；第四步，書寫結(jié)語。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]inone’ssparetime在某人的業(yè)余時(shí)間loseoneselfin迷失在suchas例如[高分句型]Whilelistening,Ifeelrelaxedandcalm,especiallyafteraday’sofhardwork.(while引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句)IalsolikepaintingifIhavealotoftime.(if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句)8．（23-24九年級(jí)上·江蘇南京·期末）現(xiàn)在，越來越多的外國(guó)學(xué)生對(duì)中華傳統(tǒng)文化很感興趣。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)你的筆友David的郵件，用英語給他回一封郵件。DearLiHua,Howareyougoingthesedays?OurschoolheldaChineseCultureDaylastweek.WefeltthebeautyofChinesemusic,thecharmofChinesepaintingsandthewisdomofChineseliterature.That’ssoamazing!Iwanttolearnmore.Couldyouintroduceyourfavouriteonetome?Pleasetellmeyourstoryaboutit.Andwhatdoyouthinkofit?I’mlookingforwardtoyourshare.Yours,David注意：1.內(nèi)容涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，全文連貫通順。2.詞數(shù)不少于70詞(已給出的郵件開頭和結(jié)尾不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。3.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。DearDavid,I’mgladtoknowyouareinterestedinChineseculture._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopetohearfromyousoon.Allthebest,LiHua【答案】例文：DearDavid,

I’mgladtoknowyouareinterestedinChineseculture.IrecommendJourneytotheWestfirsttoyou.IttellsthestoryofTangXuanzangandhisthreediscipleswhogotoIndiaforBuddhistscriptures.Duringtheirjourney,theybravelyfaceaseriesofdangersandfinallyconquerthosedevilsandmonsters.Thisbookisnotonlyinterestingincontentandvividinlanguage,butalsoconveysaspiritofcourage.Inourdailylife,weareboundtomeetwithallkindsofchallenges.Weshouldbebraveandnevergiveup.Thebookiswellworthreading.Ihopeyouwilllikeit.

Hopetohearfromyousoon.

Allthebest,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為一封郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)來信中的內(nèi)容介紹中國(guó)的文學(xué)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出話題，推薦我國(guó)的四大名著之——《西游記》；第二步，詳細(xì)介紹這本書的內(nèi)容；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①beinterestedin對(duì)……感興趣②faceaseriesofdangers面對(duì)一系列危險(xiǎn)③notonly...butalso...不但……而且……④beboundto一定⑤beworthdoing值得做[高分句型]①IttellsthestoryofTangXuanzangandhisthreediscipleswhogotoIndiaforBuddhistscriptures.(定語從句)②Ihopeyouwilllikeit.(賓語從句) 9．（23-24九年級(jí)上·江蘇南京·期末）BeforeSpudWebb’sproudestmomentcame,heworkedhardtoovercome(克服)hisheightdisadvantage;beforeTanDuncreatedamazingmusic,hehadtomakeaviolinhimselfwhenhewasveryyoungbecauseofhispoorfamily;beforeAudreyHepburnwasseenbytheworld,shesufferedhardshipsandstressesbeyondherageduringherchildhood.Weallexperiencedifficultiesandweallhavechancestosucceed.PleasewriteanarticleonthetopicofEverybodyCanBeaWinner,whichshouldinclude:(1)Whatdifficultydidyouexperience?(2)Howdidyouovercomethedifficulty?(3)Whatcanyoulearnfromtheexperience?注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右；2.內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和校名。EverybodyCanBeaWinner_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文EverybodyCanBeaWinnerAwinner’sattitude:itmaybedifficultbutitispossible.Letmesharemystory.Inthepathoflife,weoftenencountervariousdifficulties.Somepeoplechoosetogiveup,whileotherschoosetofaceandovercomedifficulties.IrememberwhenIwasinthethirdgradeofelementaryschool,myteacheraskedmetoparticipateintheropeskippingcompetition.BecauseIwasnotgoodatropeskipping,Iwantedtogiveupthisopportunity.Butbothmyteacherandmotherencouragedmetoparticipateinthiscompetition.ThenIpracticedskippingropeeverymorningandevening.Ijumpedfasterandfaster.Onthedayofthecompetition,Iwonthefirstprize.Fromthenon,whenIencounterdifficulties,IalwaystellmyselfthatImustfacethembravelyandstrivetoovercometheminordertoachievesuccess.Doyouwanttobeawinner?Justremember:itmaybedifficultbutitispossible.Ifyoufaceitandovercomeit,youwillbeawinner.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過去時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，要注意不要遺漏材料中詢問的三個(gè)主要問題，并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫作步驟]①第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“每個(gè)人都能成功”來引出下文中對(duì)自己經(jīng)歷的描述；②第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“遇到困難、解決方式和哲理感悟”三方面入手，重點(diǎn)介紹自己是如何克服困難的；③第三步，書寫結(jié)語。表達(dá)想要成功的愿望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①participatein參加②begoodat擅長(zhǎng)③giveup放棄④inorderto為了[高分句型]①IrememberwhenIwasinthethirdgradeofelementaryschool,myteacheraskedmetoparticipateintheropeskippingcompetition.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）②BecauseIwasnotgoodatropeskipping,Iwantedtogiveupthisopportunity.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句）③Fromthenon,whenIencounterdifficulties,IalwaystellmyselfthatImustfa