讀后續(xù)寫-老婦人探秘地下室的親情驚喜記+講義 高三上學(xué)期一輪復(fù)習(xí)質(zhì)量檢測(cè)英語(yǔ)試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Whenmyhusbandpassedawaylastyear,myworldturnedupsidedown.RichardandIhadbeentogetherforoverfortyyears,andsuddenly,therewasanunbearableblankwhereheusedtobe.So,whenmyson,James,andhiswife,Natalie,invitedmetolivewiththemforawhile,Iwasn’tabouttorefuse.Ithinkbeingwiththegrandkidswillbehealing.Theywelcomedmewithopenarms,makingmefeellikepartoftheirdailylife.TheyinsistedthattheywantedtohelpmethroughthisdifficulttimeandwhenImovedin,Ionlytooktheessentials.Therestofmythingswerelocked30minutesawayatmyhome,lockingawaythememoriesofalifesharedwithRichard.Fromthebeginning,therewassimplyoneruleforthekidsandmyself:“Please,allthreeofyou,stayoutofthebasement(地下室),”Jameshadsaidwhenweweresittingfordinner,histonewasgentlebutfirm.“Therearesomerepairsbeingdone,andit’sreallydustyandmessydownthere.Wedon’twantanyofyoutogetsickorhurt.Understood?”Theboys,John,6,andEric,4,nodded.IunderstoodJames’concern,too.Iagreedwithoutgivingitmuchthought.Itwasn’tlikeIhadanyreasontogodownthereanyway.Livingwiththemwasanadjustment.JohnandEricwereeverythingIneededtokeepmedistractedwhilemyhearthealedandgrewwithloveformygrandchildren.Wehadalsogottenintoanewroutine,whereeveryevening,we’dgatherinthelivingroomforstorytime.NothingdelightedmemorethanwatchingtheireyeslightupasIreadtothem.We’dbeenreadingHarryPotterandtheChamberofSecretsforafewdaysnow,andithadquicklybecomeafavoriteforthem.Oneevening,Iturnedtothenextchapter,andasIreadaboutHarrydiscoveringthehiddenentrancetothechamber,Ericsuddenlypipedup,“Grandma!WehaveaChamberofSecretstoo!Inthebasement!”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Ipaused,glancingdownathimunbelievably.___________________________________________________________________________________________________Theroomwasaperfectcopyofmyownbedroombackhome._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、文章大意文章講述了一位老婦人在丈夫去世后，應(yīng)兒子兒媳邀請(qǐng)搬來同住。兒子一家熱情接納，讓她融入日常。入住時(shí)有一條規(guī)則：所有人不許進(jìn)地下室，理由是在修繕且臟亂易致傷病。老婦人與孫子們相處愉快，每晚讀《哈利?波特》成日常。一天讀至?xí)忻苁仪楣?jié)，小孫子埃里克突然提及自家地下室也有“密室”，引發(fā)后續(xù)懸念。故事圍繞老婦人的喪夫之痛、新家適應(yīng)、地下室禁令及孫子無心之言展開，為續(xù)寫埋下伏筆。二、故事山分析開場(chǎng)：老婦人丈夫離世，陷入悲痛，兒子兒媳邀她同住開啟新生活。上升：適應(yīng)新家，與孫子建立感情，日常讀故事溫馨愜意，地下室規(guī)則暗藏玄機(jī)。轉(zhuǎn)折：埃里克提及地下室“密室”，打破平靜，勾起老婦人好奇。高潮：進(jìn)入地下室探秘，發(fā)現(xiàn)驚人秘密。下降：老婦人情緒因所見所感起伏，沉浸回憶與感動(dòng)。結(jié)局：（續(xù)寫可補(bǔ)充）一家人因地下室事件更加親密，老婦人走出悲傷陰影。三、五處伏筆及續(xù)寫回應(yīng)伏筆：丈夫去世，老婦人世界崩塌?；貞?yīng)：在續(xù)寫中，地下室重現(xiàn)與丈夫過往回憶，借舊物慰藉心靈，助其釋懷悲傷。伏筆：兒子兒媳熱情邀老婦人同住，強(qiáng)調(diào)幫她度過艱難時(shí)光。回應(yīng)：地下室秘密揭曉是二人精心布置，用溫暖關(guān)懷讓老婦人重感家的溫馨。伏筆：嚴(yán)格的地下室禁令?；貞?yīng)：禁令背后是為籌備驚喜，后續(xù)解除禁令時(shí)，家人情感升溫。伏筆：讀《哈利?波特》引發(fā)孩子聯(lián)想自家地下室?；貞?yīng)：續(xù)寫順承這一聯(lián)想，地下室如書中密室般藏驚喜，增添奇幻色彩。伏筆：老婦人僅帶必需品搬家，其余物品鎖在舊家?；貞?yīng)：地下室出現(xiàn)舊物照片，讓老婦人重見熟悉物件，銜接過去與當(dāng)下生活。四、續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)第一段：老婦人起初猶豫是否要違背兒子叮囑，內(nèi)心掙扎在規(guī)則與孫子好奇間。最終好奇心占上風(fēng)，決定跟孫子去地下室一探究竟，描繪一路上忐忑心情。到達(dá)地下室門口，描寫地下室外觀及開門瞬間的緊張氛圍。第二段：詳細(xì)描述進(jìn)入地下室后所見，與記憶重合細(xì)節(jié)震撼人心，如舊家具、老物件擺放。孩子們因發(fā)現(xiàn)秘密興奮，老婦人情緒激動(dòng)落淚，體現(xiàn)親情觸動(dòng)。結(jié)尾處設(shè)想兒子兒媳回家，面對(duì)“泄密”場(chǎng)景的反應(yīng)，展現(xiàn)全家溫馨互動(dòng)，收尾呼應(yīng)前文，化解地下室禁令懸念。五、情感線老婦人開篇深陷喪夫悲痛，搬入兒子家后，在與孫子相處日常中得到慰藉，情感稍緩。埃里克提及地下室“密室”時(shí)，好奇被點(diǎn)燃，同時(shí)夾雜對(duì)違背兒子要求的不安。進(jìn)入地下室看到熟悉布置，往昔回憶洶涌，思念、感動(dòng)、驚喜交織。最后，因家人這份特殊關(guān)懷，悲傷進(jìn)一步被溫暖取代，重新?lián)肀睿c家人情感紐帶愈發(fā)緊密。六、故事線老婦人丈夫去世，生活破碎。受兒子兒媳邀請(qǐng)，搬去同住，適應(yīng)新家。與孫子建立讀故事日常，培養(yǎng)感情。因《哈利?波特》情節(jié)，引出地下室秘密。決定探尋地下室，發(fā)現(xiàn)熟悉布置。全家面對(duì)“泄密”，情感升溫，老婦人走出悲傷。七、主旨升華句Inthedarkesttimes,it'stheloveandthoughtfulnessoffamilythatcanlightupthewayforward.在最黑暗的時(shí)刻，是家人的愛與體貼能照亮前行之路。Sometimes,whatseemslikeasimpleruleisactuallyagatewaytoaheartwarmingsurprise,craftedwithlove.有時(shí)候，看似一條簡(jiǎn)單規(guī)則，實(shí)則是以愛精心打造通往暖心驚喜之門。Thebondoffamilycanturnaplaceofgriefintoahavenofwarmmemoriesandnewbeginnings.親情紐帶能將悲傷之地變?yōu)闈M是溫暖回憶與新起點(diǎn)港灣。Alittlebitofmagic,inspiredbyloveandfamily,canhealthedeepestwounds.源自愛與家人的一點(diǎn)魔力，能治愈最深創(chuàng)傷。Lovehasthepowertorecreatelostpiecesoflife,makingthebrokenwholeagain.愛有力量重現(xiàn)逝去生活片段，讓破碎重歸完整。八、寫作示范第一篇Ipaused,glancingdownathimunbelievably.MyheartpoundedinmychestasIwrestledwiththedecision.Therulehadbeenclear,buttheboys'excitementwasinfectious.Afteramoment'shesitation,Igaveintomycuriosity."Alright,boys,"Isaid,tryingtosoundcalm,"butjustaquickpeek."Withthat,wetiptoedtowardsthebasementdoor.Thecloserwegot,themoremypalmssweated.Whatcouldpossiblybedownthere?Aswereachedthedoor,Itookadeepbreathandturnedtheknob.Itcreakedopen,revealingadimlylitstaircase.Theroomwasaperfectcopyofmyownbedroombackhome.Istoodthere,dumbfounded,myeyesscanningeveryfamiliarobject.ThereweretheoldquiltsRichardandIhadused,drapedneatlyoverthebed.ThepicturesonthewallwereonesIhadtakendownwhenpacking.TearsstreameddownmyfaceasIrealizedwhatJamesandNataliehaddone.Theboyswatchedme,wide-eyed,notfullyunderstandingmyreaction.Justthen,weheardthefrontdooropen.JamesandNataliewalkedin,sawus,andexchangedknowingsmiles."Surprise,Mom,"Jamessaidsoftly.Inthatmoment,theloveintheroomfilledeverycorner,chasingawaythelastremnantsofmygrief.第二篇Ipaused,glancingdownathimunbelievably.Mymindwasawhirlwindofthoughts.Coulditbetrue?Buttherule...Ilookedattheeagerfacesoftheboysandfeltmyresolvecrumbling."Okay,butwemustbecareful,"Iwhispered.Wemadeourwayquietly,myheartinmythroat.Asweapproachedthebasementdoor,Icouldhearmyownbreathing,soloudinthesilence.Ipushedthedooropenslowly,half-expectingamessaspromised.Instead,asoftglowgreetedus.Theroomwasaperfectcopyofmyownbedroombackhome.Itwaslikesteppingbackintime.TheantiquedresserthatRichardhadrefinishedwasthere,alongwithmyfavoritereadingchair.Memoriesfloodedback,andIsankontothechair,overcome.Theboyshoppedaround,excitedtohaveshownmetheirdiscovery.Soon,NatalieandJamescamedown."Wewantedyoutohaveapieceofyouroldhomehere,Mom,"Nataliesaid,huggingme.Thisbasement,onceforbidden,hadnowbecomeabridgeconnectingmypasthappinesswithmynewlife,allthankstotheloveofmyfamily.Onepossibleversion:Ipaused,glancingdownathimunbelievably.Ericsaidhewouldshowittome.BeforeIcouldstophim,hejumpedoffthecouchandgrabbedmyhand,tuggingmetowardthebasementdoor.Icalledthatwewerenotsupposedtobegoingdownthere.“Thereitis!”Ericexclaimed,pointingtowardadoorhiddenbehindalargesheet