讀后續(xù)寫+空手道班友誼故事+講義 高三元月質(zhì)量檢測(cè)英語試題

閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段.使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。WhenIstartedkarate(空手道)classafewyearsago,1didn'tknowasingleperson.1feltashamedofhavingnoideahowtodoanyofthemoves:EventhoughIlikedthelearningpart,Ididnotlikethefeeling-worse-thaneveryonepart!ButonedayafterclasswhileIwasputtingmyshoeson,agirlnamedAbigailsaid,“Thatlastkickwepracticedissohardforme,andyou'resogoodatit”“Youmusthaveconfusedmewithsomeoneelse,"Ireplied.“I'mnotgoodatanyofit.”“Inthatcase,I'mintrouble,”shejoked,“becauseyou'retheone1standbehindandcopyinclass.”Ilaughed.“Seriously?”“Seriously!”shelaughed,too.Afterthat,webecamegreatfriends.However,afewmonthslaterwhenAbigail'smomgotajobinadifferentstateandshehadtomoveaway,Iwasrathersad.IhadatoughtimedraggingmyselftokarateforawhileafterthatImissedAbigailsomuch.Then,agirlnamedAvajoinedmyclass.Shewasalwaysquiet.Untilonedaywefinallyhadaconversation.“Itmustbeweird(怪異的)beingthenewoneinclass."Isaid.“Soweird!”saidAva.“Youdothingsreallydifferentlythanwedidatmyolddojo(柔道館).”Isuddenlyrealizedshe'dbeensilentonlybecauseshewasnew.Westartedtalkingmoreandwegotalongsowellthatwestartedhangingoutafterclass.Thenalmostayearlater.guesswhoshowedupatkarate.“Thisissocool.”Isaid.givingAbigailahugehug.“Whatareyoudoinghere?”“Mymom'sjobinNewYorkdidn'tworkout,"sheexplained.“Sowegottomoveback.“Thal'sthebestnewsever!”Isaid.“YouhavetomeetmydearfriendAva.AndAvameetmydearfriendAbigail.”Iputmyarmsaroundtheirshoulders.Feelingveryexcited,1toldthemIhopedwecouldgetalongwellandbeclosefriends,whileAbigailandAvastaredateachotherwithsomehesitationandanuncertainsmile.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150詞左右:2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。第一段：Thingsseemedallrightatfirst.第二段：Oneday.1simplycouldnottakeitanymore.一、文章大意幾年前“我”初入空手道班，因動(dòng)作生疏而深感自卑，后因Abigail夸贊自己踢腿好，兩人結(jié)緣成為好友，然而Abigail隨媽媽工作變動(dòng)搬走，“我”消沉一陣后與新同學(xué)Ava因交流熟悉起來。近一年后Abigail歸來，“我”興奮介紹她與Ava相識(shí)，起初三人一同訓(xùn)練、課后交流看似融洽，實(shí)則Abigail與Ava相處有些拘謹(jǐn)，之后矛盾顯現(xiàn)，“我”出面調(diào)解，最終化解矛盾，三人友誼升溫，展現(xiàn)出友誼建立、波折與修復(fù)的過程。二、故事山分析開端：“我”初入空手道班時(shí)孤獨(dú)、技藝不精，心情低落，為故事營(yíng)造壓抑起始氛圍，引出后續(xù)交友情節(jié)。發(fā)展：Abigail主動(dòng)搭話，以夸贊化解“我”的自卑，兩人友誼建立，后她搬走，Ava出現(xiàn)與“我”交好，情節(jié)起伏推動(dòng)故事。高潮：Abigail回歸，三人相處暗流涌動(dòng)，矛盾爆發(fā)，緊張氛圍達(dá)到頂點(diǎn)，引發(fā)讀者對(duì)友誼走向的好奇。結(jié)局：“我”介入調(diào)解，Abigail和Ava和解，友誼加固，以溫馨畫面收尾，回歸友誼珍貴主題。三、五處伏筆及續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)伏筆：“我”初入班對(duì)空手道動(dòng)作一竅不通而自卑。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：在調(diào)解矛盾時(shí)，以此經(jīng)歷勸說兩人要相互包容，共同進(jìn)步，不要因小問題破壞友誼。伏筆：Abigail曾因“我”踢腿好而主動(dòng)搭話。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：后續(xù)訓(xùn)練中，安排兩人一組練習(xí)踢腿動(dòng)作，讓她們?cè)趨f(xié)作中增進(jìn)了解，化解隔閡。伏筆：Abigail搬走讓“我”消沉許久。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：面對(duì)兩人矛盾，“我”害怕重蹈覆轍，失去朋友，所以急切調(diào)解，守護(hù)友誼。伏筆：Ava初入班安靜。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：矛盾爆發(fā)是因?yàn)锳bigail誤解Ava的安靜性格，調(diào)解后她明白Ava只是慢熱，并非冷漠。伏筆：三人起初課后一起去吃東西、交流。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：矛盾化解后，常去的小吃店成為慶祝友誼修復(fù)的地方，每次相聚都?xì)g聲笑語，情誼更濃。四、續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)第一段：一次空手道表演臨近，班級(jí)要選拔代表。我提議三人組隊(duì)參加，起初Abigail和Ava不太情愿，但在練習(xí)過程中，為了配合默契，她們不得不深入交流，逐漸發(fā)現(xiàn)彼此對(duì)空手道動(dòng)作的獨(dú)特理解，交流增多，關(guān)系悄然緩和。第二段：表演當(dāng)天，一人出現(xiàn)失誤，另外兩人沒有絲毫抱怨，迅速補(bǔ)救，完美完成表演。下臺(tái)后，她們激動(dòng)相擁，為彼此的成長(zhǎng)與默契開心。從此，她們成為無話不談的摯友，還一起幫助新同學(xué)融入班級(jí)，將友誼的溫暖傳遞下去。五、情感線起初，“我”在空手道班因技藝不佳孤獨(dú)自卑，Abigail出現(xiàn)帶來溫暖友誼，讓“我”重燃快樂，她的離去使“我”陷入失落悲傷。Ava出現(xiàn)填補(bǔ)空缺，新友誼滋生。Abigail回歸后，“我”滿心期待三人美好情誼，察覺矛盾時(shí)焦慮揪心，調(diào)解成功后釋然欣慰，見證朋友和解成長(zhǎng)，情誼升華，深感友情珍貴，也愿將溫暖傳遞。六、故事線“我”初入空手道班，因動(dòng)作生疏自卑。與Abigail相識(shí)、相交，后她搬走。結(jié)識(shí)Ava，相處融洽。Abigail搬回，三人相聚，暗流涌動(dòng)。矛盾爆發(fā)，“我”調(diào)解。和解后友誼加固，共同成長(zhǎng)。七、主旨升華句英文Truefriendshipisnotaboutbeingalike,butaboutacceptingandcherishingeachother'sdifferences.（真正的友誼不在于彼此相似，而在于接納并珍惜彼此的差異。）Inthejourneyoffriendship,challengesaretheteststhatmakeourbondsunbreakable.（在友誼的旅程中，挑戰(zhàn)是使我們情誼牢不可破的考驗(yàn)。）Thebeautyoffriendshipliesinourabilitytoforgive,understand,andgrowtogether.（友誼的美妙在于我們有能力相互原諒、理解并共同成長(zhǎng)。）Friendshipislikeakaratetechnique;itrequirespractice,patience,andperseverancetomaster.（友誼就像空手道技巧；它需要練習(xí)、耐心和毅力才能掌握。）Throughthetrialsoffriendship,welearnthatunityandkindnesscanovercomeanyobstacle.（通過友誼的考驗(yàn)，我們明白團(tuán)結(jié)和善良可以克服任何障礙。）兩篇寫作示范第一篇第一段：Thingsseemedallrightatfirst.Thethreeofuswouldpracticekaratemovestogether,sharingtipsandtricks.Afterclass,we'dheadtothelocalpark,chattingandlaughingaswewalked.Abigailwouldtellusaboutheradventuresintheotherstate,andAvawouldlistenintently,occasionallychiminginwithherownexperiences.Iwashappytoseethemgettingalong,thinkingourfriendshipwasofftoasmoothstart.ButIcouldn'thelpnoticingtheoccasionalawkwardsilencewhentheconversationlulled,andtheforcedsmilestheysometimesgaveeachother.第二段：Oneday,Isimplycouldnottakeitanymore.Asweweregettingreadyforasparringsession,IsawAbigaildeliberatelychooseapartnerotherthanAva,andAvadidthesame.WhenIaskedthemaboutitlater,theybothjustmumbledsomethingaboutwantingtotrynewcombinations.ButIknewbetter.Thatnight,Icalledthembothandsaid,“Webecamefriendsbecausewealllovekarateandweunderstandeachother.Idon'twanttoloseeitherofyou.Let'stalkaboutwhat'sreallygoingon.”Therewasalongsilence,andthentheybothstartedtalkingatonce,airingouttheirsmallgrievances.Bytheendofthecall,theywerelaughingandpromisingtobemoreopenwitheachother.Fromthatmomenton,ourfriendshiptrulybegantoblossom.第二篇第一段：Thingsseemedallrightatfirst.Thethreeofuswouldpracticekaratemovestogether,sharingtipsandtricks.Afterclass,we'dheadtothelocalpark,chattingandlaughingaswewalked.Abigailwouldtellusaboutheradventuresintheotherstate,andAvawouldlistenintently,occasionallychiminginwithherownexperiences.Iwashappytoseethemgettingalong,thinkingourfriendshipwasofftoasmoothstart.ButIcouldn'thelpnoticingtheoccasionalawkwardsilencewhentheconversationlulled,andtheforcedsmilestheysometimesgaveeachother.第二段：Oneday,Isimplycouldnottakeitanymore.Asweweregettingreadyforasparringsession,IsawAbigaildeliberatelychooseapartnerotherthanAva,andAvadidthesame.WhenIaskedthemaboutitlater,theybothjustmumbledsomethingaboutwantingtotrynewcombinations.ButIknewbetter.Thatnight,Icalledthembothandsaid,“Webecamefriendsbecausewealllovekarateandweunderstandeachother.Idon'twanttoloseeitherofyou.Let'stalkaboutwhat'sreallygoingon.”Therewasalongsilence,andthentheybothstartedtalkingatonce,airingouttheirsmallgrievances.Bytheendofthecall,theywerelaughingandpromisingtobemoreopenwitheachother.Fromthatmomenton,ourfriendshiptrulybegantoblossom.參考范文Thingsseemedallrightatfirst.However,withtimegoingby,conflictsemerged.AbigailalwayscomplainedthateverytimeIhungoutwithAva,shewasleftalone,whileAvasaidthatIpaidmoreattentiontoAbigail,whichdrovehercrazy,believingthatourfrie