作文08 海南卷-五年（2017-2021）中考英語(yǔ)滿分作文解讀+素材積累

作文08海南卷2021年海南中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)為迎接英國(guó)某中學(xué)文化交流團(tuán)到海南博物館參加即將舉辦的中國(guó)國(guó)畫(huà)展，博物館在海南某英文報(bào)上發(fā)布了一則志愿者招聘廣告。假定你是紅星中學(xué)的李華，想成為其中一員，請(qǐng)根據(jù)廣告內(nèi)容和要求寫(xiě)一封自薦信。要求：1.要點(diǎn)齊全，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.行文連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名；4.80詞左右（文章開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）DearSir/Madam,I’mLiHua.astudentfromHongXingMiddleSchool._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHuaDearSir/Madam,I’mLiHua,astudentfromHongXingMiddleSchool.Iwanttobeamemberofthevolunteers.Firstofall,I’vebeenlearningEnglishfor8years.IspeakfluentEnglishsoIhavenodifficultyinexpressingmyselfclearlyinEnglish.Besides,Istartedtolearnpaintingattheageof4,andIhaveagoodknowledgeofChinesepaintings.IwillbeabletotellstudentsfromEnglandaboutChinesepaintingsandculture.Finally,I’moutgoingandgoodwithpeople.AndI’llbetotallyfreeinAugust.I’msureIamtherightpersonyouarelookingfor.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題為書(shū)信作文，要注意書(shū)信標(biāo)準(zhǔn)格式。題目已給出要點(diǎn)提示，學(xué)生應(yīng)按照要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)用第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)根據(jù)所述內(nèi)容正確使用現(xiàn)在時(shí)、過(guò)去時(shí)或?qū)?lái)時(shí)。文章應(yīng)包含全部要點(diǎn)，并可進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)法時(shí)態(tài)使用錯(cuò)誤。2020年海南中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)周末是我們生活中重要的一部分，合理利用周末時(shí)間對(duì)青少年至關(guān)重要。某校英語(yǔ)雜志社就“如何讓周末生活更有意義”開(kāi)展征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖，以“HowtoMakeOurweekendsmoremeaningful”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿。要求：1.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。2.所有提示須全部用上，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名。4.80詞左右（文章開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。HowtomakeOurWeekendsMoreMeaningfulLifeonweekendsisanimportantpartofourdailylife.Howcanwemakeourweekendsmoremeaningful?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inshort,let’smakegooduseofourweekends!HowtoMakeOurWeekendsMoreMeaningfulLifeonweekendsisanimportantpartofourdailylife.Howcanwemakeourweekendsmoremeaningful?Herearesomeofmysuggestions.Firstofall,theweekendisagreattimeforfamilytogettogether.It'sgoodtohelpourparentsdosomehousework.Thatcanhelpusunderstandeachotherbetterandshowourloveforthem.Secondly,weshouldspendtimedevelopingourinterestsandhobbiesattheweekend.Forexample,IwouldliketochoosesomebookstoreadandcommunicatewithothersafterreadingThirdly,wecantakepartinvolunteeringactivities,likevisitingtheoldpeople'shomeordoingsomecleaninginpublicplaces.Lastbutnotleast,tomakeourselveshealthier,takingexerciseisagoodchoice.Inshort,let'smakegooduseofourweekends【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于說(shuō)明文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要按說(shuō)明文格式寫(xiě)。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)介紹周末的生活是我們?nèi)粘Ｉ畹闹匾糠?；第二段介紹我們?nèi)绾巫屩苣┥罡幸饬x；最后一段總結(jié)要充分利用周末。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用三段式；用第一、三人稱(chēng)來(lái)敘述內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，在介紹讓周末生活更有意義的建議時(shí)，敘述完整且條理清晰。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：firstofall；spendtimedoingsth；forexample；wouldliketo；communicatewith；takepartin；makegooduseof。句型：Herebe句型；It's+形容詞+todosth。2019年海南中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)據(jù)悉，我國(guó)青少年的近視率居全球第一，70%的學(xué)生有視力方面的問(wèn)題．為引起廣大青少年的重視，某英語(yǔ)報(bào)刊正在開(kāi)展以"SavingOurEyesight"為題的征文活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，分析造成青少年近視的原因并提出保護(hù)視力的合理建議．要求：1．語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范．2．所有提示須全部用上，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名．4.80詞左右（文章開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．SavingOurEyesightAsthesayinggoes,"Eyesarethewindowtothesoul（心靈）"However,70%ofushavepooreyesight.Whathascausedthisproblem?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inaword,let’stakecareofoureyessothatwecanseeourbrightfuture.SavingOurEyesightAsthesayinggoes,“Eyesarethewindowtothesoul（心靈）.”However,70%ofushavepooreyesight.Whathascausedthisproblem?Themainreasonisthebadhabitsofusingeyes.Forexample,manyofusreadinwrongpositionssuchasreadinginbedorkeepingoureyestooclosetothebook.Besides,spendingtoomuchtimeonscreenandtakinglessexercisealsocausepooreyesight.Nowsomethingmustbedonetoprotectoureyes.First,sitstraightwhilereading.Second,don'tforgettorestduringtheworkingtime.It'salsohelpfultorelaxoureyesbyseeingsomegreentreesordoingeyeexercises.Lastbutnotleast，eatsomefoodthatisgoodforoureyeslikecarrotsorfish.Inaword,let'stakecareofoureyessothatwecanseeourbrightfuture.【詳解】這是一篇話題作文。要求以"SavingOurEyesight"為題，寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于保護(hù)眼睛的文章，分析造成青少年近視的原因并提出保護(hù)視力的合理建議。寫(xiě)作時(shí)所有提示須全部用上，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。作文的首尾都已經(jīng)給出，中間可以用兩段來(lái)進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，首先分析造成青少年近視的原因：比如在床上閱讀或者眼睛離書(shū)太近。此外，觀看手機(jī)或電視太長(zhǎng)時(shí)間，少運(yùn)動(dòng)也會(huì)導(dǎo)致視力下降。然后介紹保護(hù)視力的合理建議：姿勢(shì)端正。注意休息，放松我們的眼睛，吃些對(duì)眼睛有益的食物，如胡蘿卜或魚(yú)。注意人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)的使用，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。恰當(dāng)使用介詞，做到行文流暢，條例清晰。2018年海南中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)2018年5月5日上午，第十屆海南省“書(shū)香節(jié)”啟動(dòng)儀式在海南省圖書(shū)館舉行。為響應(yīng)“書(shū)香節(jié)”活動(dòng)，你校?？⑽陌嬲陂_(kāi)展以“ILikeReading”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹你對(duì)閱讀的看法及個(gè)人的閱讀情況。要求：1.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；2.必須包含所給提示內(nèi)容，并做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；4.不少于80詞。（短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）ILikeReading1.Theimportance（重要性）ofreadingopenupone’smind,getmoreknowledge,…2.Myreadinghabitwhentoreadwheretoreadwhattoread3.Myfavoritebook(s)…4.Myreadingplan…Readingmakesafullman.It’simportantandnecessaryforeveryonetoread.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________．Readingisalifelongjourney.Ihopeeveryonecanreadasmuchaspossibleinthefuture.Readingmakesafullman.It’simportantandnecessaryforeveryonetoread.Readingcanopenupourmindsandhelpusgetmoreknowledge.Asforme,Ilikereadingalot.Inmysparetime,Inotonlygotobookstorestobuybooksbutalsoborrowbooksfromthelibrary.Beforegoingtobed,Ialwaysspendsometimereading.Thatreallymakesmefeelrelaxed.Onweekends,Ienjoyreadingsomenovels.JourneytotheWestismyfavoritebook.AndMonkeyKingismysuperhero.Thesummerholidayiscoming,IamgoingtoreadHarryPotterwhichisaverypopularmagicbook.Readingisalifelongjourney.Ihopeeveryonecanreadasmuchaspossibleinthefuture.【詳解】1、題干解讀：題目要求以“ILikeReading”為主題寫(xiě)寫(xiě)一篇短文，并根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容介紹你對(duì)閱讀的看法及個(gè)人的閱讀情況，要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確。2、例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用四段式；時(shí)態(tài)主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；例文詳細(xì)具體的介紹了對(duì)閱讀的看法以及個(gè)人的閱讀情況；結(jié)構(gòu)清晰；邏輯性強(qiáng)。3、高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：penupourminds；helpsbdosth；Inmysparetime；borrow……from；feelrelaxed。句型：Inotonlygotobookstorestobuybooksbutalsoborrowbooksfromthelibrary；IamgoingtoreadHarryPotterwhichisaverypopularmagicbook.2017年海南中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)梁玲同學(xué)是你校初三（1）班的學(xué)生。她家境貧寒，但她勇于面對(duì)困難、主動(dòng)承擔(dān)家務(wù)且刻苦學(xué)習(xí)，大家都很喜歡并敬佩她。作為學(xué)校英文報(bào)刊記者，你對(duì)她進(jìn)行了采訪。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的采訪筆記寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于她的報(bào)道。要求：1.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；2.必須包含所給提示，并做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；4.詞數(shù)80左右。（短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）LiangLing,a14-year-oldgirl,isastudentinClass1,Grade9.Shecomesfrom____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sheisgreat.Let’swishherabetterfuture.LiangLing，a14-year-oldgirl，isastudentinClass1，Grade9．Shecomesfromapoorfamily．Sinceshewasalittlegirl，shehascaredforherfamily．EverydayLiangLinghelpswiththecooking，cleaningandwashing．Iaskedherwhethershewastiredofdoingsomuchhousework．"Notreally．"Shesmiled．"I'vegotusedtoit．"Thoughsheisbusy，shestudieshardandgetsgoodgrades．What'smore，sheisalwaysreadytohelpothers．Everyonelikesherbecauseofherkindness．Inoureyes，shealwaysfacesdifficultiesbravely．Nomatterhowhardthelifeis，shenevergivesup．Sheisgreat．Let'swishherabetterfuture．【解析】試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是人物報(bào)道，結(jié)合本題所給的寫(xiě)作信息，闡述梁玲的個(gè)人情況、表達(dá)對(duì)梁玲優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)的敬佩和贊揚(yáng)。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)為主，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意連詞、固定短語(yǔ)的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語(yǔ)句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出自己的感想和看法。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。文中helpswith，What'smore,isalwaysreadyto,becauseof,nomatter,givesup,gotusedto，and等詞（組）恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文中還多處使用了賓語(yǔ)從句，讓步狀語(yǔ)從句、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。中考英語(yǔ)作文分類(lèi)好詞好句1.感官活動(dòng)與思維活動(dòng)bedelightedindoing…做某事很愉快takeapleasureindoingsth.做某事很高興besickforone’shome懷念家鄉(xiāng)haveastrongdesiretodosth.對(duì)做某事有強(qiáng)烈的愿望。lookaroundfor…（在某地）查找/搜尋……catchsightof…看見(jiàn)……takealookat…看一眼…h(huán)aveagoodunderstandingof…對(duì)……能很好地理解considersb.（sth.）tobe認(rèn)為某人（某物）…cometoknow…開(kāi)始認(rèn)識(shí)到……realizethat+從句認(rèn)識(shí)到……knowthat+從句知道……2.信件開(kāi)頭常用語(yǔ)Iwasdelightedtoreceiveyourletter.我很高興收到你的來(lái)信。Yourlettercametomethismorning.我今天上午收到了你的來(lái)信。Itwasagreatpleasuretolearnthat。。。IhavereceivedyourletterofJulythe29th.我已經(jīng)收到了你7月29號(hào)的來(lái)信。I’mwritingtoyouaboutthelecturetobegivennextMonday.我給你寫(xiě)信是想打聽(tīng)下星期一講座的事。I’mwritingtoaskifyoucancomenextweek.我給你寫(xiě)信是想問(wèn)你下個(gè)星期能不能來(lái)？Howtimeflies！It’sthreemonthssinceIsawyoulast.光陰似箭，我們已經(jīng)三個(gè)月沒(méi)見(jiàn)面了。Thankyouforyourletter.謝謝你給我寫(xiě)信。Inreplytoyourletterabouttheexhibitionthisyear…現(xiàn)在回答你上封信當(dāng)中關(guān)于今年的展覽事宜……Letmetellyouthat…讓我告訴你……3.信件結(jié)尾常用語(yǔ)Tomjoinsmeinsendingallgoodwishestoyouandyourfamily.我和湯姆祝福你們?nèi)?。Iimaginewe’llseeyouagain，soI’llendfornow.我想我們很快就會(huì)見(jiàn)面的，就寫(xiě)到這兒吧。Pleaseremembermetoyourwholefamily.請(qǐng)代我向你全家問(wèn)好。Givemybestregards（wishes）toyourmother.請(qǐng)代我向你媽媽致意。Bestwishes.致以最良好的祝愿。Withlove愛(ài)你的Wishyouapleasantjourney.祝你旅途愉快。Wishyousuccess.祝你成功。Wishyouthebestofhealth（luck）祝你健康（好運(yùn)）。LookingforwardtoyournextvisittoChina.歡迎您下次再來(lái)中國(guó)。Expectingtohearfromyouassoonaspossible.希望能盡快收到你的來(lái)信。4.其他Thereissomethingwrongwith……有問(wèn)題。Ithappensthat…碰巧……Ittakesb.sometimetodosth.某人花費(fèi)一些時(shí)間做某事Itissaidthat…據(jù)說(shuō)…befitfor…適合于…beshortof缺乏havenochoicebuttodosth.除了做某事外，別無(wú)選擇Ican’thelpit.我無(wú)法抑制自己。beinneedof…需要/缺少……bemistakenabout…把……搞錯(cuò)fallbehind落后于（…）catchupwith…緊跟/追趕……bewelcometodosth.歡迎做某事中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作滿分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)1、段落分明（文章結(jié)構(gòu)層次清晰）2、要點(diǎn)齊全（所有內(nèi)容不少不漏）3、時(shí)態(tài)恰當(dāng)（主要時(shí)態(tài)使用恰當(dāng)）4、結(jié)構(gòu)正確（句子結(jié)構(gòu)、搭配正確）5、觀點(diǎn)正確（合理的感受、看法、建議等）6、句式多樣（豐富的詞匯及句子結(jié)構(gòu)）7、過(guò)渡自然（適當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡詞，行文流暢）8、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范（整潔清楚、格式規(guī)范）英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)六步法1、審清題目?？忌鷦?dòng)筆前要審閱題目（包括圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容），提示詞，明確要求，確定格式。2、編寫(xiě)提綱（列提綱）。編寫(xiě)提綱是英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作中的重要環(huán)節(jié)，考生動(dòng)筆前在審好題的基礎(chǔ)上先列好提綱。提綱也就是要點(diǎn)，考生可以列出一些詞組、短語(yǔ)或句型。3、擴(kuò)展成句。依據(jù)提綱，將要點(diǎn)擴(kuò)展成句。考生要盡量注意人稱(chēng)，動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)及詞性的變化。4、連句成篇。運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞、過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)及語(yǔ)句將擴(kuò)展好的句子連成完整的語(yǔ)篇。全文應(yīng)前后照應(yīng)，過(guò)渡自然。5、審查修改。完稿后考生要認(rèn)真審查修改，確保內(nèi)容符合題意；語(yǔ)法正確，句子符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)法，避免漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)句子；大小寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)準(zhǔn)確無(wú)誤。6、抄寫(xiě)定稿。用清晰規(guī)范的英文字體將作文抄上答題卡，盡可能不要涂改。中考寫(xiě)作萬(wàn)能句型【開(kāi)頭句】1.Ithink/AsfarasIknow/Inmyopinion/asfarasIamconcerned/frommypointofview 我認(rèn)為…Inmyopinion/Frommypointofview,weshouldknowmoreaboutgoodmanners. 在我看來(lái)，我們應(yīng)更懂禮貌。2.Itisclearthat/Clearly顯而易見(jiàn)...Itisclear(that)thiscityneedsmoreschools,busesandhospitals.顯然，這個(gè)城市需要更多學(xué)校、公車(chē)和醫(yī)院。Clearly,peoplewholaughmorearehealthier!顯然，笑得更多的人更健康！3.Asanoldsayinggoes...俗話說(shuō)…Asanoldsayinggoes,“Goodhealthisworthmorethanwealth.”俗話說(shuō)：“健康比財(cái)富更重要。”4.generallyspeaking一般來(lái)說(shuō)；總的來(lái)說(shuō)Generallyspeaking,Ithinklifeisbettertoday.總的來(lái)說(shuō)，我認(rèn)為如今的生活更好了。5.Thetopicof…isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.最近…話題越來(lái)越流行Thetopicofshoppingonlineisbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.最近，網(wǎng)購(gòu)的話題越來(lái)越火熱。6.itisbelieved+(that)從句人們認(rèn)為ItisbelievedthattheInternethasbot