人教版九年級(jí)英語全一冊Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark 滿分范文必背

Unit4Iusedtobeafraidofthedark單元話題滿分范文必背1．你校英語報(bào)正舉辦以“MyCountry,MyPride(驕傲)”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。請你寫一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.簡要闡述在環(huán)境、文化、旅游以及科技等4個(gè)方面中國近幾年的變化；2.談?wù)勀愕母邢搿Ｗ⒁猓?.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名等關(guān)鍵信息。MyCountry,MyPride________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MyCountry,MyPrideObviously,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinChinatheseyears.Forexample,theenvironmenthaschangedforthebettersincethegovernmenttooksomeusefulmeasures.Clearriversandblueskyreturntoourlife.Atthesametime,Chineseculturespreadsquicklyaroundtheworld,whichmakesmoreforeignersinterestedinit.What’smore,Chinahasmadegreatprogressinitsspaceindustry.Manyspaceshipshavebeensuccessfullylaunched,makingChina’sspacedreamareality.Finally,withtheimprovementofpeople’slivingstandard,peoplenotonlytraveltothecountry,butalsotraveltothewholeworld.I’mproudofourcountryandIhopeI’llbetheprideofourcountryinthefuture.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文，屬于材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：采用“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)”；③提示：要求包含所有要點(diǎn)提示，內(nèi)容完整，條理清晰，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的使用。[寫作步驟]第一步，總體介紹中國近幾年的發(fā)展；第二步，具體闡述中國在環(huán)境、文化、旅游以及科技等方面的變化；第三步，表達(dá)自己的感想。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①takeplace發(fā)生②interestedin對……感興趣③notonly...butalso...不但……而且……[高分句型]①Forexample,theenvironmenthaschangedforthebettersincethegovernmenttooksomeusefulmeasures.（時(shí)間狀語從句）②Atthesametime,Chineseculturespreadsquicklyaroundtheworld,whichmakesmoreforeignersinterestedinit.（定語從句）2．隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展，我們的生活變得越來越好。學(xué)校英語角本周的主題是“Changes”。請根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖，用英語寫篇短文，談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。要求?.內(nèi)容完整，語言通順，意思連貫；2.詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。ChangesInthepastfewyears,greatchangeshavetakenplacearoundus.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Changes

Inthepastfewyears,greatchangeshavetakenplacearoundus.Personally,I’veseensomeimportantchangestoo.Before,Iusedtobeshyandnottalkmuch,butnowI’mmoreoutgoingandconfident.I’vealsostartedtolikestudyingmoreandworkhardertowardsmygoals.Aboutmyhometown,thechangesareverynoticeable.Before,wemainlyusedbuses,butnowwehavehigh-speedrailwaysthatquicklyandcomfortablyconnectustonearbycities.

Acrossthecountry,theimprovementsaredeep.Before,wehadproblemswithdirtywaterandemptyhills,butnowwehavebeautifulgreensceneryandcleanwater.Insteadofjust“MadeinChina”,ourcountrynowfocusesoncreatingnewthingsandbeingcreative,whichwillmakeourfuturebetter.Finally,wefeelthattheenvironmenthasbecomebetterandpeoplehavebecomehappier.Inaword,ourlifeisbecomingbetterandbetter.Welookforwardtoabetterfuture.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文。②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)有“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”、“一般過去時(shí)”和“現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)”。③提示：根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖介紹各種變化，注意時(shí)態(tài)準(zhǔn)確，保證內(nèi)容完整，語言通順，意思連貫。[寫作步驟]①第一步，承接短文開頭，點(diǎn)明主旨，說明我們周圍發(fā)生了巨大的變化；②第二步，從個(gè)人、家鄉(xiāng)、國家、和感受方面介紹各種變化；③第三步，總結(jié)全文，生活越來越好，要對更好的未來保持期待。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①noticeable明顯的，顯而易見的②insteadof而不是，代替③focuseson專注于，集中于[高分句型]①Insteadofjust“MadeinChina”,ourcountrynowfocusesoncreatingnewthingsandbeingcreative,whichwillmakeourfuturebetter.(which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)3．隨著科技的飛速發(fā)展，我們的日常生活正在經(jīng)歷前所未有的巨大變化。為此，你校決定于近期舉辦一場主題為“科技給生活帶來的改變”的英語演講比賽。作為參賽者，你需要根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，描述科技對我們生活的具體改變。differentaspects(方面)oflifeinthepastatpresentthewaypeoplekeepintouchwithotherswroteletters…useWeChat(微信)…thewaypeoplebuythingsbycashonlinepay……注意：1.可在內(nèi)容提示的基礎(chǔ)上適當(dāng)拓展信息；2.詞數(shù)80詞左右（短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）；3.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評分。Goodmorning,ladiesandgentlemen!Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlifebecauseofscienceandtechnology._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou!【答案】例文：Goodmorning,ladiesandgentlemen!Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlifebecauseofscienceandtechnology.Inthepast,thewaywekeptintouchwithotherswasmainlythroughwritinglettersormeetinginperson.Now,wecankeepintouchbyusingWeChat,mobilephonesoremails.Weusedtopayforthingswithcash.ButnowweshoponlineusingAlipay,WeChatorDouyin.Weusedtogooutandcanonlyrelyonbicyclesorbuses.Wenowhavehigh-speedtrains,airplanes.Manyfamiliesalreadyhaveprivatecars.Ourlifeisgettingbetterandmoreconvenient.Ihopeweallhavelessworkinghoursinthefutureandmorefreetimetorelaxourselves.

Thankyou!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過去時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，首先表明科技使我們的生活發(fā)生了巨大的變化；第二步，具體介紹這些變化；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①keepintouchwith保持聯(lián)系②usedtodosth.過去常常做某事③takeplace發(fā)生[高分句型]①Ihopeweallhavelessworkinghoursinthefutureandmorefreetimetorelaxourselves.(省略that的賓語從句)4．近幾年，河南發(fā)生了翻天覆地的變化。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)和要求，以“GreatChangesinHenan”為題寫一篇英語短文。要點(diǎn)：1.人們的生活條件有了很大改善；2.生活環(huán)境得到了改善；3.交通更方便，每年都有許多游客來河南參觀。要求：1.文中須包含要點(diǎn)中的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.詞數(shù)90左右。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文GreatChangesinHenanInrecentyears,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown,Henan.People’slivingconditionshaveimprovedalot.Wecanseetallbuildingshereandthere.Childreninthecountrysidearealsoabletoreceiveagoodeducationnow.Thelivingenvironmenthasalsoimproved.Theskyisbluerandthewaterisclearer.Theroadsarewiderandthetreesaregreener.What’smore,thetrafficbecomesmoreconvenientbecausethereisanairport,ahigh-speedrailstation,superhighways,railwaystationsandsoon.Itattractsmanytouristsfromhomeandabroadeveryyear.Ibelievethatmyhometown,Henan,willbecomemoreandmorebeautifulinthefuture.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，首先介紹生活條件的改善；第二步，接著介紹生活環(huán)境的改善；第三步，最后介紹交通條件和對河南美好未來的期望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①Recentyears最近幾年②beableto能夠③What’smore更重要的是④inthefuture在未來[高分句型]①What’smore,thetrafficbecomesmoreconvenientbecausethereisanairport,ahigh-speedrailstation,superhighways,railwaystationsandsoon.(because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句)②Ibelievethatmyhometown,Henan,willbecomemoreandmorebeautifulinthefuture.(that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)5．我們要勇于面對困難和挑戰(zhàn)。假如你是李華，某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“DealingwithProblems”為主題的征文活動(dòng)，請用英文寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.兩年前你性格內(nèi)向、和同學(xué)相處有困難；2.英語老師的建議(多與同學(xué)溝通交流、參加俱樂部……)；3.你的感受。要求：1.所寫內(nèi)容必須包括以上要點(diǎn)；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；3.內(nèi)容連貫，并進(jìn)行合理拓展；4.100詞左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DealingwithProblemsPeoplealwayshavesomeproblemsintheirlives.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】參考例文:DealingwithProblemsPeoplealwayshavesomeproblemsintheirlives.TwoyearsagoIwasshy,andIcouldn’tgetonwellwithmyclassmates,soIfeltveryupset.ItalkedaboutmyproblemwithmyEnglishteacherandshegavemesomeadvice.Itookheradvice.FirstIjoinedaclubandtriedtomakesomenewfriends.Thenintheclass,Istartedtohavesomeshortconversationswithmyfriends.Itwasdifficultatfirst,butthemoreItried,theeasieritbecame.FinallyIsolvedmyproblemandIwasveryhappy.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般過去時(shí)”為主；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹自己兩年前的性格及問題；第二步，介紹英語老師給出的建議；第三步，介紹自己的變化及感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①getonwellwithsb.與某人相處融洽②upset沮喪的③advice建議④trytodosth.試著做某事⑤conversation談話[高分句型]Itwasdifficultatfirst,butthemoreItried,theeasieritbecame.(the+比較級(jí),the+比較級(jí)越……越……)6．在鄉(xiāng)村振興背景下，新時(shí)代農(nóng)村發(fā)展日新月異，美麗鄉(xiāng)村建設(shè)也步入了快車道。某英文報(bào)舉辦“家鄉(xiāng)的變化”主題征文活動(dòng)。請你根據(jù)以下提示，以“Thechangesinmyhometown”為題，談?wù)勀慵亦l(xiāng)的變化。Thechangesinmyhometown過去現(xiàn)在將來生活貧困，房屋破舊。污染嚴(yán)重，垃圾遍地。交通不便，游客很少。住房寬敞明亮，許多人有了自己的汽車。山更綠了，水更清了，天更藍(lán)了。每年有成千上萬來自世界各地的游客。請你展望家鄉(xiāng)的未來。注意：（1）文章必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮以使行文連貫；（2）使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)讓書寫美觀，條理清晰，層次分明；（3）文中請勿使用真實(shí)人名，校名和地名；（4）詞數(shù)：80詞左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文TheChangesInMyHometownInthepast,myhometownwasverysmall,andpeoplelivedapoorlife.Thehouseswereoldandsmall.Pollutionwasveryserious,andtherewasrubbisheverywhere.Thetrafficwasnotconvenient,sofewvisitorscamehere.Nowgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Theenvironmenthasbecomemorebeautiful.Themountainshaveturnedgreener,theriversareclearerandtheskyisbluer.Therearetrees,flowersandgrasseverywhere.Peopleliveabetterlife.Theirhousesarelargeandbright.Manypeoplehavetheirowncars.Everyyear,thousandsofpeoplefromallovertheworldcometoourcity.I’msureitwillgetricherandmorebeautifulinthefuture.Ilovemyhometown.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：主要時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過去時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的每一項(xiàng)提示，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹了家鄉(xiāng)過去的狀況；第二步，描述家鄉(xiāng)現(xiàn)在的的變化；第三步，展望家鄉(xiāng)的未來，表達(dá)期待。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①takeplace發(fā)生②allovertheworld全世界③inthefuture在未來[高分句型]①Themountainshaveturnedgreener,theriversareclearerandtheskyisbluer.(and并列句)②I’msureitwillgetricherandmorebeautifulinthefuture.(賓語從句)7．假設(shè)你叫李華，近期你的學(xué)校舉行了一次名為“TheChanges”的征文活動(dòng)，你打算參加并列出寫作提綱如下。提示：生活中變化（1）以前工廠向河里傾倒垃圾，現(xiàn)在政府已經(jīng)采取措施改善環(huán)境。（2）以前住在低矮破舊的房子，現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)搬進(jìn)高大現(xiàn)代的公寓。（3）以前家里只有自行車，現(xiàn)在很多家庭有轎車。自己的變化（1）去了許多名勝古跡，例如……（2）比以前更加喜愛閱讀，閱讀的益處：……（3）……，……（變化及感受）要求：1）內(nèi)容須包含所有要點(diǎn)，語句通順，意思連貫；2）詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右；3）展開的內(nèi)容需合理想象，用自己的話補(bǔ)充完整。TheChanges_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文TheChangesTherearemanychangesinmylife.Forexample,thefactoryusedtodumpwasteintotheriver,butnowthegovernmenthastakenactiontoimprovetheenvironment.Besides,Ilivedinalowandshabbyhousebefore,butnowIhavemovedintoatallandmodernapartmentinstead.Inoticethatmanyfamilieshavecarsnowbutweonlyhadbicyclessomeyearsago.Ontheotherhand,Ihavechangedalot,too.Iwenttomanyplacesofinterest,liketheGreatWall.Itendtolikereadingmorethanbefore.Readinghelpsmerelaxmyselfafterclass.Toconclude,manygoodchangeshavetakenplacebothinmylifeanduponmyself.Ibelievethecomingfuturewillbebrighterandbrighter!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)”和“一般過去時(shí)”為主；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖；第二步，介紹生活中的變化以及自己的變化；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①dump傾倒②takeaction采取行動(dòng)③shabby破舊的④ontheotherhand另一方面⑤placesofinterest名勝古跡⑥takeplace發(fā)生[高分句型]Inoticethatmanyfamilieshavecarsnowbutweonlyhadbicyclessomeyearsago.(that引導(dǎo)賓語從句)8．隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展，我們的生活變得越來越好。學(xué)校英語角本周的主題是“Changesaroundus”。請你根據(jù)下表中的提示，用英語寫篇短文，談?wù)勛约旱目捶āＲ螅?.內(nèi)容完整，語言通順，意思連貫；2.詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。Inthepastfewyears,greatchangeshavetakenplacearoundus.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Inthepastfewyears,greatchangeshavetakenplacearoundus.Nowpeoplecangotravellingabroadintheirsparetime.Iftheydon’thaveenoughtime,theycantravelonline.Ourstudiesarealsochanging.Forexample,morestudentsareinterestedinreadingandgroupwork.Theylikeworkingtogether.Moreandmorepeoplehavetheirowncars.Andhigh-speedtrainsmakepeopletravelfasterandeasier.Also,ourenvironmenthaschangedalot.Theairisfresherandthewateriscleaner.Weoftentakeawalkhappilyinthepark.Inaword,ourlifeisbecomingbetterandbetter.Welookforwardtoabetterfuture.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文。②時(shí)態(tài)：本文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。③提示：根據(jù)題干中的提示要點(diǎn)介紹我們周圍的變化，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫作步驟]①第一步，點(diǎn)明主旨：我們周圍的生活發(fā)生了巨大的變化；②第二步，結(jié)合題干中所給的要點(diǎn)，從旅行、學(xué)習(xí)、交通和環(huán)境、生活方面來介紹發(fā)生的改變；③第三步，總結(jié)全文，生活越來越好，要對更好的未來保持期待。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①inone’ssparetime在某人業(yè)余時(shí)間②beinterestedin對……感興趣③travelabroad出國旅游④lookforwardto期待[高分句型]Inaword,ourlifeisbecomingbetterandbetter.(“比較級(jí)+比較級(jí)”表示“越來越……”)9．隨著年齡的增長，你周圍的事物也發(fā)生了很大變化。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，以“GreatChangesAroundMe”為題，寫一篇短文。寫作要點(diǎn)：1.Inthepast（narrowroads，…h(huán)ouses，air…，water…）；2.Atpresent（wideandcleanroads，differentkindsoftransportation，…h(huán)ouses，…sky)；3.Yourfeelings…要求：1.要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)的信息（地名、校名和人名等）；3.90詞左右（開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。GreatChangesAroundMeInthepastfewyears,greatchangeshavetakenplacearoundme._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion：GreatChangesAroundMeInthepastfewyears,greatchangeshavetakenplacearoundme.Inmyhometown,theroadsusedtobenarrowandcrowded.Thehousesweresmallandold.Theairwasn’tfreshenough.Sometimes,therewasterriblesmell.Theriverwaspollutedbadly.Nowadays,theroadsarewideandclean.It’sreallyconvenientforpeopletogoout.Wecanchoosedifferentkindsoftransportationtogoanywhere.Lotsoftallbuildingshavebeenbuilt.Mostofushavemovedtobigandbeautifulhouses.Theskyisveryblue.Myhometownlookslikeabiggardenwithgreentrees,grassandcolorfulflowers.Wearelivingahappylife.I’msureastimegoesby,ourlifewillbecomebetterandbetter!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過去時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。