高考英語一輪復習+讀后續(xù)寫練習+當老人接到了詐騙電話+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習當老人接到了詐騙電話1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文GrandpaBillRodgershasnarrowlyescapedaphonescam(欺騙).Itallbeganwithatelephonecall.BillisanelderlymanfromCincinnati,Ohio,whowaslookingforwardtospendingtimewithhisfamilyovertheholidays.TheywereallcomingtovisithimathisElmwoodPlacehome,includinghisadultgrandsonDavid.Oneafternoon,whilenappinginbed,hewasawakenedbythesharpringingofhistelephone.4續(xù)寫原文“Whowillringmeupatthistime?”Hewondered.Peeringtowardsthephone,hehesitantlypickeditup.Fromthereceivercameanurgentvoice.“Grandpa,thisisDavid.Iamintrouble.”BeforeBillcouldaskhimanyquestion,hecontinued,onandoff,halfcrying,“Ihitawoman’scarandshewassevenmonthspregnant.AndtheychargedmewithdrunkendrivingandI’minprison...”Hesobbedloudly.HisvoicewassobrokenthatBillcouldhardlymatchitwiththegentleandwarmvoiceofhisgrandson.PoorDavid!Hemustbesuffering!Billpanicked(驚慌)immediately.5續(xù)寫原文Withoutmoredetailedcommunication,thephonepassedsuddenlytoanotherperson—David’slawyerwhohadadeepervoice.Seemingly,heunderstoodBill’sanxietyandattemptedtocomforthimwithasolution.“NowtheonlywaytohelpDavidistogotoWal-Martandtransfer$2,300toanotherstore.IwouldpickupthemoneyandthenuseittopostDavid’sbail(保釋金).”“IamsureeverythingwouldbeOKaslongasthemoneyisinplace,”headded.Ultimately,heloweredhisvoice,“Don’ttellanybody.Youdon’twanttomakeyourgrandsonlookuglyinyourneighborhood.”ThelawyerhungupevenbeforeBillcouldgiveananswer.6段首句Para1：Billwastotallyataloss.Para2：TheluckypartofBill’sdaywaswhenhesteppedintocashierMary’slineinWal-Mart.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9本文以人物為線索展開，講述了老人Bill一天突然接到一個電話，電話里稱孫子David遇到了麻煩，被指控酒后駕車，現(xiàn)在關(guān)在監(jiān)獄里。律師告訴老人唯一能幫助David的方法就是去沃爾瑪把2300美元轉(zhuǎn)到另一家商店，然后用它來交David的保釋金。并且囑咐老人不要把這件事告訴別人。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:Billwastotallyataloss.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“Bill完全不知所措?！笨芍?，第一段應該描寫老人想盡辦法救孫子，取了錢去沃爾瑪轉(zhuǎn)錢。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：TheluckypartofBill’sdaywaswhenhesteppedintocashierMary’slineinWal-Mart.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“Bill一天中最幸運的時刻是，他走進了沃爾瑪并且遇到了收銀員Mary?！笨芍?，第二段應該描寫Mary怎樣幫助老人識破騙局，使錢財沒有損失。12續(xù)寫素材續(xù)寫素材取錢——匆忙去轉(zhuǎn)錢——遇到Mary——詢問——幫助老人——識破騙局13續(xù)寫素材續(xù)寫素材行為類①抓起：grab/catch/snatchup②拒絕：refuse/reject/decline/turndown③泄露：reveal/leakout/letout情緒類①心碎：heartbreaking/heartrending/heart-broken②懷疑：doubtful/skeptical/suspicious/incredulous14續(xù)寫素材續(xù)寫素材[高分句型1]NotingBill’sdesperateandanxiouslook,Maryinstantlyknewsomethingwaswrong.(運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語和省略that的賓語從句)[高分句型2]DavidwassafeandsoundandBillrealizedthathenearlyfellvictimtoaphonescam!(運用了that引導的賓語從句)15Part3范文呈現(xiàn)16范文呈現(xiàn)Billwastotallyataloss.HismindwentblankandDavid’sheartbreakingsobswereechoinginhisears.Withoutasecondthought,hequicklygrabbedhisbankcardanddecidedtosparenoefforttogotoDavid’srescue.Withthecardtightlyinhishand,herushedouttothebank.Afterwithdrawingthemoney,hewentstraighttothelocalWal-Mart.Hewasoverwhelmedbythethought“Sendthemoneyandmygrandsonwillbesaved”.17范文呈現(xiàn)TheluckypartofBill’sdaywaswhenhesteppedintocashierMary’slineinWal-Mart.NotingBill’sdesperateandanxiouslook,Maryinstantlyknewsomethingwaswrong.Yet,havingthelawyer’swordsinmind,Billstubbornlyrefusedtoleakoutanyinformationandinsistedontransferringthemoney.SuddenlyanideahitMary.“Iguessyouareworryingaboutsomebody.Ibetifyoucallhimrightnow,hewillanswerthecall.”shesuggested.Thoughdoubtful,Billpressedthetelephonekeys.Theendingcanbeexpected:DavidwassafeandsoundandBillrealizedthathenearlyfellvictimtoaphonescam!18范文譯文比爾完全不知所措。他腦子一片空白，大衛(wèi)令人心碎的抽泣聲在他耳邊回響。他毫不猶豫地迅速抓起銀行卡，決定不遺余力地去救大衛(wèi)。他緊緊地握著卡片，沖向銀行。取完錢后，他直接去了當?shù)氐奈譅柆?。他被“把錢寄出去，我孫子就會得救”的想法淹沒了。比爾一天中最幸運的部分是，他走進沃爾瑪收銀員瑪麗的隊伍?，旣愖⒁獾奖葼柦^望而焦慮的神情，立刻知道出了什么事。然而，考慮到律師的話，比爾固執(zhí)地拒絕泄露任何信