高考英語百所名校好題速遞分項(xiàng)匯編 專題06 書面表達(dá)（第01期）（含解析）-人教版高三英語試題

2020屆高三百所名校好題精華速遞分項(xiàng)匯編（1）之書面表達(dá)【2020屆湖北省武漢市華中師范大學(xué)第一附屬中學(xué)高考押題】假設(shè)你是李華，你校即將舉辦一場孔子思想講座，主題是“見賢思齊焉，見不賢而內(nèi)自省也”。請寫郵件邀請對中國傳統(tǒng)文化感興趣的交換生Jim聽講座，內(nèi)容包括:1.時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；2.講座主題；3.可能的收獲。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯:《論語》TheAnalectsofConfucius儒家思想Confucianism____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearJim,Goodnewsforyou!TherewillbealectureaboutConfuciousnextweekinourschool.SinceyouareveryinterestedinChineseculture,thisisagoodchanceforyoutogetaglimpseofitsorigin-Confucianism.Thelectureisscheduledtobeheldat6pmnextFriday,inLectureHallI.YouknowwemodernChinesegettoknowtheideasofConfuciousfromthebookTheAnalectsofConfucius,whichkeepsarecordofhisideasandthoughtsaboutpoliticsandlife.TheinvitedprofessorwillfocusononeofConfucious’sayings-Whenweseemenofworth,weshouldthinkofequalingthem;whenweseemenofacontrarycharacter,weshouldturninwardsandexamineourselves.Afterthelecture,youwillknowwhatweChinesefollowinourprivatelifeandwhatshapesourpersonality.Weareapeoplewhoaregoodatreflectingonourthoughtsandbehaviours.Ifyouareinterestedinthelecture,remembertobeinLectureHallIat6pmnextFriday.Yours,LiHua【解析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文。本篇要求考生給交換生Jim寫信，邀請他參加學(xué)校即將舉辦的一場關(guān)于孔子思想的講座。體裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)為主結(jié)構(gòu)：總分總要求：1.時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)2.講座主題3.可能的收獲第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）beinterestedin/bescheduled/keeparecord/focuson/shape/reflect/remembertodosth./worth第三步：連詞成句1.Goodnewsforyou!2.TherewillbealectureaboutConfuciousnextweekinourschool.3.KnowingthatyouareveryinterestedinChineseculture,Ithinkitisagoodchanceforyoutogetaglimpseofitsorigin-Confucianism.4.Thelectureisscheduledtobeheldat6pmnextFriday,inLectureHallI.5.YouknowwemodernChinesegettoknowtheideasofConfuciousfromthebookTheAnalectsofConfucius,whichkeepsarecordofhisideasandthoughtsaboutpoliticsandlife.6.TheinvitedprofessorwillfocusononeofConfucious’sayings-Whenweseemenofworth,weshouldthinkofequalingthem;whenweseemenofacontrarycharacter,weshouldturninwardsandexamineourselves.7.Afterthelecture,youwillknowwhatweChinesefollowinourprivatelifeandwhatshapesourpersonality.8.Weareapeoplewhoaregoodatreflectingonourthoughtsandbehaviours.9.Ifinterestedinthelecture,remembertobeinLectureHallIat6pmnextFriday.第四步：連句成篇（加入銜接詞或從句）表示并列的連詞：and/but/or/so…狀語從句連詞：because/if/though/although…定語從句連詞：which/that/when/where…第五步：修改潤色（加入高級詞匯或短語）【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了一些主從復(fù)合句，例如：YouknowwemodernChinesegettoknowtheideasofConfuciousfromthebookTheAnalectsofConfucius,whichkeepsarecordofhisideasandthoughtsaboutpoliticsandlife.中which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句；Afterthelecture,youwillknowwhatweChinesefollowinourprivatelifeandwhatshapesourpersonality.中what引導(dǎo)賓語從句?！?020屆河南省新鄉(xiāng)市高三第三次模擬】假定你是你班英語科代表李華，得知許多同學(xué)長時(shí)間在網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)英語。就此請你用英語給你班同學(xué)發(fā)一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.陳述長時(shí)間在網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)造成的影響；2.你的建議（控制時(shí)間，多種形式相結(jié)合等）。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dearclassmates,I’msorrytolearnthatmanyofushavespenttoomuchtimelearningEnglishontheInternet,whichcanobviouslydoharmtoourbodies,especiallyeyesight.Thus,astherepresentativeofEnglishclass,Iwanttoofferthefollowingsuggestionstoyou.Firstofall,wecanlimitonlinestudytimetothirtyminutesatime.Secondly,weshouldcombinevariousformsofEnglishlearning.That’stosay,onlineEnglishlearningshouldbereasonablycombinedwithofflineEnglishlearning.Infact,wehavealotofthingstodobesidesstayingontheInternet,suchasdoingsomewrittenassignmentsandrelaxingourselvesonceinawhile.Inshort,let’sstudytogetherhealthilyandeffectively.Yours,LiHua【解析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求寫一封電子郵件給同學(xué)們，說明長時(shí)間網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)的影響并提出相關(guān)意見?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}體裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。要求：1.寫出背景信息，自己的得知同學(xué)們長時(shí)間網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)，表達(dá)自己的意圖。2.長時(shí)間網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)的影響（doharmtoourbodies）3.提出建議1）限制上網(wǎng)時(shí)間（limitonlinestudytime）2）結(jié)合多種途徑學(xué)習(xí)英語（combinevariousformsofEnglishlearning）3）做一些其他的事情（dosomewrittenassignmentsandpracticespokenEnglish）第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）doharmto;combinedwith;Infact;spokenEnglish;onceinawhile第三步：連詞成句1.I’msorrytolearnthatmanyofushavespenttoomuchtimelearningEnglishontheInternet,whichcanobviouslydoharmtoourbodies,especiallyeyesight.2.AstherepresentativeofEnglishclass,Iwanttooffersomesuggestions.3.Wecanlimitonlinestudytime.4.WeshouldcombinevariousformsofEnglishlearning5.OnlineEnglishlearningshouldbecombinedwithofflineEnglishlearning.6.Wehavealotofthingstodo,suchasdoingsomewrittenassignmentsandpracticingspokenEnglishonceinawhile.7.Let’sstudytogetherhealthilyandeffectively.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including,3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(從句),Inspiteof+n./doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果關(guān)系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。第五步：潤色修改【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了主從復(fù)合句，如：I’msorrytolearnthatmanyofushavespenttoomuchtimelearningEnglishontheInternet,whichcanobviouslydoharmtoourbodies,especiallyeyesight.這句話運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，除此之外還有一些固定搭配如doharmto;combinedwith;Infact;spokenEnglish;onceinawhile等。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩?！?020屆四川省成都市高三畢業(yè)班第三次診斷】假定你是李華。你之前在網(wǎng)上為你校交換生Jack預(yù)定了下周六晚上7：30的川劇演出，現(xiàn)該演出被宣布取消，請給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.告知演出取消；2.后續(xù)事項(xiàng)處理；3.其它活動建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearJack,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】OnePossibleVersion:DearJack,I’msorrytotellyouthattheSichuanOperaPerformanceat7:30p.m.nextSaturdayIbookedforyouhasbeencancelled.Iknowyouhavelookedforwardtowatchingitforalongtimeandit’sreallyapieceofpitifulnews.Butthethingissuch.LatertheoperawillgivethemoneybackandthenIwillreturnittoyou.AlthoughthechancetowatchtheSichuanOperaPerformancehasbeenmissed,youstillhavesomeotherinterestingandmeaningfulactivitiestotakepartin.Forexample,IcanbringyoutotastethetraditionalSichuanhotpotandothertastyfoods.Andwatchingpandasisalsoagoodidea.WishyouanenjoyableexperienceinChina.Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，表達(dá)告知朋友預(yù)定的川劇演出被取消，并告知后續(xù)處理和活動建議。第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法??總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。要求：1.告知川劇演出被取消2.告知后續(xù)處理3.提出活動建議第二步:列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）besorrytotell;lookforwardto;apitifulnews;givethemoneyback;someotherinterestingandmeaningfulactivities;thetraditionalSichuanhotpot;watchpandas第三步：連詞成句1.I’msorrytotellyouthattheSichuanOperaPerformanceat7:30p.m.nextSaturdayIbookedforyouhasbeencancelled.2.Iknowyouhavelookedforwardtowatchingitforalongtimeandit’sreallyapitifulnews.3.Latertheoperawillgivethemoneyback.4.Youstillhavesomeotherinterestingandmeaningfulactivitiestotakepartin.5.IcanbringyoutotastethetraditionalSichuanhotpotandothertastyfoods.6.Andwatchingpandasisalsoagoodidea.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including,3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(從句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果關(guān)系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。第五步：潤色修改【點(diǎn)睛】文章思路清晰，語言規(guī)范，段落整齊，語篇連貫，層次清晰。使用了較為高級的句式:although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句AlthoughthechancetowatchtheSichuanOperaPerformancehasbeenmissed,youstillhavesomeotherinterestingandmeaningfulactivitiestotakepartin.that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句和省略that或者which的定語從句I’msorrytotellyouthattheSichuanOperaPerformanceat7:30p.m.nextSaturdayIbookedforyouhasbeencancelled.高級句式的應(yīng)用提升了寫作的檔次，整個(gè)短文顯示出了作者高水平的英語表達(dá)能力。【2020屆遼寧省沈陽市東北育才學(xué)校高中部高三第八次模擬】假定你是李華，你和外教MrSmith本來約好去看在你們所在城市舉行的國際攝影展，但你因故不能赴約。請給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括:1.表示歉意；2.解釋原因；3.補(bǔ)救措施。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearMrSmith，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely，LiHua【答案】DearMrSmith,I'msorrytotellyouthatIcan'taccompanyyoutotheInternationalPhotographyFestivalheldthisSaturday.SomethingunexpectedhappenedandmyparentshavetogooutsideofthecitythisSaturday,soIhavetostayathomeandtakecareofmylittlebrother.Butdon'tworryaboutthetrip.IhaveexplainedmysituationtomybestfriendJohn,whoisoneyearolderthanmeandcanspeakfluentEnglish.Heisavailablethatdayandiswillingtogowithyou.WillitbeOKwithyou?I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincercly,LiHua【解析】這篇書面表達(dá)是一篇話題類作文。假定你是李華，你和外教MrSmith本來約好去看在你們所在城市舉行的國際攝影展，但你因故不能赴約。請給他寫一封郵件。假定你是李華,你和外教MrSmith本來約好去看在你們所在城市舉行的國際攝影展,但你因故不能赴約。請給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括:1.表示歉意；2.解釋原因；3.補(bǔ)救措施。分析可知，應(yīng)該以第一人稱為主，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)進(jìn)行寫作?？忌认牒脤懩膸c(diǎn)，運(yùn)用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級詞匯和固定短語準(zhǔn)確表述。還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞把句子連接起來，這樣文章顯得更連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】這篇書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵在于句子內(nèi)容的準(zhǔn)確表述，同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級的詞匯和語法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。I'msorrytotellyouthatIcan'taccompanyyoutotheInternationalPhotographyFestivalheldthisSaturday.賓語從句的運(yùn)用。IhaveexplainedmysituationtomybestfriendJohn,whoisoneyearolderthanmeandcanspeakfluentEnglish.定語從句的運(yùn)用。【2020屆湖南省永州市六縣高三6月（第二次)聯(lián)考】假定你是李華，最近在某英文論壇上看到一名叫Jonah的澳大利亞高中生發(fā)的帖子，他提到自己想結(jié)交一位中國朋友以便學(xué)習(xí)川?。⊿ichuanOpera)。請根據(jù)所給提示，用英語給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表達(dá)意愿；2.幫助方式；3.期待回復(fù)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearJonah，HownicetoseeyourpostontheInternet!It'sveryinterestingthatyou,anAustralian,showsomuchloveforourlocalpride,SichuanOpera!I'dliketobeyourfriendandhelpyourealizeyourdream,formydadisworkingasanactorinoneoftheSichuanOperatheatersinChengdu.Mydadisopen-mindedaswellaseasy-going.I'msurehecanbehelpful.Asforme,I'maseniorhighschoolstudentasyouare.Ibelievewehavemuchtoshareandcangetalongwellwitheachother.Pleasewritebackassoonaspossiblesothatwecanmakeaplan.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生回一封郵件給想結(jié)交一位中國朋友以便學(xué)習(xí)川劇的澳大利亞高中生Jonah，告知他你愿意幫助他學(xué)習(xí)川劇。第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。要求：1.表達(dá)意愿；2.幫助方式；3.期待回復(fù)。第二步:列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）showlovefor；helpsb.dosth.；workas；aswellas；getalongwellwith第三步：連詞成句1.It'sveryinterestingthatyou,anAustralian,showsomuchloveforourlocalpride,SichuanOpera!2.I'dliketobeyourfriendandhelpyourealizeyourdream,formydadisworkingasanactorinoneoftheSichuanOperatheatersinChengdu.3.Mydadisopen-mindedaswellaseasy-going.4.Ibelievewehavemuchtoshareandcangetalongwellwitheachother.(根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。）第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast,Lastbutnotleast2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,Inaddition,Aswellas,notonly…but(also),including,also3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(從句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果關(guān)系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult5表換一種方式表達(dá)：Inotherwords,thatistosay,6.表進(jìn)行舉例說明：Forexample;Forinstance;suchas+n/doing7.表陳述事實(shí)：Infact,franklyspeaking8.表選擇：either…or…，or連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。第五步：潤色修改【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，要點(diǎn)全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了主從復(fù)合句，如It'sveryinterestingthatyou,anAustralian,showsomuchloveforourlocalpride,SichuanOpera!這句話中用了that引導(dǎo)的主語從句（it作形式主語）；使用了非常好的短語，如showlovefor，workas，getalongwellwith等，為文章增色不少。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩?！?020屆廣西桂林、崇左、防城港市高三6月聯(lián)合模擬】假定你是李華。你市最近天氣變化大，許多市民都因此患了感冒。請你用英語給在你市留學(xué)的美國朋友Susan寫封信，提醒他采取措施，預(yù)防感冒。內(nèi)容包括：1．關(guān)注天氣變化，及時(shí)加衣物；2．適當(dāng)運(yùn)動，注意飲食；3．避免與感冒患者接觸。注意：1．總詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearSusan,I’mwritingtoinformyouthespreadofabadcoldinourcityasaresultofthechangeableweather.Lotsofpeopleareinhospitalbecauseofit.HerearesometipsIwanttoofferyou.Firstofall,you’dbetterknowaboutthechangeofweatherandputonmoreclothesaccordingtotheweather.Secondly,exerciseisagoodwaytokeepyoufarawayfromcold.Moreover,eatinghealthyfoodisnecessaryforyoutokeepyourselfingoodcondition.Lastbutnotleast,youshouldkeepafardistancewiththepatientswhoaresufferingfromcold.Ihopemysuggestionwillbehelpfultoyou.Yours,LiHua【解析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封信。根據(jù)提示信息，文章要求假定你是李華,你市最近天氣變化大，許多市民都因此患了感冒。你用英語給在你市留學(xué)的美國朋友Susan寫封信，提醒他采取措施，預(yù)防感冒。寫作時(shí)：1.首先注意時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，其次人稱使用第二人稱。2.根據(jù)文章的寫作要求，可以分為三大段;第一段提醒他關(guān)注天氣變化，及時(shí)加衣物；第二段告訴他適當(dāng)運(yùn)動，注意飲食；第三段提醒他避免與感冒患者接觸。3.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，為文章增添色彩；注意使用連接詞、銜接詞，使文章自然、流暢?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文內(nèi)容完整，語言表述流暢。文章使用可幾個(gè)高分句型。1.I’mwritingtoinformyouthespreadofabadcoldinourcityasaresultofthechangeableweather此句使用了書信表達(dá)寫信目的的經(jīng)典句式：I’mwritingto….。2.Firstofall,you’dbetterknowaboutthechangeofweatherandputonmoreclothesaccordingtotheweather此句是and連接的兩個(gè)并列句。3.youshouldkeepafardistancewiththepatientswhoaresufferingfromcold此句是個(gè)定語從句，先行詞為patients，關(guān)系詞是who?！?020屆重慶市高三6月調(diào)研考試（三診)】假定你是李華，你校將舉辦太極拳（TaiChi）比賽。請寫封郵件邀請你的英國朋友James參加，內(nèi)容包括：1.比賽時(shí)間；2.活動安排；3.表達(dá)期待。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！敬鸢浮緿earJames,Howiseverythinggoing?LearningthatyouareinterestedinChineseKongfu,IamwritingtoinviteyoutoenjoyaTaiChicompetitionorganizedbyourschool.Thecompetition,scheduledtobeheldatthestadiumat9:00nextSaturday,isamust-seeforanyenthusiastofChineseKongfu.Asplanned,therewillbeanopeningceremonywhenashortvideoaboutthehistoryanddevelopmentofTaiChiwillbeintroduced.Lateron,theexcitingcompetitionwillbeconducted,whenwecanwatchtheTaiChiplayersfightingwitheachother.AsfarasIknow,themembersoftheTaiChiclubinourschoolwillbepartofthecompetition.Icannotwaittoenjoyit.Shouldyoubeavailable,IstronglysuggestyoucometolearnmoreaboutTaiChiandenjoythecompetition.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】本文書面表達(dá)為應(yīng)用文，要求李華寫郵件邀請James參加太極比賽。第一步：審題1.體裁：邀請涵2.人稱：第一人稱3.時(shí)態(tài)：一般將來時(shí)，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)4.要點(diǎn)：

①寫作背景和寫作目的②比賽時(shí)間，活動安排③表示期待第二步：列要點(diǎn)寫提綱Para.1beinterestedin...;invitesbtodosth;Para.2bescheduledtobeheld…;amust;willbeintroduced;conductacompetition;watchsbdoingsth;can’twaittodosthPara.3beavailable;learnmoreaboutsth第三步：連詞成句1.YouareinterestedinChineseKongfu.2.IamwritingtoinviteyoutoenjoyaTaiChicompetitionorganizedbyourschool.3.Thecompetitionisscheduledtobeheldatthestadiumat9:00nextSaturdayanditisamust-seeforanyenthusiastofChineseKongfu.4.TherewillbeanopeningceremonywhenashortvideoaboutthehistoryanddevelopmentofTaiChiwillbeintroduced.5.Theexcitingcompetitionwillbeconducted,andwecanwatchtheTaiChiplayersfightingwitheachother.6.ThemembersoftheTaiChiclubinourschoolwillbepartofthecompetition.7.IsuggestyoucometolearnmoreaboutTaiChiandenjoythecompetition.第四步：潤色提高1.添加交際表達(dá)

開頭添加寒暄用語：Howiseverythinggoing?結(jié)尾添加期待回復(fù)：Lookingforwardtoyourreply.2.增加句子之間的連貫性Asplanned,therewillbeanopeningceremonywhenashortvideoaboutthehistoryanddevelopmentofTaiChiwillbeintroduced.Lateron,theexcitingcompetitionwillbeconducted,whenwecanwatchtheTaiChiplayersfightingwitheachother.AsfarasIknow,themembersoftheTaiChiclubinourschoolwillbepartofthecompetition.Icannotwaittoenjoyit.3.使用高級表達(dá)LearningthatyouareinterestedinChineseKongfu,IamwritingtoinviteyoutoenjoyaTaiChicompetitionorganizedbyourschool.Thecompetition,scheduledtobeheldatthestadiumat9:00nextSaturday,isamust-seeforanyenthusiastofChineseKongfu.Shouldyoubeavailable,IstronglysuggestyoucometolearnmoreaboutTaiChiandenjoythecompetition.第五步：漂亮?xí)鴮憽军c(diǎn)睛】范文要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，層次分明，上下文連貫，在表達(dá)時(shí)用到了很多高級詞匯，如bescheduledtodosth,amust,can’twaittodosth等。復(fù)雜句式的運(yùn)用提升了文章層次，如例如使用非謂語做插入語：Thecompetition,scheduledtobeheldatthestadiumat9:00nextSaturday,isamust-seeforanyenthusiastofChineseKongfu.使得句子變得更簡潔也更高級。使用虛擬語氣Shouldyoubeavailable,IstronglysuggestyoucometolearnmoreaboutTaiChiandenjoythecompetition.讓句式更為委婉和多變?！?020屆四川省樂山市高中高三第三次調(diào)查】假定你是李華，你所在的班明天英語課前有一個(gè)簡短的演講。請你寫一篇關(guān)于倡議養(yǎng)成健康生活習(xí)慣的演講稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.演講的主題；2.健康生活習(xí)慣的重要性；3.2—3條健康生活習(xí)慣的建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hello,everyone!I’mgladtostandheretosharewithyoumyideasabouthealthylivinghabits.Inmyeyes,healthylivinghabitscankeepusfit,protectusfromgettingillandhelpusstartanewdaywithfullenergy.Sowemaytakefreshfruits,meatandvegetables,andavoideatingtoomanysnackfoods.Thentakingappropriateexerciseregularlyisalsonecessaryforgoodhealth.Whenyouarrivehomefrompublicplace,pleasewashthehands,especiallybeforetouchingyourowneyes,noseormouth.Andwhenyousneezeandcough,it’sagoodmanneraswellasaprotectionforpublichealththatyouusepaperorhandkerchieftocoverthenoseormouth.Wishyouallthebest.Thankyou!【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一篇關(guān)于倡議養(yǎng)成健康生活習(xí)慣的演講稿。第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法???總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。要求：1.演講的主題；2.健康生活習(xí)慣的重要性；3.2—3條健康生活習(xí)慣的建議。第二步:列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）sharewith;healthylivinghabits;keepsbfit;protect…from;energy;freshfruits;avoiddoing;takeexercise;regularly;washthehands;sneeze;cough;goodmanner;handkerchief;cover.第三步：連詞成句I’mgladtostandheretosharewithyoumyideasabouthealthylivinghabits.Inmyeyes,healthylivinghabitscankeepusfit,protectusfromgettingillandhelpusstartanewdaywithfullenergy.Wemaytakefreshfruits,meatandvegetables,andavoideatingtoomanysnackfoods.Takingappropriateexerciseregularlyisalsonecessaryforgoodhealth.Whenyouarrivehomefrompublicplace,pleasewashthehands,especiallybeforetouchingyourowneyes,noseormouth.Whenyousneezeandcough,it’sagoodmanneraswellasaprotectionforpublichealththatyouusepaperorhandkerchieftocoverthenoseormouth.Wishyouallthebest.Thankyou!根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including,3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(從句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果關(guān)系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，第五步：潤色修改【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者使用了復(fù)合句，比如Andwhenyousneezeandcough,it’sagoodmanneraswellasaprotectionforpublichealththatyouusepaperorhandkerchieftocoverthenoseormouth.這句話運(yùn)用了it作形式主語，that引導(dǎo)真正的主語從句。此外Thentakingappropriateexerciseregularlyisalsonecessaryforgoodhealth.使用了動名詞做主語。范文里還使用了一些較好的詞和詞組，如keepsbfit,regularly;protect…from等。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩?！?020屆山西省運(yùn)城市高中聯(lián)合體高三第三次模擬】假定你是李華,你所在城市的博物館即將開展“近代文物展”。你想邀請你校的外籍教師Robert一起參觀。請你給他寫一封郵件,內(nèi)容包括：1.展出的目的；2.舉辦時(shí)間；3.活動內(nèi)容。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：文物culturalrelicsDearRobert,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiHua【答案】DearRobert,OurcitymuseumhasscheduledashowofChineseculturalrelics.BeingfullyawareofyourkeeninterestinChineseculture,I'mwritingtoinviteyoutopayavisittotheshowwithme.Theshow,meanttopromoteourawarenessofourhistoryandarouseourprideinourdeep-rootedculture,willtakeplacethreedaysaway,onJuly5th,lastingawholeweek.Exhibitedattheshowwillbeacollectionofculturalandhistoricrelics,whichreflectpeople'slifeandsocialdevelopmentatthetime.I'llfeelprivilegedtobeyourguideduringthevisit.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】這是一篇提綱類寫作。第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，假定你是李華,你所在城市的博物館即將開展“近代文物展”。你想邀請你校的外籍教師Robert一起參觀。請你給他寫一封郵件,內(nèi)容包括：1.展出的目的；2.舉辦時(shí)間；3.活動內(nèi)容。第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）：culturalrelics(文物)；beawareof(意識到)；keeninterest(強(qiáng)烈的興趣)；payavisit(參觀)；takeplace(舉行)等。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。此處文章主要應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)、現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的?！军c(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級表達(dá)方式，如Beingfullyawareofyourkeenin