讀后續(xù)寫新朋友讓我自信講義高考英語(yǔ)作文復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)

讀后續(xù)寫新朋友讓我自信閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。MyOwnLabelItseemedtomethatIhadtwodifferentidentitieswhenIwasinfifthgrade.Outsideofschool,Iwasareasonablyhappykidwhoenjoyedspendingtimewithmyfriends,readingorlisteningtorockmusic.WhenIwasinclass,however,IturnedintoaverydifferentDenise,

one

whowasonguardallthetime,

andonewhowantednothingmorethantogetthroughthedaywithoutbeingteased.TomyclassmatesIwasstrange,becauseIwasn'tjustlikethem.ThemostobviousthingtheyfocusedonwasthatIdidn'twearthesamedesignerclothesastheydid.Designerclotheswere

beyondmyfamily'sreach.

Mymotherwasasingleparent,andsheworkedlonghourstosupportoursmallhousehold.

Asfarasloveandattentionwereconcerned,Iwasrichbeyondallimagination.

Iwassupportedandcaredfor.Theonlythingthatmyclassmatescaredforwasfashion,though,andthere,Iwaspoor.Ineverknewifmyclassmateswouldtorment(戲弄)meinclass,butonthebusIcould

counton

it.

Mytripstoandfromschoolwerethehorrific,painfulbookendstostressfuldays.OnegirlmadeapointofrunningovertomyseateverymorningtoseewhatIwaswearing,andthenreturnedtoherfriendstolaughaboutit.Ishrankintomyselfandstaredoutthewindow.Iwasthesmallestgirlinmyclass.Oneofmyclassmates'mothersnoticed,andofferedmeabeautifulskirtthatherdaughterhad

outgrown.Iworeithappily,thrilledtohaveacoolitemofclothingforonce.WhenIoutgrewtheskirt,mymotherboughtmeanewoneofmyown,onewithoutalabel.Whenmyclassmatesawit,sheshoutedonpurpose,”O(jiān)h,that'snotmyskirt,isit?Wheredidyougetthisone,Denise?Thepoorhouse?”Myclassmatesburstintolaughter,andIslippedaway,myeyeslockedontheground.Istoppedwearingtheskirt.我自己的標(biāo)簽在我看來(lái)，當(dāng)我上五年級(jí)的時(shí)候，我有兩種不同的身份。在學(xué)校之外，我是一個(gè)相當(dāng)快樂(lè)的孩子，喜歡和朋友們?cè)谝黄?，閱讀或聽(tīng)搖滾樂(lè)。然而，當(dāng)我在課堂上的時(shí)候，我變成了一個(gè)完全不同的丹妮絲，一個(gè)一直保持警惕的人，一個(gè)只想度過(guò)一天而不被取笑的人。對(duì)我的同學(xué)來(lái)說(shuō)，我很奇怪，因?yàn)槲液退麄儾灰粯?。他們關(guān)注的最明顯的一件事是，我沒(méi)有穿和他們一樣的設(shè)計(jì)師服裝。名牌服裝是我家買不起的。我母親是一位單親家長(zhǎng)，她長(zhǎng)時(shí)間工作來(lái)養(yǎng)活我們的小家庭。就愛(ài)和關(guān)注而言，我的財(cái)富超出了所有人的想象。我得到了支持和照顧。然而，我的同學(xué)們唯一關(guān)心的是時(shí)尚，而在那方面，我很窮。我從來(lái)不知道我的同學(xué)會(huì)不會(huì)在課堂上戲弄我，但在公交車上我可以想象。我上下學(xué)的旅程是就是可怕痛苦的書(shū)檔到滿是壓力的時(shí)光。一個(gè)女孩堅(jiān)持每天早上跑到我的座位上看我穿了什么，然后回到她的朋友那里笑了起來(lái)。我縮成一團(tuán)，凝視著窗外。我是班上最小的女孩。我的一個(gè)同學(xué)的媽媽注意到了，遞給我一條漂亮的裙子，她的女兒已經(jīng)長(zhǎng)大了。我很高興地穿上了它，很高興能有一件很酷的衣服。當(dāng)我穿不下這條裙子了，媽媽給我買了一條自己的新裙子，一條沒(méi)有標(biāo)簽的。我的同學(xué)看到了，她故意喊道：“哦，那不是我的裙子，是嗎？丹妮絲，你從哪里得到的？救濟(jì)院？”我的同學(xué)們突然大笑起來(lái)，我悄悄溜走了，眼睛緊緊地盯著地。我不再穿那條裙子了。注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。Afterfifthgradeended,overthesummer,Ispentamonthatadaycamp.Withtheloveandsupportofmynewfriends,Ibecamemoreconfident.【讀后續(xù)寫】Afterfifthgradeended,overthesummer,Ispentamonthatadaycamp.ThereIfoundthatkidslikedmeforwhoIwas,notforwhatIwore.Manycamperscamefromwealthyfamilies,andIspottedplentyofdesignershoes,andhighfashionTshirtsthatcostthreefigures.Unlikemyclassmatesatschool,though,myfellowcampersdidn’tmindmynonameclothes.Theysimplyacceptedmeasafriend.Wespentourdaysswimminginthepoolandridinghorses.WehadafashionshowandIwasevenencouragedtoparticipate.AndIdid.Withtheloveandsupportofmynewfriends,Ibecamemoreconfident.Istoppedlisteningtomyclassmates’

remarksonmyclothes.Inthespring,theskirtthatmyclassmateshadlaughedatmadeareappearance.Iworeitproudlytoboththeschooldancefestivalandtomysixthgradegraduationceremony.BecauseIknewthat

theonepersonIhadtolearntoimpresswasmyself.Andnowtheonlylabelthatmatterstomeismyown—howI”label”myself.續(xù)寫翻譯五年級(jí)結(jié)束后，整個(gè)夏天，我在一個(gè)日間營(yíng)地呆了一個(gè)月。在那里，我發(fā)現(xiàn)孩子們喜歡我是因?yàn)槲沂钦l(shuí)，而不是因?yàn)槲掖┦裁础ＴS多露營(yíng)者來(lái)自富裕家庭，我發(fā)現(xiàn)了很多名牌鞋和三位數(shù)的高級(jí)時(shí)尚T恤。然而，與我在學(xué)校的同學(xué)不同，我的露營(yíng)伙伴們并不介意我的無(wú)名衣服。他們只是把我當(dāng)成了朋友。我們整天在游泳池里游泳和騎馬。我們舉辦了一場(chǎng)時(shí)裝秀，我甚至被鼓勵(lì)參加。我做到了。在新朋友的愛(ài)和支持下，我變得更加自信。我不再聽(tīng)同學(xué)對(duì)我衣服的評(píng)價(jià)。春天，同學(xué)們嘲笑的那條裙子又出現(xiàn)了。我驕傲地穿著它參加學(xué)校的舞蹈節(jié)和六年級(jí)的畢業(yè)典禮。因?yàn)槲抑乐挥形易约翰拍芙o人留下深刻印象?，F(xiàn)在，對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)唯一重要的標(biāo)簽是我自己——我如何給自己“貼標(biāo)簽”。續(xù)寫亮點(diǎn)Afterfifthgradeended,overthesummer,Ispentamonthatadaycamp.運(yùn)用了主從復(fù)合句。ThereIfoundthatkidslikedmeforwhoIwas,notforwhatIwore.運(yùn)用了賓語(yǔ)從句以及賓語(yǔ)從句套了兩個(gè)介詞后的賓語(yǔ)從句。Manycamperscamefromwealthyfamilies,andIspottedplentyofdesignershoes,andhighfashionTshirtsthatcostthreefigures.第一個(gè)and連接并列句，第二個(gè)and連接兩個(gè)并列名詞，第二個(gè)名詞后包含that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。Unlikemyclassmatesatschool,though,myfellowcampersdidn’tmindmynonameclothes.運(yùn)用了though這個(gè)副詞做狀語(yǔ)。Theysimplyacceptedmeasafriend.運(yùn)用了acceptsbas結(jié)構(gòu)。Wespentourdaysswimminginthepoolandridinghorses.運(yùn)用了spendtimedoing結(jié)構(gòu)。WehadafashionshowandIwasevenencouragedtoparticipate.運(yùn)用了and連接并列句，第二個(gè)句子使用了過(guò)去式的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。Withtheloveandsupportofmynewfriends,Ibecamemoreconfident.運(yùn)用了介詞短語(yǔ)作原因狀語(yǔ)。Istoppedlisteningtomyclassmates’

remarksonmyclothes.運(yùn)用了stopdoing以及remarkson短語(yǔ)。Inthespring,theskirtthatmyclassmateshadlaughedatmadeareappearance.運(yùn)用了定語(yǔ)從句。Iworeitproudlyt