2012年12月四級作文評分標準范文

2012.12Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledEducationPaysbasedonthestatisticsprovidedinthechartbelow(Unemploymentratein2010).Pleasegiveabriefdescriptionofthechartfirstandthenmakecommentsonit.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.

Education:AworthyInvestmentUnemploymentratein2010(100%)Source:USBureauofLaborStatistics/emp/ep_chart_001.htm2012.6PartIWritingDirections:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledExcessivePackagingfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.1.許多商品都存在過度包裝的現(xiàn)象2.出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因及其帶來的后果3.為了改變這種狀況，我認為……2011.12Part

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NothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWill

bycommentingonthehumoroussaying,"Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.I'vedoneithundredsoftimes."Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.14pointsAsisshowninthechartabove,theunemploymentrateinAmericansocietyremainedhighin2010.nonetheless,peoplewithbettereducationalbackgroundseemedtosufferlessfromunemployment,forexample,theunemploymentratesofpeoplewithdoctoral,master’sandbachelor’sdegreesare1.9%,4.4%,and5.4%respectively.However,9.2%ofindividualswithsomecollegeeducationbutnodegreeand10.3%ofindividualswithonlyhighschooldiplomacannotfindajob.Worststill,theunemploymentrateofpeoplewithoutahighschooldiplomaevenreached14.9%.Intoday’sfiercejobmarket,gettingasuitablejobisbecomingincreasinglydifficult,nottomentionawell-paidone.Iamconvincedthatthecruxofthisdisturbingproblemliesinthefactthatjobhuntersdonotpossesstheskillsorknowledgetheemployersneed.Therefore,theyalwaysfailinthejobinterviews.Asweallknoweducationalfeesarehigh.Nevertheless,comparedtothehostofbenefitseducationbringstostudents’future,theyseemnothing.Educationisaworthyinvestmentineveryway.Inconclusion,educationpays.14Thesedays,manykindsofgoodstendtobeexcessivelypackaged,especiallygifts.Peopleseemtobemoreandmoreattractedtothebeautifuldecorations,ratherthanthecommodityitself.Theremaybeseveralreasonsforthisphenomenon.Firstly,manyconsumersarenotsensibleenough.Theyareeasilycapturedbytheniceappearanceofthegoodstheyintendtobuy.Sothesalesmentakeitasawaytoattracttheirpotentialconsumers.Secondly,andmoreimportantly,peopletodaybuythingsnotonlyforthemselves,butalsofortheirleaders,workmates,orfriends.Inthiscase,thequalityandpracticalusesofthegoodsmaygivewaytonice-lookingpackaging.AsfarasI’mconcerned,excessivepackagingisreallyanunnecessarywaste.Itisofnopracticaluse,andpeoplealwaysthrowitspackageawayatonce.Soitisquiteurgenttocurbthiskindofphenomenon.Fortheconsumers,theyneedtobemoresensible.Andformanufacturers.Whattheyshoulddoismotattractpeoplewithuselessdecorations,butprovidecommoditiesofbetterquality.14分檔Thehumoroussaying,“quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.I’vedoneithundredsoftimes”,illustratestheastonishingyetcommonoccurrencethatmanypeopletryhardtogiveupabadhabitbutinvain.Theyfailbecausetheylackastrongwill.Infact,nothingsucceedswithoutastrongwill.TakeThomasEdisonforexample.Heiswellknownforhislargenumberofinventionswhichwerecreatedthroughthousandsofunsuccessfulexperiments.Haditnotbeenforhisstrongwill,hewouldhavemerelybeenwastingtimeandmoneyachievingnothing.Notsurprisingly,Edison’sperseveranceisactuallyacommonqualityamongsuccessfulpeople.Ascollegestudents,weshouldbearinmindthatastrongwillhelpssetacleargoalforpeopleandprovideitsownerwiththemotivationandencouragementinfaceofdifficulties.Indeed,successgoestothosewhoareequippedwithastrongwill.Amanwithastrongwillisamanwhocannotbedefeated.11pointsHaveyounoticedthatnowadays,anincreasingnumberofpeopleattachmoreimportancetogainahigherdegree?Accordingtoaninvestigationaboutunemploymentratin2010madebyUSBureauofLaborStatistics,thehigherlevelofdegreelinkstothelowerrateofunemployment.Forinstance,theunemploymentofdoctoraldegreewas1.9percent,whiletherateofhighschooldiplomawas10.3percent.Thestatisticsshowanobviousconclusionthateducationisaworthyinvestment.Inordertogainadegreeashighaspossible,studentshavetoexperiencealongstrugglingdifficulttime,workinghard,withlessentertainment.What’smore,somefamilieshavetopayalotofmoneyfortheirchildren’seducation.Itmaybeaheavyloadforthem.Luckily,allthesepaymentswillrewardbacksomeday.Itisnodenyingthatpeoplewithhighdegreecaneasilyfindagoodjobwithhigherpay,andaccordinglytheycanacquireabetterqualityoflife.11Nowadays,alotofgoodsareexcessivelypackaged.Forexample,it’sreportedthatformostmooncakes,thepackagingcostisfarmoreexpensivethantheproductitself.Theshoppingpreferenceofcustomersistoblame.Businessmenareawarethatquiteafewcustomerswouldliketobuyproductsthatlookattractive,sotheymaketheirbestsatisfyingthedesire.Moreover,somepeopleusetheexcessivelypackagedproductsasgifts,sointheirminds,themoreexpensivethepackagingis,thebettertheywillimpressthereceivers.Alloftheseleadtoover-packaging.Inmyopinion,excessivepackagingissuchawaste.Itwillbenefitnobodyatallbutdoharmtotheenvironment.Excessivepackagingrequireslotsofnaturalresources,butwhenitisthrownaway,itgoesbacktotheenvironmentaspollution.SoIstronglysupportthegovernmentreleasingbanninglawonthisissue.Besides,wecustomersshouldchangeourshoppingtasteforagreenone.Whenthereisnoneed,thereisnoproducing.11’Asahumoroussayinggoes,“quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.I’vedoneithundredsoftimes.”Thisis,ofcoursetheface,butitalsotellsusthatwithoutstrongwill,nobodycanachievesuccess.Nomatterwhatwayyouchoose,youwillsurelymeetmanydifficulties.Lifeisnotonlyfilledwithvictory.Takethesayingforexampleagain.Onceyoustartquitsmoking,youwillfaceadifficultchoiceverytimeotherspassyouacigarette.Suchadilemmamaymakeyoupickyourformerhabitifyoudon’thaveastrongwill.Itisstrongwillthathelpsusovercomedifficulties.Besides,strongwillcanmakeyouknowwhatyouareseekingfor.MadamCurieexperiencedmanytimesoffailureduringherstudyonradium.Newtonwasregardedasafool.Theygainconfidence,braveryandalsoachievementsfromtheirstrongwill.Asyouhaveseen,strongwillplaysanimportantroleinlife,soIsaynothingsucceedswithoutastrongwill8pointsEducationisaworthyinvestment.Unemploymentratein2010showsthatpeople’seducationleveldecideswhetherhegetsajob.Fromthereport,thetop3unemploymentpeopleareno-degreepeople.Therearesomeonewhoarelessthanahighschooldiploma,whoareeducatedfromhighschool,whoareeducatedfromcollege.Theunemploymentrateoflessthanahighschooldiplomais14.9%,buttherateofDoctoraldegreepeopleonlyis1.9%.Whydoestheeducationleveldecidetheemploymentrate?Becausepeoplegetthehigheducation.Ifsomeonelearninahighschool,hejustlearnsomebasicsubjectsincludemath,basiclanguageandsoon.Butifsomeonelearninauniversity,hewilllearnsomeparticularsubjectsincludecomputerprogram,mechanicaldesign,managementandsoon.Ofcourse,theeducationlevelisnottheonlyreasonforgettingagoodjob.Butitisanimportantbasiccondition.Moreandmorecompanymakeitasthefirstcondition.8Recently,therearemanygoodsareexcessivepackagingintheshopsandmarkets.Especiallythepeoplewouldliketocelebratetraditionalfestivalsmoreandmore.Andthegoodsaremoreexcessivepackaged.So,whydowealwaysseetheexcessivepackaging?Ithinkitisuptous.Today,thedevelopmentofoursocietyarewitnessedbyourselves.Peoplewouldliketoseebeautifulthingsandroyalthings.Thatisthemainreasonwhytheexcessivepackagingappearseverywhere.Ontheotherhand,thesellerswantstosellgoodpricesotheypackagethegoodsexcessivethattheycanhavemoremoney.Inmyopinion,theexcessivepackagingisanormalthing.Peoplelikebeautifulandexpensivepackagingtogivetotheirfamiliesandfriends.Becauseitlookslikeverygood,thepeoplewhoyougivewouldfeelhappy.Butweshouldsavesomemoney.Ifeveryonewantstosavemoney,willtheexcessivepackagingappear?8’Asisknowntoall,wherethereisawill,thereisaway.However,therearealsomanypeoplefailtoachievetheirdream.Manypeoplewillsay,it’sbecausetheyhavenotgoodconditionortheyhavenotluckchance.Infact,theyjusthavenotthestrongwilltosucceed.Takequittingsmokingforexample.Ithasbeenaworld-wideproblemthatthousandsofmillionspeople’shealthisbeendestroyedbysmoking.Atthesametime,wealwaysseemanypeoplewhohavetakenactiontoquitsmokingbutfailinthetime.Becausetheycan’tforgetthefeelingofsmoking,andtheyhavenotstrongwilltoinsistit.Onlyiftheonewhohasstrongwill,willhesucceedinquittingsmoking.Toconclude,nopains,nogains.Wewillhaveourdreamcometruebyourstrongwill,andnothingsucceedswithoutastrongwill.5pointsAccordingtothechartabove,wecaneasyfindouteducationpaysbecomeaprobleminsocial.Educationyougetmore,unemploymentrateisless.Thedoctoraldegreeisonly1.9unemployment,themasterdegreemorethandoctoraldegree.Soitseemseducationisaworthyinvestment.Whyweshouldgotoschool?Thereasonismadeofthefuturejob,learningknowledge,makingfriendsandsoon,butthemostimportantreasonfindagoodjobleadtoearningmoresalaryandownbetterlife.Simply,educationisaworthyinvestment.Ourparentsindeedhopethatwewouldsuccessinsomeways,theyspendmoneyandtimeinustogettoschool.Inaword,onourwayofgrowup,weshouldtakemoreeffortsonstudyingrelatetoourfuture.Moreover,wecanworkaccordinginterestsandfaceourparentstochoosethesolutionthatweindeedlove.5Thereisaquestionthatmanythingshavebeenpackagedmorethanwhichthereneedtoday.Suchasourmooncakes,comicbooks.Peopleputtheminmanyboxeswhichcolourful.Theseboxesareunnecessary.Thisproblemcalledanexcessivepackaging.Asweknow,colourfulandprettythingscanalwaysgetmorepeopleattentionandprefer.Thethingsweboughtwhichhavemorepackage,wethinkthesearemoreexpansiveandhavemorewealth.Topeople’sneed,wemakethepackageheavierandheavier.Timesby,thepackageismorethanitexcessiveactually.Thisquestioncancausemanyproblemslikeenvirnmentpollution.Becauseweneedtreestomakeboxedwhichusedtopackage.AslongasIthink,webuythingsjustwanttogetthemwork,manypackagesareunnecessary.Ifwecanstopexcessivepackaging,theenvirnmentproblemwilllessandless,wewillusefewmoneyalso.5’ “Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld,I’vedoneithundredsoftimes.”It’sahumoroussaying.butactuallythetrueisseriousanddifficult.Aseverybodyknow,“Romewasnotbuiltinoneday.BeforeitbecameRomer,therewasalongwaytothough.Whetheryoucanarrivethefinalplace,itdependsonwhetheryourheartdeeplystickwithastrongwill.Numbersofsuccessfulpeopleinhistorydepressedoursbywhattheydo.Welookupthem,listentheirstoriesbutwemustknoweveryonesucceedhadastrongwillwhentheywereyoung.Whatweneedtodoisthisconfirmwhatyourgoalis,makeitawillandpayforitwithyouraction.Don’tgiveupanytimeyouweretriedandworried.Practicemakesperfect,youcangetridoftheinconfidencebydoingallrightthings.Nothingsucceedswithoutastrongwill.Thewillneedn’tsobigbutsostrong.2pointsWearetellyouaworthyInvestmentunemploymentratein2010.letmelooksUSBureauofLaborstatistic.First,Doctoraldegreeinthe1.9presentMaster’sdegreeinthe4.0present.WeareknowsMaster’sdegreethanDoctoraldegree2.1present.Bachelor’sdegree3.8present.Highschooldiplomais10.3presentlessthanahighschooldiploma14.9present.Inthechart,someschool,nodegree,isverysecretthansomeoftheresolutionthanmanyofusDoctoraldegreemanyoftemarelikelythesameresolutionsthatweabandonedlost.Bachelor’sdegreelessthanahighschooldiplomapresentisveryhigh.WearenotforghteveryplomentI’vemetmanyimpassionedintheschool.TheauthorsofthestudyspeakedthatthelevelbecauseofaworthInvestment.2Now,theExcessivepackagingmorething.Ithinkpeoplelookingthisexcessivepackagingisbecausetheylovebeautiful.Sotheythinkmustwillexcessivepackaging.ButIthinkthisisamisstake.Becausepeoplewillthatnotmustexcessivepackaging.Ibelivetheyalwayslookselfmisstake.Buttheysometimesnotthink.Becausetheyhasmoremoney,theynotcanthismoney.Iftheyhassmallmoney,thatalwaysismustmoney.Sotheyselflookisamoremoneyorsmallmoneyquestion.But,thatismisstake.Becausetheyiflookingtheyselffeel,notlookingpeoplefeel,thattheywillnotcanpeoplelove.Theywillnotcancountrylove.ButIthink,iftheycan’texcessivepackaging,thattheywillcanpeopleandcountrylove.So,whentheyhasonexcessivepackaging,theycanmorepeoplelove.Intheend,Ithinkpeoplecan’thavemisstake.2’Whythesomepeople