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writingapicturestory第1頁第2頁1.讀圖。即分析圖畫所提供信息，充足發(fā)揮自己想象力，正確理解圖中內(nèi)容確實切含義。如圖1所示：父母親和“我”去公園。圖2：在公園里劃船。圖3：“我”抓魚時不慎掉入水中。圖4：母親跳出水中把“我”救起。2.試寫。即根據(jù)圖中情景及漢語提醒來體現(xiàn)文章內(nèi)容，充足發(fā)揮自己實際水平，避難就易，一法不成，另找它途。圖1：MyparentsandIwenttothepark.圖2：Wewentboatingonthelake.圖3：IwascatchingthefishwhenIfellintothewater.圖4：Mymotherjumpedintothewaterandsavedme.

第3頁3.擴寫。即合適增加情節(jié)和過渡性詞語，把上述句子連貫起來。這里擴寫并不是毫無根據(jù)地簡單地通過想象把試寫內(nèi)容拉長，而是緊扣圖片中心把試寫內(nèi)容進行擴充。使內(nèi)容更豐富、人物活動更形象、事情過程更詳細，因而增強文章感染力。力求做到合抱負象，用詞得當，句子構(gòu)造及語法利用正確，條理清楚。第4頁例文：LastSunday，myparentsandIwenttothepark.Wewentboatingonthewater.Thereweresomebeautifulfishinthewater.Icouldn'thelpcatchingthem.Suddenly，Ifellintothewater.IwassofrightenedthatIcriedloudly.Mymotherjumpedintothewateratonceandliftedmeoutofthewater.Iwassaved.Howdangerousthetripwas！第5頁假定你是TOM,請根據(jù)下面圖畫內(nèi)容寫一篇日記.第6頁1.Style:2.Tense(generally):3.Person:1.GoovertherequirementAdiarypasttenseI第7頁TuesdayDecember6,2023FineIhadaverybaddayyesterday.Everythinggowrong.Inthemorning,myalarmclockdidn'tringsoIwokeupanhourlate.IaminsuchahurrythatIburnedmyhandwhenIwascookingbreakfast.

Correctanymistakeswent

was第8頁ThenIrunoutofthehousetocatchthe8:30bus,butofcourseImissit.IwasveryunhappybecauseIknowmyteachergotangryifanyonewaslateforclass.SoIranthreemilestotheschool.ButwhenIarrivedthereintheend,IfindthatitwasSundayCorrectanymistakesranknewfoundmissed第9頁

根據(jù)下列圖畫中Tom騎自行車經(jīng)歷，用英語寫一篇故事。短文要寫得連貫、完整。Sample1第10頁1.topic:2.Tense(generally):3.Person:1.GoovertherequirementAstory（atrafficaccident)pasttenseTom,he第11頁Tom/rideabikeAlongthestreet/roadAfewdaysago/theotherday/oneday2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)第12頁Acar/runfastto/runintohimTom/falloffhisbikeSuddenly2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)第13頁Thedriver/frightened/runaway2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)第14頁Awoman/rememberthenumberofthecarThepoliceThedriver/catch2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)第15頁KeywordssentencesAwomansawtheaccidentandrememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepolice.Thedriverwascaught.rideabike/runfasttoseetheaccident/rememberthenumber/callthepolice/becaughtbefrightened/runawayhithim/falloffhisbikeWhenTomwasridingalongthestreet.Acarranfasttohim.Thecarhithim.Andhefelloffhisbike.Thedriverwassofrightenedthatheranaway.第16頁

Tomwasridingalongthestreet.Acarranfasttohim.Thecarhithimandhefelloffhisbike.Thedriverwasfrightened.Heranaway.Awomansawtheaccident.Sherememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepoliceman.Thedriverwascaught.Passage13.Writingapassage第17頁

Theotherday,Tomwasridingalongthestreetwhenhesawacarrunfasttowardshim.Heturnedleftquicklybutitwastoolate.Thecarhithimandhefelloffhisbike.Thedriverofthecarwassofrightenedthatheranawayasfastashecould.Hewassoonoutofsight,leavingTomhelplessonthespot.Fortunately,awomanhappenedtoseeitandrememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepolicemanandtoldhimwhathadhappened.Finally,thedriverwascaughtandpunishedforhiswrongdoing.passage2

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Theotherday,Tomwasridingalongthestreet

when

hesawacarrunfasttowardshim.Heturnedleftquicklybutitwastoolate.

Thecarhithimandhefelloffhisbike.Thedriverofthecarwas

so

frightened

that

heranawayasfastashecould.Hewassoonoutofsight,leavingTomhelplessonthespot.

Fortunately,awoman

happenedtoseeit

and

rememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepoliceman

andtoldhimwhathadhappened.Finally,

thedriverwascaught

andpunishedforhiswrongdoing.Passage2

第19頁Usingconnectives并列轉(zhuǎn)折3.因果

4.其他and,both…and

but,however,though,while

so,therefore,because

when,suddenly,immediately,assoonas,unfortunately,so…that…,finally,asaresult,Whatwasworse第20頁Goovertherequirement（person,tense,style）

Summary:Howtowriteapicturestory?Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)Writeapassage（usingconnectivesandaddingdetailsandspecificinformation.)第21頁基本篇章構(gòu)造①點題（時間、地點、人物、事件）②事件起因③事件發(fā)展/過程④事件成果⑤扣題第22頁2023年遼寧下面4幅圖片描述是星期天上午在中山公園里發(fā)生一件事。請根據(jù)圖片所提供信息用英語為你校“英語園地”寫一篇短文。注意：①短文須包括所有圖片主要內(nèi)容。短文內(nèi)容要連貫、完整；②短文單詞數(shù)：100左右（已給句子中單詞不計入總詞數(shù)）；③參照詞匯：貨攤stand(n.);搶奪snatch(v.);逮捕arrest(v.)第23頁第24頁1．點題（時間、地點）星期天上午，中山公園，冰淇淋貨攤旁2．事件起因年輕婦女包被搶3．事件發(fā)展/過程人們追趕搶包者；長排椅上坐著一位老人；搶包者從老人身旁跑過，老人用傘將他絆倒4．事件成果兩名警察逮捕搶劫者：5．扣題婦女感激老人，人們夸獎老人機智第25頁審題描述過去個人經(jīng)歷第三人稱4.主題：3.人稱：1.體裁：2.時態(tài)：記敘文體一般過去時第26頁星期天上午，中山公園，冰淇淋貨攤OneSundaymorning,；inZhongshanPark.；Atanice-creamstand年輕婦女包被搶snatchherhandbagaway人們追趕搶包者runafterthesnatcher在附近長排椅上坐著一位老人Therebesb.sittingonthebenchnearby提綱第27頁從老人身旁跑過Runpasttheoldman拿起傘；將傘放在他兩腿之間；pickuphisumbrella;putitbetweenthetwolegsofthesnatcher;

摔一大跟斗falldownonthegroundheavily第28頁兩名警察來到并逮捕搶劫者Cameinapolicecar;arrestsb.感激老人幫助Thanksb.forhishelp

夸獎老人機智Praisetheoldmanforhiscleverness第29頁1、幾天前theotherday;severaldaysago2、使人感到意外toone’ssurprise3、就在這時atthatmoment;atthattime常用關聯(lián)詞第30頁①副詞：suddenly,unfortunately,luckily,immediatelyasaresult……②so/such…that…③twohourslater,④…and…第31頁1.Itwas…(天氣)2.Whilesb.wasdoing/sb.wasabouttodo…when…3.sb.did…and…4.see/hearsb.Doing5.

withthehelpofsb.某些也許用到句型和詞組第32頁

OneSundaymorning,

manypeoplewenttoZhongshanPark.

Asitwasveryhot,somepeoplegotthirstyandweretryingtobuysomeice-cream.

Suddenly

awoman

atthestandshoutedbecause

ayoungmanbehindhersnatchedherhandbagaway.第33頁

Seeingthis,immediately

afewpeoplebeganto

runafter

him.

However,

thesnatcherran

sofastthat

itwasnoteasytocatchhim.

Luckily

,therewas

anoldman

sitting

onabenchnearby.

第34頁As

thesnatcherwas

runningpast

him,theoldmanquickly

pickedup

hisumbrella

and

putitbetweenthesnatcher’