【2022年】江蘇省無(wú)錫市大學(xué)英語(yǔ)6級(jí)大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)模擬考試(含答案)

【2022年】江蘇省無(wú)錫市大學(xué)英語(yǔ)6級(jí)大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)模擬考試(含答案)學(xué)校:________班級(jí):________姓名:________考號(hào):________

一、1.Writing(10題)1.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessaycommentingontheevaluationofteachers'performancedonebythestudents.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.

1．不少大學(xué)讓學(xué)生參與任課老師教學(xué)情況的測(cè)評(píng)

2．對(duì)此改革措施校方、教師、學(xué)生的看法不一

3．學(xué)生測(cè)評(píng)教師的益處以及可能產(chǎn)生的問(wèn)題

2.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic"AFewRemarksonCompetition".Yourcompositionshouldbenolessthan150wordsandbaseonetheoutlinegiveninChinesebelow.

1．競(jìng)爭(zhēng)是存在于當(dāng)今社會(huì)的普遍現(xiàn)象；

2．競(jìng)爭(zhēng)的好處；

3．競(jìng)爭(zhēng)的同時(shí)不要忘記合作。

3.1.如今的大學(xué)畢業(yè)生面臨的職業(yè)選擇：興趣重要還是工資重要

2.你的觀點(diǎn)

3.結(jié)論

SalaryorInterest

4.Forthispart,youarerequiredtowriteacompositiononthetopic"The1998SummerFlood".Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegiveninChinesebelow:

1.洪水所造成的損失：受災(zāi)面積……，傷亡人數(shù)……，經(jīng)濟(jì)損失……元，受災(zāi)最為嚴(yán)重的省份是……

2.江主席、黨中央十分關(guān)心受災(zāi)區(qū)和人民，親自指揮抗洪搶險(xiǎn)，取得了最后勝利。

3.抗洪的勝利說(shuō)明了什么？

5.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:SalaryorInterest.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.1.如今大學(xué)畢業(yè)生面臨的職業(yè)選擇：興趣重要還是工資重要

2.你的觀點(diǎn)

3.結(jié)論

SalaryorInterest

6.Forthispart,youaresupposedtowriteashortessayentitledInternetaccordingtothefollowingoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.Thefirstsentenceofeachparagraphhasbeengiventoyou.

1.因特網(wǎng)越來(lái)越普遍地進(jìn)入到我們的學(xué)習(xí)、工作和生活當(dāng)中

2.因特網(wǎng)的益處

3.因特網(wǎng)的消極方面

Internet

Internethasbeenplayinganincreasingroleinourdailylife.______.

Internethasenabledustodoalotofthingsmoreeasilyandquickly.______.

However,ifnotmanagedproperly,Internetcancreatemanyproblemstoo.______.

Allinall,wecannotlivewithoutInternetnow.______.

7.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledTheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.隨著社會(huì)和經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展．網(wǎng)絡(luò)成為了每個(gè)人必不可少的獲取信息的工具

2．但是，在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上也出現(xiàn)了一些不健康的因素，如垃圾信息、黃色網(wǎng)站、虛假新聞、網(wǎng)絡(luò)炒作等

3．我們應(yīng)采取措施制止這些，并建立—個(gè)健康的網(wǎng)絡(luò)環(huán)境

TheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet

8.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomplaintlettertothecustomerservicedepartmentofthecompany'sheadoffice.Youboughtalaptopafewdaysagofromabigcomputerchainstore,butthelaptopstoppedworking.Whenyoutookitbacktothestore,theyrefusedtodealwiththeproblem.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.計(jì)算機(jī)出現(xiàn)了什么問(wèn)題。

2．與店方交涉的經(jīng)過(guò)。

3．你希望公司的客戶服務(wù)部門能盡快幫助解決問(wèn)題。

9.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledOnFakeCommodities.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinEnglish:

1.Whatistakecommodity?

2.Theharmoffakecommodity.

3.Howtoputanendtofakecommodities?

10.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledHowtoWriteanEnglishResume?Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.中英文簡(jiǎn)歷有所不同，英語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)歷不是漢語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)歷的直接翻譯；

2.寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)歷要注意：不要簡(jiǎn)單羅列，要突出重點(diǎn)；內(nèi)容安排要合理；用詞準(zhǔn)確，認(rèn)真檢查等等。

HowtoWriteanEnglishResume?

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10題)11.

BesidesSanFrancisco,______isalsoFrechtling'sfavoritecitytovisit.

12.

Acouplemaygetdivorcediftheycantestifythattheirrelationshiphasbrokendownirreparably.

A.YB.NC.NG

13.

WhatkindofstudentsdoesBillStroudteach?

A.9/11survivors.

B.Highschooljuniors.

C.Film-makingmajors.

D.Futureengineers,.

14.

Becauseofthepressureandstressfromtheircareersandchildren,adultchildrentendtodependontheirparents.

A.YB.NC.NG

15.Whatproportionoftheworld'selectricitysupplyisprovidedbyhydroelectricpower?

A.6%.B.9%.C.15%.D.60%.

16.

Differentfromwhatmostpeopleexpect,theresearchshowsthatanincreaseinreadingratemayleadto______.

17.

Thekeyadvantagesoffuelcellsincluderaisingthe__________________andreducingairpollution.

18.

Asearlyas1896scientistssuggestedthatburningfossilfuelsmightchange______.

19.

AccordingtotheUN'sprediction,thegrowthpopulationfromnowto2050isnearlyallin______.

A.westerncountries

B.Africancountries

C.developedcountries

D.developingcountries

20.

Somenervoustensionisgoodforyouto______.

A.haveadeepersleepbeforethespeech

B.thinkquicklyandkeepactive

C.makemusclescompletelyrelaxed

D.makeadullorlistlessspeech

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10題)21.聽(tīng)力原文：M:Iwasjustreadingthisarticleaboutthewondersoftheancientworld.Alotofthemwerebuildings.Iwasthinking,whatwouldyourwondersofthemodernwouldbe?Notnecessarilybuildings,butthingsthathavechangedourwayoflife.

W:Forme,well,Iwasthinkingthecellphoneisthemostwonderfulthing.

M:Really?

W:Yeah,(19)Ievencouldn'tlivewithoutmine.It'ssoconvenient!Icancallmyfriendsanytimeandtheycanalwayscallme.OrifI'mintroubleIcancallforhelp...

M:Youmeanlikecallingyourparents?

W:Yeah,likeparents,andifI'mrunninglate,I'mabletocallafriendifI'm,like,onthebusorsomething.

M:(20)Buttheproblemwithcellphonesisthatpeopleusethemtoomuchforeverylittlething.It'spracticallygluedtotheirears.

W:Yeah,andIhateitwhenpeopleshoutintotheminapublicplaceandeveryoneelsehastolistentotheconversation,especiallyinrestaurants.

M:Well,goodmannersaren'tawonderofourworld!Youknow,Ithinkthemostamazingwonderise-mail.Ithaschangedtheworld,andithastotallytransformedmybusiness.Everybodyatworkisalwaysonthecomputer,respondingtoe-mails,sendinge-mails...That'swheremostofourbusinessisdonenow,throughe-mail.Youaresendingreports,gettinginformation.Butthebadpartisthatyouaregluedtothecomputerandpeopleexpectthingstobedonerightaway.

W:Yeah,peopleareshockedifyougothroughadaywithoutcheckingyoure-mail.Andwhenyougoonvacationandthenyoucomeback,maybethereare200e-mailswaitingforyou—allofthemurgent.

M:Iguessitislikeanyothertoolordevice.(21)Ifit'susedcorrectly,it'sveryuseful.

19．Wilydoesthewomanconsiderthecellphoneoneofthewondersofthemodemworld?

20.Whatistheproblemwithcellphonesaccordingtotheman?

21.Howdoesthemanfeelaboute-mail?

(20)

A.Itisusedtoomuch.

B.ItismorenecessarythanE-mail.

C.Itisveryconvenient.

D.Ithasmoreproblemsthanbenefits.

22.

【B4】

23.(31)

A.Whenhehastodohisworkonfoot.

B.Whenhehastowalkupanddownstairs.

C.Whenheissometimesgreetedinanunpleasantway.

D.Whenhehasaregisteredletter.

24.(36)

A.Funny.B.Clever.C.Brave.D.Stupid.

25.SectionB

Directions:Inthissection,youwillhear3shortpassages.Attheendofeachpassage,youwillhearsomequestions.Boththepassageandthequestionswillbespokenonlyonce.Afteryouhearaquestion,youmustchoosethebestanswerfromthefourchoicesmarkedA,B,CandD.

聽(tīng)力原文：I'mhavingproblemslivingwithColin.We'vebarelyspokentoeachotherinamonth,andwhenwedo,it'stofight.Itstartedwhenwefirstmovedin.Ihadalotofthings,andColinwasn'tthrilled.He'snoteasytoplease,youknow.Iputallmystuffintheclosetinthekitchen.Thismadehimreallyupsetbecausehewantedtoputhissurfinggearthere.What'smore,Ilikeaneat,orderlyapartment,butColinissocarefree.Hispartoftheapartmentisalwaysamess.That'sokifhe'sjustmessyinhisroom,butwealsosharelivingspace,suchasthekitchen,livingroom,bathetc.Ihavetriedtalkingtohimaboutthis,butthenhestartsyellingatmeabouthowmyfriendsarealwayscomingoverwhenhehasalotofworktodo.Idon'tknowwhattodo.TheheadresidentpromisedtotalktoColin.Iwillseehowitgoes.IfIstillhaveaproblemattheendoftheweek,Iwillaskforaroomtochange.

(27)

A.Theman'sprofessor.

B.Theman'sroommate.

C.Aneighbor.

D.Theman'sbrother.

26.聽(tīng)力原文：M：Didyougetcutoff?Iseeyouarebusyingwiththetelephone．

W：No,theyaskedmetohangupandtryagainlater.WhatamessthatIcouldn'tknowhowtohandleit.

Q：Whathasthewomanbeendoing?

(13)

A.Eatinginacafeteria.

B.Buyingsomethinginastore.

C.Makingtelephone.

D.Gettingmoneyatabank.

27.聽(tīng)力原文：W:Well,tonightwehaveAndrewGreeninourstudiototalkaboutmusic.Andrewisagreatguitaristandhashisownband.So,Andrew,welcome.

M:Thanksalot.Mypleasuretobeheretonight.

W:Now,Andrew,perhapsyoucouldtellussomethingaboutthefuturetrendsfortheglobalmusicindustry?

M:Sure.Well,frommyperspectiveasamusician,[19]IcanseeadramaticincreaseinthepopularityofLatinmusic,evennow.Ifthistrendcontinues,IimaginethepopularityofSalsadancingwillalsorisedramatically.Thismayresultinaslightdecreaseinthepopularityofothertypesofmusic.

W:Whatdoyouthinkofthesuddendropininterestinclassicalmusic?

M:Ithinkthistrendhasbeenintheworksforquitesometime.Asmoreandmorevarietiesofmusicbecomeavailabletoconsumers,theclassicstandardsmaysufferinthepopularitycontest.[20]Ithinkthedropininterestofclassicalmusichasn'tbeensuddenatall,it'sbeenslowandsteadyformanyyearsnow.

W:Isthereanytypeofmusicthatisconsistentlypopularwithmostpeople?

M:Ifyoulookatthenumbers,rockandrollmusichasremainedasteadyconstantthroughtheyears.Iexpectthepopularityofrockandrollwillstaythesameinthecomingyears.

W:It'ssaidthat[21]rockmusicmightmakeonelivelierandhappier.Whatdoyouthinkofit?

M:That'stree.Researchsuggeststhatmusiccaninfluenceaperson'sfeelingsandcharacter.[21]There'sclearevidencethatpeoplewholistenlivelymusicarelivelypeople.

(20)

A.Salsadancing.

B.Classicalmusic.

C.Rockandroll.

D.Latinmusic.

28.

【B6】

29.(29)

A.personshouldprobablybetheleastafraidofadwarfshark.

B.Apersonshouldprobablybetheleastafraidofatigershark.

C.Apersonshouldprobablybetheleastafraidofabullshark.

D.Apersonshouldprobablybetheleastafraidofagreatwhiteshark.

30.聽(tīng)力原文：W:IfIwereyou,Iwouldtakeabusinsteadofaplane.Flyingmakesalenervous.

M:Butitwilltakemeforevertogettherebybus.

Q:Whatdoesthemanprefertodo?

(16)

A.Heprefersstayingathomebecausehedoesn'tliketotravel.

B.Hepreferstakingabusbecausetheplanemakeshimnervous.

C.Hepreferstakingaplanebecausethebusistooslow.

D.Hepreferstravellingwiththewoman.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3題)31.

ThepromotedJapanesemanageraskedforatransferbecause______.

A.hewasnotcompetent,forthehigherposition

B.hewasnotaccustomedtoworkingbyhimself

C.hecouldnotmaketheadjustmenttohisnewjob

D.helackedadequatecommunicationwithhissuperiors

32.DifferentfromHarvard,manyuniversitiesrequiretheadmittedapplicantsto______.

33.

Howisthefruitsun-driedinSouthAfrica?

五、5.ErrorCorrection(3題)34.Thedecisiontomoveisalsoinfluencedby"personalfactors"

ofthepromisingmigrant.Thesamepush-pullfactorsandobstaclesS1.______

operatedifferentlyondifferentpeoples,sometimesbecausetheyareS2.______

ondifferentstagesoftheirlives,orjustS3.______

becausetheirvaryingabilitiesandpersonalities.TheprospectofS4.______

pullingupstakesandmovingtoanewandperhapsverystrangeenvironment

mayappearinterestingandchallengingtoayoung,footloose

manandfrighteningdifficulttoaslightlyoldermanwithawifeS5.______

andyoungchildren.Similarly,theneedtolearnanewlanguageand

customsmayintrigueonepersonandfrightenthetuber.S6.______

Regardlessfromwhypeoplemove,migrationoflargeS7.______

numberofpeoplecausesfriction,TheUnitedStatesandother"receiving"S8.______

countries(thetermusedforcountriesthatwelcomelarge

numbersofimmigrants)haveexperiencedadjustmentproblemswith

eachnewwaveofimmigrants,ThenewestarrivalsareusuallygivingS9.______

thejobswithlowestpayandareresentedbynativeswhomayhave

tocompetewiththemforthosejobs.Ithasusuallytakenseveraldecades

foreachonetogainacceptanceinthemainstreamofsocietyinS10.______

thereceivingcountry.

【S1】

35.

【S7】

36.【S7】

六、6.ErrorCorrection(3題)37.

【S6】

38.

【S3】

39.

【S4】

參考答案

1.EvaluationbyStudentsNowadaysagrowingnumberofuniversitieshavelaunchedthe"StudentEvaluationProject"inwhichstudentsareinvitedtoevaluatethejobperformanceoftheirteachers.Inmostcasesstudentsgetevaluationformsattheendofasemesterandareaskedtofillthemoutanonymously.Therearevariedopinionsamongteachersanduniversityauthoritiesaboutthiseducationalreformprogram.Universityadministratorsconsiderstudentevaluationtobeaneffectivemeanstodisciplineteachersandhelpenhancetheteachingquality.Howevermanyteachersfeeluncomfortableevenresentfulaboutitbecausedifferentstudentsmayhavedifferentstandardsbywhichtojudgetheirteachers.Intheiropiniontheevaluationresultsmaybeinfluencedbyindividualstudent'spersonalfeelingsandthereforecan'tbecountedonasanobjectivereflectionoftheteachingperformance.Asforstudentstheirattitudesarealsovaried:someliketobegivenavoicetoexpresstheirviewssomedon'tunderstanditwhilesomesimplydon'tcare.AsawholeStudentEvaluationProjecttookaboldstepintheuniversityeducationreformprocesswhichencouragesstudentstogetmoreactivelyinvolvedintheclassteachingthuspositivelycreatinganinteractiveacademicatmosphere.Neverthelessmanyotherproblemsmayarisecorrespondingly.Forinstancesomestudentsmaybetoocriticalaboutacertainprofessorjustbecausetheprofessorisnotfunorheistoostrictwhichmighthaveanegativeimpactontheimpartialityofevaluationitselfmisleadingthereformorientation.EvaluationbyStudentsNowadays,agrowingnumberofuniversitieshavelaunchedthe"StudentEvaluationProject",inwhichstudentsareinvitedtoevaluatethejobperformanceoftheirteachers.Inmostcases,studentsgetevaluationformsattheendofasemesterandareaskedtofillthemoutanonymously.Tgram.Universityadministratorsconsiderstudentevaluationtobeaneffectivemeanstodisciplineteachersandhelpenhancetheteachingquality.However,manyteachersfeeluncomfortable,evenresentfulaboutit,becausedifferentstudentsmayhavedifferentstandardsbywhichtojudgetheirteachers.Intheiropinion,theevaluationresultsmaybeinfluencedbyindividualstudent'spersonalfeelingsandthereforecan'tbecountedonasanobjectivereflectionoftheteachingperformance.Asforstudents,theirattitudesarealsovaried:someliketobegivenavoicetoexpresstheirviews,somedon'tunderstandit,whilesomesimplydon'tcare.Asawhole,StudentEvaluationPcess,whichencouragesstudentstogetmoreactivelyinvolvedintheclassteaching,thuspositivelycreatinganinteractiveacademicatmosphere.Nevertheless,many,otherproblemsmayarisecorrespondingly.Forinstance,somestudentsmaybetoocriticalaboutacertainprofessorjustbecausetheprofessorisnotfunorheistoostrict,whichmighthaveanegativeimpactontheimpartialityofevaluationitself,misleadingthereform.orientation.

2.AFewRemarksonCompetitionInourmodernsocietyyoumayfeelcompetitioneverywhere．Theathletesforexamplefightwitheachotherforchampionships.Thestudentscompeteforprizesandscholar-shipsatschool．TheunemployeAFewRemarksonCompetitionInourmodernsocietyyoumayfeelcompetitioneverywhere．Theathletes，forexample，fightwitheachotherforchampionships.Thestudentscompeteforprizesandscholar-shipsatschool．Theunemploye

3.SalaryorInterestUpongraduationvirtuallyallcollegestudentswillconfronttheproblemofchoosingtheircareers.Itistrulyatoughchoice.Students'opinionsdiffergreatlyonthisissue.Someholdthatpriorityshouldbegiventotheirinterestinthejobbutotherstaketheattitudethatsalaryisthemostcriticalfactorinfluencingtheircareerchoices.AsformyselfIpreferthelatterview.Awell-paidjobexertsatremendousfascinationonagreatnumberofpeoplewithnoexceptiontome.Althoughitmightbeimpossibletomeasurethevalueofone'sjobintermsofmoneysalarycountsmostwhenIchoosemyfuturecareer.Inmyviewourcareerchoiceslargelydependonhowandwherewehavebeenbroughtup.Icomefromapoorurbanfamilyandmyparentsarebothlaid-offworkers.Inordertofinancemytuitiontheyhavebeenworkinghardoverthepastfouryears.AstheonlysoninmyfamilyIhavetoshouldertheburdenofsupportingmyfamily.Inshortsalaryisthefirstconsiderationinmychoiceofcareer.SalaryorInterestUpongraduation,virtuallyallcollegestudentswillconfronttheproblemofchoosingtheircareers.Itistrulyatoughchoice.Students'opinionsdiffergreatlyonthisissue.Someholdthatpriorityshouldbegiventotheirinterestinthejob,butotherstaketheattitudethatsalaryisthemostcriticalfactorinfluencingtheir,careerchoices.Asformyself,Ipreferthelatterview.Awell-paidjobexertsatremendousfascinationonagreatnumberofpeople,withnoexceptiontome.Althoughitmightbeimpossibletomeasurethevalueofone'sjobintermsofmoney,salarycountsmostwhenIchoosemyfuturecareer.Inmyview,ourcareerchoiceslargelydependonhowandwherewehavebeenbroughtup.Icomefromapoorurbanfamilyandmyparentsarebothlaid-offworkers.Inordertofinancemytuition,theyhavebeenworkinghardoverthepastfouryears.Astheonlysoninmyfamily,Ihavetoshouldertheburdenofsupportingmyfamily.Inshort,salaryisthefirstconsiderationinmychoiceofcareer.

4.The1998SummerFloodThecalamitousfloodsthisyearclaimedthelivesofmorethanthreethousandpeople1320beingkilledalongtheYangtzeRiver.Thedelugeinthesummerflooded21millionhectaresoflandin29The1998SummerFloodThecalamitousfloodsthisyearclaimedthelivesofmorethanthreethousandpeople,1,320beingkilledalongtheYangtzeRiver.Thedelugeinthesummerflooded21millionhectaresoflandin29

5.SalaryorInterestUpongraduationvirtuallyallcollegestudentswillconfronttheproblemofchoosingtheircareers.Itistrulyaroughchoice.Students'opinionsdiffergreatlyonthisissue.Someholdthatpriorityshouldbegiventotheirinterestinthejobbutotherstaketheattitudethatsalaryisthemostcriticalfactorinfluencingtheircareerchoices.AsformyselfIpreferthelatterview.Awell-paidjobexertsatremendousfascinationonagreatnumberofpeoplewithnoexceptiontome.Althoughitmightbeimpossibletomeasurethevalueofone'sjobintermsofmoneysalarycountsmostwhenIchoosemyfuturecareer.Inmyviewourcareerchoiceslargelydependonhowandwherewehavebeenbroughtup.Icomefromapoorurbanfamilyandmyparentsarebothlaid-offworkers.Inordertofinancemytuitiontheyhavebeenworkinghardoverthepastfouryears.AstheonlysoninmyfamilyIhavetoshouldertheburdenofsupportingmyfamily.Inshortsalaryisthefirstconsiderationinmychoiceofcareer.SalaryorInterestUpongraduation,virtuallyallcollegestudentswillconfronttheproblemofchoosingtheircareers.Itistrulyaroughchoice.Students'opinionsdiffergreatlyonthisissue.Someholdthatpriorityshouldbegiventotheirinterestinthejob,butotherstaketheattitudethatsalaryisthemostcriticalfactorinfluencingtheircareerchoices.Asformyself,Ipreferthelatterview.Awell-paidjobexertsatremendousfascinationonagreatnumberofpeople,withnoexceptiontome.Althoughitmightbeimpossibletomeasurethevalueofone'sjobintermsofmoney,salarycountsmostwhenIchoosemyfuturecareer.Inmyview,ourcareerchoiceslargelydependonhowandwherewehavebeenbroughtup.Icomefromapoorurbanfamilyandmyparentsarebothlaid-offworkers.Inordertofinancemytuition,theyhavebeenworkinghardoverthepastfouryears.Astheonlysoninmyfamily,Ihavetoshouldertheburdenofsupportingmyfamily.Inshort,salaryisthefirstconsiderationinmychoiceofcareer.

6.InternetInternethasbeenplayinganincreasingroleinourdailylife.Ithasbroughtuslotsofbenefitswhitemakingsomeseriousproblems.Internethasenabledustodomanythingsmoreeasilyandquickly.InternetInternethasbeenplayinganincreasingroleinourdailylife.Ithasbroughtuslotsofbenefitswhitemakingsomeseriousproblems.Internethasenabledustodomanythingsmoreeasilyandquickly.

7.TheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet[1]WiththedevelopmentofoursocietyandeconomytheInternetbecomesanecessarytoolforeveryonetoobtaininformation.[2]HowevertherearealsosomeunhealthycontentsintTheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet[1]Withthedevelopmentofoursocietyandeconomy,theInternetbecomesanecessarytoolforeveryonetoobtaininformation.[2]However,therearealsosomeunhealthycontentsint解析：作文標(biāo)題是“創(chuàng)建健康網(wǎng)絡(luò)環(huán)境的重要性”，這已經(jīng)表明，寫(xiě)作的重點(diǎn)是說(shuō)明“為什么要?jiǎng)?chuàng)建健康的網(wǎng)絡(luò)環(huán)境”。但所給出的outline沒(méi)有體現(xiàn)這一點(diǎn)。僅僅根據(jù)outline動(dòng)筆，恐怕寫(xiě)不出好作文來(lái)。

提綱的第1點(diǎn)和第2點(diǎn)都址說(shuō)背景，是為我們要論述的論點(diǎn)服務(wù)的；第3點(diǎn)指向“措施”，也與論點(diǎn)有關(guān)。但是，以這三點(diǎn)中的任何一條為中心，都有可能偏題。

那么該如何做這篇文章呢?不僅要把提綱中的內(nèi)容納入，而且還要特別淪述“創(chuàng)建健康網(wǎng)絡(luò)環(huán)境的重要性”。要思考那么兒條“重要性”出來(lái)，才能有話可說(shuō)，切合中心主旨。洲練從不同的角度考慮健康網(wǎng)絡(luò)的重要忭，培養(yǎng)良好的思維能力，是寫(xiě)好此類作文的關(guān)鍵。

Analysis

[1]對(duì)應(yīng)outline的第1條

[2]對(duì)應(yīng)outline的第2條。如果不知道怎么用英浯表達(dá)“炒作”(drumbeating)，不說(shuō)就是。反正僅僅是不良現(xiàn)象中的—個(gè)例子而已。

[3]主題句，對(duì)應(yīng)作文標(biāo)題。

[4][5][6]三條理由。健康的網(wǎng)絡(luò)可以：預(yù)防網(wǎng)絡(luò)犯罪：保護(hù)兒童不受不良信息的影響；方便我們更好地利用網(wǎng)絡(luò)資源。(這部分可以八仙過(guò)海，各顯神通)

[7]總結(jié)全文．照應(yīng)outline的第3條。

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