讀后續(xù)寫趣事類育兒妙招學(xué)案-高三英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫題目Mymotherwasasupporterofphysicalpunishment,butforallhertalkingshehasneverspanked(打屁股)mysiblingsandmeonlyonce.Insteadshefoundwaysofpunishmentthatleftamore

lasting

memorythangivingusaspanking.OneofthemostmemorableoftheseoccasionsoccurredwhenIwasfour.Intheearly70’smymotherattendedcollegeduringthedayandIwasindaycare.Onedayatdaycarewatchedanextremelytiredmotherattempttopickupherdaughter.Thelittlegirlasked,“Momma,arewegoingtoMcDonald’sfordinner?”Themotherreplied,“Honey,nottonight.Momma

hastorunafewerrands(差事)andthenwehavetogohomeandcookdinnerforDaddy.”“ButIwannago.”“Susie,Isaidnottonight.Maybe,ifyouareagoodgirl,wecangotomorrow.”Susieimmediatelydroppedtothefloor,kickingand

screaming,“IwanttogotoMcDonald’s.”Noamountofpleading(懇求)orscoldinghermothertriedstoppedSusie’stantrum(發(fā)脾氣).Finallyhermother

gavein,“Okay,Susie,let’sgotoMcDonald’s.”Susiestoppedyellingandsmilingshegrabbedhermother’shandandtheyleft.TosayIwasamazedwouldbeinaccurate;IwasdelightedthatanythingIwantedcouldbehadbythrowingatantrum.ThatdaymymotherpickedmeupearlyfromdaycarebecauseweweregoingtoastoretopurchasesomeChristmasitems.Iwasexcitedbythelightsanddecorations,andaswewalkedthroughthetoysectiononthewaytothecounter,IsawatoyIhadtohave.Itwasawhiteandredtelephonewhosebellsrangasitwaspulledalongonastring.LookinglovinglyupatmymotherIasked,“Mama,canIhavethattelephone?”Shereplied,“Baby,notnow,butifyouareagoodgirl,maybeSantawillbringittoyou.”“ButMama,Iwantthattelephonerightnow.”Hereyesnarrowedandherhandtightenedonmine.“Becky,youcan’thavethattelephonetoday,butifyoumisbehave,youcanhaveaspanking.”Paragraph1:BynowwewerestandinginthelongHolidaylinetopaythebill,andIfigureditwasagoodchance.Paragraph2:“Mama,stop.Mama,getup,”Itearfullypleaded.ReadfortheInformationPara1

Instead

shefound

waysofpunishment

thatleftamorelastingmemorythangivingusaspanking.

Oneofthemostmemorableof

theseoccasions

occurredwhenIwasfour.相反，她找到了懲罰的方法，給我們留下了比打屁股更持久的記憶。其中最難忘的一次發(fā)生在我四歲的時(shí)候。轉(zhuǎn)折之后必有重點(diǎn)，第一段要定下整篇文章基調(diào)和主題，本文媽媽并沒(méi)有打我，而是用了另一種特殊方式來(lái)教育我。倒推情節(jié):結(jié)尾para1提示句寫道Ifigureditwasagoodchance.我得到了一個(gè)很好的機(jī)會(huì)。是什么機(jī)會(huì)呢？通過(guò)前文描寫了一個(gè)小女孩通過(guò)耍渾、撒潑、發(fā)脾氣的方式從媽媽那里得到了自己想要的東西（去吃麥當(dāng)勞），于是“我”也我也逮到了一個(gè)好機(jī)會(huì)向媽媽發(fā)脾氣達(dá)成目的。我明白了，首段必須得記敘“我”在地上撒潑耍渾的場(chǎng)景。結(jié)尾para2，“Mama,getup”為什么要懇求媽媽站起來(lái)呢？難道媽媽也坐在地上？媽媽怎么會(huì)坐在地上呢？首段還要記敘媽媽也模仿我在地上撒潑耍渾的場(chǎng)景。那我們standinthelongHolidayline，周圍人有什么反應(yīng)呢？思路總結(jié)Para1

我躺-媽媽躺-周圍人反應(yīng)-我起來(lái)Para1

我勸媽媽起來(lái)-認(rèn)錯(cuò)-媽媽的反應(yīng)-總結(jié)要認(rèn)真構(gòu)思這幾個(gè)情景：1.我躺下撒潑的樣子。2.媽媽看到我耍渾，她生氣的樣子。3.看到媽媽躺下撒潑，我驚訝的樣子。4.人群圍過(guò)來(lái)了，我特別尷尬的樣子。5.人群議論中，我祈求媽媽起來(lái)，認(rèn)錯(cuò)。6.我面對(duì)媽媽羞愧又后悔的樣子。提示:用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)

adj

非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞

虛擬語(yǔ)氣來(lái)豐富句子。suggested

version1.我躺下撒潑。a)Itsuddenlystruckmethatatantrumislikelytohelppersuademymothertobuythegift.b)Immediately,Isankdownonthefloor,kickingandshoutingregardlessofthepassers-by.c)InspiteofthefactthatIwouldbelaughedat,Isatdownontheground,screamingdesperatelyandhopingmamawouldmeetmydemand.d)Tearsofsadnessandpleadingfilledmygloomyeyes,andthenslippedtothefloor.2.媽媽看到我耍渾，她生氣的樣子。a)Alookofannoyanceranthroughmymother’sface,afterwhichcamehervoice,

“No”.

b)SeeingwhatIdid,mymotherfrownedasiftoaskmetostandupquickly.3.媽媽躺下撒潑，我驚訝的樣子。a)Withagroupofpeoplestaringatus,mymotheralsolaydownonthefloor,kickingandscreamingasIdid.b)目瞪口呆的：bestruckdumbwithastonishment;dumbfounded;stunned;Thescenemademyjawdrop.c)Whatshockedmealotwasthatmymothersatdownbesideme,screaminginanaughtyvoice.d)Feelingshockedandembarrassed,Istruggledtomyfeet,holdingmymother’shandtogetherup.e)Seeingwhatmymotherdid,Iwasfrozenwithshock,atalosswhattodo.f)Theinstantmymotherbegantoscreamatthetopofhervoice,thecrowdgatheredaroundwithcuriosity.g)SoshockedwasIthatIwasdumbfoundedwithmyeyeswideopen.4.人群圍過(guò)來(lái)了，我特別尷尬。a)Withthecrowdsurroundingus,mythroatwastighteningasifarockwasstuckinitandcouldn’tutteraword.5.人群議論中，我祈求媽媽起來(lái)，做保證。a)Lookingaround,Ilaydownontheground,screaminginaloudvoiceinanattempttopersuademymothertostandup.b)Feelingashamedandregretful,Ihuggedmymotherastightlyaspossible,promisingthatIwouldnotthrowatantrumagain.c)Withmyeyessparkling,Iregrettedwithendlessembarrassment,foldingmyarmsaroundher.

d)Impressedbywhatmymotherdid,Ipromisedthatthesamethingwouldneverhappenagain.e)Withthecrowdmurmuring,Ibeggedmymothertostandup,makingaguaranteethatIwouldnotdothatagain.6.媽媽的反應(yīng)a)Wearinganexpressionofrelief,mymotherstoodup,pattingmeontheshoulder.參考答案:BynowwewerestandinginthelongHolidaylinetopaythebill,andIfigureitwasagoodchance.I

laydownonthegroundandbeganscreaming,“Iwantthattelephone,”overandoveragain.WearyChristmasshopperslookedasmymothercalmlysaid,“Becky,you’dbettergetupbythecountofthreeorelse.One…Two…Three.”Nothing.Iwasstill

infulltantrum.Sothenshelaydownbesidemeonthefloor,andbegankickingandscreaming,“Iwantanewcar,Iwantanewhouse,Iwantsomejewelry,Iwa