考研英語沖刺作文部分

沖刺作文部分

1.歷年考試主要涉及一些generaltopics,如愛心(2001)、成長(2003)、

代溝(1992)、友誼(1994)、家庭(2005)、承諾(1998)、崇拜(2006)、

健康(1996)、資源利用(2000)、文化交流(2002)等話題?？忌孕∫姶?

從圖片細節(jié)中提煉升華出大型宏觀主題加以議論，分析原因、利弊并得出建議。

命題中的圖片和圖表往往是單個或局部情況，但只追逐個別現(xiàn)象，分析就沒有了

深度，往往要追溯到總體情況。即使2006年考題圖畫中有英國球星Beckham的

發(fā)型,也要升華到對普遍的偶像崇拜(idolworship)現(xiàn)象的評價，而非僅僅針

對Beckham個人。命題從來不在個別事件、具體環(huán)節(jié)或細枝末節(jié)上做文章，決不

會細到介紹北京經(jīng)濟適用房建設情況或點評《滿城盡帶黃金價》。

2.內(nèi)容貼近日常生活和簡單社會常識：

考題要顧及到全國考生的知識水平，不同專業(yè)考生的知識共性，不可能考察太專

業(yè)或太偏的話題。所以內(nèi)容以個人生活體驗為主，如愛心、成長、友誼、養(yǎng)老、

健康等等；稍微復雜一點的話題如環(huán)保、保護野生動物、文化交流也只需要考生

大致地通過常識進行判斷、分析和點評，點到為止就可以，關鍵要在語言的精確

度和精彩度上下工夫。大作文寫作時間只有30-40分鐘，不可能象論文一樣挖

掘詳細的數(shù)據(jù)、考證具體年代地點或提出標新立異的思想。2000年“世界商業(yè)

捕魚簡史”命題有點難度，但考生無須關注商業(yè)捕魚的歷史變遷和具體現(xiàn)狀，不

用借助數(shù)據(jù)或案例，只對兩張圖片中魚群的多少進行大致對比，并指出人類過度

開發(fā)資源的問題就到位了。160-200字的字數(shù)限制也只能讓考生分析到一般深

3t考生的觀點態(tài)度要走經(jīng)過設計的“主流”路線：

圖畫作文和圖表作文的主旨好像是個謎語，命題人已經(jīng)把自己的觀點傾向濃縮到

了圖片中，通過圖畫圖表來使主旨模糊化，需要考生在5分鐘內(nèi)審題，進行常

識判斷并加以破解。主旨往往具有“positive”的傾向，考生需要在圖畫寓意中

發(fā)現(xiàn)哲理或是思考問題的積極解決方案。絕不可能向國外考試那樣，學生可以通

過腦筋急轉彎給出另類的觀點。在構思的時候往往要走‘‘主流”路線，才能提供

符合命題人思路的正確觀點，從而順利得分?？忌鷾蕚淞艘荒暧⒄Z，不可能憑借

奇思異想過度冒險。例如：2001年“愛心是一盞燈”話題，考生通過構思要得

出助人為樂的判斷，如果考生論證出要對自己有愛心，為了個人利益而不顧他人,

必然按跑題處理。2004年“終點又是新的起點”，考生必須破解出堅持不懈、

發(fā)展與進步的主旨。如果考生持個人觀點，認為終點不一定是新的起點，并加以

論證，這樣的寫作注定要失敗，因為違背了命題人的初衷。2005年考題主旨是

養(yǎng)老，如果考生認為父母都要象美國老年人那樣獨立生活，不依賴子女，這種嶄

新的觀念是不會被考官接受的。2006年偶像崇拜主題，考生要以成熟的主流心

態(tài)，寫出'擇其優(yōu)而學之，避免盲目崇拜’的觀點，如果考生持認為花300元

理個小貝頭很值，展現(xiàn)個性，結果就會由于“不懂事，不明事理”而被閱卷老師

以跑題處理。

4.命題不會涉及時事政治或敏感話題：

正是因為日常生活話題容易判斷是非，所以考官盡量通過主旨濃縮來讓考生進行

猜謎。而時事政治話題錯綜復雜，是非曲直一時難以斷定，觀點傾向缺乏普遍共

識，不方便作為考題，否則爭議不斷，難為了命題人和閱卷者。敏感的話題還怕

冒政治傾向錯誤的風險，更不會讓考生去亂發(fā)議論。最近考生在網(wǎng)站上猜測考題,

居然猜向了伊朗朝鮮核試驗、聯(lián)合國秘書長改選、泰國政變、天下圍攻陳水扁、

處決薩達姆、恐怖事件等。說實話，這些政治時事離考研命題太遙遠了，國際時

事并非考試關注焦點，而國內(nèi)民生動態(tài)到是還有參考價值，部分民生環(huán)保問題如

何解決是讀報瀏覽的關鍵。某些話題雖不是政治話題，但不利于安定團結，也不

一定成為考題，如腐敗猖獗、失業(yè)人數(shù)增長、愛滋病擴散、自殺現(xiàn)象增多、惡搞

藝術作品、家庭暴力、離婚率提高等等。有些話題涉及到隱私，也屬于討論的禁

區(qū)，如性問題，同性戀問題?；蛟S若干年以后，中國民眾的意識形態(tài)足夠開放了，

這些網(wǎng)絡話題也就可以在考試中探討了。

5.命題中的“和諧社會”傾向：

在以上分析的基礎上，我們重新審視歷年考題的命題，發(fā)現(xiàn)以中老年教授組成的

命題團隊普遍趨向常規(guī)主流觀點。那么考題圍繞著時代背景和主流思想，已經(jīng)逐

漸形成了以“和諧社會”為核心的命題思路。只不過總體以和諧作為公式的話題

可以分成和諧的三個不同層次：

個體和諧發(fā)展：

自信的重要性、節(jié)儉與浪費、如何看待成功、夢想與現(xiàn)實、抄襲（plagiarism）

與誠信、高分低能現(xiàn)象、職業(yè)選擇和規(guī)劃、

個人、他人與社會的和諧共處：

個性與團隊合作、如何看待競爭、網(wǎng)絡的利弊、偽劣商品問題（fake

commodities-商家為牟利而危害社會）、亂收費問題、如何看待中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)

日和洋節(jié)

人類與自然環(huán)境的和諧：

私家車的利弊（噪音空氣污染、交通阻塞）、環(huán)境污染話題（空氣、水、噪

音、土壤、人類食品）、亂砍濫伐問題、人類對歷史古跡的破壞及保護

另外，不論何種命題，都要從簡潔的圖畫中尋找線索并推理解決。針對很少練習

圖畫作文構思的考生，建議近期可上網(wǎng)查尋一下中國新聞漫畫網(wǎng)，尋找一些幽默

諷刺圖畫，練習快速推理，查找問題所在，同時進行相關詞聯(lián)想，熟能生巧。稍

加練習，便會發(fā)現(xiàn)一些慣性推理技巧，考試時就會大大減輕緊張感，從容不迫地

進行構思和創(chuàng)作。

評分標準：本題以總體評分法，通篇分檔計分，計分標準如下：

20—17分內(nèi)容切題，包括題中所列的各項要求：清楚表達其內(nèi)涵，文字連

貫；句式有變化，句子結構和用詞正確。文章長度符合要求。

16—13分內(nèi)容切題，包括題中所列的各項要求；比較清楚地表達其內(nèi)涵，

文字基本連貫；句式有一定變化，句子結構和用詞錯誤較少。文章長

度符合要求。

12-9分內(nèi)容切題，基本包括題中所列的各項要求；基本清楚地表達其內(nèi)

涵：句子結構和用詞有一些錯誤。文章長度符合要求。

8—5分內(nèi)容基本切題，基本包含題中所列的各項要求，語句可以理解，但

有較多的句子結構和用詞錯誤。文章長度基本符合要求。

4一1分基本按要求寫作，但只有少數(shù)句子可理解。

0分文不切題，語句混亂，無法理解。

第一章

A詞匯

一語天然萬古新

豪華落盡見真醇

A1

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9.encourageinspirestimulateimpulsemotivate

10.badluckdisastermisfortunetragedygriefsorrow

11.onlysoleuniquesinglelonelyunique

12.troubleconfusedisturbpuzzle

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19.worrymercybitternesssympathyconcern

20.valuabledesirableadvisablepricelessfeasible

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24.payattentiontobringintofocusinthelimelightemphasizeon

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25.deepmeaningsymbolicmeaningimplicationsocialmessage

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36.beliefawarenessrecognitionrealizationperspective

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?素質教育educationforall-rounddevelopment

?豆腐渣工程jerry-builtprojects

?可持續(xù)性發(fā)展sustainabledevelopment

?風險投資riskinvestment

?通貨緊縮deflation

?通貨膨脹inflation

?擴大內(nèi)需toexpanddomesticdemand

,計算機輔助教學computer-assistedinstruction(CAI)

?網(wǎng)絡空間cyberspace

,虛擬現(xiàn)實virtualreality

,電腦犯罪computercrime

?電子商務thee-business

?網(wǎng)上購物shoppingonline(on-lineshopping)

?應試教育exam-orientededucation

?學生減負toreducestudyload

?全國人民代表大會(簡稱全國人大)NationalPeople飛Congress(NPC)

?全國人大代表deputytotheNationalPeople'sCongress

?中國人民政治協(xié)商會議全國委員會(簡稱全國政協(xié))NationalCommitteeofthe

ChinesePeople'sPoliticalConsultativeConference(CPPO

?中國政協(xié)委員memberoftheNationalCommitteeofCPPCC

?政府工作報告government'sworkreport

?新聞發(fā)布會pressconference

?弱勢群體disadvantagedgroups(例句：Specialemployment

,assistanceshouldbegiventomembersofdisadvantagedgroups.應對弱

勢群體給予特殊的就業(yè)援助

?加快經(jīng)濟結構調(diào)整accelerateeconomicrestructuring

?城鎮(zhèn)社會保障體系urbansocialsecuritysystem

?下崗職工基本生活費subsistenceallowancesforlaid-offworkers

,離退休人員基本養(yǎng)老金basicpensionsforretirees

?特困行業(yè)和企業(yè)industriesandenterprisesindirestraits

?全球經(jīng)濟衰退theglobaleconomicslump

?醫(yī)療改革healthcarereform

?擴大內(nèi)需,刺激消費expanddomesticdemandandconsumption

?鄉(xiāng)鎮(zhèn)企業(yè)townshipenterprises.

?關貿(mào)總協(xié)定(世界貿(mào)易組織的前身)GATT(GeneralAgreementonTariffsand

Trade)

?世界貿(mào)易組織WTO(WorldTradeOrganization)

,最惠國待遇(現(xiàn)通常稱“正常貿(mào)易關系”)MFN(most-favored-nation)treatment

?實行國民待遇grantthenationaltreatmentto

?糧食安全foodsecurity

?知識產(chǎn)權IPRs(Intellectualpropertyfights)

?最不發(fā)達國家LDCs(Least-developedcountries)

?AA制Dutchtreatment；goDutch

?奧委會OlympicCommittee

?艾滋病(獲得性免疫缺陷綜合征)AIDS(AcquiredImmuneDeficiencySyndrome)

?愛心工程LovingCareProject

?愛鳥周Bird-LovingWeek.

?愛國統(tǒng)一戰(zhàn)線patrioticunitedfront

?安理會SecurityCouncil

?按勞分酉己distributionaccordingtoone'sperformance

?按揭購房tobuyahouseonmortgage；tomortgageahouse

,BP機beeper；pager

?手機mobilephone

,霸權主義hegemonism

?脫貧shakeofpoverty；liftoneselffrompoverty

?拜金主義moneyworship

?版權法copyrightlaw

?白色污染whitepollution

?筆記本電腦notebookcomputer

?貶值devalue,devaluate,depreciate(ofacurrency)

?畢業(yè)生分配制度assignmentofgraduates

?閉關政策closed-doorpolicy

?蹦迪discodancing

?保持國民經(jīng)濟發(fā)展的良好勢頭maintainagoodmomentumofgrowthinthe

nationaleconomy

?保護生態(tài)環(huán)境preservetheecologicalenvironment

?保護主義protectionism

,保健食品health-carefood

?北約NATO(theNorthAtlanticTreatyOrganization)

?不明飛行物unidentifiedflyingobject(UFO)

?重復建設buildingredundantprojects；duplicationofsimilarprojects

?菜籃子工程shoppingbasketprogram

,產(chǎn)權明晰、權責明確、政企分開、科學管理clearlyestablishedownership,

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administration,andscientificmanagement

?產(chǎn)品科技含量technologicalelementofaproduct

?(奧運)籌備委員會(Olympic)preparatorycommittee

?充值卡rechargeablecard

?暢通工程SmoothTrafficProject

?從粗放經(jīng)濟轉變?yōu)榧s經(jīng)濟shiftfromextensiveeconomytointensive

economy

?促進全球經(jīng)濟-一體化fosterintegrationwiththeglobaleconomy

?春運(passenger)transportduringtheSpringFestivalaroundtheChinese

lunarnewyear

?大學生倉ij業(yè)universitystudents9innovativeundertaking

,(食物)打包usedoggybagstotakefoodhome

?打假crackdownoncounterfeitgoods/fakeproducts

?帶薪假期paidholiday

?盜版VCDpiratedVCD

?電話會議teleconference

?第三產(chǎn)業(yè)tertiaryindustry；servicesector

?倒計時countdown

?地球村globalvillage

?地方保護主義regionalprotectionism

?多媒體multimedia

,惡性循環(huán)viciouscircle

?厄爾尼諾現(xiàn)象ElNinophenomenon

,防偽標志anti-fakelabel

,防洪工程flood-preventionproject

?風險投資venturecapital；riskinvestment

?瘋牛病madcowdisease

?扶貧povertyalleviation

?反彈道導彈條約Anti-ballisticMissileTreaty(ABM)?

?反腐倡廉combatcorruptionandbuildacleangovernment

?福利彩票welfarelotteries

?福利分房welfare-orientedpublichousingdistributionsystem

?復合型人才inter-disciplinarytalent

?個人所得稅personalincometax

?高新技術產(chǎn)業(yè)開發(fā)區(qū)highandnewtechnologyindustrialdevelopmentzone

,國民生產(chǎn)總值grossnationalproduct(GNP)

,國民經(jīng)濟支柱產(chǎn)業(yè)pillarindustriesinnationaleconomy?

?國內(nèi)生產(chǎn)總值grossdomesticproduct(GDP)

一.說明現(xiàn)象

1.Recentlythephenomenonofhasarousedgreatconcernand

shouldbegivenenoughconsideration.

2.Recentlytheproblemofhasbeenbroughtintofocus/broughttopublic

attention.

3.Avirtualepidemicoftheisnowunderinthesociety

4isanotherofthenewandbittertruthswehavetofacenow.

5.Manisnowfacingwithabigproblem,whichisbecomingmoreand

moreserious.

6.Withthedevelopmentofmodernindustry,moreandmorepeopleare

concernedabouttheproblemof

7.Inthepastfewyears,atendofhasbeenbecomingmoreandmore

clear.

二.發(fā)表現(xiàn)點與看法

1.IfullyagreewiththestatementthatThereasonsarechieflyasfollows.

2.AlthoughmanypeoplebelievethatIdoubtwhethertheargumentbears

muchanalysis.

3.Althoughthepopularbeliefisastudyindicates

4.somepeoplesuggestButwhatthesepeoplefailtounderstandis

5.fromapersonalperspective,Ipreferto

6.Itistruethatbutapointisbeingleftoutofour

consideration.

7.Inordertoanswerthequestionofapersonmustweightwosides.

三..對立觀點

l.Differentpeoplehave(hold)differentviews(opinions/pointsofview)onthis

issue(problem/matter/question)

2.Somebelieve...Othersthink,Stillothersclaim(assume9have,hold,claim,

believe,maintain,takeastandon)

3.Theyarequitedifferentfromeachotherininterpretingtheissue.

4.AsfarasIamconcerned(AsfarasIknow)

5.1havetotakeotherfactorsintoconsiderationifIamconfrontedwithsucha

difflcultchoice.

四.主題句常用句型

Litisimportant(necessary,urgent,difficult,easy,convenient,comfortable,

expensive,desirable,advisable)forsb.todosth.(that)

Eg.

Itisinevitablethatthenaturalresourcesthroughouttheworldarediminishing

asthedemandforthemisontheincrease

Itisobviousthatthestrengthofacountry'seconomyisdirectlyboundupwith

theefficiencyofitsindustryandagriculture.

Itisurgentforthegovernmenttotakemeasurestocontrolthebirthrateinour

country.

Itisdesirabletobuildmorehospitals,shoppingcenters,recreationcenters,

cinemas,andotherpublicfacilitiestomeettheincreasingneedsofthepeople.

2.Nothingintheworldcandelightmesomuchas

3.Intheageofinformationandcommunication,thecomputerplaysasignificant

role.

4.Nothingismoreimportantthan

5.onecannotemphasizetheimportanceofsomuch

6??Itgoeswithoutsayingthat...

Itgoeswithoutsayingthatexercisesareagoodwaytokeephealthy.

五.原因解釋

1.Itmaybeattributedtothefollowingthreepoints.

2.Thedeteriorationofecologicalsystemmaybeattributedtothefollowing

leadingfactors.Firstofall,...

Secondly,Lastbutnotleast...

3.Acarefulanalysisofthechartsabovemayexplainwhythenumberofspecies

ofwildlifeisonthedeclineandtherateofwildlifeextinctionisaccelerating.

4.Itisnoeasyjobtofindthereasonforthistendencywhichinvolvesseveral

complicatedfactors.

5.Therearemanyreasonsresponsibleforthisinstance,andthefollowingarethe

typicalones.Foronething,Inaddition,Themainreasonisthat

6.Oneofthereasonsthatisgivenfor...isthat

7.AfurtherreasonwhyIadvocateanattitudeof...isthat

8..Anincreaseindemandcauses(resultsin/leadsto/produces)higherprices,

whichaggravatespeople'sfinancialburden.

六.列舉、舉例表達方式

l.Forexample,womenareholdinghigherpositionsinpoliticalandeconomic

power.

2.Forinstance,theeconomicstatusofthepeoplehasbeengreatlyimproved.

3.Take...forexample,...

4.Acaseinpointis….

S.Thefollowingexamplemaywellillustratethepoint,(show,demonstrate)

6….isagoodcaseinpoint.

7.Thischartshows(diagram,table,graph,form,picture,cartoon,bars)

七.結論性

1.Fromwhathavebeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelyarriveatthe

conclusion

2.Takingintoaccountallofthesefactors,wemayreachtheconclusionthat

3.Tosumuptheaboveargument,Ithinkaproperattitudetowardsis

that

4.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iwillchoosetobecausethechoicefitsmy

personalityandmylife-longbelief.

5.judgingfromalltheevidenceavailable,wemaysafelycometotheconclusion

that..

6.Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsoutweighthe

negativeones.

Therefore,Iwouldlike

八.后果性

1Nodoubt,ifweignoretheproblem,thereiseverychancethatwill

beputindanger.

2.wemustsearchforaquickaction,becausethepresentsituationofJf

allowedtoproceed,willcertainlyleadto

3.Ifwecannottakeusefulmeans,wemaynotcontrolthistrend,andsome

undesirableresultsmaycomeoutunexpectedly,sowhatweshoulddo

is

4.Inordertocrackthenuts,youneedconfidence,perseveranceandalso

courage.Whatismoreimportant,carefulconsiderationshouldbegiven

beforeyoucarryoutmeasures.

九.建議性“

1.ItishightimethatHerearesomeofthemeasuresthatmightbetaken

immediately.

2.Althoughitisaffectedbymanyfactors,stilltherearecertainwaysthatcan

makethesituationbetter.ThemostimportantisAnotherway

isstillanotherwayis

3.NoeasymethodcanbeathandtosolvetheproblemofButthe

commonrecognitionoftheimportanceofmightbethefirststepon

therightway.

4.Manysolutionsareofferedhere,allofthemmakesomesense,butnonis

adequateenough.Theproblemsshouldbestudiedindepth.

5.However,itiseasiersaidthandone.Practiceisthemostimportantfactor.

Onlywhenyoupayattentiontoitcanyouholditsoonerorlater.

6.Butthisproblemisverycomplicated.Perhapspeoplecanhardlyrelyononly

onewaytosolvetheproblemcompletely.

經(jīng)典句子

1)Therehasbeenadiscussionrecentlyinthenewspaperaboutthe

picture_Simplydesignedasitis,the

symbolicmeaningthepictureconveysisdeepandprofound.Justas

thepictureshows,.

2)Drawingscanbeusefultools;asimplepicturemayrevealaprofound

truth.Theillustrationabove,forinstance,isfarfromcomplicated,

andyetcarriesdeepimplications:.Needlesstosay,

3)Withtheremarkabledevelopmentineconomyinourcountry,itis

obviousthatourlivingstandardshavebeengreatlyimproved.However,

toourgreatsurprise,theeconomicdevelopmentatthesametimeleads

tosevereenvironmentalpollution.Therefore,wearepossiblyheading

foravarietyofenvironmentaldisastersthoughitisnotourdesire

todoso.

4)Withthereformandopening-uppolicyinourcountry,peopleall

overthecountryarebecomingbetterandbetteroff.However,the

opening-uppolicyatsametimecontributestothefactthatmany

talents/technologistsandscientistsaregoingabroadfortheir

furtherdevelopment.Asamatteroffact,thebraindrainmeansagreat

lossofhumanresourcestoourcountryaswellastothedevelopment

oftheourcountry.

5)TakethefirstPresidentGeorgeWashingtonforexample.Itis

honestythathelpshimtowinhisfather'strust.Anothercasein

pointisthecriminalswhohavejustbeenarrestedbythepolice.It

theytellthetruth,theywillbemorelikelytostayinprisonfor

feweryearsthantheydeserve.Otherwise,theywillbepunishedmore

severelybylaw.

6)Sincethesocialproblemisquitetroublesome,weshouldtake

effectivestepstochangethecurrentsituation.Foronething,it

ishightimethatthepeoplealloverthecountryrealizedthe

seriousnessoftheproblem.Foranother,thegovernmentshouldissue

strictlawsandregulationssoastoputtheproblemundercontrol.

Onlywhenthegovernmentandthecitizensjointheirhandsinthe

effortscanwehopetosolvetheproblemsatisfactorily.

7)Allthathasbeendiscussedabovepointsoutanindisputablefact

that.Inotherwords,weshould,withoutanydoubt,

.However,isnottobetestifiedbythe

tongue;insteaditismanifestedinaction.Inotherwords,weshould

nothesitateamomenttotakeactionsinourdailylife.

8).Throughtheanalysisabove,itisobviousthatthepositiveaspects

faroutweighitsnegativeaspects.Whatevereffectsithas,onething

iscertain:thethingitselfisneithergoodnorbad.Itistheusage

towhichitisputthatdeterminesitsvaluetooursociety.

9)Tosolvetheproblem,boththegovernmentandsociety,Ithink,

shouldmakeasustainedeffort.Inotherwords,ifthegovernmentand

thesocietyworkhardtochangethecurrentsituation,thereiscertain

tobeanencouragingprospectinthefuture.Otherwise,theprospect

willberatherdepressingindeed.

10)Suchchangeshavehadapositiveimpactonindividualsaswell

asonthesociety.Ontheonehand,theyarefairlybeneficialtothe

rapiddevelopmentofourcountry.Ontheotherhand,theycontribute

favorablytotheimprovementofpeople'slivingstandards.

11)Itgoeswithoutsayingthattoday'sremarkabledevelopmentin

ourcountrycallsfor/appealstothechangeofthecurrentsituations

becauseproblemslikethesenotonlygreatlydisappointthepeople

butalsohamperthefuturedevelopmentofourcountry

批判危害性的框其

總共寫十七個句子.

第一段四個句子,第一句宏觀描述圖畫，并談圖畫看似可笑但發(fā)人深思.

第二句寫出圖畫最強烈的視覺效果,第三句是主題句,談用二十個單詞的

爆發(fā)力句型談該現(xiàn)象對個人的發(fā)展和進步有破壞性,并引發(fā)思考,第四句

是用貶義詞批判這個現(xiàn)象是強烈的指責.

第二段七個句子,首先第一句從宏觀上談這種現(xiàn)象的總的有兩到三個點

危害或者原因，第二句談這個現(xiàn)象的第一個危害，用“notonly,but

also"的五星級句子，通常是談對個人身心健康的危害性，第三個句子

談第二個危害，通常是用一個豪華級的比較級的句子,讓老師耳目一新,

通常是談這個現(xiàn)象對社會的危害.第四個句子談對家庭或學校的危害.第

五個句子談一個代替“forexample”的十五個單詞的好句子，意思是說

沒有更好的例子來證明正如下文.第六個句子是例子群體的出現(xiàn),談根據(jù)

一項調(diào)查表明,80%以上的人只要從事經(jīng)歷過這個消極的現(xiàn)象一定會對個

人在精神和生活上有危害.最后一句話是預測趨勢的二十五個單詞的鉆

石級的句子,談以下預測趨勢,表明這種現(xiàn)象再這樣下去,就會導致惡劣

的結果出現(xiàn),甚至是毀滅性的后果.

第三段六個句子，第一個句子是下個結論,談解決問題的必要性.第二個

句子是第一個建議談的是加強立法懲治這個現(xiàn)象，第三個句子談提高人

們的覺悟關于著這個現(xiàn)象能提高人們對這個現(xiàn)象的覺悟.第四個句子談

個諺語,談一下實踐我的建議的重要性.五個句子談解決的任重道遠.第

六個句子是解決問題之后的美好的未來.

批判危害性的框架(適用大學生的心里問題).|

第一段

(1)Generallyspeaking,theillustrationaboveisfarfrom

complicatedandthemostunforgettablefeaturethatarisesin

myeyesisthat,which

seemstobecommonaroundusbutquitedisastrous.

(2)Unbelievably,thissillybutcompellingpicturedrawsattentionto

thefactthat____________________________________________________________

(3)Thereisnodenyingthatrecentfewyearshaswitnessedadeteriorating

phenomenonof(A)whichhasinducedheightenedconcernsandshouldcall

forimmediatesolutions

(4)Undoubtedly,theproblemofAasthefocusofpublicconcernmainly

resultsfromitsharmfulinfluenceonourindividual,familialandsocial

development.

第二段

(1)Asfortheissueof卜__itiscommontohearonTVandradiothatso

manycountrieslistitastheirprimaryapprehensionsinmaintainingthe

nationalsurvivalandharmoniousdevelopment.

(2)Tobeginwith,Ainourschoolsandpublicplacescannolonger

beignored.Overtheseyears,thepeople'slivingstandardshavegreatly

improved,butthedevelopmentofourcivilizationseemstofallfarbehind.

Nomatterwhereyouliveandwork,BandCareeasilyspotted.

(3)Inaddition,nothingisasdestructivetoourphysicalandmental

healthandevenourmoralvaluesasA.

BandCarethecasesinpoint,whicharedefinitelyconvincingtomake

usgainabetterinsightaboutwhathashappened.

(4)What'smore,Ainourlifeshouldberegardedassocial

malignanttumorandthegrimstatuscontradictswithoureffortstobuild

upaharmonioussociety.

(5)Nobetterillustrationofthisideacanbethoughtthanthecases

mentionedbelow.

(6)AccordingtoasurveymadebyDaily,83%ofyoungpeoplewhohave

everexperiencedthesituationofAwillseverelyaccusethe

phenomenonandcallforimmediatesolutions

(7)Ifwecannottakeusefulmeans,wemaynotcontrolthistrend,andsome

undesirableresultsmaycomeoutunexpectedly,wewillseethegloomy

futureof_____________

第三段

(1)NoeasymethodcanbeathandtosolvetheproblemofA.Butthecommon

recognitionoftheimportanceofeliminatingAmightbethefirststep

ontherightway.

(2)Ontheonehand,itisurgentforustostrengthentheenforcement

oflawsandregulationsandsocialsupervisionstosavesboutoftheevil

handsofA.

(3)Ontheotherhand,apublicizingeducationalcampaignshouldbe

carriedouttoenhancepeople'sawarenessabouttheharmfulnessofA.

(4)However,itiseasiersaidthandone.

(5)Althoughthefightagainstitisalong-standingandtremendoustask,

oureffortswilleventuallypayoffifwetakeactionswithourhandsand

brain.

預測范文一

第一副圖一個學生在瘋狂的做作業(yè),頭上冒汗,匆忙做完一些題，又馬上做另外

一些，面色憔悴

一第二副也描述了這個學生在考試那天居然在住院，而且身心憔悴，并聲稱不想

再上學

第一段

(1)Generallyspeaking,theillustrationaboveisfarfrom

complicatedandthemostunforgettablefeaturethatarisesin

myeyesisthat,which

seemstobecommonaroundusbutquitedisastrous.

(2)Unbelievably,thissillybutcompellingpicturedrawsattentionto

thefactthat____________________________________________________________

(3)Thereisnodenyingthatrecentfewyearshaswitnessedadeteriorating

phenomenonof(excessiveburdens)whichhasinducedheightenedconcerns

andshouldcallforimmediatesolutions

(4)Undoubtedly,theproblemofstressfulassignemntsasthefocusof

publicconcernmainlyresultsfromitsharmfulinfluenceonourindividual,

familialandsocialdevelopment.

第二段

(1)AsfortheissueofoverburdensitiscommontohearonTVandradio

thatsomanycountrieslistitastheirprimaryapprehensionsin

maintainingthenationalsurvivalandharmoniousdevelopment.

(2)Tobeginwith,stressfulworkinourschoolsandpublicplacescan

nolongerbeignored.Overtheseyears,thepeople'slivingstandards

havegreatlyimproved,butthedevelopmentofourcivilizationseemsto

fallfarbehind.Nomatterwhereyouliveandwork,becomingwornout

anddevelopinganxietydisordersareeasilyspotted.

(3)Inaddition,nothingisasdestructivetoourphysicalandmental

healthandevenourmoralvaluesastoomuchpressure.

BandCarethecasesinpoint,whicharedefinitelyconvincingtomake

usgainabetterinsightaboutwhathashappened.

(4)What'smore,toomanyburdensinourlifeshouldberegardedas

socialmalignanttumorandthegrimstatuscontradictswithourefforts

tobuildupaharmonioussociety.

(5)Nobetterillustrationofthisideacanbethoughtthanthecases

mentionedbelow.

(6)AccordingtoasurveymadebyChinaDaily,83%ofyoungpeoplewho

haveeverexperiencedthesituationofexceedingworkwillseverely

accusethephenomenonandcallforimmediatesolutions

(7)Ifwecannottakeusefulmeans,wemaynotcontrolthistrend,andsome

undesirableresultsmaycomeoutunexpectedly,wewillseethegloomy

futureofourcitizens.

第三段

(1)NoeasymethodcanbeathandtosolvetheproblemofA.Butthecommon

recognitionoftheimportanceofeliminatingAmightbethefirststep

ontherightway.

(2)Ontheonehand,itisurgentforustostrengthentheenforcement

oflawsandregulationsandsocialsupervisionstosavesboutoftheevil

handsofA.

(3)Ontheother