南京英語(yǔ)中考復(fù)習(xí)-寫作文指導(dǎo)

WritingHowtowritegoodcompositions?1.認(rèn)真審題2.列出提綱3.連詞成句4.連句成文5.細(xì)心檢查

agoodcomposition審時(shí)態(tài)人稱體裁內(nèi)容字?jǐn)?shù)自從實(shí)施規(guī)范辦學(xué)后，中學(xué)生有了更多自主支配的時(shí)間，但有些同學(xué)不知如何利用好這些時(shí)間，針對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象，你校廣播室“校園英語(yǔ)之聲”欄目就“如何更好地利用課余時(shí)間”進(jìn)行征文。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給該欄目寫一篇廣播稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：

不良現(xiàn)象和行為（至少3點(diǎn)）1.花太多時(shí)間在興趣愛好上2.迷戀網(wǎng)吧，上網(wǎng)打游戲3.……

看法我認(rèn)為……

建議（至少3條）合理安排時(shí)間參加興趣小組

……注意:100詞左右，廣播的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)體裁人稱內(nèi)容時(shí)態(tài)字?jǐn)?shù)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主Introduction

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Conclusion不良現(xiàn)象同行為看法建議Writeanoutline花太多時(shí)間在興趣愛好上迷戀網(wǎng)吧，打電腦游戲

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------已給出總結(jié)全文，再次點(diǎn)題列關(guān)鍵詞Problemsspendtoomuchtimeontheirhobbies,

becrazyabout,playcomputergames,watchtoomuchTV,

refusetodohomework,…列關(guān)鍵詞Opinionsnotgoodforourhealthandstudy,paymoreattentionto

…列關(guān)鍵詞Suggestionsplantimecarefully,

joininterestgroups,

achieveabalancebetweenstudyandbobbies,

takepartindifferentafter-schoolactivities,

dosomesports,dosomehousework…列關(guān)鍵詞ConclusionLet’s…,Ihope…并列句復(fù)合句結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句Somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeontheirhobbies.Theycan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontime.Somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeontheirhobbiesandtheycan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontimeSomestudentsspendsomuchtimeontheirhobbiesthattheycan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontimeHowtomakebettersentences?變換句式連詞成句連句成文Therearemanythingswecando.wecanplanourtimecarefullyandtryourbesttoachieveabalancebetweenourstudyandhobbies.cansetupandjoindifferentkindsofinterestgroups,takepartinsomegoodsocialactivities.wecandosomesports.Ifwehavetime,weshouldhelpparentsdosomehousework.However,howcanwemakebetteruseofoursparetime?ForexampleBesidesthese,AndalsoweWe添加連詞或句子！suggestionsHowdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,

alotofpeopletravel.

And

somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.

Also

some

otherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.

However,

afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.方法一：善用連詞連接句子，使文章更流暢。1、表轉(zhuǎn)折的連詞:but,although,however…2、表因果的連詞:

because,so…,sothat,asaresult

3、表順序的連詞:

atfirst,tobeginwith,then,later,atlast…

三類連詞:Let’stry1._____________Iamtired,Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight.2.Hedidn’tgotomovies,hewenttotheconcert______.3.Welikedoingkindsofsports_____swimming,runningandhiking.4._____,hestoodup.Thenhegotout._____,hewentback.____________,hesmiled.Though\Althoughinstead

suchasFirstNextFinally\AtlastA.Alotofpeopletravel.B.Mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.A.SomepeoplevisittheirfriendsandparentsB.Tovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

方法二:善用詞匯甚至善用高級(jí)詞匯Somepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.方法三：妙用引文和例子，多用于“正文”,有時(shí)用forexample/suchasWeinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

However,

afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.Readloudly（theending）Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.

只會(huì)用功不玩耍，聰明孩子也變傻Proverb（諺語(yǔ)）加入英語(yǔ)俱樂部是學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的好方法JoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”SojoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.方法四：加諺語(yǔ)，可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。Enjoysomeproverbs1.Practicemakesperfect.2.Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.4.DoastheRomansdo.5.Theearlybirdcatchestheworm.6.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.

三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入鄉(xiāng)隨俗。早起的鳥兒有蟲吃。失敗是成功之母。

中考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)1.短語(yǔ)及句子結(jié)構(gòu)不對(duì)，人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)誤用，均為大錯(cuò)。一處大錯(cuò)扣1分。

2.通篇人稱錯(cuò)誤，統(tǒng)扣2分。

3.拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、冠詞、介詞等方面的錯(cuò)誤為小錯(cuò)。3個(gè)小錯(cuò)相當(dāng)于1個(gè)大錯(cuò)。

4.相同錯(cuò)誤，只扣一次。字?jǐn)?shù)過(guò)多或過(guò)少詞扣2分。

5.文中若出現(xiàn)自己及老師、學(xué)校等真實(shí)姓名扣2分。

6.書寫潦草，卷面不清，扣2分。第五檔（13～15分）：能寫明全部要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言基本無(wú)誤或有少量拼寫錯(cuò)誤，行文流暢，表達(dá)清楚。第四檔（10～12分）：能寫明大部份要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言有一些錯(cuò)誤（句子結(jié)構(gòu)或動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤1～2處),但行文基本流暢，表達(dá)基本清楚。第三檔（7～9分）：能寫明一些要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較多（句子結(jié)構(gòu)或動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤3～4處）但意思基本連貫，表達(dá)基本清楚。第二檔（4～6分）：能寫明少數(shù)要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤多，意思不連貫，影響意思表達(dá)。第一檔（1～3分）：只能寫出若干單詞，無(wú)可讀的句子。二、評(píng)分檔次：一、評(píng)分原則：細(xì)心檢查Now,wehavemuchfreetimethanbefore.Butmanystudentsdon’tknowhowshouldtheyspendthetime.Theyspendsomuchtimetoplaythattheycan’tfinishhomeworkontime.AlsosomeofthemwatchtoomanyTV,Somearecrazyaboutplaycomputergames.Idon’tthinkit’sgoodfortheirstudyandhealth.However,howcanwemakebetteruseofoursparetime?First,wecanplanourtimecarefulandtrytoachieveabalancebetweenourstudyandhobbies.Second,wecantakepartininterestgroups.Besidesthese,weshouldhelpparentsdosomehouseworks.Let’smakebetteruseofourfreetimeandmakeourlifecolorful!moretheyshouldplayingmuchplayingcarefullyjoinhousework4大錯(cuò)，4小錯(cuò)。-5分4.CheckingSpelling(拼寫)Tense(時(shí)態(tài))Grammar(語(yǔ)法)Handwriting(書寫)Punctuationmarks(標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào))通覽全文仔細(xì)檢查Correctmistakes1.Everyoneknowsthathealthisveryimportantforourself.2.Ourstudyisgettingmoreandmorehard.3.Theythinktravellingthatcanmakepeoplefeelrelaxedandhappy.4.Ithinkitisunhealthybecausepeopledon’thaveenoughtimetorelaxedthemselves.5.Todaymanypeoplearesufferfromstress6.Andthereareafewpeoplestillworkontheholiday.7.Peoplecanhaveagoodrestwillbehealth.

.ourselvesharderandharderthattravellingrelaxsufferworkingwhohealthyr15分FromSusan11分卷面整潔不一定加分，卷面潦草一定要扣分！假如上周一你班舉行了“愛護(hù)水、節(jié)約水”的主題活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)為你校校報(bào)寫一篇活動(dòng)報(bào)道?；顒?dòng)內(nèi)容邀請(qǐng)王老師作報(bào)告；全班討論如何節(jié)水和愛護(hù)水。活動(dòng)收獲我們知道我國(guó)一些地方水源受到污染；我市雖有一些河流和湖泊，但也缺水。所以……(節(jié)水和愛護(hù)水的方法至少各發(fā)揮一點(diǎn))?；顒?dòng)感受……要求：1.詞數(shù)不少于90，文章的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)；

2.要點(diǎn)完整、層次清晰、語(yǔ)法正確、上下文連貫；

3.文中不得使用真實(shí)的人名、校名。Introduction

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Conclusion內(nèi)容收獲Writeanoutline邀請(qǐng)王老師作報(bào)告全班討論如何節(jié)水和愛護(hù)水我國(guó)一些地方水源受到污染我市也缺水節(jié)水和愛護(hù)水的方法舉行主題班會(huì)活動(dòng)感受列關(guān)鍵詞Introductionholdanactivityabout…saveandprotectwater列關(guān)鍵詞Contentinvitesbtodogivesbatalkhaveadiscussionabouthowtosaveandprotectwater列關(guān)鍵詞Achievementsomeoftheriversbepollutedbeshortofasaresultthrowrubbishintodump…into…uselesswater…列關(guān)鍵詞Feeling:takepartintheimportanceofprotecttheenvironment…LastMondayourclassheldanactivity.Wetalkedaboutsavingandprotectingwater.Howtomakebettersentences?變換句式連詞成句LastMonda