對比觀點(diǎn)型作文

對比觀點(diǎn)型作文

議論文

議論文（argumentation）是用來論述某個(gè)道理、闡述某種觀點(diǎn)的一種文體。它通過擺事實(shí)、講道理、辨是非來表達(dá)作者的見解和主張。這種文章或從正面提出某種見解、主張，或是駁斥別人的錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)。議論文應(yīng)該觀點(diǎn)明確、論據(jù)充分、語言精煉、論證合理、邏輯嚴(yán)密。

論點(diǎn)、論據(jù)和論證是議論文的三要素。議論文常用的寫作方法有：歸納法、推理法、對照法、駁論法、例證法等等。議論文人們對于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友持不同意見。請你用英語寫一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的短文，介紹人們的不同觀點(diǎn)，并表達(dá)自己的看法。贊成的理由:1.廣交朋友2.可自由表達(dá)思想3.利于外語學(xué)習(xí)反對的理由:1.浪費(fèi)時(shí)間2.影響學(xué)習(xí)3.可能上當(dāng)受騙你的看法:Lead-in文體：時(shí)態(tài)：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

議論文一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)1．贊同2．不贊同3．我的看法

廣交朋友可自由表達(dá)思想利于外語學(xué)習(xí)浪費(fèi)時(shí)間影響學(xué)習(xí)可能上當(dāng)受騙對比型作文

__________hadadiscussionaboutwhether__________.Opinionsaredividedonthisissue.________ofthestudentsthink_________should________._____.What’smore,_______.

Ontheotherhand,______ofthestudentsthink_______shouldn’t______.What’sworse,______.

Frommypointofview,Shouldstudentsmakefriendsonline?Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Somepeopleholdtheviewthattheinternethelpsmakemanyfriends.Chattingonline,studentscanmorefreelyexpresstheirfeelingsandopinions,andevengethelpwiththeirforeignlanguagestudies.However,otherstakeanoppositeside,firmlybelievingthatmakingfriendsonlineisawasteoftime,whichshouldbespentmoremeaningfullyonstudy.Besides,somestudentsgetcheatedonline.AsfarasIamconcerned,studentsshouldplacetheirstudy,healthandsafetybeforeotherthings.Asforfriendship,wecanreadilyfinditinourclassmatesandotherpeoplearoundus.Therefore,Ithinkthere’snoneedtomakefriendsonline.

topicPros(贊成)Cons(反對)

conclusion

Thestructureofthearticle介紹討論的主題(開頭句)：我們舉行了一場討論，討論內(nèi)容是學(xué)生是否可以……

Wehadadiscussionaboutwhetherstudentsshouldbeallowedto…我們已經(jīng)作了一個(gè)調(diào)查，調(diào)查內(nèi)容是學(xué)生是否可以……

We’vehadasurveyonwhetherstudentsshouldbeallowedto…我寫信是要告訴你我們的一場討論，討論內(nèi)容是否可以……

I’mwritingtotellyouaboutadiscussionwehavehadaboutwhetherstudentsshouldbeallowedto…Howtointroducethetopic總起:

Differentpeopleholddifferentopinions.Opinionsaredividedonthisproblem.Peoplehavetakendifferentattitudestowards…Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem.Peopletakedifferentviewsonthisproblem.

Howtobeginwith介紹正方觀點(diǎn)：…ofthestudentsarefortheidea,firmlybelievingthat…

…ofthestudentsthinkitnecessaryto…Somepeoplethink/believethat…Theyareoftheopinionthat…Pros進(jìn)一步介紹反方觀點(diǎn)What’sworse,/Evenworse,/Worsestill,/Tomakemattersworse…Inaddition,…Apartfromthat,…Tobeginwith…,Besides/Apartfromthat/What’smore/Inaddition/Furthermore/Moreover…/What’sworse/Evenworse/Worsestill/Tomakemattersworse…/Asaresult/Therefore…并列關(guān)系：and,aswellas,also…遞進(jìn)關(guān)系：besides,inaddition,moreover,what’smore…比較、對比：like,unlike,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand…過渡句However,…ofthemholdadifferentview./…ofthemholdtheoppositeopinion.Peoplewhoareagainstitdon’tthinkso.However,eachcoinhastwosides.

Transitionsentence介紹反方觀點(diǎn)However,…ofthestudentsthinkthat…Ontheotherhand,…ofthestudentsbelievethat…But…ofthestudentsarguethat…Cons

總結(jié)（你的觀點(diǎn)）AsfarasIamconcerned,Frommypointofview,Butforme,Personally,Itismyopinionthat…Inmyopinion,Conclusion

時(shí)下，很多學(xué)生帶手機(jī)上學(xué)。為此，某英語報(bào)在你校組織了一場討論。討論的主題：中學(xué)生是否有必要帶手機(jī)去學(xué)校。下表提供的信息供參考，給報(bào)社寫一封信，介紹討論情況并發(fā)表自己的意見。大多數(shù)同學(xué)認(rèn)為：可方便與家長、同學(xué)聯(lián)系；是一種時(shí)尚。 大多數(shù)老師認(rèn)為：中學(xué)生年齡尚小，還不能自控；用手機(jī)玩游戲，發(fā)短信浪費(fèi)時(shí)間；容易引起攀比。你的觀點(diǎn)： 注意：1．信的開頭已為你寫好。2．詞數(shù)：100左右。3．參考詞匯：攀比：viewith…在校園內(nèi)：onthecampusDeareditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussion…Writing

仔細(xì)審題（4確定）

（1）style(體裁)

__________________（2）content__________________________

______________________________________________（3）中心人稱Person

__________________（4）主體時(shí)態(tài)Tense

__________________

aletterthethirdpersonthesimplepresentwhetheritisnecessaryfor

middle

schoolstudentstocarrymobilephonestoschool內(nèi)容

2.提煉要點(diǎn)，確定重點(diǎn)詞匯要點(diǎn)：正反觀點(diǎn)+我的觀點(diǎn)Point1:可方便與家長、同學(xué)聯(lián)系Point2:是一種時(shí)尚Point3:中學(xué)生年齡尚小，還不能自控Point4:用手機(jī)玩游戲，發(fā)短信浪費(fèi)時(shí)間Ponit5:容易引起攀比Mypointofview:

convenient,keepintouchwith

fashioncontrolthemselvesawasteoftime,playgames,sendmessagesviewitheachother3.連詞成句1.可方便與家長、同學(xué)聯(lián)系2.是一種時(shí)尚

Itisconvenientforthemtokeepintouchwiththeirparentsandclassmates.It’safashion.3.中學(xué)生年齡尚小，還不能自控4.用手機(jī)玩游戲，發(fā)短信浪費(fèi)時(shí)間5.容易引起攀比Middleschoolstudentsarenotoldenough.Theycan’tcontrolthemselves.Studentsplaygamesandsendmessagestoeachotherbymobilephone.It’sawasteoftime.It’seasytocausethestudentstoviewitheachother.按要點(diǎn)間的內(nèi)在關(guān)系組織文章,使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞。1．表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系

but/yet/whereashoweverotherwiseinspiteof/despiteinstead(of)ratherthan（2）巧妙使用連接詞2．表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系

aswellasinaddition(to)besidesmoreoverwhat’smore

Thankyou!Deareditor，I'mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe'vehadaboutwhetheritisnecessaryformiddleschoolstudentstocarrymobilephonestoschool.Themajorityofthestudentsthinkthatitismoreconvenientforthemtokeepintouchwiththeirparentsandclassmatesiftheyhaveamobilephone.Andwhat'smore,it'safashion.However,mostteachersthinkthatmiddleschoolstudentsarenotoldenoughtocontrolthemselves.Itisawasteoftimeforstudentstoplaygamesandsendmessagestoeachotherbymobilephone.Andit'seasytocausethestudentstoviewitheachother.Inmyopinion,followingthefashionisunderstandable.Butasmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldputallourheartintoourstudies.A.對比觀點(diǎn)題型

I.要求論述兩個(gè)對立的觀點(diǎn)并給出自己的看法。1．有一些人認(rèn)為…2．另一些人認(rèn)為…3．我的看法…Thetopicof①-----------------（主題）isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsofit.SomepeoplesayAistheirfavorite.Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof②-----------------（支持A的理由一）Whatismor