【縣公開課課件】短文改錯(cuò)

HowtodoProof-readingEnjoythesongandfindoutfivedifferencesinthepassagefromthesong.SunshineInTheRainByBwoWhenI’minBerlinyou’reofftoLondonWhenI’mNewYorkyou’redoingRomeAllthosecrazynightwespendtogetherAsvoicesonthephoneTireofthenightsIsleepaloneWishingwecouldredirectthetrafficAndwefindusahomeCanyoufelttheraindropsinthedesertHaveyouseenthesunraysinthedarkDoyoufeelmylovewhenI’mnotpresentStandbyyoursidewhilemilesapartSunshineintherainLoveisstillthesame.^inTiredfeelourselvesnightsHowtodoProof-reading近三年高考考點(diǎn)設(shè)置

2016年全國I卷（93詞）2017年全國I卷（105詞）2018年全國I卷（113詞）形容詞和副詞133動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)和與主謂一致）322代詞1

1名詞111數(shù)詞1冠詞111介詞111連詞2116做題要求假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。高考考察方式MissingwordsUnnecessarywordswhereAcavetherewereover200paintingswasdiscoveringinAustraliaeightsyearsago.Topeople’ssurprise,thecavewasfoundbythechance.ΛdiscoveredWrongwords高考考察方式2016年全國I卷（93詞）2017年全國I卷（105詞）2018年全國I卷（113詞）多詞刪去111少詞添上111錯(cuò)詞改正88

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What’sthemaintroublewhencorrectingacomposition?

Howdoyoudoproof-reading?Stepsofcorrectingacomposition:1.Gothroughthewholepassagetogetageneralidea.(瀏覽全文，掌握大意）2.Readthepassagesentencebysentenceandfindthemistakes.（分句閱讀，逐行找錯(cuò)）3.Readthepassageforthethirdtime,checktheanswersandcorrectthedifficultones.（檢查核對(duì)，攻克難點(diǎn)）篇句詞篇?jiǎng)釉~形，名詞數(shù)還要注意形和副非謂語，細(xì)辨別代詞格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟

ALimerick介詞短語要記住冠詞連詞常光顧句子成分多分析邏輯錯(cuò)誤理清楚1.WhenIlookatthispictureofmyself,Irealizehowfasttimeflies.Ihadgrownnotonlyphysically,butalsomentallyinthepastfewyears.

Tenseconsistencyhave動(dòng)詞形：1,如果某個(gè)謂語動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)與上下文的時(shí)態(tài)不一致時(shí)，極有可能是錯(cuò)誤之處。hasTheagreementofthesubjectandthepredicate2.Theearlymorningbarkinghavebeendisturbingusasweareoftenupallnightwiththebaby.2.并列謂語、主謂一致logicmeaning1.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesandhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.used2.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriousproblem.SuitableVoice動(dòng)詞形：語態(tài)(activevoice,passivevoice)總結(jié)：在對(duì)謂語動(dòng)詞的正確使用排查中，應(yīng)做到:①排查主動(dòng)與被動(dòng)的誤用，如，bedoing與bedone，havedone與havebeendone,②應(yīng)從句子的邏輯意思判斷是否缺了被動(dòng)語態(tài)的助動(dòng)詞be(is/am/are/was/were/been。01020304謂語動(dòng)詞的考查時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)并列謂語主謂一致延遲符謂語動(dòng)詞的考查總結(jié)(AboutthePredicateVerbs)

還要注意形和副詞：注意形容詞和副詞在句子中的作用和具體用法。這也是高考短文改錯(cuò)常考點(diǎn)。

1.Ifelthappilythattheirlifehadimproved.(2018全國卷I)2.Immediate,Iraisedmyhand.(2018全國卷III)解題策略：１修飾名詞，be動(dòng)詞，系動(dòng)詞要用形容詞２修飾動(dòng)詞，形容詞，整個(gè)句子用副詞３比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)的使用Immediatelyhappy3.Theywerealsothebestandworseyearsinmylife.(2017全國卷I)worstcoordinatingconjunction非謂語，細(xì)辨別

1.Remindingtosortoutthebooks,theboysetouttowork.2.Teachachildtosinganddanceisveryinteresting.3.IshowedthemIwasindependentbywearstrangeclothes.

RemindedTeachingwearing作主語或表語常用動(dòng)名詞1234考查邏輯主語與非謂語的主被動(dòng)關(guān)系考查非謂語的固定搭配考查介詞+動(dòng)名詞，或感情類動(dòng)詞分詞形容詞化-ed與-ing的形式區(qū)別延遲符非謂語的考查非謂語，細(xì)辨別句子成分多分析1.MyparentslovemeandwilldoalltheycanmakesureIamhappy.

2.Soifyouwanttoliveahappylife,learningtomanageyourtime.3..ItisoneofthefunniestthingsfindingontheInternetthisyear.

ΛfoundtheycanattributetolearnAclauseisonlyacomponent,soitneedsasentence

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邏輯錯(cuò)誤須關(guān)注:與句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，屬于邏輯性錯(cuò)誤。

2.Unluckily,hewastheonlyonewhofinallygotthewell-paidjob.Luckily1.Ifwestayathome,itiscomfortablebutthereisnoneedtospendmoney.and

Nowlet’sputwhatwehavelearnedintopractice.(2018福建高三畢業(yè)班質(zhì)檢)MaoZhaomudropoutofhighschoolseveralyearsago.Nowtheself-taughtEnglishlearnerhasbeenadmittedtooneofChina’stopforeignlanguageuniversity,SichuanInternationalStudiesUniversity,thatheusedtodeliverfoodtostudents.Maoonceworkedadeliverymanforarestaurant.AndhechattedhappywithEnglishlearnersonlineduringhersparetime.Thereweremuchgrammaticalmistakes,butthatdidn’tpreventhimfromchatting.ToseizeeverychancetostudyEnglish,hewouldmemorizewordswhilewaitforcustomers.Maosaidthathowhehopedverymuchtobecomeaninterpreter.Whoeverhaveadreamanddarestoseekitistheloveliestperson.Step1.瀏覽文章時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)Mainidea

Thepassagemainlytellsus

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SichuanInternationalStudiesUniversity.Step2.入手句子SentencebysentenceS1MaoZhaomudropoutofhighschoolseveralyearsago.S2

Nowtheself-taughtEnglishlearnerhasbeenadmittedtooneofChina’stopforeignlanguageuniversity,SichuanInternationalStudiesUniversity,thatheusedtodeliverfoodtostudents.

動(dòng)詞形句子成分多分析droppeduniversitieswhere名詞數(shù)S3.Maoonceworkedadeliverymanforarestaurant.S4.AndhechattedhappywithEnglishlearnersonlineduringhersparetime.S5Thereweremuchgrammaticalmistakes,butthatdidn’tpreventhimfromchatting.還要注意形和副happilyhisΛ介詞短語要記住

as代詞格細(xì)領(lǐng)悟manyS6.ToseizeeverychancetostudyEnglish,hewouldmemorizewordswhilewaitforcustomers.S7.Maosaidthathowhehopedverymuchtobecomeaninterpreter.S8Whoeverhaveadreamanddarestoseekitistheloveliestperson.動(dòng)詞形句子成分多分析非謂語細(xì)辨別waitinghasStep3.檢查核對(duì)行文是否流暢，合乎邏輯；

錯(cuò)誤類型及數(shù)量是否合適.

Fourpointsthatyoushouldpayattentionto1.改動(dòng)以最少為原則；

2.虛詞以添加或刪除為原則；

3.實(shí)詞以改變?cè)~形為原則；

4.以保持句子原意為原則。Don'tforget!虛詞：冠詞、介詞、連詞、嘆詞實(shí)詞：動(dòng)詞、名詞、形容詞、副詞、代詞、數(shù)詞passage2WhenIwasaveryyoungchildren,myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIrememberwellyearslate.Everytimehearrivedhomeatendoftheday,we’dgreetheratthedoor.Hewouldaskwhowewasandpretendnottoknowingus.Thenheandmymotherwouldhavehadadrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandtheywouldtalkabouthisdayandhers.Whiletheychat,myfatherwouldliftmysisterandmeuptositinthetopofthefridge.Itwasbothexcitedandfrighteningtobeupthere!MysisterandIthoughthewassocoolforputtingusthere.passage2WhenIwasaveryyoungchildren,myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIrememberwellyearslate.Everytimehearrivedhomeatendoftheday,we’dgreetheratthedoor.Hewouldaskwhowewasandpretendnottoknowingus.Λhimchildlaterknowwerethepassage2Thenheandmymotherwouldhavehadadrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandtheywouldtalkabouthisdayandhers.Whiletheychat,myfatherwouldliftmysisterandmeuptositinthetopofthefridge.Itwasbothexcitedandfrighteningtobeupthere!MysisterandIthoughthewassocoolforputtingusthere.chattedo