高考英語讀后續(xù)寫素材積累-《追風(fēng)箏的人》講義

高考讀后續(xù)寫素材積累---《追風(fēng)箏的人》Hassan'sfacebrightened."Good,"hesaid.Heliftedourkite,redwithyellowborders,and,justbeneathwherethecentralandcrosssparsmet,markedwithSaifo'sunmistakablesignature.Helickedhisfingerandhelditup,

testedthewind,thenraninitsdirection—onthoserareoccasionsweflewkitesinthesummer,he'dkickupdusttoseewhichwaythewindblewit.ThespoolrolledinmyhandsuntilHassanstopped,aboutfiftyfeetaway.Heheldthekitehighoverhishead,likeanOlympicathleteshowinghisgoldmedal.Ijerkedthestringtwice,ourusualsignal,andHassantossedthekite.

CaughtbetweenBabaandthemullahsatschool,Istillhadn'tmadeupmymindaboutGod.ButwhenaKoranayatIhadlearnedinmydiniyatclassrosetomylips,Imutteredit.Itookadeepbreath,exhaled,andpulledonthe

string.Withinaminute,mykitewasrocketingtothesky.Itmadeasoundlikeapaperbirdflappingitswings.Hassanclappedhishands,whistled,andranbacktome.Ihandedhimthespool,holdingontothestring,andhespunitquicklytorolltheloosestringbackon.

Atleasttwodozenkitesalreadyhunginthesky,likepapersharksroamingforprey.Withinanhour,thenumberdoubled,andred,blue,andyellowkitesglidedandspuninthesky.Acoldbreezewaftedthroughmyhair.Thewindwasperfectforkiteflying,blowingjusthardenoughtogivesomelift,

makethesweepseasier.Nexttome,Hassanheldthespool,hishandsalreadybloodiedbythestring.

Soon,thecuttingstartedandthefirstofthedefeatedkiteswhirledoutofcontrol.Theyfellfromtheskylikeshootingstarswithbrilliant,ripplingtails,showeringtheneighborhoodsbelowwithprizesforthekiterunners.Icouldheartherunnersnow,holleringastheyranthestreets.Someoneshoutedreportsofafightbreakingouttwostreetsdown.

IkeptstealingglancesatBabasittingwithRahimKhanontheroof,wonderedwhathewasthinking.Washecheeringforme?Ordidapartof

himEnjoywatchingmefail?Thatwasthethingaboutkiteflying:Yourminddriftedwiththekite.

Theywerecomingdownallovertheplacenow,Thekites,andIwasstillflying.Iwasstillflying.MyeyeskeptwanderingovertoBaba,bundledupinhiswoolsweater.WashesurprisedIhadlastedaslongasIhad?Youdon'tkeepyoureyestothesky,youwon'tlastmuchlonger.Isnappedmygazebacktothesky.Aredkitewasclosinginonme--I'dcaughtitjustintime.Itangledabitwithit,endedupbestinghimwhenhebecameimpatientandtriedtocutmefrombelow.(478words)

設(shè)計(jì)問題1.Inthefirsttwoparagraphs,howdidtheyflykites?(設(shè)計(jì)意圖：前面兩段出現(xiàn)了大量的放風(fēng)箏的動作描寫，很生動很形象，設(shè)計(jì)這個題目能讓學(xué)生去找去品味那些豐富的動作細(xì)節(jié)描寫，感受語言的美）2.Whydidtheauthorkeep

glancingatBaba?（挖掘作者動作背后的含義，他的動作是他的心理活動的體現(xiàn)，也是他性格的體現(xiàn)。讓學(xué)生根據(jù)表層的文字的閱讀學(xué)會剖析人物性格，養(yǎng)成批判性思維能力）參考答案1.Theyflewkitesverywell.Hassan:lickedhisfinger;helditup,testedthewind,

raninitsdirectionheldthekitehighoverhishead.,tossedthekite.spunitquicklytorolltheloosestringbackon....I:jerkedthestringtwice,ourusualsignal,andHassantossedthekite....tookadeepbreath,exhaled,andpulledonthestring....clappedhishands,whistled,.ranbacktome;handedhimthespool,holdingontothestring...2.Hewonderedwhetherhisfatherwassatisfiedwithhisperformance.Hewasnotaconfidentboy,buthewaseagerforhisfather’sacceptance.細(xì)節(jié)分類：11句動作描寫1.Wehoppedthefencethatsurroundedthebarracks,skippedoveralittlecreek,andbrokeintotheopendirtfieldwhereold,abandonedtankscollecteddust.（動作）Agroupofsoldiershuddledintheshadeofoneofthosetanks,smokingcigarettesandplayingcards.2.Iwaswalkingbehindhim,humming,tryingtoimitatehiswalk.Iwatchedhimswinghisscraggyleginasweepingarc,watchedhiswholebodytiltimpossiblytotherighteverytimeheplantedthatfoot.3.Atparties,whenallsix-foot-fiveofhimthunderedintotheroom,attentionshiftedtohimlikesunflowersturningtothesun.4.Icriedallthewaybackhome.IrememberhowBaba'shandsclenchedaroundthesteeringwheel.Clenchedandunclenched.Mostly,IwillneverforgetBaba'svaliant（勇敢的）effortstoconcealthedisgustedlookonhisfaceashedroveinsilence.5.Ipressedmyeartothecloseddoor.6.Herosetohisfeetandwalkedafewpacestohisleft.7BecauseHassanstoodwithhisarmswideopen,smiling,waitingforthekite.

8.Helickedhisfingerandhelditup,testedthewind,thenraninitsdirection-onthoserareoccasionsweflewkitesinthesummer,he'dkickupdusttoseewhichwaythewindblewit.（神態(tài)、動作細(xì)節(jié)描寫）9.Ihandedhimthespool,holdingontothestring,andhespunitquicklytorolltheloosestringbackon.10.Heeyedmeupanddown.11.KarimcollapsedonthefloorandrolledaroundfightingforairwhenBabafinallyletgo.細(xì)節(jié)分類：5句外貌描寫1.Hewasasquatlymanwithashavedheadandblackstubbleonhisface.2.Nowhewaswalkingtowardus,handsonhiships,hissneakerskickinguplittlepuffsofdust.3.Hewasdressedinacottonshirtandblueslacks,aredsilktieandshinyblackloafers.Hesmelledofcologneandhisblondhairwasneatlycombedback.4.Hewassotallnow--Istoodonmytoesandstilljustcameuptohischin.TheBamiyansunhadtoughenedhisskin,andturneditseveralshadesdarkerthanIremembered,andhehadlostafewofhisfrontteeth.Thereweresparsestrandsofhaironhischin.Otherthanthat,hehadthosesamenarrowgreeneyes,thatscaronhisupperlip,thatroundface,thataffablesmile.5.Shewasdressedinanolivegreendresswithablackshawlwrappedtightlyaroundherfaceagainstthenightchill.細(xì)節(jié)分類：1語言描寫"You!TheHazara!LookatmewhenI'mtalkingtoyou!?“thesoldierbarked.（語言）Hehandedhiscigarettetotheguynexttohim,madeacirclewiththethumbandindexfingerofonehand.（體現(xiàn)人物當(dāng)時的態(tài)度）細(xì)節(jié)分類：10句場景描寫1.Heturnedbacktothemicrophoneandsaidhehopedthebuildingwassturdierthanhishat,andeveryonelaughedagain.WhenBabaendedhisspeech,peoplestoodupandcheered.Theyclappedforalongtime.Afterward,peopleshookhishand.Someofthemtousledmyhairandshookmyhandtoo.IwassoproudofBaba,ofus.（從他人反應(yīng)的角度描述主角：他爸爸的演講是成功的，受人歡迎的）2.Atleasttwodozenkitesalreadyhunginthesky,likepapersharksroamingforprey.Withinanhour,thenumberdoubled,andred,blue,andyellowkitesglidedandspuninthesky.Acoldbreezewaftedthroughmyhair.Thewindwasperfectforkiteflying,blowingjusthardenoughtogivesomelift,makethesweepseasier.（放風(fēng)箏的場景描寫，從各個角度，立體描述）3.

WewereupstairsinBaba'sstudy,thesmokingroom,whenItoldhimwhatMullahFatiullahKhanhadtaughtusinclass.Babawaspouringhimselfawhiskeyfromthebarhehadbuiltinthecorneroftheroom.Helistened,nodded,tookasipfromhisdrink.Thenheloweredhimselfintotheleathersofa,putdownhisdrink,andproppedmeuponhislap.IfeltasifIweresittingonapairoftreetrunks.Hetookadeepbreathandexhaledthroughhisnose,theairhissingthroughhismustacheforwhatseemedaneternityIcouldn'tdecidewhetherIwantedtohughimorleapfromhislapinmortalfear.（動作與場景細(xì)節(jié)描寫：作者回家后與父親之間的交流）4.Thewaterwasadeepblueandsunlightglitteredonitslookingglass-clearsurface.5.ThenIglancedupandsawapairofkites,redwithlongbluetails,soaringinthesky.Theydancedhighabovethetreesonthewestendofthepark,overthewindmills,floatingsidebysidelikeapairofeyeslookingdownonSanFrancisco,thecityInowcallhome.（場景、比喻）6.Blueskiesstoodtallandfar,thesunlikeabrandingironsearingthebackofyourneck.CreekswhereHassanandIskippedstonesallspringturneddry,andrickshawsstirreddustwhentheysputteredby.（場景、比喻）

7.Somewhere,abranchsnapped,anowlhooted.Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkledtheslope.Andfrombelow,thefaintsoundofwatertumblingthroughthevalley.8.Bythreeo'clock,therainhadstoppedandtheskywasacurdledgrayburdenedwithlumpsofclouds.Acoolbreezeblewthroughthepark.（天氣）

9.Thesunwasbeginningtoset,glitteringredthroughthecracksbetweentheramshacklebuildings.（景象）10."Allright.HereIgo.?Itookoffrunning,mysneakerssplashingrainwaterfrompuddles,thehandclutchingthekiteendofthestringheldhighabovemyhead.Ithadbeensolong,somanyyearssinceI'ddonethis,andIwonderedifI'dmakeaspectacleofmyself.IletthespoolrollinmylefthandasIran,feltthestringcutmyrighthandagainasitfedthrough.Thekitewasliftingbehindmyshouldernow,lifting,wheeling,andIranharder.Thespoolspunfasterandtheglassstringtoreanothergashinmyrightpalm.Istoppedandturned.Lookedup.Smiled.Highabove,mykitewastiltingsidetosidelikeapendulum,makingthatoldpaper-bird-flapping-its-wingssoundIalwaysassociatedwithwintermorningsinKabul.Ihadn'tflownakiteinaquarterofacentury,butsuddenlyIwastwelveagainandalltheoldinstinctscamerushingback.（優(yōu)美段落：再放風(fēng)箏的場景）細(xì)節(jié)分類：6句情緒描寫1.

IwasovercomewithsuchsuddenguiltthatIboltedtothebathroomandvomitedinthesink.Becausewhenhewasaround,theoxygenseepedoutoftheroom.MychesttightenedandIcouldn'tdrawenoughair;I'dstandthere,gaspinginmyownlittleairlessbubbleofatmosphere.（情緒的細(xì)節(jié)描寫）2.

Itscaredmealittle,seeingagrownmansob.

3.Iwanttotearmyselffromthisplace,fromthisrealityriseuplikeacloudandfloataway,meltintothishumidsummernightanddissolvesomewherefar,overthehills.ButIamhere,mylegsblocksofconcrete,mylungsemptyofair,mythroatburning.（感受與情緒，具體化）4.Mythroatachesandmyeyesstingwithsweat,eachbreathislikeinhalingfire,andIthinkIamweeping.（哭的描寫）5.Ihearawhimperingandrealizeitismine,mylipsaresaltywiththetearstricklingdownmyface.（哭）6.Hesitated.Tookthestring.MyheartquickenedasIspunthespooltogathertheloosestring.Westoodquietlysidebyside.Necksbentup.細(xì)節(jié)分類：17句神態(tài)描寫1.Baba'sstonyeyesboreintomineand,justlikethat,Iwasn'tlaughinganymore."Imeantospeaktoyoumantoman.Doyouthinkyoucanhandlethatforonce?“2.Iclosedmyeyes,pressedmyearevenharderagainstthedoor,wantingtohear,notwantingtohear.（神態(tài)描寫）

3.Thenhepaused,asifonthevergeofaddingsomething.Heweighedhiswordsandclearedhisthroat.（神態(tài)描寫）4.AlookofsurprisepassedacrossAssef'sface,briefly,anddisappeared.5.Shesmiled,unconvincingly,andblinked.（神態(tài)）6.Irememberturningmyfaceuptothesky,squinting,breathingliketheworldwasrunningoutofair.(神態(tài)描寫）7.Helitacigaretteandtuckeditbetweentheremainingtwofingersofhislefthand,theonerestingonthesteeringwheel.Keepinghisblackeyesontheroad,hestoopedforward,pickedupthescrewdriverlyingbetweenhisfeet,andhandedittome.（神態(tài)）

8.Faridopenedhismouth,almostsaidsomething,reconsideredandsaidnothing.Heslumpedagainstthewall,mutteredsomethingunderhisbreath,andcrossedhismutilatedfootoverthegoodone.Hisaccusingeyesneverleftme.（神態(tài)）9.Itookthekeys,stunned.（神態(tài)）10IforcedmyselftolookatHassan,buthisheadwasdowncast,hisshouldersslumped,hisfingertwirlingaloosestringonthehemofhisshirt.（情緒細(xì)節(jié)描寫）11

Alookofdisgustsweptacrosshisrain-soakedface.Itwasthesamelookhe'dgivemewhen,asakid,I'dfall,scrapemyknees,andcry.Itwasthecryingthatbroughtitonthen,thecryingthatbroughtitonnow."You'retwenty-twoyearsold,Amir!Agrownman!You...?heopenedhismouth,closedit,openeditagain,reconsidered.（表達(dá)情緒的優(yōu)美段落）12

Afewmoreawkwardminutespassed,andalightsweatformedonmybrow,myupperlip.13

Heheldmyglance,thenlookedaway,hisfacesetlikestone.Hiseyeswerestilllightless,Isaw,vacant,thewayIhadfoundthemwhenIhadpulledhimoutofthebathtub.（神態(tài)描寫）14

Behindtheglasses,tinyeyeslikeblackpeasflittedfrommetoFarid.15

Sensedhimstandingthere,listening,hesitating,caughtbetweensuspicionandhope.

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Hisshouldermusclestightenedundermygripand,foramoment,Ithoughthe'dkeepsqueezingZaman'sneckanyway.

17Hewipedhisfacewiththesleeveofhisshirt.Itburstabubbleofspittlethathadformedonhislips.Heburiedhisfaceinhishandsandweptalongtimebeforehespokeagain.（神態(tài)）豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)15句1drownedinthedeafeningroar

（分詞）2Standinginthecoldbasement,Ifeltwatchedbyeyesblinkinginthedark.（分詞）

3Ihearchatter,mutedsobbing,sniffling,someonemoaning,someoneelsesighing,elevatordoorsopeningwithabing,theoperatorpagingsomeoneinUrdu.（平行、分詞）4Babapocketedthekeys,pulledmeoutoftherainandunderthebuilding'sstripedawning.（名詞動詞化）5Istoodo