GRE作文語法扣分細(xì)節(jié)提點

1、第 PAGE14 頁 共 NUMPAGES14 頁GRE作文語法扣分細(xì)節(jié)提點GRE作文語法扣分細(xì)節(jié)提點GRE作文扣分語法提點1. 根本詞性的錯誤使用“詞性誤用”常表現(xiàn)為：介詞當(dāng)動詞用;形容詞當(dāng)副詞用;名詞當(dāng)動詞用等。比方：None can negative the importance of money.分析p ：negative系形容詞，誤作動詞。改為：None can deny the importance of money.2. 多種常見不一致現(xiàn)象所謂不一致不光指主謂不一致，還包括了單復(fù)數(shù)不一致、時態(tài)不一致以及代詞不一致等。比方：When one have money, he can d

2、o what he want to.分析p ：one是第三人稱單數(shù)，因此本句的have應(yīng)改為has; want應(yīng)改為wants, 本句是典型的主謂不一致。改為：When one has money, he can do what he wants (to do).3. 修飾語位置的錯誤擺放英語與漢語不同，同一個修飾語置于句子不同的位置，句子的含義可能引起變化。對于這一點考生們往往沒有引起足夠的重視，因此造成了不必要的誤解。比方：I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the cus.分析p ：bet

3、ter位置不當(dāng)，應(yīng)置于句末。4. 不完好句式問題在口語中，交際雙方可借助手勢語氣上下文等，不完好的句子完全可以被理解?？墒菚嬲Z就不同了，句子構(gòu)造不完好會令意思表達(dá)不清，這種情況常常在主句寫完以后，作者又想加些補充說明時發(fā)生。比方：There are many ways to know the society. For exle by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.分析p ：本句后半局部“For exle by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.”不是一個完好的句子，僅為一些不連接的詞語，不能獨立成句。改為：There are man

4、y ways to know society, for exle, by TV, radio, and newspaper.5. 懸垂修飾語的邏輯關(guān)系混亂所謂懸垂修飾語是指句首的短語與后面句子的邏輯關(guān)系混亂不清。比方：At the age of ten, my grandfather died.分析p ：句中”at the age of ten&;只寫出十歲時，但沒有說明“誰”十歲時，按一般推理不可能是my grandfather, 假如我們把這個懸垂修飾語改得明確一點，讀者或考官在讀句子時就不會誤解了。改為：When I was ten, my grandfather died.GRE作文語

5、法扣分現(xiàn)象情況分析p GRE作文總分值為6分，而其中涉及到語法拼寫等文體問題的分值大致在1分左右。一般來說，數(shù)量較少的拼寫錯誤可能會被考官直接忽略，但一些比擬明顯的語法錯誤往往會成為主要失分點。1分之差意味著作文評分掉了一個檔次，本來還算是高分的4分作文直接變成了平均分程度的3分，這對于想要申請文科專業(yè)的考生來說還是比擬嚴(yán)重的問題，這是因為許多文科院校專業(yè)對GRE作文都有較高標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，會把作文成績作為一個重要的申請資格審核標(biāo)準(zhǔn)來對待。GRE寫作高分范文：現(xiàn)代攝像機和印刷術(shù)“The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing recor

6、d of contemporary life that it has bee a more important form of documentation than written records.”攝像機可以通過如此準(zhǔn)確而有力的記錄手段來再現(xiàn)當(dāng)代生活，因此它已經(jīng)代替書面記錄成為了一種更重要的記錄手段。GRE寫作范文：“The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has bee a more important form of documentatio

7、n than written records.”There have been many methods of documenting in the history of human， from carved ancient pottery to sheepskin documents， of which the video camera may be the newest form with certain superiorities and inferiorities to written records. The advantages of video camera certainly

8、make it an important form of documentation， but not to the extent of being more essential than written records due to its disadvantages.To begin with， video can be interpreted as a series of pictures associated along the time， while written records can be considered as the descriptions of these pict

9、ures.Therefore， it is undoubtedly that video contains much more information than that of written records. From a video， we can clearly know what happened with subtle details.Merely with a television set， we can easily watch the happenings at home， such as the Olympic Games， fortably sitting on the s

10、ofa， needless to be present on the spot.And more excitedly， certain close-up enables us to scrutinize our favorable athletes. If there isnt video camera， we may be unable to enjoy such activities unless we can afford time and expense to be on the spot. While it is true that we can also be acquainted

11、 with the circumstances through newspaper or other media， however， the written record may be unable to present them as accurate as video. The imagination from the reports， however detailed， dooms to be imaginary， by all means different from the real circumstance， which video can represent. Moreover，

12、 the written records may contain some mistakes due to the carelessness or injustice of its reporters， while the video may be more accurate and convincing.Another strongpoint of video is that it can be perceived simply by visual signals， from which people mainly get information in their daily lives，

13、and therefore this method is more natural than written records. Everyone， ranging from a babbling child to an old grandpa， is able to get some information from the video just as they do during their daily lives， regardless of their literate ability. While the written record， no matter how easily it

14、is represented， requires literacy of its readers， and a newspaper or book means nothing to an illiterate person. In addition， video is much easier to prehend for people all over the world. For instance， an American can grasp nothing about a story written in Chinese unless s/he has learnt such a fore

15、ign language. However， s/he can absolutely understand something about a video recorded in China， although s/he may be confused with the language spoken in the video.While video is certainly not superior to written recorders in all aspects， its limitations determine that the written record will not b

16、e replaced at least at present. The first disadvantage of video is that it is much more inconvenient and expensive. Video must be recorded on the spot， namely， when an event happens to you， you cannot record it unless you have a camera at hand. However， even though you havent paper and pencil either

17、， you are still able to recall it to record based on your remembrance.Therefore， for those who cant afford a handy camera or who are unwilling to bring it anytime anywhere， the written records may be the easiest form available. Further， another weakness of video is that its cost is too high and its

18、correspondingly high-quality record may be beyond peoples requirement. The cost of making a written report is much less than that of manipulating a video. Also， every morning we may browse a newspaper to know what happened throughout the world， and the simple report， which may only consume us a few

19、seconds， meets our needs of curiosity; we neednt the accuracy and vividness of video， which may be more time-consuming.GRE寫作高分范文：技術(shù)與學(xué)習(xí)的矛盾GRE寫作題目：Although innovations such as video，puters，and the Inter seem to offer schools improved methods for instructing students，these technologies all too often di

20、stract from real learning.盡管諸如電視、電腦和互聯(lián)網(wǎng)這樣的創(chuàng)造似乎給學(xué)校教育提供了進(jìn)步的手段，但是所有這些技術(shù)往往也是在偏離真正的學(xué)習(xí)。GRE寫作題庫范文：Nowadays there is a growing concern about the role that innovations have played in the field of learning. While most people think that innovations benefit learning process in various ways，different opinions ar

21、ise that these technology advancements actually distract students from real learning. On balance，according to my personal observation,whether innovations can be beneficial or detrimental to real learning depends on the students and the teachers，not on these innovations themselves.To begin with，techn

22、ological innovations do help teaching and learning in various ways.With the aid of these technologies，the process of teaching and learning can be shorter and easier than before. For instance，if a student want certain published papers of an academic discipline，he/she may look through considerable cat

23、alogs to find the ones he/she needs. However，with the help of Inter innovation，at present most of these papers are published online. Consequently，to find certain paper the procedure is much easier and shorter，the students just type the key words and other information of the paper，and then the system

24、 will search the database，and the papers are there waiting for them. As this new approach can save a lot of time for the students，he/she could have more time reading the papers and absorbing the knowledge rather than checking and looking for the papers that could be a waste of his/her time. This exl

25、e aptly illustrates how technology advancement benefited the students and their learning process.Secondly，while innovations can help learning in various ways，it is more important that the central role of the pursuit for knowledge and wisdoms are maintained. What real matters is not the approach but

26、the purpose of learning. In India，where modern technologies are less applied to the learning process than in the US and other developed countries，still a lot of distinguished students achieved their academic goal with their hard work and desires to knowledge. In the US，where the software engineering students are given the most advanced facilities and apparatus for their learning and research，however，it is wildly accepted that they are far less outstandi