外研版八年級下冊英語課件 Module 9 寫作素養(yǎng)提升練

1、 外研版八年級下寫作素養(yǎng)提升練 Module 9 Friendship 外研版八年級下本模塊以“友誼”為話題，說明了友誼的重要性。它與學(xué)生的日常生活息息相關(guān)。該話題常見的命題形式是讓學(xué)生描述一位自己的好友，敘述一段友誼。separate, explain, mention, refuse, treat, lonely,regret, patient, encourage, silence, bright, friendly,treasure, trust, include, circle單 詞： explain sth. to sb., feel lonely, in silence, enc

2、ourage sb. to do, day by day短 語： 1. I was lonely and afraid to make friends with anyone.2. I felt the touch of something bright and friendly.3. It made me feel happy, lively and warm.4. It was like a hidden treasure and changed my life.5. Day by day, I learned to trust people, and they included me i

3、n their circle of friends.6. We stick together like glue.句 型：假設(shè)你是李玲，你的好友王小薇剛轉(zhuǎn)到了一所新學(xué)校，面對陌生的環(huán)境，她感到很不適應(yīng)。 她給你寫了一封信，向你訴說了她的困難。請你用英語給她回一封信，幫助她解決這些困難。詞數(shù)：70 左右。Dear Li Ling,I have a problem in the new school. I often feel lonely and worried. I have no close friends and I dont know how to get along well with

4、 my classmates. What should I do?Yours,Wang Xiaowei Dear Wang Xiaowei,_【審題指導(dǎo)】1. 體裁：應(yīng)用文2. 話題：幫助朋友解決友誼方面的問題3. 人稱：第二人稱4. 時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時，注意提建議的句型【思路構(gòu)建】Dear Wang Xiaowei,Glad to receive your letter. In your letter, you said you felt lonely and worried. Dont worry about it. Here is some advice.First, a smile is

5、 a treasure for everyone because it brings a touch of happiness. Whether you are at school or not, try to make friends with your classmates. Second, you should try tohelp them when they are in trouble. The old saying goes, “A【范文賞析】friend in need is a friend indeed.” Helping others is a good way to s

6、hape and develop friendships. Third, please remember to give everyone a smile every day. In fact, everyone likes a smiling face. If so, you will be happy and have more friends. I hope you can enjoy yourself.Best wishes.Yours,Li Ling點評：作者直接提出三點建議并且切實可行，同時用first，second， third 連接三點建議，使文章簡明扼要且有層次；另外，作者運

7、用了好詞好句，如treasure， a touch of， shape and develop， A friend in need is a friend indeed.（患難見真情。）文字優(yōu)美，不拖沓,是一篇好作文。假設(shè)你們學(xué)校將舉辦英語寫作比賽，請根據(jù)所給提示，以 “Getting along well with others”為題，寫一篇參賽短文。要求：100 詞左右（文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。Getting along well with othersNo one can live without keeping in touch with others. It is impor

8、tant for us to learn how to_Getting along well with othersNo one can live without keeping in touch with others. It is important for us to learn how to get on well with others. First, we should make friends with our classmates so that we can share joy and sadness together. They can also make our life colourful. Second, it is a good idea to do some volunteer work for our neighbours. In this way, we can do something_meaningful for them. Third, we need to communicate more with our parents to share our ideas wit