2014百校聯(lián)考試卷講評課件

1、基礎(chǔ)寫作講評你很榮幸地成為2014年巴西世界杯的一名志愿者,負責(zé)編寫世界杯的英語介紹。寫作內(nèi)容請根據(jù)以下信息編寫世界杯的英語介紹,內(nèi)容包括:1.足球運動是一項古老的體育活動,源遠流長。它起源于中國古代的一種球類游戲蹴鞠(cuju),后來經(jīng)過阿拉伯人(Arab)傳到歐洲,發(fā)展成現(xiàn)代足球;2.世界杯(World Cup)是最具影響力的全球性英式足球賽;3.首屆世界杯足球錦標賽于1930年在烏拉圭(Uruguay)舉行,以后每隔4年舉辦一次;4.目前世界杯歷史上已經(jīng)舉辦了18屆。本次在巴西(Brazil)舉辦的世界杯有32支球隊參加。 信息整合+構(gòu)思表達+連句成篇+修改+完成寫作1.足球運動是一項古

2、老的體育活動,源遠流長。它起源于中國古代的一種球類游戲蹴鞠(cuju),后來經(jīng)過阿拉伯人(Arab)傳到歐洲,發(fā)展成現(xiàn)代足球;Football, as an ancient sport, originated from one of ancient Chinese ball games, cuju, which was brought into Europe by Arabs and developed into the modern football. 起源于_傳到歐洲_發(fā)展成_originate from/in+地點; come from; be brought to/ spread to

3、 Europedevelop into2.世界杯(World Cup)是最具影響力的全球性英式足球賽;World cup generally refers to the worldwide games of British soccer with the greatest influence. World Cup is the most influential global soccer match.最具影響力的_ _全球性_英式足球賽_the most influential with the greatest influenceglobal; worldwidesoccer match;

4、British soccer game3.首屆世界杯足球錦標賽于1930年在烏拉圭(Uruguay)舉行,以后每隔4年舉辦一次;The first World Cup was held in Uruguay in 1930 and after that it is held every four years. 首屆世界杯足球錦標賽_舉行;舉辦_ 每隔4年_2014年世界杯是繼1978年阿根廷足球錦標賽之后第一次在南美洲舉辦的世界杯，也是繼1950年后巴西第一次舉辦的世界杯。The2014WorldCupwasthefirstinSouthAmericasinceArgentinahostedt

5、he tournamentin1978,andthefirstinBrazilsince1950.the first World Cupwas/were/will be held (hold-held-held)every four years4.目前世界杯歷史上已經(jīng)舉辦了18屆。5. 本次在巴西(Brazil)舉辦的世界杯有32支球隊參加。 Up to now it has already been held 18 times. The 2014 World Cup was held in Brazil, with 32 teams competing in it. The 2014 Wor

6、ld Cup was held in Brazil and 32 teams took part in/participated in it. Football, as an ancient sport, originated from one of ancient Chinese ball games, cuju, which was brought into Europe by Arabs and developed into the modern football. World Cup generally refers to the worldwide games of British

7、soccer with the greatest influence. The first World Cup was held in Uruguay in 1930 and after that it is held every four years. By now it has been held 18 times already. The 2014 World Cup was held in Brazil, with 32 teams competing in it. 范文欣賞讀寫任務(wù)閱讀下面短文,然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。 Speaking of campus club

8、s, people usually think of conventional ones like roller-skating or music clubs. But now, society and club culture is seeing more diversity, with students interests covering a wide field. Yu joined the club a month ago after he saw a big paper elephant on display at the society and club recruiting f

9、air (招新大會). “It was made by the club chairman, who is my age,” says Yu. “His work aroused my interest in origami (折紙).” According to Yu, the club was formed by a group of students who love the art of origami. “Though Ive never tried origami before, Im impressed by their love of it and I want to lear

10、n it myself,” he says. Other than treating societies and clubs as a way of entertainment, some students now use them to broaden their horizons, help their studies, and prepare for a future career. Some societies and clubs like this include extra tuition clubs, straight-A student clubs, and start-up

11、business clubs. Cui Ye, 19, is the co-founder of the straight-A student club at Beihang University. The economics major student wanted to improve her academic performance, so she set up the study club together with her friends. “The club has attracted dozens of students. We urge each other to study

12、hard and practise self-study activities after class,” says Cui. “I think the club has made studying less boring and difficult.”寫作內(nèi)容1.用約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。2.用約120個詞就“學(xué)校里的社團活動會不會影響到學(xué)習(xí)?”這個主題進行討論,內(nèi)容包括:(1)你參加社團活動的情況;(2)談?wù)剬W(xué)習(xí)和社團活動之間的關(guān)系;(3)你認為學(xué)生應(yīng)該要怎么才能平衡好學(xué)習(xí)和社團活動。概要部分要求能抓住文章所含的大意：通過兩個學(xué)生的經(jīng)歷來說明參加學(xué)校的社團活動給學(xué)生帶來的好處。應(yīng)包括

13、以下要點：1. 學(xué)生參加社團活動的好處2. 兩個學(xué)生Yu 和Cui Ye的例子(經(jīng)歷）概要部分出現(xiàn)的問題1. 要點不全：只寫了例子沒有寫參加社團活動的好處；或者只寫了好處，沒有點到例子。2. 未能把握文章大意，只是照抄原文的一些詞句生。3. 表達錯誤多：單詞拼寫，搭配，時態(tài)和語態(tài)等。正文部分出現(xiàn)的問題：段落層次不分明: 有學(xué)生沒有分段；仍有少數(shù)同學(xué)在summary和正文之間隔了一行任務(wù)二沒有講清楚學(xué)習(xí)和社團活動之間的關(guān)系，只單方面列舉了社團活動的好處或者舉了一個例子。Other than treating societies and clubs as a way of entertainmen

14、t, some students now use them to broaden their horizons, help their studies, and prepare for a future career.Joining campus clubs provides students with entertainment, enlarges their scope of knowledge, helps students with their studies and prepars for a future career through the experience of two s

15、tudents.利用文章中的素材，移花接木寫好summary結(jié)合任務(wù)提到的主題“學(xué)校里的社團活動會不會影響到學(xué)習(xí)?”用自己的話轉(zhuǎn)述：Many students consider societies and clubs a way of entertainment. They also enable students to widen their horizons, improve their studies and prepare for a future job. By providing us with experience of two students, the passage sho

16、ws the benefits of joining campus clubs, including helping with their entertainment, broadening their sight and imagination, helping with their studies and preparing for a future career.Summary參考答案寫作內(nèi)容1.用約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。2.用約120個詞就“學(xué)校里的社團活動會不會影響到學(xué)習(xí)?”這個主題進行討論,內(nèi)容包括:(1)你參加社團活動的情況;(2)談?wù)剬W(xué)習(xí)和社團活動之間的關(guān)系;(3)你認為

17、學(xué)生應(yīng)該要怎么才能平衡好學(xué)習(xí)和社團活動。讀題確定主題分析任務(wù)列出要點進行寫作寫作步驟：(1)你參加社團活動的情況;這個任務(wù)完全可以利用文章的兩個例子和素材，具體介紹你本人參加學(xué)校社團活動的情況（社團名稱，參加目的，簡單經(jīng)過和影響），可以寫一個或者多個，但建議寫一個活動足夠。原文素材： extra tuition clubs, straight-A student clubs, and start-up business clubs2. 本校社團活動：（寫自己熟悉的或者參加過得）例如：the English Clubimprove my English, arouse my interest i

18、n English(學(xué)習(xí)方面的）The Music Club make friends with those sharing the same interest with me, relax myself,enrich my school life（藝術(shù)類的）Foodball (Basketball,Table Tennis) Clubbuild up my body, refresh myself（運動類的）3. 目前沒有參加社團活動：（分析了原因：學(xué)習(xí)忙，抽不出時間；因為懶惰，怕苦怕累)（1）你參加社團的情況；可寫你因為而參加了那個或哪些社團, 還可以再簡單寫寫你從中獲得什么？ When

19、it comes to campus activities, I immediately remember the first day when I came to this school. The bicycle club was taking in its new members by promoting itself. I learned that it was good for me to develop my interest and build up my body, and therefore I signed up my name to join it. I took exer

20、cise every day. Gradually, I felt energetic and performed better in my studies, which inspired me and other students. (1)你參加社團活動的情況;(2)談?wù)剬W(xué)習(xí)和社團活動之間的關(guān)系; From my perspective, proper campus activities are beneficail to our studies. Firstly, we can relax ourselves and ruduce our study pressure throught t

21、he activities, which will help improve our study efficiency. Secondly, being engaged in campus activities broadens our horizons, making our study less boring and difficult. Besides, it enriches our life experience, cultivate good character like patience as well as perseverance, which motivates us to

22、 face up to the problems we come across in our study and never give in.Relax ourselvesreduce our study pressure, improve our study efficiency broaden our horizonsenlarlage our scope of knowledge, find fun in our study(make our study less boring and difficult) enrich our life experiences,combine know

23、ledge with practice, cultivate our imagination and inspirationmaking our study more interesting and easier（2）談?wù)剬W(xué)習(xí)和社團活動之間的關(guān)系；社團有助于學(xué)習(xí)：參加社團-身心放松-提高學(xué)習(xí)效率社團活動可以開拓視野-學(xué)習(xí)到課堂上沒學(xué)到的東西-更全面掌握知識(3)你認為學(xué)生應(yīng)該要怎么才能平衡好學(xué)習(xí)和社團活動。put our studies in the first place arrange our time properly, make a proper schedule on study a

24、nd campus activities avoid joining in too many campus activities In order to balance campus activities and studies, I think the following suggestions will be helpful to you. To begin with, it is necessary for us to put our study in the first place as a senior three student. Furthermore,we are suppos

25、ed to arrange our time in a proper way. It is wise of us to join a club once a week or twice a month.Besides, it would be better if we just join in one campus activity in case it will influence our study.（3）你認為學(xué)生應(yīng)該要怎么才能平衡好學(xué)習(xí)和社團活動。 When it comes to campus activities, I immediately remember the first

26、day when I came to this school. The bicycle club was taking in its new members by promoting itself. I learned that it was good for me to develop my interest and build up my body, and therefore I signed up my name to join it. I took exercise every day. Gradually, I felt energetic and performed better

27、 in my studies, which inspired me and other students. From my perspective, proper campus activities are beneficail to our studies. Firstly, we can relax ourselves and ruduce our study pressure throught the activities, which will help improve our study efficiency. Secondly, being engaged in campus ac

28、tivities broadens our horizons, making our study less boring and difficult. Besides, it enriches our life experience, cultivate good character like patience as well as perseverance, which motivates us to face up to the problems we come across in our study and never give in. In order to balance campu

29、s activities and studies, I think the following suggestions will be helpful to you. To begin with, it is necessary for us to put our study in the first place as a senior three student. Furthermore,we are supposed to arrange our time in a proper way. It is wise of us to join a club once a week or twice a month. In addition, it would be better if we just join in one campus activity in case it will influence our study.參考范文 By providing us with experience of two students, the passage sho