高中英語書面表達之歸納提煉總結要點練習學案（含答案）

1、PAGE PAGE 14高中英語書面表達之 歸納提煉總結要點練習 列出歸納提煉總結要點，補充成句：把提綱內容按照邏輯（事情發(fā)生先后，因果關系等）羅列出來，補上主語等完成基本句子；要點式作文包括要點完整式和要點發(fā)展式。要點完整式指書面表達題目要求內容已經相對完整且表述清楚，考生只需要根據要求把內容補充完整清楚并逐一翻譯，增加寫作的合適開頭和結尾就能完成寫作任務，；而要點發(fā)展式是指題目所給的要點（要求）只是一些籠統(tǒng)的總結的和概括式的內容，并不具體，要求考生根據內容適當發(fā)揮拓展出自己的內容。一要點完整式1. 書面表達 假定你是李華，計劃去美國學習計算機科學。請給你在美國的朋友Peter寫一封電子郵件

2、，詢問以下相關信息：1. 需要參加何種英語考試；2. 每學期需修的課程數和學費；3. 食宿費用；4. 合適的學校。注意：1. 詞數100左右； 2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3. 郵件開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。歸納提煉總結要點：1我計劃去美國學習計算機科學；2對此，我有些信息要向您咨詢；3我需要參加何種英語考試；4我每學期需修的課程數和學費；5我在美國的學習期間的食宿費用是多少？；6我想您給我推薦一些合適的學校。根據上下要點邏輯補充合適內容使之連貫：1. _2. _3. _4. _范文1. Dear Peter, How are you? As you know, Im q

3、uite interested in computer science. I plan to go and study it in the United Sates. So Im writing to ask you for some information about the matter. First of all, I want to know how to prepare for that as an international student. For example, what kind of test is required for admission? Second, Im a

4、dmitted to a university, how many courses do I have to take each term and how much do I have to pay a term? Finally, how much should I prepare for food and housing? Since I know very little about American universities, it would be great if you could be kind enough to suggest some universities suitab

5、le for me.Looking forward to your reply!范文2.Dear David, How are you? I meant to write to you for some time. I have planned to go abroad to study computer science in the United States. Computer science is one of the most popular major nowadays. I would like to know some information about the followin

6、g: 1. what required English examination should I take before I enter the university ? 2. how many required courses in my major shall I learn every term and how much .? 3. how much the expenses of bed and board will a student in the university to spent . 4. I want to enter a university where there ar

7、e well staff, enough equipment, and if there is any scholar? Please give me your advice. I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you very much.Yours, Li HuaDear David, How are you? 一書面表達假如你們學?！坝⒄Z愛好者俱樂部”將對“良好飲食習慣”這一話題進行討論。請根據下列提示，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿。內容要點應包括：部分同學的飲食習慣良好的飲食習慣個人看法不吃早餐愛吃零食偏食飲食過量飲食多樣化飲食定時定量有助于身體健

8、康注意：1. 發(fā)言稿必須包括所有內容要點，可適當發(fā)揮；2. 發(fā)言稿開頭與結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數;3. 詞數：100左右；4. 參考詞匯: 偏食 be particular about food 零食 snackDear friends, As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, its very important for us to form healthy eating habits. _歸納提煉總結要點：1. 不吃早餐發(fā)展成句：_2. 愛吃零食發(fā)展成句：_3. 偏食發(fā)展成句：_4. 飲食過量發(fā)展成句：_5. 飲食多樣化飲發(fā)展成句：

9、_6. 食定時定量發(fā)展成句：_7. 有助于身體健康發(fā)展成句：_8. 發(fā)展成句：_參與范文1Dear friends,As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, its a very important for us to form healthy eating habits. However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often go to school without breakfast; some like to have s

10、nacks; some others are particular about food; and still some eat or drink too much. All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health. To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food. Besides, wed be

11、tter have meals regularly.In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.Thats all. Thank you!參與范文2Dear friends,As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, its very important for us to form health

12、y eating habits. Some of us enjoy snacks instead of breakfast. Some are particular about food .They usually overeat what they like to eat. The eating habits mentioned above are bad for our health. Most of the snacks we eat are junk food, which may make us overweight and even suffer from disease.What

13、 are the good eating habits like? First, I think, we should choose healthy diet. Besides, we cant eat too much to be too full. In addition, eating a variety of food and eating food regularly are also important to keep fit.Thats all. Thank you!二書面表達漢語中有句諺語“有志者事竟成:請以此為主題,描寫一個有志氣的同學。要點如下面表格：姓名陳林性別男年齡18

14、年級高三志向清華大學物理系事跡1. 自幼父母雙亡，被叔叔帶大，家境貧寒；2. 學習刻苦，成績一直優(yōu)秀；3. 今年參加世界中學生物理奧賽，奪得金牌，為祖國爭了光。啟示注意：1. 詞數100左右；2. 可根據內容要點適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。歸納提煉總結要點：1陳林的性別、年齡、所讀年級發(fā)展成句：_2志向，清華大學物理系發(fā)展成句：_3自幼父母雙亡，被叔叔帶大，家境貧寒發(fā)展成句：_4學習刻苦，成績一直優(yōu)秀發(fā)展成句：_5今年參加世界中學生物理奧賽，奪得金牌，為祖國爭了光發(fā)展成句：_6啟示：_參考范文：Where there is will, there is a way“Where there is

15、 will, there is a way.” Do you believe this proverb? Perhaps my classmate Chen Lin, a senior 3 boy of eighteen years old, can prove it through his experiences. Life is very hard for Chen Lin. His parents died when he was only a little child, and he was brought up by his uncle. His living conditions

16、are worse than most of us. He once said, “I want to go to Qinghua University to study physics.” What a great ambition!Encouraged by the great will, he studies very hard. He won the gold medal in the World Olympic Physics Competition this year, winning a great honor for our motherland. Chen Lin has s

17、et a good example for us. I am sure his dream will come true, for “Where there is will, there is a way”.三書面表達假設你是某中學學生會主席李華，你校與本地一所國際學樣經常舉辦聯誼活動.你計劃在重陽節(jié)組織學生到養(yǎng)老院去慰問老人，擬邀請國際學校的學生參加，請你根據以下內容要點給國際學樣的學生會主席Tony寫一封信.要點：向老人贈送禮物（鮮花、自制賀卡）；為老人提供服務（做清潔、陪老人聊天）；為老人表演節(jié)目（唱歌、跳舞）.注意：1、詞數為100左右；2、信的開關和結尾已為你寫好（不計入你所寫詞數）

18、；3、已給出的信的開關和結尾不得抄入答題卡. （以下所給內容不得抄入答題卡）Dear Tony，Chongyang, the traditional Chinese festival for the elderly, is coming around. We are planning to visit the Nursing Home to celebrate the special day, and we would like to invite students from your school to join us.Look forward to your early reply.You

19、rs, Li Hua歸納提煉總結要點：1. _2. _3. _4. _We have planned several activities. When we get there，we will visit the elderly in their rooms in groups，presenting them with flowers and selfmade cards to show our respect and love. Then we will do some cleaning and washing for them with the help of the nurses.As

20、some old people feel lonely. We may chat with them about their old days, changes of our city, or anything they are interested in. We may also give them some performances: singing, dancing, and so on.I am sure we will both gain a better understanding of the elderly in China. If you have any suggestio

21、ns, please let us know.五書面表達2007年4月29日上午10點到11點，全國億萬學生陽光體育活動在各地大中小學校同時進行，江蘇省1，100萬學生積極參與了這項活動。教育部倡導學生：每天鍛煉一小時健康工作五十年幸福生活一輩子請你根據以上提示，用英語準備一份發(fā)言稿，向同學們講述一下陽光體育活動的有關情況，并就高三學生是否需要每天花一小時鍛煉，談談你的看法及理由。注意：發(fā)言稿應包括以上所有信息，要有適當發(fā)揮。詞數：120左右。發(fā)言稿的開頭和結尾已經寫好，不計入總詞數。參考詞匯：陽光體育活動a national student sports program; 教育部the Mi

22、nistry of EducationGood afternoon, everyone,_Thank you!歸納提煉總結要點：1. _2. _3. _4. _Good afternoon, everyone.On the morning of April 29, 2007, from 10:00 to 11:00, hundreds of millions of students from primary, middle schools and universities all over China joined in a national student sports program. E

23、leven million students in Jiangsu took an active part in this program.The Ministry of Education calls on students to exercise for an hour every day, in the hope that they will have good health to work fifty years and enjoy the whole life.Personally, I think it a good idea for us senior 3 students to

24、 have daily exercise. Although we take an hour a day for exercise, it is well worth it. Taking exercise helps us build up our body and keep a clear mind. Therefore, we can work more efficiently.Thank you! (125詞)六書面表達你所在的班級將要舉辦一次主題為“What Can We Do for Our School?”的英語演講比賽。請寫一篇英語演講稿，要求從以下四方面中任選一至二個進行闡述

25、，并舉例加以說明。1. 關心他人；2. 美化校園；3. 受護學校設施；4. 營造良好的學習氛圍。注意：1. 不要在書面表達中出現所在學校的校名和本人姓名，否則本節(jié)判為零分；2. 詞數：100左右；3. 參考詞匯：愛心love and care;校園campus; 設施facilities; 氛圍environment4.開頭和結尾已經寫好，且不記入詞數。Hello, everyone. Its nice to speak about what we can do for our school, and I think each of us can do something.Thank you

26、for listening!歸納提煉總結要點：1. _2. _3. _4. _ Hello, everyone. Its nice to speak about what we can do for our school, and I think each of us can do something. The first thing we can do is to make our campus more beautiful. Every one of us may plant a tree in the school, or organize a thorough cleaning on

27、the campus. We can also form a good habit of putting the rubbish in the trashcan. The second thing we can do is to protect the facilities in our school. When we leave the classroom, we should never forget to turn off the light or close the door. We should not leave the tap water running or waste any

28、 materials in the laboratory class.If everyone does one thing for our school, I believe we will turn our school into a better place to Study and live in. Thank you for listening!七書面表達大學生活即將開始，你將面對新的學習和生活環(huán)境，請根據提示寫一篇英語短文，談談你打算如何安排你的大學生活。內容要點應包括：確定新的學習目標改進學習方法學會獨立生活參加各種課外活動處理好與同學的關系注意：（1）短文的內容要連貫、完整；（2

29、）短文單詞數：100左右（開頭已給出的單詞不計入單詞總數）。歸納提煉總結要點：1. _2. _3. _4. _I will go to college in the near future. After I enter college, I plan to set new goals in my study and improve my way of learning. Whats more, as I am away from my parents, it is necessary for me to learn to live on my own, such as doing some w

30、ashing and cleaning by myself. In my spare time, I will take part in different kinds of school activities, for example, I will often go to the English Corner to practice my spoken English. In addition, I need to get along well with my classmates and teaches at college. I think I will have a wonderfu

31、l college life. (102 words)八書面表達假定你是李華，希望通過外籍教師Peter找一個英語筆友。請寫一封短信，描述一下你理想中筆友的條件，并說明為什么選這樣的筆友。具體條件包括：1. 年齡；2. 性別；3. 愛好（旅游、運動、寵物等）。注意：1詞數100 左右； 2 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3 開頭語已為你寫好。Dear Peter, I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor. Best regards, Li Hua歸納提煉總結要點：1. _2. _3. _4. _Dear Peter

32、, Im writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties, and with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who is interested in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Besides, it would be better for her to hav

33、e a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I think I can share with her our traveling experiences, taking care of pets, or whatever we have in common. And I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country.I look forward to hearing fro

34、m you soon. Best regards, Li Hua九書面表達假設你是李華，你的英國筆友Henry 最近來信，詢問你高考后的暑期安排。請胸根據以下要點,用英語回一封信,說明你的計劃,并簡述理由。1休息；2.讀書；3.陪伴父母； 4.參加社會活動；注意：1.詞數100左右，信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好（不計入總詞數）；2. 可根據內容要點適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫；3. 參考詞匯：高考college entrance examination社會活動social activitiesDear Henry, Im glad to receive your letter. Best wishes

35、!Li Hua歸納提煉總結要點：1. _2. _3. _4. _Im glad to receive your letter. Its a pleasure for me to tell you my plan of this coming summer vacation after the college entrance examination. First of all, a good rest is needed because I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years. Of course, Ill do some

36、reading for fun, and for knowledge as well. Ill spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some housework. Theyve done so much for me, you know. If possible, Ill take part in some social activities so that I can know more about the society.Best wishes!Li Hua十書面表達據報道，7歲的美國女

37、孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌（lung cancer）后處于極度的痛苦之中，美國抗癌協(xié)會（ACS）決定，每當Amy收到一封慰問信，就給她增加3美分的治療款。假如你是新華中學的學生李華，請你用英文給Amy寫一封慰問信，主要內容包括：自我介紹得知的情況表示鼓勵打算為她做什么祝她早日康復注意：信的格式已為你寫好信中不得出現你的真實情況。詞數100左右。請在答題卡上作答。歸納提煉總結要點：1. _2. _3. _4. _Dear Amy, I am a student from Xinhua Middle School. I am very sorry to have heard of you

38、r present situation that you are so bitter after having a lung cancer. At present, ACS decides that it will give you three cents when you receive a letter. That will offer you so much courage. I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is. You are sure to

39、 make it. I will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you, which may help you. It will give more courage to live on. May you recover soon. Yours, Li Hua十一書面表達假設你是王平，李華是你的同窗好友，請根據下列要點，用英文給李華寫一篇畢業(yè)留言。要點：1. 簡要表述李華在你心目中的印象； 2. 用一到兩個相關的事例進行具體描述； 3. 對他李華表示美好的的祝愿。

40、 注意：1. 內容積極向上，語意連貫，結構完整。詞數120左右。 2. 不能寫成詩歌形式；不能使用真實姓名和學校名稱。歸納提煉總結要點：1. _2. _3. _4. _Li Hua, Its time to say goodbye. Its time to recall those beautiful days we spend together. You are the very person who gives me a hand when necessary. You are the most considerate person who knows exactly what I nee

41、d. Still remember that night two years ago? When I suddenly fell ill, it was you who carried me on your back to a nearby hospital. You took good care of me while I was having an injection. Later, you managed to help me with my lessons. Without your help, I would have failed in the examination. I sti

42、ll have hundreds of stories to share with you. I still have thousands of blessings for you. May all your dreams come true! May our friendship last till the end of the universe.! Yours, Wang Ping 二要點發(fā)展式1. 書面表達假設你是李華。美國一所友好學校準備與你們學校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關情況。請你給他寫封回信，主要內容如下：1表示贊成。2提出你喜歡的欄目。3簡要說明理由。

43、注意： 1詞數100左右。 2信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好。 3適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 4參考詞匯：欄目- column June 8Dear Mr. Green,I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together._ Yours faithfullyLi Hua歸納提煉總結要點：1. 表示贊成發(fā)展成句：_2. 提出你喜歡的欄目發(fā)展成句：_ 1）_ 補：_ 2）_ 補：_3. 簡要說明理由發(fā)展成句：_ 1）_ 2）_4. 發(fā)表前景看法：_June 8Dear Mr. Green,I am very

44、 excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. It is indeed a wonderful idea and everyone hopes for its success.I would like the magazine to have three columns: News, Teachers Advice and Students Voice. From the News column we can learn about what is going on in both of our school

45、s. In Teachers Advice, our teachers can give us such help as we may not be able to get in the classroom. Students Voice will allow us to freely express our thoughts and feelings about our lives and studies.I believe that this magazine will surely strengthen our ties, and I am looking forward to read

46、ing it.Yours faithfully,Li Hua2書面表達假定你是李華，最近你班上有很多同學都開通了博客（blog）。很多家長和老師認為開博客浪費時間和精力而持反對意見。請你就此話題給報社的編輯寫一封信。內容包括：1. 開博客熱潮及其受到的質疑；2表明自己的看法；3. 陳述自己的理由（至少兩條）。注意：1. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 2詞數100左右（文章的開頭與線束語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數）。Dear editor, At present, blog has become very popular. _歸納提煉總結要點：1. 開博客熱潮: 最近你班上有很多同學都開通了博

47、客（blog）發(fā)展成句：_2. 受到的質疑: 很多家長和老師認為開博客浪費時間和精力而持反對意見 發(fā)展成句：_ 1）_ 補：_ 2）_ 補：_3. 表明自己的看法發(fā)展成句：_ 1）_ 2）_4. 陳述自己的理由（至少兩條）_1）_ 2）_范文：Dear editor, At present, blog has become very popular. A lot of students in my class have created their own blogs and often visit others bolgs. Many parents and teachers are stro

48、ngly against it. They think it is a waste of time and energy. However, I love the idea that we students have blogs of our own. Anyone can create his own blog as he wishes. Blogs have no fixed rules and dont call for professional knowledge and skills to manage it. So we can express our inner voice fr

49、eely on the blog and share our thoughts with others. Whats more, blog covers all kinds of topics from daily life to political forums, from individual thoughts to world events. So blogs can also help release our pressure of study and entertain us when we are tired. In short, I am for creating blogs.

50、最近班上有很多同學都開通了博客，但是很多家長和老師認為開博客浪費時間和精力而持反對意見，我認為開通微博是一件好事，因為：1.有了微博可以開闊我們的視野2.勞逸結合3.增長見識所以我認為開通微博是合理的，但應合理使用假設你是李華，你在讀美國中學生Jack的博客時了解到他即將作為一名交換生來北京學習，希望能夠寄宿在一名擅長英語的中學生家里，以便更好地了解中國文化。請根據以下要點給Jack 寫一封電子郵件：1. 歡迎他來中國學習；2. 介紹你的個人情況；3. 邀請他住在你家并表示愿意為他提供幫助。注意：1. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 2詞數100左右（文章的開頭與線束語已為你寫好，不計入總詞

51、數）。DearJack, ImverygladtolearnthatyourecomingtoBeijingasanexchangestudentandwanttostayinalocalhomewithamiddleschoolstudentwhocanspeakexcellentEnglish.Imahighschoolstudent,anditsmysincerehopethatyoucanstaywithme. IamgoodatEnglishandcancommunicatewithforeignersfluently.Besides,Ilikereadingandtraveling

52、inmysparetime, soifyouarewithus,IcantakeyouaroundBeijingandletyouknowmoreaboutourbrilliantChineseculture. BothmyparentsandIarefriendlyandenthusiasticinpersonality.SoIbelievewecanbegoodfriends.Imsure IwilldowhatIcantohelpyouwithyourChinese.Imlookingforwardtoyourcoming. Bestwishes.Yours,Li Hua書面表達假定你是

53、李華，和外籍教師Smith先生預約了昨天下午3點在他辦公室請教如何學好英語，但你因故未能赴約。請你給他寫一封電子郵件。內容主要包括：1. 為未能赴約致歉；2. 解釋未能赴約的具體原因；3. 希望重新預約。注意:1. 詞數100左右2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 郵件開頭和結尾已為你寫好。One possible version:Dear Mr. Smith,Im writing to beg you to excuse me for missing our appointment at 3 yesterday afternoon, when you intended to give me advice on English learning. Im sorry for the inconvenience it caused to you. You may be unwilling to accept an explanation. However, I dont want you to misunderstand me. On my way