史上最全英語四級作文題型和模版講解

1、四級作文第一部分 四級作文的評分標準和要求一、考核目的考核學生用英語進行書面表達的初步能力。二、考核要求： 1. 時間：30分鐘 2. 字數(shù)：120詞以上 （120150） 3. 題型： 1）根據(jù)給出的段首句續(xù)寫 2）根據(jù)中文提要作文 3）根據(jù)圖表寫作4）書信寫作三、評分原則：1. 大學英語考試的目的是檢查考生是否達到大學英語教學大綱規(guī)定的四級和六級教學要求，對作文的評分應以此要求為準則。2. 大學英語考試作文題采用總體評分(Global Scoring)方法。閱卷人員就總的印象給出獎勵分(Reward Scores),而不是按語言點的錯誤數(shù)目扣分。3. 從內(nèi)容和語言兩個方面對作文進行綜合評判

2、。內(nèi)容和語言是一個統(tǒng)一體。作文應表達題目所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容,而內(nèi)容要通過語言來表達。要考慮作文是否切題,是否充分表達思想,也要考慮是否用英語清楚而適切地表達思想,也就是要考慮語言上的錯誤是否造成理解上的障礙。4. 避免趨中傾向。該給高分的給高分,包括滿分;該給低分的給低分,包括零分。一名閱卷人員在所評閱的全部作文卷中不應只給中間的幾種分數(shù)。 四、評分標準：四、評分標準： 1 1作文題滿分為作文題滿分為1515分。分。閱卷標準共人為五等：閱卷標準共人為五等：2 2分，分，5 5分，分，8 8分，分，1111分及分及1414分。分。2 2分分-條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤，且多數(shù)

3、為嚴重錯誤。條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤，且多數(shù)為嚴重錯誤。5 5分分-基本切題，表達思想不夠清楚，連貫性差，有較多的嚴重錯誤?；厩蓄}，表達思想不夠清楚，連貫性差，有較多的嚴重錯誤。8 8分分-基本切題，表達思想比清楚，文字尚連貫，但語言錯誤較多?；厩蓄}，表達思想比清楚，文字尚連貫，但語言錯誤較多。1111分分-切題，表達思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。切題，表達思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。1414分分-切題，表達思想清楚，文字通順，連貫較好，基本上無語言錯誤。切題，表達思想清楚，文字通順，連貫較好，基本上無語言錯誤。閱卷人員根根據(jù)閱卷標準，對照樣卷

4、評分，若認為某一分數(shù)文件次（如閱卷人員根根據(jù)閱卷標準，對照樣卷評分，若認為某一分數(shù)文件次（如8 8分）相似，即定為（分）相似，即定為（8 8分）；若認為稍優(yōu)或劣于該檔次，分）；若認為稍優(yōu)或劣于該檔次，則可加一分（則可加一分（9 9分）或減一分（分）或減一分（7 7分），但不得加減半分。分），但不得加減半分。字數(shù)不足應酌情扣分：字數(shù)不足應酌情扣分：少少1010字字少少2020字字少少3030字字少少4040字字少少5050字字少少5151字字累計字數(shù)累計字數(shù)110110119119100100109109909099998080898970707979 69 69扣分扣分1 12 23 34 4

5、5 55 5注：注：1 1、如題目中給出主題句、起始句、結束句，均不得記入所寫字數(shù)。、如題目中給出主題句、起始句、結束句，均不得記入所寫字數(shù)。2 2、 只寫一段者：只寫一段者：0 04 4分，只寫兩段者：分，只寫兩段者：0 09 9分（指規(guī)定三段的作文）分（指規(guī)定三段的作文）3 3、白卷，作文與題目毫不相關，或只有幾個孤立的詞而無法表達思想、白卷，作文與題目毫不相關，或只有幾個孤立的詞而無法表達思想, ,則給零分。則給零分。2. 2. 設作文最低分，采用下列成績計算方法：設作文最低分，采用下列成績計算方法： 1 1）作文分為）作文分為0 0分者，總分即使高于分者，總分即使高于6060分，一律作

6、不及格處理；分，一律作不及格處理； 2 2）作文分大于）作文分大于 0 0 分小于分小于 6 6 分者，按下分者，按下 列方式計算成績：列方式計算成績： 最后報道分最后報道分 = = 原計算總分原計算總分 6 + 6 + 作文實得分作文實得分 一、四級作文的段落基本結構：一、四級作文的段落基本結構：主題句主題句擴展句擴展句終結句終結句連接詞連接詞連接詞連接詞段段落落第二部分第二部分 四級作文的結構四級作文的結構1.主題句主題句表明全段是關于什么及討論什么的段落中心句，即：明確地表示全段要展開的中心點,四級短文寫作中最好是把主題句放在段首。2.擴展句擴展句是用來說明，解釋，引申，或論證主題句所表

7、達的中心思想的句子。3.結尾句結尾句是用一句話對段落的主題進行重述,評論,或總結,借以強化主題,加深讀者的印象. It is not difficult to make a right choice It is not difficult to make a right choice between buying a house in the low-rise between buying a house in the low-rise area and buying one in the high-rise area and buying one in the high-rise area

8、(area (主題句主題句). ).If we want to economize If we want to economize and get more personal area, we can and get more personal area, we can choose the low-rise; but if we want to choose the low-rise; but if we want to live more comfortably, we will choose live more comfortably, we will choose the high-r

9、ise (the high-rise (擴展句擴展句). ). In a word, the In a word, the key lies in the alternative of economy key lies in the alternative of economy and comfort (and comfort (結尾句結尾句). ). 二、全文二、全文( (議論文議論文) )基本結構：基本結構：主題段主題段擴展段擴展段(1-2段段)終結段終結段主題句（第主題句（第1句）句）擴展句（擴展句（1到到2句）句）終結句（引出下文）終結句（引出下文）132終結句（最后終結句（最后1 1

10、句）句）擴展句擴展句主題句（第主題句（第1句）句）過渡詞過渡詞過渡詞過渡詞第二部分第二部分 四級作文的結構四級作文的結構KeytoSuccessIn such a competitive society, everyone has In such a competitive society, everyone has a strong desire to be successful and in his a strong desire to be successful and in his life.life. But how to achieve success? But how to ac

11、hieve success? In my In my opinion, there are three main keys opinion, there are three main keys a clear a clear objective, strong willpower and diligence.objective, strong willpower and diligence.FirstFirst, it is very important to set up a goal , it is very important to set up a goal before you st

12、art. No one can be successful before you start. No one can be successful without a goal in his mind. without a goal in his mind. BesidesBesides, you need , you need a strong willpower to keep you go ahead. There a strong willpower to keep you go ahead. There always are tough stones in every road to

13、always are tough stones in every road to success. Whether you can go through it depends success. Whether you can go through it depends on whether you are persistent enough. on whether you are persistent enough. Last but Last but not leastnot least, everyone who wants to succeed , everyone who wants

14、to succeed should be diligent. There is and old saying, should be diligent. There is and old saying, “No pains, no gains.No pains, no gains.” Most successful people Most successful people owe their success to hard working, such as owe their success to hard working, such as Einstein.Einstein.In concl

15、usion, if we want to be successful, In conclusion, if we want to be successful, we have to master the three main keys we have to master the three main keys mentioned above. mentioned above. There is no shortcut to There is no shortcut to success. success. The three keys will assure you to The three

16、keys will assure you to realize your beautiful dream.realize your beautiful dream.第三部分第三部分 常見的錯誤和問題常見的錯誤和問題注意方面：注意方面：1切題 2結構（三段式） 3落題快（主題句在每段句首，不要繞圈） 4長度（120150字，卷面第二頁中間或到三分之二處，不要過多）語言方面須注意的問題：語言方面須注意的問題：1題目的大寫An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident It Pays to Be Honest How to Succeed in a Job

17、Interview2句子錯誤1）語態(tài)時態(tài)不正確I read the passage carefully and several mistakes were found.( 語態(tài)不一致 )I read the passage carefully and found several mistakes.I am very grateful if you could help me with this problem.(時態(tài)不一致)I will be very grateful if you could help me with this problem.2）主謂不一致He like playing

18、football very much.He likes playing football very much.3）中式英語My English has made great progress.I have made great progress in English.Work makes me feel satisfied.Work is a source of satisfaction to me.4)結構不完整Although had many difficulties in studying English, I finally passed the exam.Although I ha

19、d many difficulties in studying English, I finally passed the exam. 基本句型： 主謂：I succeed. 主謂賓：I like Caicai. 主系表：ZY is smart. 主謂雙賓：Wei Xiaobao gave Ake an English dictionary. 主謂賓賓補：Tulongdao makes many people selfish.句型句型第第四部分四部分 寫作中的常用句式寫作中的常用句式第第四部分四部分 寫作中的常用句式寫作中的常用句式句型句型第四部分第四部分 寫作中的常用句式寫作中的常用句式一、

20、開頭常用語式一、開頭常用語式(主題段的引入主題段的引入)AproverbsaysAstheproverbsaysSomepeoplesaythatManypeoplebelievethatItisgenerallybelievedthatWeallknowthatAsweallknowItisquiteclearthatVariousviewsexistasto,butTherearemanyarguments/opinions/viewsaboutThereismuchdiscussionabout/attentiontoItiswellknownthatItissaidthatIthasb

21、eenfoundthatItiseasytoseethatThepiegraphshowsArecentsurveyprovidesThechart/graph/tableshowsNoonecandenythatNowadays,.Atpresent例例1 My View on Animal Communication Many people think that animals cannot communicate with each other. In their opinion, they cannot speak or write. However, I hold that they

22、 can communicate. The following examples serve as proofs to support my view.例例2 1）中國人才流失的現(xiàn)狀；）中國人才流失的現(xiàn)狀；2）對人才流失的看法；）對人才流失的看法；3）如何解決人才流失。）如何解決人才流失。Brain Drain in ChinaNowadays, one of the most serious problems China is faced with is brain drain. While shortages of talent trouble many universities and

23、state-owned enterprises, millions of talented people either emigrate to developed countries or work for foreign companies. At the same time, a big crowd of well-educated people who are determined to follow their footsteps take TOEFL or GRE as their passport to the West.第第四部分四部分 寫作中的常用句式寫作中的常用句式 舉例舉例

24、練習練習1 SmokingIt is almost known to all that smoking is bad for peoples health. Scientific researchs show that smoking can lead to heart disease,cancer and other problem.The World Health Organization says diseases linked to smoking kill at least two million five-hundred-thousand persons each year.練習練

25、習2 Health and Life As the saying goes, you don t know what happiness is until you lose it.you don t know what health is until you are ill. “ “Health is of vital importance to life” ” sounds like a cliche to everyone, but it is absolutely true. 第第四部分四部分 寫作中的常用句式寫作中的常用句式 舉例舉例二、二、 中間常用句式（擴展段的連接）中間常用句式（

26、擴展段的連接）通常按重要程度排列，我們習慣于先說最重要的，西方人則通常按重要程度排列，我們習慣于先說最重要的，西方人則相反，但都得符合邏輯順序。相反，但都得符合邏輯順序。1表示表示“首先首先”first, firstly, first of all, to begin ，但不可但不可用用 at first。2表示表示“第二第二”、“此外此外”“”“其次其次”、“況且況且”second, secondly, and, besides, moreover, additionally, furthermore, whats more, in addition, besides+名詞短語，名詞短語，i

27、n addition to+名詞短語，名詞短語，another+名詞短語名詞短語3表示表示 “最后最后”finally, last, lastly, last but not least 最后最后但并非最不重要的是。但不可用但并非最不重要的是。但不可用at last 或或 in the end。4表示表示 “最重要的是最重要的是” above all, most important of all5.表示表示“更嚴重的是更嚴重的是”、“更糟糕的是更糟糕的是” more serious, even worse, to make matter worse6. 表示表示“最為嚴重的是最為嚴重的是”、“

28、最糟糕的是最糟糕的是”most serious of all, worst of all第第四部分四部分 寫作中的常用句式寫作中的常用句式二、二、 中間常用句式（擴展段的連接）中間常用句式（擴展段的連接）例如：例如：1）First of all, 論據(jù)論據(jù)1. More importantly, 論據(jù)論據(jù)2. Most important of all, 論論據(jù)據(jù)3. In summary, 總結觀點總結觀點.2) The advantages can be listed as follows：First, 好處好處1. Besides, 好處好處2. Most important of al

29、l, 好處好處3. But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. To begin with,壞處壞處1. To make matter worse,壞處壞處2. Worst of all,壞處壞處3. From the above analysis, I believe 觀點觀點.3）For one thing, 論據(jù)論據(jù)1. For another, 論據(jù)論據(jù)2. Last but not the least, 論據(jù)論據(jù)3. To conclude, 總結觀點或總結觀點或 From above,

30、we can predict that 預測預測. 4）First of all, 論據(jù)論據(jù)1。 Furthermore, 論據(jù)論據(jù)2。 Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, 論據(jù)論據(jù)3。 A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that總結觀點?？偨Y觀點。 或或 From above, we can predict that 預測預測.第第四部分四部分 寫作中的常用句式寫作中的常用句式例文例文Key to Success In su

31、ch a competitive society, everyone has a strong desire to be successful and in his life. But how to achieve success? In my opinion, there are three main keys a clear objective, strong willpower and diligence. First, it is very important to set up a goal before you start. No one can be successful wit

32、hout a goal in his mind. Besides, you need a strong willpower to keep you go ahead. There always are tough stones in every road to success. Whether you can go through it depends on whether you are persistent enough. Last but not least, everyone who wants to suceed should be diligent. There is and ol

33、d saying, “No pains, no gains.” Most successful people owe their success to hard working, such as Einstein.In conclusion, if we want to be successful, we have to master the three main keys mentioned above.There is no shortcut to success. The three keys will assure you to realize your beautiful dream

34、.第第四部分四部分 寫作中的常用句式寫作中的常用句式練習：練習：Advertisement 1） 廣告給人們帶來的益處。廣告給人們帶來的益處。 2） 廣告給人們帶來的煩惱。廣告給人們帶來的煩惱。Advertisement can be a service to people. First, it is informative, and can help people buy and sell goods. Second, it can widen peoples knowledge, and make people more experienced. Lastly, people can en

35、joy themselves through those programs which advertisements have been put into. Some advertisements, however, are not very useful to people, sometimes even harmful. An advertisement like this, for example, may put thousands of women and girls into trouble. Disillusioned with life, love, marriage? You

36、 need help. Phone me. And the Savior gives his phone number to his sheep. 第第四部分四部分 寫作中的常用句式寫作中的常用句式二、二、 中間常用句式（擴展段的連接）中間常用句式（擴展段的連接） 其他詞語或句式：其他詞語或句式：1）用于強調(diào)：afterall,anyway,infact,indeed,apparently,clearly,obviously,especially,2）用于對比：however,ononehand,ontheotherhand,incontrast,bycontrast,onthecontrar

37、y,while,whereas,instead,but,differentfrom,3）用于比較：similarly,likewise,like,inthesameway,4）用于列舉：forexample,forinstance,suchas,takeforgranted,except(for)5）表示時間：later,then,next,finally,atlast,eventually,meanwhile,afterthat,fromnowon,atthesametime,forthetimebeing,aftersometime,intheend,immediately,intheme

38、antime,recently,soon,nowandthen,during,nowadays,presently,since,assoonas,afterwards,sometimelater,temporally,inthemeanwhile,afterawhile,6）用于解釋：inotherwords,asamatteroffact,thatis,7)用于讓步：although,inspiteof,despite,eventhough,evenif,though,nomatterhow8)用于結果：consequently,thus,asaresult,asaconsequence,h

39、ence,so,therefore,accordingly9)其他：notonlybutalso,asfarasIamconcerned,whenitcomesto,inpractice,inprinciple,anotherkeyaspectofis,itistruethat,whatismoreseriousis,thereisnodoubtthat,butitisapitythat,butthetrouble/problem/pointis第第四部分四部分 寫作中的常用句式寫作中的常用句式二、二、 中間常用句式（擴展段的連接）中間常用句式（擴展段的連接） 其他詞語或句式：其他詞語或句式：

40、例1BrainDraininChina(接開頭)1）中國人才流失的現(xiàn)狀；2）對人才流失的看法；3）如何解決人才流失。However, people see this phenomenon in different perspectives.SomeholdtheopinionthatChinasuffersalotfrombraindrain.Theyargue,ontheonehand,thatbraindrainconsiderablyweakensourinternationalcompetitiveness.Ontheotherhand,theybelievethatthetalent

41、shouldservetheirnativecountryfirst.Incontrast,othershighlighttheadvantagesofinternationalexchangeandcooperation.TheyclaimthatChineseyouthsshouldgoabroadtostudyandgainmoreexperience.Whatsmore,thelong-termbenefitswilloutweighlosseswesuffernow.第第四部分四部分 寫作中的常用句式寫作中的常用句式練習練習1Computer1)計算機的廣泛應用計算機的廣泛應用2)計

42、算機給人們的幫助計算機給人們的幫助3)計算機帶來的問題（無示范）4）我的看法（無示范）Thecomputeriswidelyusedinallfieldsofsociety.Today,whereveryougo,youwillfindcomputersbeingused.Forexample,computersareusedinuniversities,largecorporations,andsmalloffices,etc.Ithasevenenteredthehomesofordinarypeople.Asitisabletostoreandprocessalargeamountofi

43、nformation,thecomputerbringaboutgreatconvenienceandhighefficiencytopeopleofallwalksoflife.Computerscanhelppeopleindifferentways.For example,computerhelpscientistsinanalyzingdataanddoingcomplexcalculation.For another example,computersaremadeuseofbyengineersindesigningaplane,oraspaceship.Besides,compu

44、tersmayalsoplayagreatroleinhelpingchildrenwiththeirlesson.Whateveryouaredoing,youmanyfindcomputerausefulaid.第第四部分四部分 寫作中的常用句式寫作中的常用句式二、二、 中間常用句式（擴展段的連接）中間常用句式（擴展段的連接） 其他詞語或句式：其他詞語或句式：三、結尾常用句式（終結段的連接）三、結尾常用句式（終結段的連接）1表示表示 “總之總之 ”、 “總而言之總而言之 ”、 “簡言之簡言之 ”in conclusion, in summary, to conclude, to summa

45、rize, to sum up, in short, in brief, in a word, on the whole2“綜上所述綜上所述 ”from the foregoing, from what has been discussed above, from what has been mentioned above, from the above analysisObviously（此為過渡短語）（此為過渡短語）, we can draw the conclusion thatThus, it can be concluded that, Therefore, we can find

46、thatObviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.第第四部分四部分 寫作中的常用句式寫作中的常用句式三、結尾常用句式（終結段的連接）三、結尾常用句式（終結段的連接）例例1 Vacation, Long or ShortOne the whole, eit

47、her long or short vacation has its advantages and disadvantages. What matters is how to make use of it.例例2 Good Health1身體健康的重要性。身體健康的重要性。2保持健康的途徑。保持健康的途徑。3我自己的實踐。我自己的實踐。 As for me, I like playing tennis in the morning. I also attach much importance to enough sleep and relaxation. I believe this will

48、 ensure my good health for the rest of my life.例例3 Hope Project希望工程希望工程In my opinion, this project is of great importance to our country at the present time. And it also will have a profound effect on the future achievements of our country. I suggest that more work be done so that every child in the

49、 countryside can receive elementary education.練習：練習：Is Failure a Bad ThingIn my opinion, failure is not a bad thing, the really bad thing is taking a failure as failure or even lose our heart after failure. 第第四部分四部分 寫作中的常用句式寫作中的常用句式1 1對立觀點式對立觀點式1）有人贊成X. 2）有人反對X. 3）我的看法。第第五部分五部分 寫作寫作模式模式一一、議論文議論文例文：1

50、. 很多人認為有必要舉行英語口語考試，理由是 2. 也有人持不同意見， 3. 我的看法和打算 Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? Different people have different opinions about the necessity of a test of spoken English in the College English Test. Some people believe that a test of spoken English is necessary because spoken English is an impo

51、rtant part of language. Only when one speaks fluent English can we say that he has really a command of the language. So a test ought to be devised to assess the learners ability in spoken English.Other people, however, think that a test of written English is enough and test of spoken English is not

52、necessary at all. They hold that ones competence in English can be shown in a test of written English, and a test of spoken English will be difficult to carry out, and will, moreover, add to the burden of the students.In my opinion, a test of spoken English is absolutely necessary, because I believe

53、 it is of great importance for every foreign language learner to speak the language with fluency. For one thing, more and more foreigners are coming to China every year, a large number of people who can speak English fluently are badly needed in all walks of life. For another, the four skills, liste

54、ning, speaking, reading and writing in language learning are closely related. A test of spoken English will stimulate the other skills in English learning. 第第五部分五部分 寫作寫作模式模式一一、議論文議論文1 1對立觀點式對立觀點式模式模式1Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsabout（討論主題）.Somepeoplebelieve(argue,recognize,think)that（觀點1）.Bu

55、totherpeopletakeanoppositeside.Theyfirmlybelievethat(觀點2)./Otherpeople,however,thinkthat（觀點2）Asforme,Iagreewiththeformer/latteridea.(Iaminfavorofthefirst/secondidea.)(Thefollowingarethereasonsof/formychoice/personalinclination.)Firstofall,(論據(jù)1).Moreimportantly,(論據(jù)2).Mostimportantofall,.(論據(jù)3).Insumma

56、ry,(總結觀點).Asacollegestudent,Iamsupposedto(表決心).或Fromabove,wecanpredictthat(預測).第第五部分五部分 寫作寫作模式模式一一、議論文議論文1 1對立觀點式對立觀點式模式模式2Peoplesideas/opinions/viewson（討論主題）varyfrompersontoperson.Somepeoplehold/thinkthat.(觀點1).Fromtheirpointofview,.However,othershold/thinkthat(觀點2).Intheiropinion,./Yetotherpeopled

57、ontthinkinthisway.Theyarguethat(觀點2).AsfarasIamconcerned,theformer/latteropinionholdsmoreweight.Foronething,(論據(jù)1).Foranother,(論據(jù)2).Lastbutnottheleast,(論據(jù)3)./Firstofall,(論據(jù)1)。Furthermore,(論據(jù)2)。Amongallofthesupportingevidences,oneisthestrongest.Thatis,(論據(jù)3)。Toconclude,(總結觀點).Asacollegestudent,Iamsuppo

58、sedto(表決心).或Fromabove,wecanpredictthat(預測).模式模式3Differentpeoplehavedifferentviewson(討論主題).Somepeoplethinkthat（觀點1）.Otherpeopleholdthat(觀點2).Thosewhoholdthefirstopinionthinkthat（觀點1）(論據(jù)1，2，3)Onthecontrary,thosewhoholdthesecondviewthinkthat（觀點2）(論據(jù)1，2，3)Asforme,Iagreewiththeformer/latteropinion.(論據(jù)1，2

59、，3)ThereforeIholdthat(觀點觀點1/2.)第第五部分五部分 寫作寫作模式模式一一、議論文議論文1 1對立觀點式對立觀點式DoLuckyNumbersReallyBringGoodLuck? Some people take it for granted thatsomenumberscanbringthemgoodluck.Forinstance,theso-calledluckynumber“8”iswidelypreferredbymostofthepeople.Whentheyinstallatelephone,orbuyacellphone,orchoosethel

60、icenseplatefortheircar,manypeopletrytogetasmany“8”aspossible.Theythinkthatthenumber“8”canbringthemgoodluckandagreatfortune.Yet other people dont think in this way. Theyarguethatnumbersarenothingbutakindofsymbolusedforcounting.Numbershavenothingtodowithgoodluck.Itissuperstitioustoconnectoneslifewitht