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1、Teachi ng Pla n for Tran slati on Title of Lesson:lntroduction of C-E Translation and Translation Principle Week 1-2 Time Needed: four periods (45 minutes per period Teaching ObjectivesHelp the students to understand the C-E (Chinese into English) Translation principle 文檔收 集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人學習 Key Teaching

2、Points1. The three C-E translation principle2. Translation is not a word for word activity Difficult Teaching Points:1. Translation concerns the exchange of both Ianguages & culture文檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人學習2. The three C-E translation principles Teaching Contents:Leading in: examples from some senior stud

3、entthesis文 檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人學習山姆是個什么樣的人呢？What person is Sam? 改成 What kind of person is Sam?你能忍受一位丈夫總是樂于助人卻對自己應(yīng)該負擔的家庭責任從不放在心上嗎？Can you put up with a husba nd be ready to an ybody's bus in ess but his own? And to do nothing about family duty?文檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人學習改成 Can you put up with a husba nd who is ready

4、 to an ybody 'bus in ess but his own? Nobody can sta nd a husband who never considers his family duty seriously.文檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人學習很多人都認為父愛如山。Many people hold that father "slove like a hill.文檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人學習改成 Many people hold that father 's love is like a hill. (like 作為"像。一樣”的意思是個介詞 )文檔

5、收 集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人學習如果山姆能夠成為一個勤勞而實際的人，我相信他的家庭不會那么不幸福和不圓滿，并且他們倆也不會互相傷害。If Sam can be a hard-working and reality man, I believe his family won Sbe so tragedy and dissatisfy, and they won Shurt each other, too.文檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人學習改成 If Sam can be a hard-working and practical man, I believe his family won S be so

6、tragic and dissatisfied, and they won Shurt each other, too.文檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人學習I. Translation is not a word for word activity1. 相比之下，這個軟件的設(shè)計不夠人性化。By comparis on, the desig n of this software is no thuma ni zed( user-frie ndly) eno ugh.文檔收集自 網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人學習2. 如果你開了一家上市公司，想要讓你的股票升值，你必須吸引投資者和分析家的注 意力。You must d

7、raw the attention of investors and analysts if you have a company on sale (a public or listed compa ny) and expect to in crease its stock valu文檔 收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人學習3. 我們現(xiàn)在是萬事俱備，只欠東風。We've got all ready exceptan east win d(the catalyst催化劑).文檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人學習4. 因為這場雪暴，他們一年的勞作付之東流。Because of the snowstorm,

8、they gave a whole year of labor to the eastward river.(they labored a whole year for no thi ng)文檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人學習5. 個人主義不但會害自己，而且有礙工作。In dividualism(改成 self-ce ntered nessor egoce ntricity) not only pois ons on eself but also hin ders work.文檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人學習6. drink like fish (豪飲),feel at sea感覺如墜云霧，迷茫得很)，

9、守口如瓶(as tight as an oyster), 天涯何處無芳草(There is plenty more fish in the sea,糟糠之妻(a humble wife), 喝西北風(go hungry,不要翻譯成drink west wind,不僅搭配不對，而且west wind在英 國的含義跟中國完全不一樣，西風溫暖而濕潤，帶來生機與活力，這才有了雪萊的 Ode to the west wind), 揮金如土 ( spend money like wate),宣傳咅E( ministry of propaganda? No. Ministry of publicity )文

10、檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人學習II. Collocation 搭配A. 動賓搭配做手術(shù) perform an operation做家務(wù) do household chores檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人學習犯錯誤(make a mistake 犯心臟病(suffer from a heart attack 犯罪(commit a crime)文檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人學習接受高等教育 receive a higher educati on接受他們的價值觀 accept their values文檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人學習B. 偏正搭配嚴明的紀律(rigid disciplines ) 險勝(a n

11、arrow win or victory) 熟睡(fast or sound asleep 文檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人學習深山(不要說 deep mountains,可以用 remote or isolated mountains文檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人 學習完全醒著(wide wake) 完全相同(much the same完全值得(well worth )文檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人學習充分意識到(be well aware of or that, fully realize that ) 文檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人學習可能性很大(have a strong possibility or

12、a high probability to do sth)文檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人 學習III. C-E translation principle1 漢語譯成地道英語的難度，出現(xiàn)各種各樣的缺失：“中國式”英語(解決辦法，閱讀大量原作，觀察、揣摩、總結(jié)并模仿英語的特點、規(guī)律和表達方法)。文檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人學習2 遵循三條原則：1) 譯文必須符合英語的語法：三種軸心結(jié)構(gòu)：a. 王一系一表結(jié)構(gòu)(S+V+P)例：a) 人類在地球上已存在多久了？How long has man bee n on earth?b) 牛奶變酸了。Milk turns sour.b. There be 結(jié)構(gòu) (表

13、示存在有的概念， seem (appear) to be, seem, appear, stand, lie, get, become, arise, come文檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人學習例：a) 計算機有點毛病。 There is someth ing the matter with the compute文檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人 學習b) 隨著國民經(jīng)濟和國防事業(yè)的發(fā)展，對通信提出了新的要求。As our national economyand n atio nal defe nee develop, there arises a new dema nd for com muni cat

14、ion文檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅 用于個人學習c) 從理論上講，供應(yīng)這么多水似乎不成問題。In theory there seems to be no problem in suppl ying this amount of water文檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人學習c. 主-謂-賓結(jié)構(gòu)（S+ V+0）a）主謂（主語+不及物動詞）e.g. Wheels turn.車輪轉(zhuǎn)動。b）主謂賓 eg： Men turns wheels.人們轉(zhuǎn)動車輪。c）主謂賓 eg：Cows give us milk （give milk to us）. to ask a favor of sb. to ask sb. for

15、a favor文檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅 用于個人學習d）主-謂-賓-賓補（可由名詞，形，副詞，動詞不定式，分詞，分詞短語，介詞短語 等構(gòu)成）eg： Thunder turns milk sour.打雷使牛奶變酸。文檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人學習2）譯文必須符合英語的習慣表達（英語慣用法，避免中國式英語）：例如：a. 百聞不如一見。See ing is believ ing.c.精神文明 spiritual civilization （含宗教色彩）ethical a nd cultural progress 文檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅 用于個人學習g. 我認為他不夠格。I don' think he is qualified.h. 人們來五臺山，目的可不都是一樣。People do not come to Wutai Mountain with one and the same purpose.檔收集自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，僅用于個人學習3）譯文應(yīng)體現(xiàn)英語遣詞造句的特點，同時又應(yīng)因文體而有變化。a. 名詞使用頻率高，特別