模塊主題寫作十一

1、模塊主題寫作十一話題分析本模塊以“Photos”為話題，從人們在生活中所熟悉的照片展開，使學(xué)生學(xué)會描述自己印象最深的照片。素材積累1The photo which we liked best in the City and People group was taken by Zhao Min.在“城市與人”這組照片中，我們最喜愛的是由趙敏拍攝的。2A group of photos which show Beijing and Cambridge in England has won the prize for the subject Home and Away.一組展示北京和英格蘭劍橋的照片

2、獲得了主題為“故鄉(xiāng)與他鄉(xiāng)”的獎項(xiàng)。3He's the boy who won the photo competition last year!他就是去年贏得攝影比賽的那個男生！4Thanks to everyone who entered the competition. 感謝所有參賽者。5Even though all of the photos are excellent, we are sorry to say that we can't give prizes to everyone.盡管所有的照片都很出色，但是我們只能遺憾地告訴大家我們不能給所有人都頒獎。6. Thi

3、s is a photo which I took last summer in Suzhou.這是我去年夏天在蘇州拍的照片。7. He is one of the best­known Chinese photographers in the world today.現(xiàn)在他是世界上最著名的中國攝影師之一。8. The photo which I like best shows我最喜歡的照片展示了9His famous photos are on show in the museum.他的著名照片正在博物館展出。10. Compared with other years, we re

4、ceived many more photos.和往年相比，我們收到了更多的照片。11Whatever you do, don't miss this exhibition.無論你做什么，都不要錯過這次展覽。假如你是某英文報(bào)社的記者，愛好攝影。下面兩張照片分別是三年前和上周你到這個小山村采訪時(shí)拍攝的，發(fā)現(xiàn)這個村莊發(fā)生了很大的變化。過去：村民們生活困難，房屋低矮陳舊，交通不便，孩子們上學(xué)要走很遠(yuǎn)的路?，F(xiàn)在：老百姓生活富裕了，有樓房、汽車，村里修建了新學(xué)校，孩子們現(xiàn)在都免費(fèi)上學(xué)了，也吃上了免費(fèi)午餐，高速公路(highway)也通了，這些變化都是政府實(shí)施新農(nóng)村政策(New Countrysi

5、de Policy)的成果。請你以“A Beautiful Village”為題，用英文寫一篇80詞左右的短文，報(bào)道這個村莊這幾年來的變化。要求：意思連貫，過渡自然，不要逐字翻譯。思路呈現(xiàn)遣詞造句短語： 1.對感興趣 _ 2. 拍照 _ 3發(fā)生 _ 4過去常常 _ 5have to _ 6by car _ 7free lunch _ 8thanks to _ 句型： 1.Here arewhich_2I'm so surprised that_3There used to be_4There is/are sth. doing_5Thanks to， great changes wil

6、l lead us to_高分模板名師點(diǎn)評A Beautiful Village I'm a reporter. I am interested in taking photos. Here_are_two_photos_which_I_took_in_the_same_village. I'm_so_surprised_that_great_changes_have_taken_place_these_years. Three years ago, I went to a very poor village. I found that the villagers had a

7、hard life. There_used_to_be_old_and_low_houses_on_the_streets. There wasn't convenient traffic and the children had to walk a long way to school.Today, I come to the same village. The villagers are living a happy life. Some_buildings_have_been_built. Many people have bought their own cars, so th

8、ey go out by car. A new school has been built. Children can go to school without paying and they can have free lunch at school. Also, there is a highway running through the village.Thanks_to_our_government's_New_Countryside_Policy,_great changes will lead us to have a better life.倒裝句是介紹事物的常用語，給文

9、章增色不少。“be surprisedthat從句”體現(xiàn)了作者對村莊巨變的驚訝。“There used to be”是there be結(jié)構(gòu)的特殊用法，說明那時(shí)的房屋是多么陳舊矮小。準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)的被動語態(tài)，語法知識扎實(shí)。thanks to短語強(qiáng)調(diào)了政府的導(dǎo)向作用。某英文雜志社正在舉辦以“My favourite photo”為題的征文比賽。假設(shè)右面是你第一次參加乒乓球比賽時(shí)拍的一張照片，請根據(jù)所給提示，并發(fā)揮你的想象，寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。提示：1.照片拍攝的時(shí)間及地點(diǎn)；2照片背后的故事及你受到的啟發(fā)等。My favourite photoHello, ev

10、eryone! This is my favourite photo._在過去的日子里，我們曾經(jīng)歡笑，也曾經(jīng)哭泣照片，或?qū)⑦@些精彩定格，或勾起你對往事的回憶。某英語網(wǎng)站向你發(fā)出邀請，請你根據(jù)要求用英語寫一篇文章，分享你的照片背后的故事。要求：1故事必須是原創(chuàng)；280詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。參考要點(diǎn)：1描述你的照片(時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，人物)；2分享你的故事(起因，經(jīng)過，結(jié)果)；3談?wù)勀愕母惺?感動，懷念，影響)。This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo, _詳解詳析【典例分析】遣

11、詞造句1be interested in2. take photos3. take place4. used to 5不得不6. 乘汽車 7. 免費(fèi)午餐8. 多虧【小試身手1】One possible version：My favourite photoHello, everyone! This is my favourite photo. It was taken when I first took part in the school table tennis competition. In the picture, I was playing at that moment. I look

12、 very nervous and careful.To tell the truth, I liked playing table tennis, but I was afraid to play in the competition. My friends encouraged me to have a try. At last, I agreed. I practised so hard for the competition that I won first prize in the end. From the experience I have learned that nothin

13、g is impossible if you put your heart into it.【小試身手2】One possible version：This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo, I was 10 while my dad looked younger. At that time, we were playing ping­pong happily.I used to be a ping­pong player. My dad trained me so hard, though he was tired after a day's work. Once, I lost a game and I felt so sad that I wanted to give up. My father said nothing, sitting quietly with me. The next morning, I found a piece of paper. It said