《高考作文典型范例》ppt課件

1、書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練一一 One day my parents went to work in One day my parents went to work in the fields and my little sister and Ar Fu the fields and my little sister and Ar Fu followed them. While my parents were followed them. While my parents were working, my sister walked to the river and working, my si

2、ster walked to the river and Ar Fu followed her. Ar Fu followed her. She saw a beautiful flower on the She saw a beautiful flower on the bank of the river. She decided to pick it. bank of the river. She decided to pick it. She fell into the river. When Ar Fu saw that, She fell into the river. When A

3、r Fu saw that, it barked and jumped into the river quickly. it barked and jumped into the river quickly. One day, followed by my little sister and Ar Fu, my parents went to work in the fields. While my parents were working, my sister , with nothing to do, walked to the riverside nearby with Ar Fu. A

4、t the sight of a beautiful flower on the river bank, she wanted to pick it. However, she fell into the river. Seeing that, Ar Fu barked and jumped into the water as soon as possible.書面表達(dá)評分規(guī)范： 高考考試闡明中的評分規(guī)范 評分原那么： 評分時，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和言語質(zhì)量初步確定其檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。 評分時應(yīng)思索：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，上下文的銜接，詞匯和句式的多樣性 及言語的準(zhǔn)確性

5、。句式的多樣性 to improve your passageThe cat crept slowly through the grass.The cat was watching the mouse the whole time.The gold was hidden under the ground.It was safe for many years.Watching the mouse the whole time, the cat crept slowly through the grass. Hidden under the floorboards, the gold was sa

6、fe for many years. There is a girl. She is sitting between us. 2. This is a book. The book was bought yesterday. There is a girl who is sitting between us.This is a book which was bought yesterday.Rewrite following sentences3. 走在大街上，他遇見了一個老朋友走在大街上，他遇見了一個老朋友. While he was walking in the street, he me

7、t an old friend.4. _, the city looks beautiful.Walking in the street從天空中看，When it is seen from the sky, the city looks beautiful.Seen from the sky由于不知道他的，他無法與Tom獲得聯(lián)絡(luò)。Not knowing his telephone number, he cant get in touch with Tom.readingsleepingshoesbarkingcatdumbfoundedadj.目瞪口呆目瞪口呆要點(diǎn)：要點(diǎn)：1老人穿著拖鞋讀報老人

8、穿著拖鞋讀報, 狗在邊上睡覺。狗在邊上睡覺。2 老人想出門，叫老人想出門，叫狗拿鞋。狗拿鞋。3 狗閉著眼睛，一狗閉著眼睛，一動動 不動，汪汪直叫，不動，汪汪直叫， 老人很疑惑。老人很疑惑。4 貓嘴里叼著鞋走貓嘴里叼著鞋走進(jìn)進(jìn) 來，老人目瞪口來，老人目瞪口呆。呆。參考詞語參考詞語: slippers (拖鞋拖鞋)readingsleepingAn old man was sitting in an armchair at home,reading his newspaper. Beside him lay a dog, sleeping soundly.catdumbfoundedadj.目瞪口

9、呆目瞪口呆Seeing the cat, he was totally dumbfounded.The fire is burning, so I feel warm.I lost my bike, so I had to walk home.With the fire burning, I feel warm.With my bike lost, I had to walk home.My mother sat in a chair with a newspaper in her hand. She left without saying goodbye.He died with his w

10、ork still unfinished.Welcome to my home. A well-prepared room is waiting for you. Inside, there is a separate bathroom and all necessary furniture.Welcome to my home. A well-prepared room with a separate bathroom and all necessary furniture is waiting for you.readingsleepingshoesbarkingcatdumbfounde

11、dadj.目瞪口呆目瞪口呆要點(diǎn)：要點(diǎn)：1老人穿著拖鞋讀報老人穿著拖鞋讀報, 狗在邊上睡覺。狗在邊上睡覺。2 老人想出門，叫老人想出門，叫狗拿鞋。狗拿鞋。3 狗閉著眼睛，一狗閉著眼睛，一動動 不動，汪汪直叫，不動，汪汪直叫， 老人很疑惑。老人很疑惑。4 貓嘴里叼著鞋走貓嘴里叼著鞋走進(jìn)進(jìn) 來，老人目瞪口來，老人目瞪口呆。呆。參考詞語參考詞語: slippers (拖鞋拖鞋)dogshoesslippers (拖鞋拖鞋)with his slippers ondogbarkeyesclosedwith two eyes closedcatdumbfoundedadj.目瞪口呆目瞪口呆shoeswit

12、h the pair of shoes in its mouthwritingreadingsleepingshoesbarkingcatdumbfoundedadj.目瞪口呆目瞪口呆要點(diǎn)：要點(diǎn)：1老人穿著拖鞋讀報老人穿著拖鞋讀報, 狗在邊上睡覺。狗在邊上睡覺。2 老人想出門，叫老人想出門，叫狗拿鞋。狗拿鞋。3 狗閉著眼睛，一狗閉著眼睛，一動動 不動，汪汪直叫，不動，汪汪直叫， 老人很疑惑。老人很疑惑。4 貓嘴里叼著鞋走貓嘴里叼著鞋走進(jìn)進(jìn) 來，老人目瞪口來，老人目瞪口呆。呆。參考詞語參考詞語: slippers (拖鞋拖鞋)An old man was sitting in an armchair at home, reading his newspaper. Beside him lay a dog, sleeping soundly. Suddenly the old man decided to leave home for a while, but he couldnt go out with his slippers on. So he woke up the dog to get the shoes for him. Out of his expectation, the dog just barked with two ey