新目標八年級英語上冊書面表達訓(xùn)練上

1、八年級上冊書面表達訓(xùn)練作文指導(dǎo)加范例點評與練習( 上)Unit1 Where did you go on vacation ?寫作指南本單元的寫作任務(wù)是寫關(guān)于假期活動的文章。寫這樣的文章時，要從以下幾個方面入手：1你在哪兒度的假期？2在假期期間你做什么了？3那兒的天氣怎么樣？4你認為那兒的人怎么樣？5你喜歡那兒的食物嗎？為什么？由于寫的活動已經(jīng)過去，故時態(tài)用一般過去時。常用句型：1I went to.on vacation.2The food there was.3The people there were.去年的暑假你是怎樣度過的？去了什么地方？那里的食物怎么樣？那里的人怎么樣？有哪些有趣的

2、或難忘的事情發(fā)生？和大家分享一下吧。請運用本單元所學(xué)知識，寫一篇關(guān)于假期活動的短文。I still remembered my last summer vacation. My family and I went to see my grandparents in the countryside. The weather there was nice. Sometimes I went to the mountains with my grandfather. Sometimes I went swimming by myself. My grandmother cooked deliciou

3、s food for us every day. In the evening，we all sat together and watched TV.What a great time we had!點評：作者用I still remembered my last summer vacation引入正題，介紹了在暑假期間和家人去鄉(xiāng)下看望祖父母的經(jīng)歷。重點介紹了在鄉(xiāng)下的活動，講述得條理有序。其中sometimes的使用，使文中內(nèi)容更為豐富。最后以What a great time we had！結(jié)尾，既寫出了自己的感受，又對全文進行了總結(jié)。寫作練習 Unit1假設(shè)你是張杰。你父母去過世界上許多地

4、方旅游。然而，給你印象最深的是巴黎之旅。請根據(jù)下面表格提示，以The trip to Paris為題寫一篇70字左右的文章。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 參考范文： Paris ，F(xiàn)ranceTimeLast summer vacationHong you stay thereFor four daysWhat you didvisited the Eiffel Tower ,tasted delicious wine and bought something niceFeelingtired but excited The trip Paris My name is Zhang Jie. My

5、 parent and I visited many big city around the world.But the trip to Pais,France was the most exciting one.We went to Pais last summer vacation.We got there by plane and stayed there for five days.When we were in Paris,we visited the Eiffel Tower and many other places of interest there.All of us had

6、 a great time.Paris is famous for its delicious wine.So we tasted it.Later,we bought something nice and went to parties.Although the trip seemed to be short and we were tired,we felt excited.Unit 2How often do you exercise?寫作指南本單元是寫關(guān)于介紹某人進行某活動的文章。通常以記敘文的形式體現(xiàn)。寫此文章時，應(yīng)注意：一、可以開篇點題，在文章的開始交代人物，然后再進一步詳細敘述情

7、況。如做了什么事，多久做一次等，使文章內(nèi)容具體、充實。二、合理選用人稱，記敘文可以用第一人稱，也可以用第三人稱來寫。人稱不同，其利弊不同。用第一人稱行文，文章比較生動、形象，它給讀者身臨其境的感覺，但其敘述的范圍受到一定的限制。因為它無法同時敘述發(fā)生在不同地方的事件。用第三人稱行文，沒有這種局限性，但是，用第三人稱很難把不同地點的不同人物發(fā)生的事件排列恰當。具體用哪種人稱，需要根據(jù)作文的要求來處理。三、在結(jié)束時，可以用一兩句話點明所敘述事情的作用。下表列出了你的四個朋友喜歡的活動和他們做這些活動的頻率，請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫一篇文章描述一下。NameActivityHow oftenJohnPlay

8、ing basketballAlmost every dayDavidSurfing the InternetOnce two weeksHan MeiShoppingThree times a weekLi PingReading in the libraryOnce a week_There are fifty students in our class.John，David，Han Mei and Li Ping are my best friends.Let me tell you what they like doing best.John likes playing basketb

9、all best.He plays it almost every day.He says basketball is very exciting，but he doesn't care about the results of the game.David likes surfing the Internet，but his parents don't want him to play with the computer too often.So he surfs the Internet once two weeks.Han Mei likes shopping best.

10、She does shopping three times a week.Li Ping likes reading in the library.She goes there once a week.What about you？What do you like doing best？How often do you do it?點評：開篇點題，說明作者的好朋友喜歡的活動，從而為下文做好鋪墊。按照表格，運用恰當?shù)亩陶Z和句子描述了他們的具體活動，并寫出了從事這些活動的頻率，同時加進了對這些活動的評價，顯得豐滿不空洞。最后兩句緊扣上文，起到了與上文相呼應(yīng)的作用。習作練習： Unit 2 某報社學(xué)

11、生習作欄目正在向廣大學(xué)生征文。請以Lets do exercise together為題，根據(jù)以下提示，寫一運動的重要性保持健康保持良好心態(tài).上學(xué)時步行或騎自行車體育課做各種鍛煉（跑步、打籃球.）周末與朋友去爬山、游泳等.篇60-80詞的短文，向該欄目投稿。開頭已給出，不計入總次數(shù)。參考范文： Lets do exercise together.Its very important for us to do exercise.Doing exercise can make us healthy and help us keep happy.Whats more,taking exercise

12、is good for our study.We can do many kinds of exercise whenever we want.It is good for us to go to school on foot or by bike.During PE class,we can do exercise such as running jumping playing basketball and so on.On weekends,we can climb mountains or go swimming with our friends.Also,we can go hikin

13、g during the vacations.Lets do exercise and have a healthy lifestyle together!Unit 3I'm more outgoing than my sister.寫作指南本單元的寫作是記述人與人之間的異同的。在寫這樣的文章時，要抓住所要比較的人物的特點，從外貌特征、個性特點等方面進行描述。指出哪些方面具有相同點，哪些方面具有不同點，并正確使用形容詞的比較級進行比較和分析，從而增進人與人之間的了解和友誼。寫作時，語言要簡練，對比要鮮明。可以先介紹一人，再介紹另一人；也可以同時就某一方面對雙方進行對比。以My Best

14、 Friend and I 為題寫一篇短文，比較自己與好朋友的特征，不少于60詞。My Best Friend and ILinda is my best friend. In some ways we look the same and in some ways we look different. We both have black eyes and black hair. She is taller than IAlso she is more careful. I am more outgoing than her，and I'm funnier. We both have

15、a good habit. Linda likes reading and I do，too. So you see，I like friends who have the same habits as me.點評：開頭點明Linda是最好的朋友。接著點出我和好朋友的相同與不同之處，注重運用了本單元的重點語法比較級。最后談了自己的交友觀，從而突出主題。習作練習：健康的生活方式對我們的影響到底有多大？看看Henry的變化，你就知道答案了。請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容的提示，以“A healthy lifestyle is important”為題，寫一篇不少于70詞的短文。來描述Henry的變化。TimeTw

16、o years agoNowHabithave much meat and colalike vegetables and fruitHealthHardly ever exercise;often feel tiredRun every morning;feel wellStudyWeak in all the subjectsMake great progress(進步）in every subjects 參考范文： A healthy lifestyle is importantTwo years ago,Henry had much meat and he liked drinking

17、 cola very much.he hardly ever exercised because he thought it was boring.So he often felt tired.He was weak in all his subjects.But he is different now.He likes vegetables and fruit very much.He runs every morning with his father in the park to keep healthy.So he feels well.And he is making great p

18、rogress in every subject.Unit 4What's the best movie theater?寫作指南本單元是寫對事物或人物進行比較的文章。通過比較，突出事物的特點，更好地表現(xiàn)文章的主題。在寫這樣的文章時，要抓住事物或人物的特征，即抓住這個事物或人物區(qū)別于其他事物或人物的不同特點，從共性中發(fā)現(xiàn)個性，從一般中找到特殊。事物或人物的特征往往在同別的事物或人物的相比較中顯示出來。寫作時要正確運用本單元的比較等級。學(xué)校舉辦藝術(shù)節(jié)，請寫一篇有關(guān)才藝展示的文章。要求：描寫三種或三種以上的節(jié)目并對節(jié)目進行評價。詞數(shù)：6080。The Talent ShowThe Famo

19、us People Talent Show was fantastic. The funniest performer was Jim Carrey. He sang a cute song as he danced to quiet music. His dance was cheerful and funny. Tom Smith was the quietest performer. He played dumb show which was very interesting. Susan won the prize for the best performer. She played

20、a wonderful violin piece.點評：提取出所給提示中的信息，先對所有節(jié)目進行總體介紹，然后對節(jié)目進行了比較，主要運用了最高級，使節(jié)目特色更加突出。習作練習假設(shè)上周你對你家周圍的幾家服裝店進行了一次調(diào)查，調(diào)查結(jié)果如下表所示。請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，寫一篇調(diào)查報告，要求不少于70詞。NameQuality(質(zhì)量)PriceServiceRed StarbesthighestgoodSunshine Clothes StoregoodlowworstBlue Skynot very goodlowestbest 參考范文 There are three clothes stores in

21、 my neighborhood:Red Star,Sunshine Clothes Store and Blue Sky.what do people think of them? Last week,I did a service about three stores.Here are the results.Red Star has the best but the most expensive clothes.Its service is very good.The clothes in Sunshine Clothes Store are good and the price are

22、 low.But the service there is the worst.In Blue Sky,people can buy the cheapest clothes,and it has the best service.But the clothes there are not very good.Unit 5Do you want to watch a game show?寫作指南本單元的寫作任務(wù)是寫對電視節(jié)目或時尚物品發(fā)表自己的觀點和看法，從而體現(xiàn)自己的喜好。寫作時要注意：1時態(tài)要用一般現(xiàn)在時。2寫出你所喜歡的電視節(jié)目或時尚物品。3寫出喜歡的原因或理由來充實文章。要注意運用表達

23、觀點、態(tài)度的詞語，如：like，can't stand等。常用句型：1What do you think of.?2I don't mind.3Can you please do.?4Sb .thinks.對不同類型的電視節(jié)目，如連續(xù)劇、體育節(jié)目、訪談節(jié)目等，你有什么看法？請就此寫一篇短文，闡述一下你的觀點。要求：1.詞數(shù)不少于50詞。2節(jié)目種類：至少三種以上。On weekends，I like watching TV.I love sports shows because I like sports very much. I like to watch Soccer Night and Sports News. And I like game shows，too. They are interesting and sometimes they are exciting. But I don't like soap operas. They are usually long