MyDefinitionofSuccess

1、My Definition of SuccessByBaoJinlong鮑金龍專家點(diǎn)評(píng)：演講開頭點(diǎn)題,直截了當(dāng),緊扣主題,語言較簡(jiǎn)潔,運(yùn)用修辭得 體.Itiseasytodescribesuccessintermsofmoney ,fameandreputation.ButIbelievethatsuccessisnotexternal.Ibelievethatsuc cesscomesfromwithin.Mydefinitionofsuccessistobetruetoyourself,andbetruetoothers.Thatmeans ,thatyoumustcherishyourp

2、ersonalidealeveninthefaceofadversity.Ialsobeli evethatsuccessisnotdiscriminatory.SuccessisnotrestrictedtosuchaCLASSofpeople , infact , itmaybeachievedbyanypersonirrespectiveofhisrace , creed , genderandeconomicbackground.AgoodexampleofsuccessisthatofBeethoven.He isoneoftheworld'smostfamouscompos

3、ers ,yethewasdeaf.Hecouldnothearthemajesticpiecesofmusicthathecreated.Yet ,inthefaceofthisadversity hewasabletomaintainhisideals-thatofcomposingmusic.ToexemplifywhatsuccessmeanstomeIposeaquestiontoallofyou.Whatbringsustogetherheretoday?Ibelievethatit isthebeautyofthespokenword.Theeffectofpauseandthe

4、soundofrhetoricareun iquetothespokenword.Ibelievethebeautyofthespokenwordisevenstrongerfor thosewhohavedifficultyinexpressingthemselves.Thesepeoplearereclusivea ndhadtheiremotionshiddenwithinthem.IoncewenttoAustraliaandIsawtwopict ures , Oncewasdrawnbyanormalchild , theotherwasdrawnbyachildwithsocia

5、linhibitions.Thepicturedrawnbythenor malchildwassimpleandplain.Theotherwaslife-like fullofdetailsandimagination.Whatthisshowsisthattheseareideas emotionsandfeelingsthatarelockedinternallyinthesechildren.Myidealistobethekeyspreadingthebeautyofthespokenwordstothesechildren.Thesechildrenhavebe enneglec

6、ted , butIfeelthatIcanandshouldhelpthesechildrentofindthemselvesandbeableto expressthemselves.Irealizethatthisisadifficulttask,andtherearemanyobstaclesontheway.ButIbelieveinmyidealsandIwi11stickto them-eveninthefaceofadversity.Weshouldneverhaveaprematureabortionofi deals-letthechild , letourideals ,

7、 standthechallenge.Foralifewithoutidealsisnotliving.Thankyou!譯文:成功之我見用金錢、名譽(yù)和聲望來描述成功,這很簡(jiǎn)單.但我相信成功不是外在的,我 相信成功來源于自身.我對(duì)成功的定義是對(duì)已老實(shí),待人真誠(chéng).這就意味著即使 面臨困境厄運(yùn),你都必須堅(jiān)守自己的理想.我同樣相信成功沒有偏見,成功不屬 于某一類人,事實(shí)上,不管種族、宗教信仰、性別和經(jīng)濟(jì)背景,任何人都能夠獲得.貝多芬的成功就是個(gè)很好的例子. 他是世界上最著名的作曲家之一, 而他卻雙耳失聰.他無法聽到自己創(chuàng)作出的美妙樂章.然而,身想象.這說明這些孩子的思想、情緒和感受都封閉在他們的內(nèi)心深處.我的理想是成為向這些孩子傳播話語世界美好的鑰匙.這些孩子曾被我們忽 視,但我覺得我能夠也應(yīng)該幫助他們發(fā)現(xiàn)和熟悉自己, 并且能夠表達(dá)自己的想法.我知