山西省2012高考英語二輪復習專題訓練短文改錯+寫作(2)

1、山西省 2012 高考英語二輪復習專題訓練：短文改錯+寫作（ 2）短文改錯假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有 10 處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（ ），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意： 1每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10 處，多者（從第11 處起）不計分。I am a senior high school student To my opinion, the classroom is a p

2、lace forstudents to gain knowledges So quietness is badly need for us to learn in theclassroom But recently somestudents has brought their mobile phones to the classroom and we often hear of thering of mobile phonesSome of them even wasted precious time in class type shortmessages on the mobilephone

3、s To keep the classroomquietlyand make us focusmoreon our studies, I suggest that mobile phones be used in the classroom At least,they shouldn t be used where we are having a class書面表達假如你是 Li Hua ，擔任學生會主席，你校剛在10月10日舉行完首屆校園外語節(jié)，請你按以下內容要點準備一篇英語稿，投遞到英文報，stCentury 。The 21目的： 為了豐富校園生活，提高同學們學習外語的積極性，校學生會特舉

4、辦首用心愛心專心1屆校園外語節(jié)。參賽形式：以班級為單位參加。活動內容：英文演講，英文歌曲和英語短劇比賽?；顒硬门校罕拘Ｓ⒄Z教師和外教?；顒佑绊懀涸鰪娏藢W生學習英語的興趣等。參 考 詞 匯 ：ForeignLanguage Festival,EnglishSpeech Contest,EnglishPlaylets Competition注意：詞數(shù) 100 左右；信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，但不計入總詞數(shù)。Editor，On Oct.10th , our school held the first Foreign Language Festival.Yours sincerely,Li Hua改錯

5、1. To my opinionTo In2. gain knowledgesknowledges knowledge3. is badly need forneed needed用心愛心專心24. students has broughthas have5.often hear of the ring去掉 of6. wasted precious timewasted waste7. class type shorttype typing8. To keep the classroom quietlyquietly quiet9. mobile phonesbe used phones be

6、 之間加 not或 shouldn t10.where we are havingwhere wheneditor,On Oct.10 th ,ourschoolheld the firstForeignLanguage Festival.Itaimed to makecampus life more colourful as well as to encourge students to study English.Therewerethreeactivitiesduringthisfestival EnglishSpeechContest,English Songs and English

7、 Playlets Competition. Each contestant from allthe classes took part in them actively. And the judges consisted of our Englishteachers and foreign teachers.As the chairman of the Students Union, I was completely involved in thefestival. In my opinion, this festival has been successfully organized. Also, theatmosphereoflearningEnglishhasbeenwellconstructed.Moreover,ithaseffectivelyraisedourawaren