XX高考英語一輪短文改錯復(fù)習(xí)題有解析

XX高考英語一輪短文改錯復(fù)習(xí)題有解析 專題技能突破(21) 短文改錯之通讀全文，糾正邏輯錯誤 【技能講解】 通讀全文，了解短文的大意， 把握全篇的時態(tài)、人稱、非謂語的主被動關(guān)系及行文邏輯。有時孤立的分析某個句子，其結(jié)構(gòu)正確、語義通順，無錯可改，但如果聯(lián)系上下文，便會發(fā)現(xiàn)該句中有不合邏輯的地方，需做出改正。 典例剖析 1.xx課標(biāo)全國卷When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. 答案 thinkthought 考查時態(tài)。由was, hoped和would be可知，此處敘述的是過去的事情，故用一般過去時。 2xx課標(biāo)全國卷We must find ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so, well live to regret it. 答案 yourour或the 考查代詞。根據(jù)上下句語境，我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境，故改為our, 也可用定冠詞the來限定。 3xx浙江高考In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around it. 答案 iswas 考查時態(tài)。全文用的都是過去時，所以把is改為was。 4In fact, I dont like to go anymore, so Im afraid Ill lose their friendship. What do you think I should do? Ifyou were me, would you talk to him? 答案 himthem 考查代詞。根據(jù)上下文及their一詞可知，此處代詞指代錯誤，故將him改為them。 5On average, there are 800 tornadoes in the US each year, cause about 80 deaths and 1,500 injuries. 答案 causecausing 考查非謂語動詞。causing作結(jié)果狀語，表“自然而然的結(jié)果”用現(xiàn)在分詞。 技能演練 短文改錯 (一) A man has been waiting at the bus stop. After a few minutes later, the bus arrived and did not stop. The man thought it would stop a little far, so he started running after the bus. Fortunately, the bus never stopped. The man kept follow the bus until he arrived home. The man was very glad that he could save bit of money. He happily told his wife, “Honey, today I ran after the buses until getting home. I didnt have to pay the fee.” Surprisingly, the wife blamed her, “You fool! Do you know how many you could save if you ran after a taxi？” 答案： A man has been waiting at the bus stop. After a few minutes later, the bus had 1 arrived and did not stop. The man thought it would stop a little butfar， so he farther/further started running after the bus. Fortunately， the bus never stopped. The man kept Unfortunately follow the bus until he arrived home. The man was very glad that he could save followingabit of money. He happily told his wife, “Honey, today I ran after the buses until bus getting home. I didnt have to pay the fee.” Surprisingly, the wife blamed her， him “You fool! Do you know how many you could save if you ran after a taxi？” much (二) Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, its famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon that we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautifully. The time passes quickly. Evening came. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow. 答案： Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. two-day As everyone knows, its famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. a The weather was fine. It was about noon that we arrived at the foot of the mountain. when The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, us visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture since visitedpictures the scenery was so beautifully. The time passes quickly. Evening came. We spent beautifulpassed the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the but service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow. 2 專題十五 短文改錯 模擬精選題 Passage 1 (xx山西重點(diǎn)中學(xué)協(xié)作體模擬) 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。 修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。 Having a good teacher do mean a lot to us students and I am lucky enough to have the oneMiss Brown, my English teacher. Miss Brown is a charming lady always worn a big smile on her face. In the first class she introduced her and then asked us to say something about ourselves with English. When it was my turn, I felt too shy and fearful that I didnt dare to say a word. She came up to me and said, “Dont afraid. You can make it. Just have a try.” At last, I did it quite good. She praised me for that I had done. Never shall I forgot my first English class in senior high school. Having a good teacher doa lot to us students and I am lucky enough to have does Miss Brown, my English teacher. wornMiss Brown is a charming lady a big smile on her face. In the first wearing herwithclass she introduced herselfin tooEnglish. When it was my turn, I felt shy and fearful that I didnt dare to say so a word. She came up to me and said, “Dont ? afraid. You can make it. Just have be goodthata try.” At last, I did it . She praised me for I had done. Never shall wellwhat I forgotforget Passage 2 (xx漢中市二次質(zhì)檢) 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。 修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。 2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。 Smiling is auniversal language but can give us courage, confidence and fort. I still remember how upset I am when it was my turn to recite a poem before class.Feel nervous and shy, I forgot almost everything. I decided to give up, but all my classmates, especial my teacher kept smiling at me encouragingly. Their smile warmed me so much that I got over the difficulty and eventually made it up. I think smiling not only makes us happy but also help build up our confidence. Furthermore, they will improve the relationship between us. It is smiling that brings harmony us. Only when you smile at the world does the world smile at you. Therefore, keep smiling and show your best to the world. 答案 butSmiling is auniversal language give us courage, confidence and and/which/that fort. amI still remember how upset I was Feelclass.Feeling especialespecially smile warmed me so much that I got over the difficulty and eventually made it . smiles helpI think smiling not only makes us happy but also helps theyFurthermore, will improve the relationship between us . It is smiling that brings it harmony ? us. Only when you smile at the does the world smile at you.Therefore，towill keep smiling and show your best to the world. Passage 3 (xx臨沂一模) 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。 修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。 This morning I saw off my aunt at railway station.There were many passenger in the waiting room.I saw an old lady crying sad because she had lost her ticket and not able to afford another one.I was thinking about helping her when a man e up to fort her.Then he bought her a ticket with his own money.The old Lady was so moving that she could hardly say a word.She grasped his hand and asked for his name or address.But he only smile and said，“Its my pleasure.” Then he left away quickly.I was greatly moved by such a man he warmed others with his love. 答案 This morning I saw off my aunt at the? railway station.There were many passengerpassengers sadin the waiting room.I saw an old lady crying she had lost her ticket and sadly was? not able to afford another one.I was thinking about helping her when a man ecameup to fort her.Then he bought her a ticket with his own money.The old Lady was so moving that she could hardly say a word.She grasped his hand and asked for his name moved orsmile，“Its my pleasure.” Then he left andsmiled hequickly.I was greatly moved by such a man who Passage 4 (xx株洲市質(zhì)檢) 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。 Hi Lana， I am 61 years old and I am fromNew Zealand. I start teaching in China last February.I decided that I reached 60 years I would like to do something different. I was lucky to have got a degree in English, that helped me find a job as a teacher in China. Now I work with two Canadian teacher. One, 57, has been here for four years, and the other, 63, have been teaching here for 6 years. He married with a lovely Chinese lady. The Chinese people are hardworking but the students are so willing to learn. How an interesting country to live in! I feel safer here than anywhere I lived. I have found her tips on teaching so usefully. Thank you! Dave 答案 Hi Lana， I am 61 years old and I am from New Zealand. I start teaching in China last started February.I decided that ?when I reached 60 years I would like to do something different. thatI was lucky to have got a degree in English, which teacherin China. Now I work with two Canadian . One, 57, has been here for four years, teachers haveand the other, 63, teaching here for 6 years. He married lovely Chinese has butlady. The Chinese people are hardand How an interesting country to live in! What herI feel safer here than anywhere I lived. I have found tips on teaching their/your usefullyuseful Thank you! Dave Passage 5 (xx寧夏六盤山二模) 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。 修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。 Dear Joe， Thanks for you mail. Im glad to know you were interested in the xx Florida Winter Camp. It will be held from January 27 to February 13, during that time you will get a wonderful experience. You will have chances to improve your speaking English in the courses provided. Also, activity are arranged for you to spend weekends together with your host family, but you can learn American English in authentic situations. However, a trip to the local Disneyland will certain add up the fun of the camp. Join in the camp and you will have the knowledge of American culture and life. You are sure to benefit from it. Yours truly， Li Hua 答案 Dear Joe， youwereThanks for mail. Im glad to know you yourare thatWinter Camp. It will be held from January 27 to February 13, time you will which speakingget a wonderful experience. You will have chances to improve your in spoken activitythe courses provided. Also, arranged for you to spend weekends together activities butwith your host family, you can learn American English in authentic situations. so Howevercertain a trip to the local Disneyland will add up the fun Besides/Also/Morevercertainly 專題十五 短文改錯 xxxx年各省市高考題 A卷 全國卷 Passage 1 (xx全國) 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。 修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。 My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big，but the Restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some People even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his suess is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams being rich in the short period of time.Instead，he hopes that our business will grow steady. 答案 thatMy uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to I live.Though not very big，where hadtimes.Some people even have honestorsuess is day he makes sure that fresh vegetables quality oil honestyand using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams being rich in usedof/about theoursteady，he hopes that . ahissteadily? 1thatwhere 考查賓語從句的連詞用法。由結(jié)構(gòu)可知，介詞to之后為賓語從句。從句謂語是不及物動詞live。故用where引導(dǎo)。 2去掉but 考查從屬連詞與并列連詞。從屬連詞though不可與并列連詞but連用。 3had have 考查語境中的時態(tài)運(yùn)用。根據(jù)上下文語境可知此處要用一般現(xiàn)在時。 4honest honesty 考查名詞作表語。由句意“他成功的關(guān)鍵是誠信”可知應(yīng)當(dāng)用名詞形式。 5orand 考查并列連詞的用法。根據(jù)句意可知二者之間為并列關(guān)系而非選擇關(guān)系。 6usingused 考查固定短語的用法。be used for“用來做”，為固定短語。 7在dreams之后加上of或about 考查短語動詞。固定短語dream of/about (doing) sth.的意思是“夢想做某事”。 8thea 考查代詞的用法。in a short period of time為固定詞組，意思是“短時間內(nèi)”。 9ourhis 考查冠詞的用法。短文介紹了my uncle誠信經(jīng)營餐館的事情，故將our改為his。 10steadysteadily 考查副詞的用法。修飾謂語動詞用副詞。 Passage 2 (xx全國) 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。 刪除：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。 The summer holiday is ing.My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday.We can chose between staying at home and take a trip.If we stay at home, it is fortable but there is no need to spend money.But in that case, we will learn little about world.If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books.Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby.I thought that it is a good idea.It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot. 答案 howThe summer holiday is ing.My classmates and I are talking to do during what chosetakethe holiday.We between staying at home and a trip.If we stay at home, choosetaking butit is fortable and little about the? world.If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden yourour knowledgescan we can not get from books.Some classmates suggest we knowledge或should thoughtmanyplaces of interest nearby.I that it is a good idea.It does not ， yet thinkmuch we can still learn a lot. 1howwhat 考查疑問詞的用法。我和同學(xué)正在談?wù)摷倨诶镒鍪裁?。固定表達(dá)what to do，如果用how結(jié)構(gòu)為how to do sth. 2chosechoose 考查動詞形式。根據(jù)語法知識可知，情態(tài)動詞can后要用動詞原形。 3taketaking 考查非謂語動詞的用法。此處為between.and.結(jié)構(gòu)，根據(jù)前面的staying at home可知，此處也要用動名詞形式，與前面保持一致。 4butand 考查連詞的用法。如果呆在家里，感覺舒適，還 _。根據(jù)句意可知，此處應(yīng)是并列關(guān)系，而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。 5world前加the 考查定冠詞的用法。此處特指我們所生活的這個世界。 6yourour 考查形容詞性物主代詞的用法。根據(jù)前面的主語we可知，此處要用our，表示“我們能夠開闊我們的視野”。 7knowledgesknowledge 考查不可數(shù)名詞的用法。knowledge為不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式。 8去掉can或canshould 考查虛擬語氣。suggest表示“建議”，后面的賓語從句要用should do形式，should可以省略，故答案有兩種改法。 9thoughtthink 考查一般現(xiàn)在時的用法。我認(rèn)為這是一個好主意。根據(jù)上下文可知，此處并不是過去的看法，而是現(xiàn)在的看法。 10manymuch 考查代詞的用法。這樣不會花很多錢。cost much花費(fèi)很多。此處也可理解為much money的省略。 Passage 3 (xx全國) 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。 修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。 The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and worse years in my life.At the first，I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.However，my parents didnt seem to think such.They always tell me what to do and how to do it.At one time ，I ever felt my parents couldnt understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them.I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.Now I am leaving home to college.At last，I will be on my own，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help. 答案 yearThe from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also years worsethe best and years in my life.At ，I thought I knew everything and could worst yourselfsuchmake decisions by ，my parents didnt seem to think .They always myselfso tell，I ever felt my parents couldnt told freelyunderstand me so I hoped I could be from them.I showed them I was independent free weartoclothes.Now I am leaving home last，I will be on my wearingfor ?own，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help. I 【語篇導(dǎo)讀】 本文主要講述了青少與父母之間的關(guān)系。 1yearyears 此處指1319 歲的年齡，故用復(fù)數(shù)。 2worseworst 與前面的best并列，此處應(yīng)用最高級。 3去掉the at first 固定短語。 4yourselfmyself 根據(jù)句意，此處指“我自