初中英語(yǔ)人教版八年級(jí)上冊(cè)writing.ppt

1、書面表達(dá),writing 義坊學(xué)校 涂淑梅,How can we write a good composition?(作文）,Step 1:Search (Read the instructions carefully and get the main idea) 認(rèn)真審題，找出文章要表達(dá)的中心。,健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和工作的壓力日趨增大的今天，會(huì)休息的人才會(huì)有健康的身體。人們是如何度過(guò)假期的呢？國(guó)際健康組織對(duì)此作了一次調(diào)查，右圖是他們此次的調(diào)查結(jié)果。根據(jù)你所得的信息，請(qǐng)為國(guó)際健康組織寫一篇完整的調(diào)查報(bào)告,并提倡大家進(jìn)行假日休閑。,審,travel,stay at home,visit frie

2、nds or parents,work,根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞及圖表找出文章的要點(diǎn)如下：,調(diào)查報(bào)告 如何度假 倡議假日休閑,stay at home,work,visit friends or parents,travel,A lot of people travel Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.,stay at home,work,visit friends or parents,travel,Step 2:Li

3、st (Make an outline),Step 3:Add (Add a beginning and ending),加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整。 可以采取總分總結(jié)構(gòu)或者總分結(jié)構(gòu)，開頭或結(jié)尾的句子應(yīng)注意簡(jiǎn)潔，漂亮。,A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey repo

4、rt.,Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,a nice head,a nice tail,a nice body,恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞句，使得文章層次清晰，各個(gè)部分銜接自然。,Step 4:Connect (Use proper link words),1.表示并列或遞進(jìn): and, as well as, bothand, not onlybut also, neithernor; 2.表示選擇: or, eitheror; 3.表示轉(zhuǎn)折: but, however, although, though, a

5、fter all, 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore 5.表示條件: if , unless 6.表示對(duì)比: instead, notbut, on the one handon the other hand; 7.表示解釋: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words; 8.表示順序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, final

6、ly, in the end; 9.表示強(qiáng)調(diào): also, besides, whats more, actually, in fact, 10.表示結(jié)論: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking,關(guān)聯(lián)詞,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some ot

7、her people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,連,write correct sentencesUse proverbs/sayingsneat handwritingenough words,Step 5:Beautify 選好詞句，美化文章。 在有把握的情況下展示自己的語(yǔ)言功底。,Skill One Make your sentences correct,We should do s

8、ports a week once. Save the environment is our duty. There is going to have a meeting today. I hope I can come true my dream.,once a week,Saving,be,achieve,Skill Two: Different expressions,the same meaning.,He studies English well. He is good at English. He does well in English,Tom is a student. He

9、is 16 years old. He likes running . Tom, a 16-year-old student, likes running .,Try to use phrases!,Try to use long sentences!,He is my best friend. He always helps me with my English. The boy who always helps me with my English is my best friend.,Try to use clauses,Skill Three:Use proverbs and sayi

10、ngs,An apple a day keeps the doctor away. Where there is a will, there is a way. Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy, and wise. Failure is the mother of success Practice makes perfect,Skill Four:A good beginning and ending,My favorite teacher is I have met many excellent teac

11、hers in junior school. One of them is my English teacher. Her name is Ms. .,We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays . Then some people like to stay at h

12、ome, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,美,Add (加),Beautify (美),List （列）,Search (審),Connect (連),achieve a high mark in writ

13、ing,作文評(píng)分規(guī)則：,A.(1315分)包含內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言基本無(wú)誤，行文連貫，表達(dá)清楚。 B(10_12分）基本包含內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言有少量錯(cuò)誤，行文基本連貫，表達(dá)基本清楚。 C(79分)內(nèi)容包含部分要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言雖有較多錯(cuò)誤，尚能達(dá)意 D(46分)要點(diǎn)不明確，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤多 E(13分）只抄了提示詞，錯(cuò)誤百出 F（0分）白卷,Writing practice,中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)、大力大，專家建議學(xué)生每天課后應(yīng)采取適當(dāng)?shù)姆绞椒潘勺约骸榇?，不同的同學(xué)有不同的放松方式，有的愛(ài)看電視，有的聽音樂(lè)，有的做運(yùn)動(dòng)請(qǐng)你談?wù)勀阃ㄟ^(guò)哪些方式放松自己并說(shuō)說(shuō)原因，談?wù)勀愕母惺堋?The Senior High School

14、Entrance Examination is coming. In order to make a success in the exam I think its righ time for us to relax a little. Or well be too nervous to work well in the exam. In order to relax ourselves, we can turn to some of our hobbies, different students have different ways - Some watch TV, some listen to music But for me I enjoy taking exercise most. Whenever I feel tired, I always spend an hour (in) walking or jogging in the park. Besides, I also play table tennis with my friends afte