讀后續(xù)寫+Callie+的難題：社區(qū)奉獻(xiàn)還是樂(lè)園狂歡+講義 高三上學(xué)期第三次月考英語(yǔ)試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。Calliewasahighschoolstudent,becauseofherparents’business,herfamilymovedfromLondontoLosAngeleswhereshegrewup.Livinginaquietandwarmcommunitywithherparents,Calliewasveryinterestedinvariousvolunteeractivitiesinthecommunity,andalmostnooneinthecommunitydidn’tknowher.Onasunnyafternoon,Calliewasreadingapoemwhensheheardasoftknock.Shestoodupatonceandopenedthedoor.HerFavoriteneighbor,Mrs.Baker,stoodoutsidethedoor.“Ineedyourhelp,Callie,”Mrs.Bakersaid,“anddoyouknowtheemptylot(場(chǎng)地)downthestreet?”Callienodded,smiling.“Theplaceisamess,coveredwithtrash.Thecityislettingususethelotasacommunitygarden,”sheexplained.“WeneedhelptocleanupthelotonSaturday.”“Sure,Mrs.Baker!”Calliesaidcheerfully.“IjusthavenothingtodothisSaturday.Iwillbehappytohelpyou!”Mrs.Bakerlookedpleasedandsaid,“Thanks,Callie.Wewanttogetthegardenplantedbeforesummer.Bythen,adultsandchildreninourcommunitywillhavehadagoodplacetogo.”Atschoolthenextmorning,Callie’sclosefriendTamarawaswaitingforherbytheirclassroom,whohadasurpriseforher.Tamarasaid,“MymomboughtticketstoFunWorldthisSaturday.Shehasanextraoneforyou!”Thegirlshadbeenwaitingformonthsfortheamusementparktoreopen.Calliesighedandworriedoverhowtochoosefortherestoftheday.Hermothernoticedhermoodwhenshearrivedhome.“Didsomethinggowrongatschool?”hermotherasked.Callieexplainedherproblem.“WhatshouldIdo,Mom?”Callieasked.“IknowyouwanttogowithTamaraandalsowanttohelpMrs.Baker.Thinkcarefullyaboutyourchoice,andyouneedtomakeyourowndecision.ButIknowyouwilldowhatisbest.”hermotheranswered.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好。Calliespenttherestoftheeveningthinkingaboutherdecision.OnSaturday,CalliemetMrs.Bakerattheemptylot.文章大意：高中生凱莉隨父母從倫敦搬到洛杉磯，在溫暖安靜的社區(qū)長(zhǎng)大，熱心參與各類志愿活動(dòng)，社區(qū)里幾乎沒(méi)人不認(rèn)識(shí)她。一個(gè)陽(yáng)光明媚的下午，鄰居貝克夫人上門求助，說(shuō)街邊的空地將被用作社區(qū)花園，但目前垃圾遍布，希望凱莉周六幫忙清理，凱莉欣然答應(yīng)。然而第二天在學(xué)校，好友塔瑪拉帶來(lái)驚喜，她媽媽買了周六歡樂(lè)世界的門票，還多一張給凱莉，這讓凱莉陷入兩難，不知如何抉擇，回家后向媽媽傾訴，媽媽讓她自己做決定。伏筆及續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)：伏筆：凱莉熱衷于社區(qū)志愿活動(dòng)，在社區(qū)知名度高。回應(yīng)：為她毫不猶豫答應(yīng)貝克夫人幫忙清理空地做鋪墊，體現(xiàn)她樂(lè)于助人的性格，續(xù)寫中即便面臨游樂(lè)誘惑，仍堅(jiān)守承諾參與志愿活動(dòng)，深化其形象。伏筆：空地垃圾遍布，狀況糟糕?；貞?yīng)：突出清理工作的艱巨，側(cè)面反映社區(qū)需要像凱莉這樣的熱心人，續(xù)寫中大家齊心協(xié)力清理，展現(xiàn)集體力量改造荒地的過(guò)程。伏筆：社區(qū)想趕在夏天前建好花園，供居民休閑?；貞?yīng)：點(diǎn)明清理空地的緊迫性與意義，讓凱莉的選擇更顯重要，續(xù)寫中花園逐步成型，實(shí)現(xiàn)美好愿景，肯定凱莉的付出。伏筆：女孩們苦等數(shù)月盼歡樂(lè)世界重新開(kāi)園?；貞?yīng)：凸顯游樂(lè)園對(duì)她們的吸引力，加大凱莉抉擇的難度，續(xù)寫中提及好友游玩，與凱莉的選擇形成對(duì)比，突出她重諾輕樂(lè)。伏筆：媽媽讓凱莉自己做決定?；貞?yīng)：給予凱莉成長(zhǎng)空間，促使其內(nèi)心思考權(quán)衡，續(xù)寫中展現(xiàn)她成熟一面，依內(nèi)心抉擇行動(dòng)，彰顯責(zé)任擔(dān)當(dāng)。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)：第一段情感線：凱莉從糾結(jié)、焦慮，內(nèi)心反復(fù)權(quán)衡游樂(lè)園的歡樂(lè)與對(duì)社區(qū)的責(zé)任，到逐漸堅(jiān)定，做出抉擇；故事線：凱莉躺在床上輾轉(zhuǎn)反側(cè)，腦海中交替浮現(xiàn)游樂(lè)園的刺激項(xiàng)目和社區(qū)花園未來(lái)美景，最終決定遵守對(duì)貝克夫人的承諾。第二段情感線：凱莉帶著堅(jiān)定、自豪，全身心投入清理工作，看到成果時(shí)內(nèi)心滿是成就感；故事線：凱莉按時(shí)到達(dá)空地，與貝克夫人及陸續(xù)加入的鄰居們一起清理垃圾、整地，忙碌一天后，望著煥然一新的空地，無(wú)悔于自己的選擇。主旨升華句：Truehappinessdoesn'tlieinmomentarypleasuresbutinmakingadifferenceinthelivesofothers.（真正的幸福不在于一時(shí)的歡愉，而在于為他人的生活帶來(lái)改變。）Sometimes,thetoughestchoicesleadustothemostrewardingpaths,wherewediscoverthebestversionofourselves.（有時(shí)候，最艱難的抉擇引領(lǐng)我們走向最有回報(bào)的道路，在那里我們發(fā)現(xiàn)最好的自己。）Apromisemadeisajourneyembarkedupon,andstayingtruetoitrevealsthestrengthofourcharacter.（許下的諾言就是踏上的征程，堅(jiān)守諾言彰顯我們的品格力量。）Inthepursuitofpersonalenjoyment,wemustneverlosesightofourresponsibilitytothecommunitythatnurturesus.（在追求個(gè)人享樂(lè)時(shí)，我們絕不能忽視對(duì)滋養(yǎng)我們的社區(qū)的責(zé)任。）Thebeautyofgivingbackliesnotonlyinthevisibleresultsbutalsointhegrowthandfulfillmentitbringstoourownhearts.（回饋的美好不僅在于可見(jiàn)的成果，還在于它給我們內(nèi)心帶來(lái)的成長(zhǎng)與滿足。）寫作示范一：Calliespenttherestoftheeveningthinkingaboutherdecision.Shesatonherbed,staringblanklyatthewall,thetwoenticingoptionstuggingatherheartstrings.ThethoughtofscreamingwithexcitementontherollercoastersatFunWorldwasalmostirresistible.Butthen,theimageofMrs.Baker’shopefulfaceandthepotentialofabloomingcommunitygardenflashedbeforehereyes.Sherememberedallthetimesthecommunityhadcometogetherforherandherfamilywhentheyfirstmoved.Afterhoursofinnerturmoil,shepickedupherphoneanddialedTamara’snumber.“Tamara,I’msosorry.IpromisedMrs.BakerI’dhelpwiththegarden.Ican’tgotoFunWorldthistime.”O(jiān)nSaturday,CalliemetMrs.Bakerattheemptylot.Mrs.Baker’seyeslitupwhenshesawCallie.“IknewIcouldcountonyou!”sheexclaimed.Callierolleduphersleevesandgottowork.Asshebentdowntopickupapieceoftrash,moreneighborsshowedup,inspiredbyCallie’sdedication.Theyspentthewholedaysweatingandlaughing,transformingthelotfromadumpintoacleancanvas.Bytheendoftheday,asthesunset,castingagoldenglowoverthenow-pristinearea,Calliefeltaprofoundsenseofsatisfaction.Sheknewshehadchosenthepaththatwouldmakealastingimpact,andthatwasworthmorethananyamusementparkride.寫作示范二：Calliespenttherestoftheeveningthinkingaboutherdecision.Shepacedbackandforthinherroom,hermindabattlefieldofdesires.TheallureofFunWorldwaslikeasirensong,promisingadayofcarefreefun.Yet,thecallofthecommunity,whichhadbecomehersecondhome,wasequallystrong.Shethoughtaboutthechildrenwhowouldplayinthefuturegardenandthesmilesitwouldbringtotheelderly.Withaheavysigh,shefinallymadeherchoice.Shejotteddownanoteforherparents,explainingherdecision,andthensetheralarmforanearlystart.OnSaturday,CalliemetMrs.Bakerattheemptylot.Shegreetedeveryonewithenthusiasm,herhesitationofthepreviousnightreplacedbydetermination.Astheybegantoclearthedebris,shesharedstoriesandjokes,makingthelaborioustaskseemlikeajoyousgathering.Moreandmoreneighborsjoinedin,drawnbythespiritofcamaraderie.Bymid-afternoon,thelotwasunrecognizable.WhenTamarasentherpicturesoftheamusementpark,Calliesmiled.Shehadnoregrets.Shehadchosentoplantseedsofkindnessandcommunity,andinthatchoice,shehadfoundherowngrowthandhappiness.讀后續(xù)寫Calliespenttherestoftheeveningthinkingaboutherdecision.Theamusementpark!Itwaslikeamagicalplaceshehaddreamedofforsuchalongtime.Justthinkingaboutthoseamazingrollercoastersthatmakeyourheartpoundlikecrazy.Itwasasifeverypartofherwasshouting,“Goandhaveanawesometime!”However,thepromisetoherneighborwasbotheringheralot.Itwaslikeaheavyburdenonher.Howcouldshejustbreakherword?Hermindwasamess!Intheend,shedecidedthatherpromisetoher